AR FF: Vivaah Ekk Nayi Zindagi

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Part 16 - pg 13

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PART 1

A beautiful girl was sitting on a bed decorated with rose petals. Candles were lit everywhere in the room. She was dressed as a beautiful bride, who was sitting waiting for her husband.


Girl: (thinking) Aaj se meri nayi zindagi shuru!
Baghwan aap humesha mere Saat hi kyun aisa karte hain? Chachi kehti hain ke main manhoos hu? Apne kyun maa aur papa ko mujh se cheen liya? Maine aisi kya galati kardi hai ke app mujhe itni Bari saza derahe ho? Abb bus Armaan hi mera akhri sahara hai! Plz baghwan mere umeedon parr paani na dalna!

Tears were flowing out of her eyes. Not because she was missing her family, the reason was she didn't want to marry. Afters all she was a girl too. She had dreams. She dreamt of her prince, who will come one day and ask for her hand. He would climb up her window and secretly meet her when they're not supposed to.
Who would shower all his love on her. But her dreams were shattered in one moment. That moment when she got married. Not that she didn't like her husband. But the thought that was killing her was that what if her husband didn't approve her as his wife.

She was lost in her thoughts when she heard the door knob clicked. She wiped her tears. While a handsome young man entered. He came and sat on the bed next to her. He lifted up her veil and saw she was looking gorgeous.

Man: (whispered) riddhima!
Man: (he continued in a normal voice) tum jaanti ho ke shaadi meri marzi se nahi hoyi?

She nodded her head negatively. He got up from the bed and took of one flower filled string that was hanging from the ceiling attached to his bed, and threw it on the floor. She looked at him and got scared. His eyes were bloodshot red with anger and rage.

Riddhima: (scared) ar...Armaan!!
Armaan: (shouting) why did you marry me??
Riddhima: Armaan m-main-
Armaan: meri zindagi Barbara's kardi hai tumne! Just because of you!

Riddhima got of the bed and went near him. He dangerously held her shoulders and pulled her towards him.

Armaan: agar tum jaanti thi! Mujhse shaadi kyun ki?
Riddhima: main-
Armaan: main kisi aur se pyar karta hunn Riddhima! I DON'T LOVE YOU! Samjhi!! Tumne mujhse shaadi karke aapni zindagi ki sabse bari galti ki hai!

When he said that he loves someone else, the floor beneath Riddhima vanished. She froze and couldn't help but tears started flowing out of her eyes. One more pain was stuck to her life. He didn't approve her. Maybe he was right, she did a big mistake marrying him.

Armaan: dard horaha haina? Mujhe bhi aisa dard hoa tha jab meri shaadi tum se hoyi thi!

He sighed then left her shoulders and pushed her on the bed.
He ran his hand through his long silky hair.

Armaan: jo hoa so hoa! Abb kuch nahi hosakta. Hum sahi mayaan mein pati Patni to nahi hai parr humara rishta wohi hai! Isiliye tum Patni hone ke saare farz nibhaogi aur main pati ka! Lekin mujhse koi umeed na lagyi Bethna! Kyunke main tumein kuch nahi de sakta sivaye dard ke! Abb tumne mujhse shaadi ki ghalati karr li hai to Sab tumein iski keemat zindagi bhaar jitani padegi!

He went out of the room leaving a crying Riddhima behind. She ran into the bathroom and shut the door. She leaned on the door and started crying.


Title song from Pakistani drama Nikkah
( I changed some words)

Hum ne teri chahat ko
Dil mein aise boya tha
(She remembers when he came to see her for the first time)

Dharkano mein rakha tha
Ashk mein proya tha
(She remembered the when one of her friends teased her about her friends)

Sirf tum ko chaha tha
Tum hi dosh de bethy
(She remembered when he shouted at her)

Dost phir na reh paye
Aise hosh kho bethy
(She slowly slid down while crying on her knees, clinging to the door)

Faasale hain yaadein hain
Waqt ke takaze hain
( she remembered: ar: mujhse koi umeed lagyi na Bethna!)

