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hey guys

we r back with kriyansh ki kahani

jitne log utni baatein or utni hi hai inki kahaniyan

kya sach hai or kya jhoot kuch smj hi nhi aata

humari is confusion ko dur kijiye

har kahani par hume aapne vichar likh kr dijiye

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ACCIDENT

Tring...tring...rings the alarm..

Reys pov

without opening my eyes...i brush my hands against the table to find something ery precious... beside my king size cot..

ahh..im not getting it..u noe its realy difficult to find things closed...yayaya..i nearly got it...

yes..there it is..i got u my celll...(ons it)and here im opening my eyes..(and sees his wallpaper and starts admiring it)sab log uthe hi god ko dekthe hain.par main uthe tume dektha hun...u noe y??/

because u r my angel ...angel of my...life..

love u...[l]and kisses it..

arrey aaj uski toh msg bhi nahi hain...aur morning call bhi nahi...use huwa kya aaj...lagta hain she is still sleeping...

wait ill only call her..

(calls her...But she doesnt pick..)

Uffo ..yeh kriya bhi na..kitne soti hain..everyday she calls me and wakes me up..but today not even a call and no msg also..kya huwa use...???without hearing her voice how can i start my day..(yeh its kriya)

Oh god...??/

(kriya neither called him nor messaged him..rey was soo frustrated and thought to dance..but failed)

Whole day went on like this..rey was desperate to see her..he could neither have lunch nor break fast..today he umderstod the true value of being loved or loving some one...

4 pm

Tring tring..

The phone rings...

Reys grabs his cell to check whether kriya called..

Rey was too happy ..

But...

It was call from nil..he picked..

Rey-hello

Nil-abe rey kaha hain tu.

Rey-ghar mein hu

Nil-in house..not coming to colg..arey rehearsels karna hain na

Rey-pata hain

Nil-kya pata hain..tum bhi nahi ho even kriya is not there..and sharon is killing us..poor swayam is getting nicely because of u..

Rey-oh..wait kriya nahi hain?/wat???

Nil-she is not thre from morning ..including..

Rey-oh shit(he cuts the call)

Rey to himself-kriya colg mein nahi hain..kaha hain vo..wait ill call her..house(rey calls her house and kaka picks the call)

Kaka-hello

Rey-hello kaka rey bol raha hun

Kaka-oh rey baba..boliye...

Rey-kriya dedijiye na phone

Kaka-kriya beti ko..kriya beti toh ghar main nahi hain..

Rey-huh..gher main nahi hain??wat..kaha gayi

Kaka-pata nahi..baba..subhe se hi nahi hain..ji baba main rakti hun...bohut kaam hain..(he cuts the call)

Rey-arrey kaka..(but he had already cut the line.)

Rey to himself-arrey yeh kriya ghar mein bhi nahi hain and not even in colg..kaha gayi yeh ladki...is she pranking..arey nahi..meri kriya yesi nahi hain..kriya ..im missing u..pls..kaha ho..

Uff...might be rehearsing somewhee..

10 pm

Teing tring..again his cell rings...he grabs it ..to see whether his soul was calling..yeah it was his soul...

He picks up and starts..

Helo..ab yaa ayi..kaha gayi thi tum..i

Kitna pareshaan tha main...ghar mein bhi nahi thi.not even in colg also..then where r u...i missed u like hell

Pata hain main kitna tensed tha..oh god ..kriya talk..

Someone-ap chup gogaye toh main bol saktha tha na..

Rey-hello..whos speaking...??

Someone-main..ajnabi hun..vo sab chodiye..phone ke malik met with an accident..bohut serious hain..

Rey -wat??accident ..kaha kaise,...which hospital??

Someone-kaise pats nshi..maine lakar hospital mein admit ki..hospital ka naam hain- way to heaven..its near hotel sunshine..

Rey-way to heaven..main abi ati hun...(cuts the call)

He rushes to his car...

Starts it..

Driving recklessly...

He could only see her smiling face..

Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pahli baarish ki duaa

Remembering Their dance..

Tere pahloo mein reh loon
Main khudko paagal keh loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan
Seh loon saathiya

Remembering their confession..

Koi nahi.. tere siva mera yahaan
Manzilein.. hain meri to sab yahaan
Mita de sabhi aaja faasle
Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le
Zara sa mujhme tu jhaank le
Main hoon kya?

Remembers everything..her laughing..her dance

Woo.. aeee.. aeee.. aaa.. sathiyaa..
Ae ae... aa...

