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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Part 1


Kaha se shuru kru ye kahani

Waha se

Jaha mein aur maan phli baar mile

Ya waha se

Jaha humare dil mein phli baar pyaar ne dastak di

Ya fir waha se

Jaha se hum juda ho gye

Ya fir waha se

Jaha hum ek hoke bhi ek na hoye

.

Kya ajeeb khel hai kismat ka

Mein aur maan ek hoke bhi aaj tak ek nhi huye

.

Kbhi kismat ne

Kbhi hum ne khud

Ek dusre se durr ho gye

.

5 saal bit gye humari shaadi ko

In paanch saalo mein bhut kuch badal gya

Nhi badala toh bs mera intzaar

Maan ke hosh mein aane ka intzaar

.

Ya allah

Rehmat kr mujhpe

***************

Geet : doctor mein maan ko ghar leke jaana chahta hu

Doc : miss geet

Geet : Mrs. Maan singh khurana doctor

He is my husband

Doc : mrs. Khurana

Mr. maan abhi coma mein hai

Aur unki ye halaat hai hi nhi

Unhe ghar leke jaaya sake

Geet : doctor kya aap mujhe bta sakte hai

Maan kb tak puri tarah thik ho jaayenge

.

Nhi na

Wo ghar mein hum sbke sath rahenge

Toh jyada acha nhi rahenga kya

Doc : I understand

But

Unko bhut care ki jaroorat hai

Wo unhe yaha araam se mil sakti hai

Geet : doc aap ghar pe saare intzaam kr dijiye

Aur ek nurse bhi appoint kr dijiye for 24 hours

Baki sb dekhne ke liye mein hu

Doc : ok

Take care

*************

Daadi : geet

Aap ghar jaake thoda rest kr lijiye

Aap pichle 36 hours se yhi hai

Ek pal ke liye bhi

Geet : daadi

Hum maan ko ghar leke jaa rhe hai

Aap ghar jaaiye

Daadi : ye aap kya kh rhi hai

Geet : daadi doctor se baat krli hai maine

Unhe kuch nhi honga

Unhe waise bhi hospital bikul pasand nhi hai

Ghar mein rahenge

Hum sbke sath

Toh jaldi thik ho jaayenge

Karan : bhabhi mein aapke sath yhi rukta hu

Geet : hmm

*************

Geet

Geet : abbu

Abbu : hum sb tere sath hai

Himmat mt harna

Geet : thanks abbu

Ammi caressed her face & take her in embrace...

Ammi : geet kbhi bhi koi bhi jaroorat ho

Hume jaroor batana

Geet : hmm

***********

Geet, karan & maan standing in front of khurana mansion gate...

Before geet take first step in house, daadi voice stop her...

Daadi : geet whi ruko

Karan : kya huya daadi

Daadi : shilpa

Pooja ki thali tyaar hai

Shilpa : ji

Daadi : jaante hai hum

Jis tarah ye shaadi hone chaiye thi

Waise nhi huyi hai

.

Par grah pravesh ki rashm toh hum puri kr sakte hai na

Geet : daadi

Daadi : beta don't cry

Aap toh hum sbki takaat hai

Aap yu kamzor nhi pd sakti

Geet nodded.

.

***********

Time passes out, approx five years passes out, but no improvement in maan health, his injuries covered but he is sleeping from past years, no movement...

Geet came into own room & said to nurse for leaving...

Geet : maan

Sorry

Aaj thodi late ho gyi na

Par kya krti

Sia ke exams pass aa rhe hai

Bs usse hi pda rhi thi

.

Aapko pata hai

Jis project ki wajh se hum paanch saal ke baad mile the

Kal uski opening hai

Asad aur dad ne grand party rakhi hai

.

Par hum nhi jaayenge maan

Sia ki padhai jyada important hai is waqt

Hum unhe phone pe wish kr denge

.

Aur ha

Maan kal dam project ki final meeting hai

I wish ye project hume hi mille

Karan ne bhut mehnat ki hai ispe

.

Mein aapse ek cheez toh puchna bhool hi gyi

Anmol ka birthday aa raha hai

Usse kya de hum

.

Aap thk gye honge na

Meri baatein sun sunke

Chaliye ab aap rest kriye

Hum kal baat krte hai

Goodnight maan

note :-

1) yes maan is in coma from past five years #chavvi

you get your all answers with the upcoming updates

2)maan is not a muslim

geet hai muslim bs yaha

par sch mein wo bhi nhi hai

geet ki maa muslim thi

aur father punjabi

#suhana now ok


see this update too

Hum Aapke Dil mein Rahte h - part 6 on page 74 (1 feb)

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
This is worse
He is there
And yet not there for her
Will her wait be over
Like maan's was
Or will she be waiting for him till eternity
Hope not
She took over her responsibilities
When will she think of herself
Sia bhi badi ho gayi
Sab kuch badal gaya but not maan being in his coma
Will he come out of it
And even if he does will geet get her maan
Let's see
Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: chavvi16

This is worse
He is there
And yet not there for her
Will her wait be over
Like maan's was
Or will she be waiting for him till eternity
Hope not
She took over her responsibilities
When will she think of herself
Sia bhi badi ho gayi
Sab kuch badal gaya but not maan being in his coma
Will he come out of it
And even if he does will geet get her maan
Let's see


of-course one day her wait is over
i showed this too in prologue

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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
lovely start maan is in coma n geet just waiting for him from past 5 years n she took all responsibility very nice part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
kya geet ki intezaar khatam nehi hogi...

nice n painful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Hay!
i'm your new reader!
loved the first part haven't read any of your works yet!
but will defo stick to this story!

interesting part maan 5 saal se coma!😲
bichari geet!
actually geet is so brave👏

waiting for the next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: love2_soma

kya geet ki intezaar khatam nehi hogi...

nice n painful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...


thanks dear

intzaar jaroor khatam honga
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: spoorthi28

Hay!

i'm your new reader!
loved the first part haven't read any of your works yet!
but will defo stick to this story!

interesting part maan 5 saal se coma!😲
bichari geet!
actually geet is so brave👏

waiting for the next!


thanks dear

halaat ne brave bna diya geet ko 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: priya_21


thanks dear

halaat ne brave bna diya geet ko 😉


sorry but i'll pakka manage with out pm!
hum kisi ko shikayat ka mauka hi nahi dete😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
past five years maan coma stage
still geet waiting for him
she take caring full responsibility his house
nice update

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