Ho waqt ke hawa mein hain
Hum tere vivaah mein hain
Hum tere vivaah mein hain
(She remembered when he filled her maang)

Kaghazon ke pathon par
Dil ke naqsh likh baithe
Jo bhi kuch hamara tha
Tere naam likh baithey
(She was crying bitterly)

She stood up and saw herself in the mirror. Mascara was spread around her eyes. Black Tears were rushing down her eyes because of the mascara. Why was her life so complicated.
Why did everybody had to hate her. She never did or thought anything bad for anyone, then why God had too do this to her?

She washed her face and looked at her mehndi. The colour was dark red. They said, the more colour u get on ur husband's name's mehndi, the more he loves u! But in her case, that didn't match up with situation. She remembered her cousin sunaina teasing her when she saw her mehndi colour was dark.

FLASHBACK

Su: arre wah riddhu didi! Aapki haat pe jeeju ki naam lagi hoyi mehndi parr to itna gehra rang chada hai! Hmm lagta hai suhagraat parr kuch hone wala hai!!!
Ri: (smacking her) chal badmash!
Su: acha Abb main chalti hunn warna maa ayegi aur daant padegi!
Ri: sunaina? Chachi mujhe itna hate kyun karti hai!
Su: oh ho didi! Aap ke maan me laadh phootne chaiye ke kal aapki shaadi hai! Aur aap yaha maa ki baaton parr dehan derahe ho!
Ri: agar Armaan be mujhe accept na Kia to?
Su: agar maa ne kaha hai ke woh bas majboori se shaadi kare hain to Iska matlaab yeh nahi hai ke woh waki main yeh shaadi majboori mein kare hain! Dheko na didi kitna raang chada hai jeeju ke pyaar ka!


FLASHBACK END

Tears were dropping continuously from her beautiful green eyes. A fat tear fell on her hand, where armaan's name was hidden. Her gaze shifted towards her maang, which was filled with his name's sindoor. She touched it. She could still feel his cold fingers on her maang.

Ri: (crying) sindoor ekk larki keliye kitna maayne rakhta hai ye aap nahi jaante Armaan. Mere liye apka pyaar to kya aapka narajgi, saza harr cheez qubool hai! Bas mujhe jis bandhan mein bandha hai usse kabhi na todna! Mera aapke sivaye iss duniya mein koi nahi hai!!! Aap ki narazgi bhi qubool hai!!! I love youArmaan!

Her eyes were bloodshot red because of all the crying. She came from the washroom and saw it 3:45 am. Armaan wasn't anywhere to be seen. She sat on the bed and waited for him.

NEXT MORNING

Sun rays hit Riddhima's eyes and she opened her eyes only to be found in an unknown room. After looking around a few more minutes her eyes shifted towards the sofa where Armaan laid down sleeping in an uncomfortable position. Last night's conversation came in her mind and tears welled up in her eyes. She sighed and went to the bathroom.

Ok guys!!! How was it?
Be honest! It's my frost time writing sad...sooo!!!
Hope u liked it!!!
Comment, like, favourite, and criticize!!!
Love Humaira


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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2

NEXT MORNING

Sun rays hit Riddhima's eyes and she opened her eyes only to be found in an unknown room. After looking around a few more minutes her eyes shifted towards the sofa where Armaan laid down sleeping in an uncomfortable position. Last night's conversation came in her mind and tears welled up in her eyes. She sighed and went to the bathroom.


After a few minutes she came out of the bathroom and saw that Armaan was taking out his cloths.

Ri: main kapde nikal dunn!
Ar: (rudely) meri cheezon ko koi ajnaabi haat lagaye, yeh mujhe bardasht nahi hai!
Ri: (sadly) Armaan main koi ajnaabi nai apki paatni hunn!