Pahle kabhi, na tune mujhe gham diya
Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya
Guzaare thhe jo lamhe pyaar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke

All he wanted his kriya...everywhere he could see kriya..


To phir tune badli kyun adaa
Yeh kyun kiya?

His mind was running ..only..kriya...met with accident..i want u back..life sab kuch hain..par tumhara bina..maien adhura..nothing will happen..

Wo o wo o.. Wo o wo o..

Kabhi jo badal barse
Main dekhun tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pehli barish ki duaa

Tere pahloo mein rah loon
Main khudko pagal kah loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan, sathiya..

11;30 pm

He finaaly finds a small isolated hospital where he could not see anyone...but only the nameplate.way to heaven..\

He gets surprised..

Without a second thought (u noe..love makes u do everything)he enters it..full dark...

Rey(crying)-hello..doctor..kriya..nurse..koyi hain...kriya..kriya.

Tick

Tick tick

11;50pm

Rey-kriya...doctor..

Rey sat down foldind his hands and crying..

Then spot light appears on him...

He dint give it any care..he was just scard

Suddenly

someone hugs him from back..

rey turns back and seesgets scared shocked..

Rey(shocked)-kriya??tum

Kriya-haan mein.(smiling)(but her smile fades seeing his swollen eyes..)rey apko kya huwa...were u crying..

Rey(could not controlbut just hugged her)-tum tik toh hian ne..accident..kaise si ho

Kriya-arrey..mein tik..hun

Rey-sach main..

Kriya-uffo sach mein..ab rona band kejiye and crying doesn't suit mr.attitude...

Rey-hmm...kriya tum bhi na...ok..kaha thi subhe se..???

Tick

Tick

Tick

11;59

Rey-Kriya-answer me..

(kriya was lost somewhere)

Rey-kriya??

12:00

Kriya(suddenly hugged rey and said)-happy bday mr.reyaansh singhaniya...

(lights get on..petals fall upon rey..room is fully decorated..)

Rey-wat(too shocked..)

Kriya-rey??

Rey-wat??

Kriya-respond

Rey-oh..thank u(hugging her)

Kriya-hows my surprise

Rey-good

Kriya-sirf good??kitna mehnat ki maine

Rey-ohh sorry..its awesome babes...

Kriya-hows my preparations??

Rey-good

Rey-wait...so..morning se yahi thi ??

Kriya-haan

Rey-then who called me ??

Kriya-no one

Rey-bol na

Kriya-kaka

Rey-wat??maine use phone kit hi ..usne bola ki he doesn't no

Kriya-rey..its a surprise..watever

Rey-watever..u nearly killed me

Kriya-wth ..rey

Rey-ok sorry

Kriya-vaise bhi u missed me??

Rey-ya..ofcourse. me missed u lot..u noe wat babes..u r my daily dose of drugs..

Kriya-(gets emotional)u noe wat rey..i love

Rey(hugs her)-me too

Kriya-arrey..we got so emotional...ab cake cutting...

Rey-ok...

(kriya took him to the table)

Rey cuts the cake..and feeds it to kriya and kriya does the same..

Rey-hmm

Kriya- hmm wat??

Rey-wheres my gift..

Kriya-itna ..sab kuch kiya na

Rey-but i wantsomething

Kriya-wat

(rey taking steps closer to her..and she taking a step back)

Rey-my gift is

Kriya-is

(lips few mm apart)

Tring ..tring...

Rey s phone buzzes..

Rey-oh shit

Kriya -giggles

Rey(sees the id )-sharon(and picks)

Rey-hel..

Sharon and rest gsng-happy bday

Rey-thanlk u

Sharon-i now u r wid kriya..but in an hour u both in my place...pls..and sorry spoiling ur moment..

Rey-waat

Dsharon-yess.

(he cuts the call)

Kriya-??

Rey-siren order..jaana hain..well complete it later.

Kriya-wat to complete??/

Rey-oh u dont noe??/shall we complete it now..

Kriya -oh really??tab na sharon na..aapki haal kar degi...ok

Rey-hahaha

(both go to cr in hand in hand)


by putti aka chutki

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DIL DOSTI DRAMA AND DANCE

Shakti's beautiful face had a frown on it. "What the hell", she thought, "look at him flirting with every other girl on the set...he didn't even spare my best friend Alisha...that's it Kunwar enough is enough". Her face was partly chilli red with anger and partly capsicum green with jealousy.

Now she boldly walked up to him. Kunwar was busy laughing with Alisha, Vrushika and Mohena, giving them his full attention. Shakti came from behind and tapped him on the shoulder. Kunwar brushed his shoulder like there has been an insect or something on it. By this time Shakti's anger has doubled..she tapped again and Kunwar repeated his action again.

