sandhir os ...we died 4 love ...

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... ...He put his hand near her ear surprisingly ...she was sleeping ...on the desk ...something twisted inside him and forward Ed his hand towards her...he was acting lyk a thief. As if he is going steal. ..the most precious possession of that house ...he looked here and there ...and touched her cheek ...very lightly ...he gulped.. ..she was looking so innocent. ...he thought .. .may be stress of factory tasks had forced her to sleep on desk itself ... He noticed something on her face , she was pale, her skin has little patches or more precisely... Small spots.they were really tiny , and can only seen ...when gave appropriate attention to them...
He touched those patches. ..and she stirred a little and made a sound due to pain , he got worried and repeat his action again ...and as a reflex ... She cried in pain
... And she flutter her eye lashes and find her love ...giving her ...pain ...and tears made thierr way ... ..
He smirked on her condition... And said ... " wht happened miss farzi ... It seems that ur body is giving u hint , just leave this factory... Hmm .. ..."
She just gathered her stuff and left .. with tears in her eyes ...
He was not satisfied yet...he wanted her badly ,not 4 his love , but to satisfy his ego which is filled with hatred ...here she was crying not because he hurt her , but he was destroying himself , day by day ...and with red eyes she dozed off ...
Next day @ canteen ...( 1 week later)
Hi ..sanyukta " wht r u up to hmm" ...parth chipped ...
All gud she replied coldly ... Hey whats there near ur lips ...seems lyk wheal... Hmm ... .parth touched her near her lips and she made a gasp ...here somebody was on fire ...he thought of something else. ...and was miles away from reality ...
...
Hostel ...
Her whole hand was itching, her back ... Was swollen . ..and slowly but lately realisation stuck her ...she was having some skin disease ...
...
She got her report and her world shattered , her dreams were shattered, she again read her report ...Urticaria, also known as hives, is an outbreak of swollen,
pale red bumps or plaques (wheals) on the skin that appear
suddenly -- either as a result of the body's reaction to
certain allergens, or for unknown reasons...can lead to death ...
But in her case ... She is on edge ...
1 month , she detached herself wid every 1 ,she use to cover her whole body ,except her eyes , every one was suprised with her new avatar , in this period she performed every task , sometimes she won but failed in some either ...while whole this , rd never loose a opportunity to mock her , show his hatred in best possible manner , but she kept quiet...
Rd was frustrated , it will be an understatement, he was mad on her due this idiotic behaviour ...
It was ni8 , and no 1 was there in factory except these 2 angry birds ...
Sanyu was covering herself properly with her so called covers ...
And suddenly the curtain was on the floor and rd was life less , he saw her ,she was red not due to shame , but due to hives ...her whole was wounded , some areas were so red that no skin was visible ...but the same colour appears in his eyes ...sanyukta ... Yeh sab kya ...hhai ...tum ...sanyu some how covered herself ...properly and left ...leaving rd with utter confusion and guilt. ...
Rd was still in his thoughts ...then he realised ...she left ...
But he didn't know that it would be his last chance to kiss her, hug her and to shower his love on her ...
...
Randhir grabbed his bike keys ...and was moving out of factory ...dhaamp ...she was on floor with rivers of blood ...sanyu he shouted ...no ...he take her in his arms rushed 2 to the hospital ...she was still alive ... Doctors take her 2 OT but ...
Mr shekhawat ...doc said ...
Sanyu , she loves me na toh she will never leave me , I know her doc ...
Rd replied...with stammering ...
She is alive but ...we can't operate her ...as before hand only ...she is suffering from hives ...and she had lose so much blood...
It would be better if she dies ...doc said sadly ..."HIVES wht 's that " ...rd asked with an expressionless face. ...doc tell about disease and sanyu 's condition ...now rd was feeling more guilty. ...
She loves u a lot ...she said her last words 2 me ...nurse declared ...
Rd ..was dead ...
His soul was dead ...
And hence sandhir died ...with unknown love 4 each other in their hearts ...
Guys this is my first attempt plzz ...
Press lyk button if u feel so ...
Waiting 4 ur valuable comments ...

p.s( urticaria ) is not a fatal disease, and can be cured,guys as a commerce student don't know much about this ..particular disease ..plz ignore these medical field related mistakes...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh yeah! Moi first... *raises collar*
Yeh toh hona hi tha... Aakhir itni stalking jo ki moi ne forum ki.. I'm the best.. Wohoo!!
Aunty is so gonna be jealous..*shows tongue to aunty*

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Gosh!! This One Shot had me speechless after so many days...
The ending was so damn emotional... It had me sinffing and sobbing.
Since it is your first attempt, this is magnificent. You have penned down everything so beautifully, specially the emotions were so overwhelming.
What Randhir did just to sate his mammoth ego is really unforgivable... And I'm glad that he got the correct judgement but then Sanyukta had to suffer so much.
Ah! Thank you so much about that information about such a disease. I have never read about it before. I'm glad that you increased my General Knowledge...
I hope that something similar to this never happens in the show else moi will definitely die.
This is so flawless... I think I'm in dire need of tutions from you regarding expressing emotions cause you are excellent at that.
Keep writing more!!

Regards
Keya
Edited by -foreverhers- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was a beautiful Os .The ending part really made me cried😭😭😭.
Please do write more such OS😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was too emotional!! Beautifully penned dear 👏
keep writing 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res 😭
Unress..
Oh my god..shruti...
U never mmentioned about this one shot
In our chats before...
Is it a surprise..
If it is...then dear...it was completely worth of it
U know... I love reading sadism and angst ...
And I am reading it here after a long time
Girl... U made me cry at midnight.. 😭
This was something different.
👏
First Sanyukta's silence and then her ssudden death
Finally made him realize his mistake..
What he has lost... Unrecoverable ..completely 😭

Considering it as your first attempt..
U did a great job...
👏
It was awesome 👏
And yeah... Thanx for the information of that disease ..
I dint know about that..

Keep writing ... Awesome write ups..

Love
Richu a.m. :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Oh yeah! Moi first... *raises collar*
Yeh toh hona hi tha... Aakhir itni stalking jo ki moi ne forum ki.. I'm the best.. Wohoo!!
Aunty is so gonna be jealous..*shows tongue to aunty*

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Don't tease me dabba 😡
I m in murderous mood now 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Emtnl one
Sad ending alwz made me cry

I loved it
It was superb yr

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reswa 😆

Unress

hey shruti
kya hai ye
itna acha likha h,kahan chupa kar rakha tha
pehle kyun nhi post kara 😆

Bohat hogya mazak
it was so senty re
emotional kardia tune toh


keep writting lyk dis
thanx for pm
Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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tat was beautiful n very very emo..tbh its awesum for a first try
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: a2zahid

tat was beautiful n very very emo..tbh its awesum for a first try

...thanks ... dear..

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