He looked at her and shot an angry glare. He then took her hand and twisted it in her back. She cried in pain.
Ri: ar-Armaan mujhe dard horahi hai!
Ar: mujhe bhi dard hoti hai jab tum aapne aap ko meri Patni kehlati ho!

Releasing her, he took out his cloths and went to the bathroom. She cupped her face in her hands and tears were rushing down.

Riddhima POV

Kya main itni buri hunn ke mujhe mera pati tak dhekna pasand nahi karta? Baghwan? Main pichle jaanam mein aisa kya gunaah kiya tha jiski saza aap mujhe derahe ho? Phele mujhse mera maa papa cheen liye! Phir mujhe chacha chachi Jee ke ooper bojh bana diya! Aur abb! Aur abb mera pati hi mujhse itni nafrat karta hai ke woh mujhe aapni Patni kehlana hi nahi chate!

Riddhima POV END

She quickly got ready in a simply red saree.
While she was putting on her bangles there was knock on the door. Riddhima opened the door and saw a beautiful girl standing there in white churridar.

Ri: arre nikkita tum?
Ni: namaste bhabhi! Woh maa be bheja hai ke aap aur bhai neeche ajao nashte keliye!

Yes, that girl was nikkita Mallik. The smallest child of Mallik family. She was in her 2nd year. She loves her family and bhai a lot. She was very excited to know when Armaan was getting married. She had blue eyes just like Armaan but no dimples. Even though she was from a modern family, her respect for people was always equal, weather they're rich or poor.

Riddhima looked at the bathroom door and it was still closed. She sighed and moved behind nikkita.

After coming downstairs, she went to the kitchen sand saw a lady cladded in a maroon saree, making breakfast.

Ri: namste Aunty!
An: arre Riddhima beta aao na! Aur abb mujhe maa kaha Karo!
Ri: (tears were glistening in her eyes) ok au- maa!

Ananya saw tears in her eyes and quickly wiped them off. He forwarded her thumb and show her a water on her thumb.

An: arre yeh kya hai?
Ri: woh itni dair baad kisi ko maa bolaya haina isiliye!
An: (cupping her face) dheko beta main jaanti hunn, ke tum Bohot choti thi jab Tumhare mata pita ki death hoyi thi! Parr main bhi to tumhari mom hunn! Aur ekk maa ko uski beti ke aankh mein ansoon nahi ache lagte! Tum mere liye aisi hi ho jaise mere liye nikkita aur muskaan!

Riddhima smiled and hugged her. How great did she feel. After so many years crying on Someone's shoulder and calling them mom. After so many years, someone was actually caring for her, loving her, giving her support.

Just the nikkita came in and frowned.

Ni: arre bhabhi aapne itni simple saree pheni hai?
Ri: woh nikki-
An: haan beta Teri nayi nayi shaadi hoyi hai aur tu to pehle hi dinn teyar nahi hoyi!
Ni: bhabi nayi dhulhan to sajar ti hain aur sawar ti hain, aur to itni simple?
Ri: woh nikki mujhe simple rehna pasand hai!

Just then a girl dressed in tight jeans and sleeveless top came in and hugged ananya.

Mu: good morning mom!

Yes, this girl was the elder daughter of Mallik family. She was very stubborn. Unlike Nikkita, she was very alcoholic, short tempered, didn't care about others. She hated people who belonged from low background. She always thought she's the best and perfect one. She a fashion designer. She loves her family except her bhabi. She was adamant for Riddhima's proposal but couldn't do anything. She hated those people who stopped her from doing anything.

An: goodmorning bacha!
Mu: (rolling her eyes on Riddhima) acha mom main jarahi hunn Boutique parr! Main raat ko late aungi cuz meri friend ki BD hai!
An: (getting worried) beta agar Armaan ko pata chal gaya to?
Mu: don't worry mom main 10 baje se pehle ajaongi!!!
An: achaa sunn aapni bhabi ko to mill!
Mu: (arrogant) mom! Main fazool logon pe time waste nahi karti.