Vru: Amar I think Shaks is trying to...

Kun: ya vrushi that's what I have been telling u girls...I also think she is trying to turn our friendship into something more

Vru: no no that's not what it is...

Kun: oh u don't know that's exactly what it is...

All this while Shantanu was standing at a distance and observing the whole thing. He approached Shakti from behind, told her not to shout and gestured her to come with him. Though shaks was very angry she could hardly deny her best friend.

Alisha: amar may b u haven't noticed but just now Shantanu and Shakti Kunwar again cut her up in the middle... "u girls r getting it all wrong shaks is interested in me and Shantanu.

Vrushika, Alisha and Mohena looked at each other and decided to give up.

In the meantime Shaks and Shan went to the rehearsal hall.

Shan: just don't confront him ryt now

Shaks: shan u don't know what that donkey, idiot, gadha. Rascal devil was gossiping about me...I want to murder him...that self-obsessed idiot thinks I am making passes at him

Shan: just calm down...I have heard everything and I have a plan which we will execute tomorrow at the 1000 episodes celebration party

Shaks: what do u mean? Whats the plan?

Shan: not now and definitely not here...we will give him a dose of his own medicine. Tonite u me, Mohena and our special guest KSG will have a conference call at 9pm sharp. Now go and behave normally with Amar.

That day they packed up early as they were in a party mood. Vrushika left with shan and Alisha with Prateek. Shakti was packing her cosmetics whaen Kunwar came to her. Kun: hey shaks...need a ride home?

Shakti was about to shout and say no...but then remembered shan's words Shaks: that's so nice of u to ask Kunwar but Neeti is picking me up 2day...so next time may be.

Kunwar looked disappointed but he asked " u mind coming to the party tomorrow with me?"

Shaks: why not Kunwar...after all we are good friends

********* It was 7 in the evening and Kunwar was waiting in his brand new car for Shakti to come out when he noticed the black Mercedes drawing in the parking lot of Shakti's apartment. He was surprised to see KSG coming out of it in a dinner jacket looking handsome as usual.

Kun: yeh yahan kya kar raha hain?????? But his sixth sense told him that he is here for Shakti. Then he swa her coming out in a black full length halter-neck dress, matching dangling earrings, her hair done in a French knot. KSG went forward to receive her...hugged her and then kissed her lightly on the cheek...it was too much for Kunwar to take...he drove away from there...his eyes burning with anger, and from the insult...Shakti didn't even notice his car???????? He was badly hurt.

All of Shakti's enthusiasm for the party died as she watched Kunwar leaving...she thought "mene ready hone me itna time kyun liya? For whom did I dressed up? Wo to car se bahar bhi nahi aye"

The party has already started when KSG and Shakti reached the venue. Everybody became excited on seeing the special guest and rushed to receive him. But Shakti's eyes were only searching for Kunwar. Then she located him standing in the far corner with Prateek looking breath-taking in a white shirt and deep blue jacket. She was walking up to him when Alisha came and hugged her "party was no fun without u shaks my jaan...pata he they r about to start a dance competition among couples...there are two rounds in it first id western and then Indian...I am taking part with Prateek...who will be ur partner shaks? Amar? It will be fun na!!!!"

Shakti was only half listening to her "huh??? Oh yes it will be fun." Her eyes were on Kunwar and Mohena taking their positions for the dance.

Just then the announcement was made for couples to take their position.

Alisha: shaks what r u thinking??? Announcement bhi ho gayi!!!!! Who is ur partner?"

KSG came forward "I am her partner Alisha" he stretched out his hand for Shakti.

Ali: lucky u shaks...ok all the best

As Shakti took KSG'S hand Kunwar felt he was all alone in the party...everyone has betrayed him and left him alone, he felt like hell. The music started...it was Kunwar's fav "I just died in your arms tonite", he has always imagined Shakti with him on this number...but today he just couldn't enjoy it. "why that bloody KSG is close dancing with my shaks????" he thought. He saw Shakti leaning her head on his shoulders. Kunwar's move strarted speeding up.

Mohena: hey slow down or I will fall

Kunwar: shut up lets just get done with this damn competition

I just died in your arms tonite Must have been something you said I just died in your arms tonite

Glimpses of Vrushan and Archisha dancing faded before Shakti's eyes as tears started forming blurring everything. She saw Kunwar's hand on Mohena's waist as they freely swayed around the dance floor and Kunwar obviously enjoying himself as she saw him laughing, his face very close to Mohena. She brought her face closer to KSG trying to hide her tears.

