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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear
Thanks for the pm
Loved it
Waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago

dear prologue 😕
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi wonderful update! superbly written! Love dadi! she is making sure Maan does nt meet Geet! she wants him to realise tht he loves her! Maan missing his coffee! he goes 2 look 4 Geet! interesting precap! update soon


thanks dear

typing ...try to give update today
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Posted: 10 years ago

updating in few minutes
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

poor nakul facing maans anger bcoz he is missing geets coffe

dadi planning to keep maan away from geet
n she did
poor maan missing geet n came searching homw
dadis que
will he realise it
nice part


thanks dear

he realize it but not hearing own heart
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 6


Daadi : maan aap itna pareshaan kyun ho rhe hai

Aur aapko kya farq pdta hai

Wo kaha hai

Kaisi hai

Maan : daadi ye aap kaisi baat kr rhi hai

Daadi : maan hum shi toh kh rhe hai

Aapne usse jitna pareshaan kiya hai na

Maan : daadi iska matlab hai

Aap jaanti hai geet kaha hai

Daadi : hmm

Maan : daadi mein yaha pareshaan ho raha hu

Aur jb aapko pata hai

Toh aap mujhe kyun nhi bta rhi hai

Daadi : maan ek din aapne geet ko nhi dekha

Toh aap kitne pareshaan ho gye

Kyun

Ek din aapko uske hath ki coffee nhi mili

Toh aapne pure ghar ko ser pe Utha liya

Bechare Deepak aur nakul

.

Kya mayne rakhti hai wo aapki zindagi mein

Kuch bhi toh nhi na

Maan left the place...

*******************

Maan : yaha toh kissi se bhi kuch puchna hi galat hai

Ek simple sa question pucha

Geet kaha hai

Par nhi

.

He goes office and so angry on geet careless behaviour...

.

.

Geet come office around 4:30 pm with adi...

Geet : adi sir mein maan sir ko update deke aati hu is project ki

Adi : mein bhi tumhare sath chalta hu

Geet : adi sir aap tb tak kal ki meeting ki tyaari kriye

Mein aapko bs thodi der mein join krti hu

Adi : ok

**********

Geet knocked on his cabin door & he said "come in" without looking who entered in his cabin...

Geet : Maan sir

He sees her, feels unknown happiness, but next moment her disappearance from morning increases his temper... he stand from chair and coming towards her.

Maan : what you think about own self

Geet thinks now why he is angry?

Khi bina bitaye Noida jaane ke liye

Maine kaha tha dev se

Maan : now why you standing like this

Give answer

Geet : Maan wo mein

Maan : this is not your home geet

Jaha tum jb chaho

Aa jaa sakti ho

.

Ab kuch bolo

Geet : maan

Aap khehna kya chahte ho

I don't getting you

Maan : tum kya chahti ho geet

Mein tumhare aage piche gumta rahu

He held her by shoulder and pulls near to own..

Bolo geet

What you want from me

Geet : nothing maan

.

Maan aap gussa kyun ho

Maan : ydi tum abhi tak nhi smjhi

Toh fir khehne se bhi kya fayda

He left her...

Geet : aaj kal mein sch mein aapko bilkul nhi smjh paati maan

.

Aap aakhir chahte kya hai mujhse

Ye gussa

Ye narazgi kyun

Ab maine kya kiya

Maan : tum kaha kuch krti ho geet

Sb toh meri hi Galati hai na

Geet : am going home

He held her wrist & pulls her... encircled her waist

Maan : abhi tum khi nhi jaa rhi ho

Geet : am tired

Maan : tumne asa kiya kya hai

Subh se toh gayab ho

Geet : Mr. khurana

Leave me

Maan : call me only Maan

Geet : Maan sir

Leave me please

Maan : tum kaha thi subh se geet

Geet : aap toh ase puch rhe hai

Jaise aapko kuch pata hi na ho

Maan: kya tumne mujhe bataya tha

.

Nhi na

Toh mujhe koi sapna aayenga

Geet : dev ko sb pata tha

Maan : geet mein tumhara pati hu

Tumhe sbse phle mujhe batana chaiye

Na ki baki sbko

Yaha mujhe chodke baki sbko pata hota hai

Tum kaha ho

Aur koi mujhe batana tk jaroori nhi smjhta

She smiles from heart after long time... he still cares me...

Her heart want believe on him, but previous day's memory break this thoughts next moment...

Maan : tumhe hassi aa rhi hai

Yaha mein subh se pareshaan hu

Aur tumhe koi fikr nhi hai

Mera call tk nhi liya

Today he talks with her like her old maan ...

Geet (think ) mere maan

Jo mujhe apni nigaho se ek pal ke liye durr nhi jaane dete the

Mein ek pal ke liye durr ho jaayu

Toh mujhe apne karib lane ke bahane dundte the

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Maan : geet

Geeettt

Here am telling something

And you lost in own self

Geet : maan

Aap meri fikr kyun rhe the

He not excepting this question from her... daadi also ask same question...

Why his heart so restless before her coming and now he feel relax to see her near to own...why

.

Maan take step back and loose own hold around her, & turn the back...

Maan : geet tum subh se kaha thi

Geet : noida

Mein aur adi sir noida gye the

Kuch papers sign krne the

Maan : aur tumne mujhe ek baar batana bhi jaroori nhi smjha

Aur mera call tk nhi liya

Geet : phone silent pet ha

Mujhe pata nhi chala

Aur mein aapko batake jaana chahti thi

Par aap meeting me the

Toh dev ne kaha wo aapko inform kr denga

Mujhe nhi pata usne aapko kyun nhi bataya

Maan : geet aage se tum khi bhi jaayo

At least jaane se phle ek message kr dena mujhe

Aur rhi dev ki baat

Usse meeting ke turant baad site pe jaana pada

Usse ho sakta hai

Mauka na mila ho

Geet : baki sbka pata hai aapko

Maan : geet tell me clearly

Geet : mein aapke aas pass hu ya na ho

Aapko kya koi farq pdta hai

.

Nhi na

Fir ye fikr kyun

Aap toh ab mujhse pyaar tk nhi krte

Ye rishta bs ek naam ka hai

Fir aapko aur dikhava krne ki koi jaroorat nhi hai

.

Maan : geet listen me carefully

I don't going repeat

I know, I don't believing this relationship

But that's true, you are my wife

And most important you are part of my family

I care you as my family member

Geet aur isme mein koi dikhava nhi kr raha hu

Aur rhi pyaar ki baat

Geet I need time for this

*************

Precap : some past moments

Manali trip

Mr. rawal & bunty

& someone coming again in maaneet life

please hit like button and do comment... sorry for delay in update


try to give next part on next sunday

see this update too

Khamoshiya...gungunane lagi - part 1 on page 8 (1 feb)

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's really very nice part. So maan was getting impatient without seeing geet one glimpse. Dadi asked maan that if he doesn't love geet then why is he getting so worried. Don't know why maan is confuse about his feelings. He loves geet very much but can't able to recognize. I hope he gets to know about his feelings soon. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan still unknown to his feelings geet dadi asking same question
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part.. today pretty much felt that Maan still cares for his Geet.. sothough he doesn't remeber.. his love remebers her n care for her immensely.. Even Geet got some glimpse of her old Maan.. Love this update.. n waiting for next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update maan caring to geet
someone is coming to their life

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