Before ananya could say anything, Riddhima came forward and said.
Ri: maa main nashta ban lunn?
An: arre nahi beta! Tu to nayi naveli dulhan hai! Tere haat mein to mehndi ka rang bhi itna gehra hai!
Mu: (taunting) arre maa Karne dijye na! Huh after all humari pyaari bhabi sari umer yahi kaam ho to karti aayi hain maike main!
An: muskaan!
Mu: kya ghalat kaha? Aise logo ki yahi aukat hoti hai!!!

Ananya raised her hand to slap her but Riddhima stopped her.

Ri: muskaan tum jao yahan se! Tume der hoarahi hai!

Muskaan stromed out of the kitchen giving a deadly glare to Riddhima. Ananya looked Riddhima with questioning eyes.

Ri; maa chodiye na! Nadaan hai woh abhi!
An: Riddhima beta yeh tu kya kehrahi hai?
Ri: maa waise bhi woh sahi hi to kehrahi hai! Maine chote hote se yahi kaam kiya hai to abhi kyun nahi!
Ni: lekin bhabhi apne dheka nahi di ne aapki kitni insult ki!!!
Ri: Maine kaha na! Jab Maine mind nahi kiya to phir app log kyun bura mana rahe hain?
Ananya: beta nikki theek kehrahi hai au waise bhi hum usse izzat karna nahi sikhaien ge to kon karega yeh kaam? Aur waise bhi agar Armaan ko pata Chala ke muskaan uski Patni ki izzat nahi karti to he won't tolerate it!!

Hearing armaan's name a sad smile came on her face.

Ri: (mind) woh to Khud mujhe aapni Patni nahi samaj te to woh muskaan ko kya kahenge?
Ni: arre bhabi kahan kho gayi?
Ri: kahin nahi! Maa bataye na nashta kya banana hai?
An: tu nahi mane gi na?

Riddhima nodded negatively and nikkita and ananya smiled. Finally they agreed on making Kheer, which was armaan's favourite.

Guys tell me If I should continue?
Ok guys that's it for today!!!
Hope u like it!!
Luv Humaira
Edited by humairagrover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start

Eager to know what will happen next,
Continue soon 😊
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PART. 3

While Riddhima was making Kheer, Nikkita was chopping Almonds to put in them. Ananya was just standing there looking at them. Suddenly they heard a loud voice.


Ar: mommm!!! Mere kapde???
An: arri hunn beta!
An: (to riddhima) beta tumne armaan ke kapde nahi nikale?
Ri: maa woh unno ne mujhe mana kiya tha!
An: (mind) main kya karun iss ladle kaa? Iska Matlab usne abhi bhi riddhima ko aapni Patni sweekar nahi kiya! Nahi shayad mein ghalat soch rahi hunn, agar aisa hota to riddhima itne calm mood mein na hoti!!!
An: chalo koi baat nahi main nikal deti hunn!!!

Ananya left from there leaving riddhima in a deep thought.

Ri: (mind) armaan aapne kapde nikal karr hi to leke gaye the washroom mein! Kahin Woh isiliye to nahi ke main unke kapde ko haat na lagaon?

She was busy in her thought while nikkita was talking. When nikkita noticed that she wasn't giving any response she turned towards her, only riddhima to be found in a deep thought.
She shook her.

Ni: bhabi!
Ri: huh?
Ni: kya bhabi main kab se bula rahi hunn aur aap hi ke bhaiya ke khayalon mein khoyi hoi ho!
Ri: (tears welled up in her eyes) nahi aisa Kuch nahi hai!
Ni: (serious) bhabi kya baat hai? Anything wrong?
Ri: nahi nikkita tum mujhe woh almonds pass Karo!

Not convinced with her answer, nikkita passed her the bowl filled with chopped almonds. However she still made a mental note to talk to riddhima.

While they were busy talking they saw armaan and Ananya sitting on the dining table. Riddhima was about to take the kheer outside but stopped. Nikki saw this and got confused.