The number ended and Vrushan were announced winners of the 1 st round. The second round was Indian. Kunwar walked up to KSG "in this round Shakti would be my partner...u mind?"

KSG: not at all my friend...she is all yours...and by the way I would like to dance with the beautiful Mohena...Shakti is no fun

Shakti's heart was doing wild somersaults as she took Kunwar's hand. Kunwar hold it firmly and pulled her towards him so that their body collided.

The music started plating. It was Shakti's favourite from the movie Heropanti.

Aa raat bhar jaaye na ghar Jaaye naa ghar aa raat bhar

Kunwar's hands tightened on her waist "why the hell r u avoiding me shaku?" Shakti tried to loosen his grip and push him away "oh look at u ...u r accusing me now...speak for urself Mr Kunwar Amarjeet Singh...who was avoiding me yesterday...like I don't exist...huh? Flirting with all and saying I ma behind u"

Kunwar hold her more tightly " u idiot that was to get ur attention...u always said we are nothing more than friends...what else I could have done other than trying to make u jealous so that u realize ur feeling"

Jaaye jahan jahan jahan dil kare Jaane kaha kaha kaha fir mile

Shakti was looking at him open mouthed "what???????? And I thought...oh god Kunwar...I thought I have lost u forever" her hands now encircled his neck tears of joy forming in her big eyes.

Kun: u r really crazy shaku...I cant even think of any girl in my life other than u Kunwar kissed her tear stained eyes "now close ur mouth otherwise I am going to kiss them too" he gave his dashing billion dollar smile. Shakti felt oddly shy she said with mock anger "you idiot" and hit him lightly in the chest. Their bodies swinging rhythmically to the music.

Iss raat me beetein umar Saari umar Aa raat bhar jaaye na ghar

The music stopped and the winners were about to be announced. But Kunwar excused himself from Shakti and went to the stage and took the mike from the host.

Kun: before the winner is announced I would like to say something. May be I am not the winner in today's dance competition but in the stage of life I am the winner today because I gave got my angel today, my Shakti ,my best friend and my best dancing partner and from today my life partner. I LOVE U SHAKTI...WOULD U LIKE TO BE MY PRINCESS CHARMING?

Tears of joy were rolling down her eyes as she went to the stage. Kunwar helped her onto it and wiped her tears as Shakti hugged him tightly. All their costars and friends were also crying by this emotional and romantic reunion. Shakti composed herself and took the mike from Kunwar "I LOVE YOU TOO MY KNIGHT IN SHINNING ARMOUR...AND YESSS I WILL BE YOUR SHAKS FOREVER AND EVER"



by Madhu
Edited by alisha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Hi guys, here's an OS dedicated to the Birthday Girl Meghana, written on her favorite couple Kriyaansh. I wrote it only for her, else I wouldn't even dare penning down anything like this as I know I literally suck at it. Hope this one has turned out at least bearable if not god.

Megs Wish you a Very Happy Birthday. Have an exciting Birthday and An Even More Exciting Year ahead.🥳

Love you and hope you enjoy this one.🤗

The Coffee Kiss

He woke up to the most beautiful site in this word, his Angel peacefully sleeping in his arms. He wished the time would stop forever; he'd hold her close to his heart and would never let anything take her away from his sight. He adored her beautiful face as he slowly caressed it, running his soft fingers along her forehead down to her cheeks. As his soft touch adorned her silky smooth skin a small sweet smile crept on her face and watching it widened the curve on his face.


He leaned forward and softly kissed her forehead and mumbled "Good morning Sweet heart"

Cuddling into him she softly whispered a sweet "Good Morning"


The morning sun rays were just not enough to get the love birds out of each other's arms; they lay there for a few more minutes more enjoying the other's warmth.


After a while Kriya pulled herself out of his arms and got out of the bed. She freshened up and moved towards the kitchen to make some coffee. By then Rey descended down the stairs and walked up to the kitchen. He moved towards her and hugged her from behind.


"Rey yeh kya kar rahe ho, chodna"


He hugged her even more tightly and kissing her shoulders said, "Nahi chodunga, tum itni jaldi kyun utt gayi?" and nuzzles into her hair kissing her nape.


"Rey plz...tum itni paas rahogi toh main kuch nahi kar paungi"


Rey: "Toh karne ke liye kisne kaha?"


