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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

😲

This was seriously a heads-on approach to the entire track and situation

Anytime better than what we saw

Much more appealing

And it goes without saying, a delightful read

I must say you are one hell of a writer

And seriously I have seen you grow through each write up of yours

The way you approach the situation and put forth your idea is commendable 👏

I'm actually waiting to read more and more from you

Great going dear 👍🏼

Keep up the Great Great work you are on

Write more as it surely proves a stress burster to read your work after a hectic week

P.S Sorry for the late comment.. Was really held up in hell lot stuff 😳

P.P.S Thanks for the PM 😃

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

One word for this OS "Divine...gal this simply elegant...wat a class writer u are...the way ur potrayed swaron's emotions, their pain, guilt & hurt..
Superb dear...loved every bit of it...from the start till the end...
Way to go...*thumbs up*

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

that was emotional nishi

loved how swayam entered from the window

Beach part was beautiful😳

Wonderful piece of writing

nd sorry for late😔

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Nishi tum hamesha se itna acha likhti ho ya kuch injection lagi hai? 😳
This was a class writeup dude! What were you thinking man and the title is very apt so chill.
I would have seen the show if they did some scenes like this, pure bliss to read and very ethereal.
Keep writing, and keep pming, i know i am late always but i promise to comment even its a delay of 10 days or more :p haha kindly manage man. And even if you intend to write on some other couple i am in the line waiting to comment, as you are a great writer.
Bahut hua aaj ke liye i guess lol
See ya!