Ni: arre bhabi rukk kyun gayi?
Ri: nikki Tum yeh kheer aapne bhaiya ko de aao!
Ni: lekin-
Ri: (interrupting her) woh mujhe yeh kheer container mein daal ke fridge mein rakhne hai aur phir dishes bhi wash karni hai!
Ni: (still not convinced) ok!

Nikki took the kheer outside and served it to armaan as he was done with his breakfast. He looked at the kheer and was amazed with the decoration as it was decorated with almonds on top.

Ar: arre kheer?
An: tu kha to sahi!
Ar: lekin mom-
Ni: khaye na bhaiya! Aaj taste bohot special hai!
Ar: (taking a spoonful in his mouth) kyun?
Ni: isiliye kyun ajj kheer apki dulhan ne banayi hai!!

When he heard riddhima's name, his jaw hardened and threw the ball aside which fell on the floor breaking into many pieces. Riddhima hearing the voice rushed from the kitchen seeing the kheer spread in the floor.

An: (shocked) yeh kya kar raha hai?
Ar: (angry) maa mujhe der horahi hai!!
An: par armaan kheer to-
Ar: mujhe nahi khaani yeh kheer!
Ni: par bhaiya bhabi ne itne pyaar se-
Ar: (shouting louder) Maine kaha na!

Saying that he stormed out of the house. While Ananya hit her forehead, nikkita turned around and saw riddhima in tears.

Ni: bha- bhabi a-aap?

Hearing nikkita, riddhima wiped her tears and ran in the kitchen. Ananya saw her running into the kitchen. She told nikkita to go behind her.
Nikkita ran after riddhima and saw her crying bitterly sitting on the floor behind the counter.

Ni: bhabi?
Ri: (wiping her tears, she got up) nikkita tu?
Ni: bhabi aap to rahi hai?
Ri: (moving away from nikkita) nahi- nahi!
Ni: (turning her around) bhabi aap jhoot bol rahi hain!
Ri: (bursting out) Nikita main aisa kya karun Jise woh mujhe aapni Patni maan jaein?
Ni: (shocked) matlab- bhaiya ne aapko aapni Patni nahi mana?

Riddhima shook negatively and was about to say something, when they heard the plates drop.
They turned towards the door seeing the biggest shock of their lives. Ananya laid unconscious there. They rushed to her and tried to shake her.

Ni: mom!
Ri: (rubbing her palms) nikkita inne heart attack aaya hai! Jaaldi ambulance call karo!!!
Ni: Jee bhabi!!!

After half and hour they were in the hospital. Ananya was in the OT while riddhima and nikkita roamed outside the OT. Nikkita informed muskaan about the scenario and in a few minutes she arrived.

Mu: kya hoa mom ko!

Nikki told muskaan about her discussion with riddhima and how Ananya heard it and fainted.
Muskaan who was fuming in anger approached a tearful riddhima.

Mu: aapko Zara bhi sharam nahi aati na? Apko sukoon nahi mila tha Bhaiya ki zindagi bar baad karke? Jo Abb mom ko bhi bed pe phoncha diya?
Ri: (crying bitterly) muskaan aisi baat nahi hai! Mera har kiz matlaab nahi ta maa ko-
Mu: aapne matlab ki to baat hi na kare na aap! Main Bohot achi tara pata hai ke aap jaise cheap aur middle class larkiyon ko kya matlab hota hai!! Aap sirf aur sirf paise keliye shaadi ki hai!!!

Saying that she walked past nikkita pushing her aside. She went into an isolated corner and took her mobile out. She dialled Armaan's number but it was busy. She kept and kept trying, but couldn't reach.

IN THE OFFICE

Armaan came into his cabin. He was frustrated as he ate kheer made by riddhima, and after that by the questions of his employes. He sat down on his chair and took out some files. But he was lost somewhere else.