Kriya: "Aisa hai toh tumhe buke rehna hoga"


He turns her towards him and,

"Hmm mere bhuk aur neend metane ke liye aur bhi tarike hai like..." Saying this he slightly caresses her lower lip with his left tumb. His action sends chills down her spine and she blushes. Aiming her lips he leans forward by then Kriya pulls back and holds a coffee can in front of him.


Rey gets slightly irritated with her and raises his eyebrows as if asking, now what?


Kriya with a naughty smile says, "Tumhare bhuk aur neend methane ke liye, Coffee" and looks at him with excited eyes.


Rey smiles at her antics, he moves her hand with the coffee can from away and leans forward speaking huskily, "Uske liye coffee ki zarurat nahi hai jab main khud..."


By then Kriya pushes him away and says, "Tumhe coffee se hi kaam chalana padega, ab chup chap jake sofa pe bait jao warna kuch aur kya coffee bhi nahi milega"


Rey cutely pouts and says, "This is so not fair" and he walks out of the Kitchen.


Kriya prepares two mugs of coffee and goes towards Rey. He was seated on the sofa, changing channels still holding is so not fair pout with which he looked extremely cute and even more adorable than ever before.


She gets seated by his side and gives him a coffee mug, he ignores it. She holds it right in front of his face, but turns away slightly pushing her hand away. Kriya takes her hand back and, "Maine itne pyarse coffee banayi and kisiko peena bhi nahi hai, teek hai toh main bhi nahi peeungi"


She places both the mugs on the table and sits back pouting. Rey nodes his head on seeing this and turns towards her, "Tum aise harkate karogi toh main tumse naraz kaise rahunga?"


Kriya: "Naraz rehne ke liye kisne kaha?"


He smiles at her and picks up the coffee mugs and hands one to her. She happily takes it from him. Both take a sip and she asks, "How's it?"


Rey immediately leans forward and takes her lower lip in between his and softly sucks it. Kriya was taken aback by his action, her eyes were still wide as he pulled back he smiled at her and said, "Perfect"


He sat back, and started enjoying the coffee, as he placed his legs over the table and puts his one arm around Kriya pulling her into him. Kriya blushed and resting her head on his shoulders sipped her coffee.


Enjoying her coffee, lost in its sweet aroma she said, "Hmmm its good"


Rey turned towards her and asked, "What?". Kriya was surprised at his question and looked at him, He continued, "The Coffee or The Kiss"


She blushed and moving towards his face, she whispered close into his ears, "The...Coffee Kiss"


A beautiful smile crept on both their faces as their cheeks turned red, adding to their already glowing faces. Rey then kissed her on her forehead as she cuddled into him resting her head on his chest. As the enjoyed their morning coffee filled with love he said, "Wish my mornings always start with this Coffee Kiss"


The End.


Hope you guys enjoyed reading it...good bad anyting but do review but before that do wish the birthday girl a lot of Happiness and Success on her special day.

Megs once again Wish You A Very Happy Birthday.🤗


by rajeshwari

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JAADU HE NASHA HE

(THIRD PERSON P.O.V)

Shaam hochuki thi , sub ko Vicky aur nil ne sub ko restaurant me bula ya tha ,issliye sub time pe aapohoche the ,except Rey and swayam!! musical ke grand success ke bawajood koi kush nahi tha! Kissike chere pe muskuraahat nahi thi, there was a silence!!... sub tensed the !! tensed for thier friend ... rey!!!

D3 team ko usshi dhin patha chala tha ki ... ki kriya aur raaj engaged he!!

Unnhone decide kiya tha ki rey ko issbaare me nahi bathayenge but...rey ne unnki bathe sun li thi

Unhe patha tha ki rey tootchuka tha... Per fir bhi ussne apne team ko musical me akelaa nahi choda...ussne ek amazing performance diyaa and musical ko grand success banaya .per usske performance ke baad kisi ne usse nahi dekha ...jese wo kahin gayab hi hogaya tha.

Vicky aur nil ne sub ko ye bolke bulaaya tha ki kriya ke wapas aane aur musical ke success ke liye party raka he but...ye such nahi tha...unhone party raka tha raaj ko sabak sikaane keliye

Vicky: "yaar nil iss raaj ke bacche ki himath kese hui ki issne kriya se engagement kar liyaa?" Vicky bola

Nil:"dude question ye nahi he ki engagement kese kiya baath ye he ki issne kriya ko pataya kese".

"jese bhi ho dude !! aaj usse raaj ko tare dikaadenge"

(Dono hassne lagthe he)

Nil: "vese Vicky thumhe rey ka kuch patha chala?.like wo kahan he ? and all? And is he cuming?...wo nahi aayega tho humaare plan ka koi faydha nahi hoga".

V: "don't worry nil ! rey aajayega.usse mene message bejaa tha !ussne reply kiya ki he will be here!! So chill!!

Vicky: "Sharon... swayam kahan he?

Sharon: "actually ussne kaha ki wo rey ke saath ayegaa ! wo dhono aathe hi honge".

(they see kriya nad raaj cuming)

Nil and vicky whispering to eachother :"yaar raaj agaya ..."

"yaa nil isske hum aaj bajaayenge baara thera aur choda bhi.bada aaya kriya ka fianc banne... humaare rey ka dil dookaya he issne ...isse tho nahi chod sakthe".

Simmi: "kya chal raha he thum dono ke beech me? Kya kussur pussur kar rahe ho?"

V and N: "kuch bhi tho nahi"

Simmi jaake be jaathi he.

Nil: "simmi darling tum ithni weak kyun lag rahi ho?... tum bimaar tho nahi honaa? "

Simmi: "nahi stupid !! me teek se so nahi paayi kal raath ko... issliye hogaa".

Amar : "kyun ? kyun nahi tho paayi thum kal laath ko ?"

Simmi : "mujhe ek daraavnaa sapnaa aaya tha kal raath ko ..."

Team " kya sapnaa??"

Simmi: "mujhe naa kal sapne me ye aayatha ki mere ghar pe chori hui thi ... And..."

Nil: "arre baby ! ithni si baath ...agar ye hi sapna phir se aaye naa tho mujhe yaad karlenaa ...it will help u " (giving a hero smile)

Simmi : "IDIOT ! DAR ISSLIYE LAGA KYUN KI CHOR KI SHAKAL THUJSE MIL THI JULTHI THI ".

(ALL START LAUGHING)

Vicky nil ko apne taraf keeche the hue : "focus dude !thu apne mission se distract ho raha he".

NIL : ok ok ! bas bohut hogaya mazak ab party shuru karthe he (loudly)

Raaj : "kriya me zara washroom ho aatha hun"

Kriya : "yaa ok"

Raaj goes aur kriya uder ider dekne lagthi he jese wo kisi ko doond rahi ho

Sharon isse notice karthi he and: "kya hua kriya ?kissi ko doond rahi ho?"

Kriya: wo nahi actually ummm ahau mmm."

Sharon "kriya say naa .."

Kriya : "nahi Sharon kissiko bhi tho nahi " (kriya pretend karne ki oshis karthi he.

Sharon smile karthe hue : "rey !! rey ko doond rahi honaa"

Barath : " nahi ye kyun rey ko doondegi isse tho mil chkaa he naa raaj"

Kriya ke nazre juk jaathi he ,usske juki hui anko me bhi dard saaf dek paarahi thi Sharon

Wo barath ke taraf dek ke gusse se ishara karthi he ki apna moo band karo.

Amar: "nil hum palty ley aul swayam ke binaa kethe shulu kar sakthe he"

Simmi: "yaa guyz ek baar phone tho karlo ki dhono kahan thak pohoche".

Nil: "yaa !! ok me kartha hun!

Nil swayam ko phone karthaa he!! Swayam recives the call !

Swayam : "yaa nil bol!!!

Nil : "kahan ho yaar thum dhono?? Hum sub wait kar rahe he yahan !!".

Swayam : " hum bas bahar hi he !! tum log party shuru karo we will be there in 5 min "

Nil: "yaa ok !! haan !! jaldi aanaa ! ok fine! "

Nil Vicky ko baaki sub se door keech the hue : dude chal shuru karthe he !! rey aur swayam bas bahar he!! Chal !!

Vicky : "yaa dude bulbul ko ko bohut dhinoo se kissipe use nahi kiyaa tha !! per aaj" (evil laughs)

Wo soft drinks order kathe he sub keliye !!but... raaj ke soft drinkz me ... unka all time friend bulbul ko add karthe he!!

(u know wat bulbul is don't u hehe)

Raaj cums back a sits next to kriya! Vicky aur nil ye dekthe he

Vicky: " dude issye kriya kea as paas dek ke meraa koon golne lag tha he !1 cant imagine ki rey kesaa feel kar raha hogaa!!

Nil :" I know dude!! But he is gonna get it today!! Chal !

(Vicky baakioke drinks leke jaathe he and nl bulbul ko carefully leke chalthaa he towardz raaj)

Nil: raaj ye lo thumhare liye (keeping it on the table)

Raaj :thnx nilesh!!

Nil: thnx tho hume rey bolegaa (in a low voice)

Raaj: wat?tumne kuch kaha????"