Ar: (mind) shayad mujhe uski banayi hoyi kheer phenkni nahi chaiye thi! Humari jaise bhi shaadi hoyi hai par main kuch zada hi Zulm kara hunn!
Parr who cares, she deserves it! Maine usse mana kiya ke woh meri life mein interfere na kare!!!

He was lost in his thought when a handsome guy entered his cabin. He was wearing a grey shirt and black dress pants. His sleeves were rolled up till his elbow. He was Armaan's business partner rather Best friend. His name was Rahul Grewal. He was armaan's friend since he was in grade 3. He knew Armaan in and out, better than anyone.

Ra: hey buddy!
Ar: (lost) hi!
Ra: agar office akar bhi Patni ke khayalon mein khona tha to phir office kyun aaya!!!
Ar: (getting pissed off) rahul tu jaanta hai ke Maine kinn haalat mein shaadi ki hai!
Ra: (getting serious) haan! Par armaan iska matlab yeh to nahi hai ke to bhabi ko blame karr!
Ar: yea but Maine usse kehdiya hai ke hum bus duniya ki nazar mein pati Patni hai usse zada nahi!
Ra: (shocked) what tune unse aisa kya kaha?
Ar: Maine usse kaha ke- ke main kissi aur se pyaar karta hunn!!
Ra: (shocked) WHAT??? Armaan Mallik, jisse pyaar ke naam se bhi nafrat hai, woh aapni hi Patni ko kehraha hai ke woh kissi aur ko chahta hai?
Ar: Rahul main nahi chahta tha ke woh mujhse juthi ummedin laga ke bethi rahe!!!
Ra: Armaan tu hosh mein to hai? Tujhe jhut bolna nahi pasand aur tune itna bada jhut bola woh bhi apni jeevan saathi ke saath?
Ar: Rahul I just told you! Hum sahi Mayan mein pati Patni nahi hai!
Ra; to phir isse shaadi kyun ki?
Ar: mom! She felt bad for riddhima cuz she was an orphan and her uncle and aunt didn't treat her well!!!
Ra: (getting kissed off) seriously dude? Teri humanity kahan chali gayi!!! Woh already ekk orphan, no one treated we well in the past, and now u are hurting with this ur soo called made up love story! Tu jaanta hai ke usse kitna dhuk hoga jab usse pata chalega ke u lied to her just to stay away from her! Seeda seeda hi bol deta!! Abb agar KABHI bhi ghalti se bhi tu riddhima bhabi ki Kareeb jaane ki koshish karega, wo humesha backout kardein hi sirf aur sirf isliye kyunke u made up a stupid lie about ur stupid love story! She's gonna think that your being forced to move on in a relationship with her.

Saying that Rahul went out his cabin. Whatever Rahul said was true. Armaan hated lies and now lying himself he was feeling guilty. But he wasn't at fault, he was forced into this marriage.
He never wanted to get married.

Suddenly the voice of his phone call swore him up from his thoughts. He picked it up only to see muskaan's number flashing.

Ok guys that's it's for today!!!'
Hope u liked the part!!!
Luv Humaira
Edited by humairagrover - 10 years ago
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awsume part humzzz...
update soon... :)
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Hey humaira
Humera here
Chalo mai buddy karti hun tumko
Aagey ke parts pm kardo
Ok
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's awesome loved it
Amazing start
Armaan's anger towards ridhima is confusing
Poor ridhima feeling sad for her
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Amazing story ...
Armaan behaved very badly wid ridz ...
Armaan is an angry young man and poor ridz bearing evrything without any fault :(
Nikita and ananya are nice and understanding but muskaan is rele bad and arrogant ...!!
Rahul is sweet and a helping friend ...!!!
Its intresting ..,.
Continue soon ...!!
N thnxx for pm :)
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Great partss...waiting to read more...
nic ff
continu soonnn
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nice part poor ridhz felling bad for her nd armaan he is a bad
do continue soon different nd interesting concept 😊

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