Nil :"aaa umm haan kaha naa !! mene kaha ki itz my pleasure...ummm... tum apna soft drink kyun nahi peerahe ?...ithne mehenath se gooolll...

Vicky peeche se aake nil ke peet ko punch karthe hue yaaniki indirectly usse chup karaathe hue: raaj isske baatho pe dhyan math denaa ...isse satakli he! U enjoy ur drink!... nil ek soft drink leke aa kriya ke liye ! ek kum he !

Raaj ka phone bajne lagtha he... wo usse dekthe hue smile kartha he !! and: "kriya I told u naa ...tum bhool jaogi..."

Kriya: "raaj me kya bhooli ?kuch bhi thjo nahi ...".

Raaj apne watch ko dikaathe : tumhaare medicines ka waqth ho gaya he ... and thume yaad nahi he ".

Kriya: "oh him sorry raaj ...actualy naa.."

Raaj: "tum sorry kyun bol rahi ho ... Tum apne friendz ke saath ithna zyada time spend bohut dhino ke baad kar rahi ho so ho tha he..."

They both smile at each other

Sharon (in her mind): "asa lag tha he ki ye dhono ek doosre se bohut pyaar karthe but... kuch missing he ...wo connection nahi he, rey aur kriya me hotha he ...kriya ke aanko me wo feel nahi he "

Raaj :"kriya take ur medicines now !! tum mera soft drink ke saath le lenaa ok?chalo take it (giving her his glass)

Vicky and nil freak out and start talking in single voice : "nahi ... kyun? Kriya ka drink aaraha he ! tum apna peelo ! now ! raaj peo apna .kriya ko math do!

Raaj :kyun?

Vicky and nil :" arre bola na tum peelo isse ...umm kriya ka aajayegaa... aur issko tumhe hi peena he ... doosre nahi peesakthe ...nahi tho gadbad... umm nahi kuch nahi bas thumhe ye peena he...ya !

Raaj : "gyz me doosra lelungaa naa ! watz the big deal ... tum dhono tho ase bol rahe ho jese ye soft drinkz he hi nahi balki kuch aur he (hasthe hui and then wo apna glass kriya ko de detha he...kriya drinkz it )

Vicky and nil side me jaathe hue : "iss raaj ne humaare plan ki band bajaa di ... ab kya karenge Vicky?" ..."nil agar rey ko patha chala ki humare wajaase kriya ko nasha chada he then we are just dead...kuch socho ...and subko patha chal jaayega ki ye sub humne kiyaa he very soon ...so we need a idea jaldi se..( 5 secz if thinking)

Nil :idea!!!!

Vicky : "kya kyaa!! Jaldi saale !! bol ".

Nil : "u don't worry !just do as I say !

Vicky : "zara paas aana (nil cumz closer) *slap* ye tha theraa idea? Me yahan dar se mar raha hun and thum bol rahe ho don't worry!

NiL : "dude just do as I say".

(Vicky goes and sitz on his seat)

Kriya jisspe bulbul ne alredy kaam kardee thi .wo chup beti hui thi usse nazar neeche zammen ko dek rahi thi or I can say taad rahi thi ...sharon .simmi aur raaj ke usse zor zor se boolane aur hilaane pe bhi koi asar nahi huaa.

Suddenly kriya getz up and startz walking ...very slowly ( a step ...pause...another step )

Nil (cum there with new soft drinkz for every one ... he notices that kriya already was drunk and had started the weird behavior : "guyz jaldi karo ye peelo ".

Nil had mixed bulbul in all there drinks .so that no one can tell rey who did this .

Vicky who was very too tensed pickz up a glass and drinkz it (not even a drop left)

Nil :" arre kameene !ye kya kar diyaa !!

All otherz also drink it

Nil see rey and swyam cuming .

Kriya ek taraf turtle walk kar rahi thi ... aur baaki sub bhi thode thode drunk ho chuke the.

Nil : "oh shit ! oh shit ab kya karun !!! ek kaam kartha hun me bhi in sub ke tarah hi act kartha hun. Letz be on the safe side."

(Rey and swayam arrive)

Rey and swayam :" hey guyz !!! (noticing the silence) umm kya huaa guyzz sub ithne chup kyun ho ? ".

Rey sees raaj sitting and starring at kriya ,he feels hurt ...again .

Simmi jo chup beti hui thi wo suddenly ut thi he and empty glass utaathe hue : (chooorrr ...(chilaathe hue) bag mere ghar se ...(stats running behind nilesh ..throws the glass ) bag yahan se chor..thera sir pod daalungi me

Nil (running) :"simmi kya kar rahi ho !! aaa aaa me mar jaaunga ...lag jaaye gi mujhe..".

Simmi keepz on throwing thingz on nil and nil keepz on running around .

VICKY ,AMAR AND BARATH SIT IN THE POSE OF GANDHI JIZ 3 MONKEYZ

Sharon attitude ke saath swayam ke taraf chalk e aathi he and :"swayam plzz chalo mere saath ...aaj hum date pe chalenge...ok? chalo ab

Swayam : "Sharon abhi ? I mean ab hum party pea aye henaa...so kal chalege ok..."

Sharon : "nahi !! aaj hi chalenge ...ok thum aalsi hogaye ho .thum yahin rehe naa chathe ho tho ok ..tho hum candlelight dinner Karen ge .hehehe".

Rey: (whispering to swayam): "swayma sub ajeeb behave kar rahe he kuch gadbad he ...but job hi ke awesome he (winks),their to lottry lag gayi ..sharon candlelight dinner ke liye request kar rahi he thujse ... agar Vicky aur nil hoshme hothe naa tho bolthe CHEMISTRYYY hehehe".

Swayam: "bas yaar rey ab keliye chem. Ko hataa aur we need to solve this nasha wala mistry (swayam see kriya walking slowly and slowly)rey wahan dek kriya ...uss bechaari ke bhi yahin haal he kya? Zara check kar.

Rey :" u sure ki me jaake chck karun !! raaj bhi yahi he..."

Swayam: "so wat agar raaj he tho...jaa naa"

Rey : "yaa ok ...thu jaa Sharon ke saath ".(he smiles)

Swayam apne man me :"rey I know ki thu bohut hurt he, per phir hum sub ke liye has raha he ".

Rey dere se kriya ke saath jaatha he.kriya apne slow speed me chal hi rahi hothi he.

Rey : "umm ...kriya...(no response) ...kriyaa...(stops walking but no response)"

Rey man me : "isse kya hua ... ithni chup kyun he ... kya hua meri miss baathcutter ...".

Wo apna haat kriya ke kando pe rak tha he and turnz her toward him

Usske aanoko ansoon the , rey usske joke hue face ko upper kartha he and usse anko me anson dek ke reyz heart felt heavy ... Jiss dard ko wo ignore kar raha tha till that moment usse aur ignore nahi kar paaya wo kriya ko kuch bol nahi paraha tha...mushkil se usske moo se ek word nilka : "k-kr-kriya"

Kriya : (apne haath ko rey ke lip pe rak the hue) :"shhh...plzz kuch math bolnaa...kyunki me bolungi ...agar aap bhi bologe and me bhi bolungi tho sunegaa kon hehehe... he na! he na!

(kriya nashe ke waja se teek se tadi nahi ho paarahi thi ) rey aapko patha he mujhe naa ek feeling ho raha he ...ider chala me udar chala waala ... So letz sing idar chala me udar chala jaanu kahan me kidar chala arre pisaal gayyaaa...aaa aaa (ye bol ke kriya ek dum se bet gayi aur chilaane lagi) aaa rey duk raha he

Rey ko kuch samaj nahi aaya ki abhi kya huaa he could just see ki kriya ko dard horaha he aur wo dard se chilaa rahi he wo bet jaatha he aur dektha he ki kriya ke paav me chot lkagi he ek bada sa glass piece tha jo simmi ne peka huaa tha ,wo kriya ke paav me gusa tha ussne usse nikaalne ki koshis kiyaa but kriya bohut zor se chilaathi rey kriya ko carefully utatha he but... Raaj ..wo bhi wahin tha

Rey (man me) :"kya kar raha ha he rey ...kriya ab raaj ki he ...thera koi haq nahi bantha usspe.thu kriyaa se pyaar karthi he tho bhi koi farq nahi padtha ...she is not urz anymore...but kriya ko iss haal me kese chod dhoonu .ek kaam kartha hun raaj ko batha tha hun".

Raaj ke paas jaatha he and: "raaj kriya ke paav me chot lagi he ...letz take her to my place and wahan glass piece nikaal the he and dressing karthe he chalo ...get up naa ...jaldi...

Raaj showz no response tho rey ki sataklethi he : oye raja utt naa kya padahuaa he ...pyaar kartha henaa meri...umm I mean kriya se ..chal ab (no response again) ok now thatz it ...paderaho yahin pe I (taking her in his arms) kriya me jaldi iss dard ko rok dungaa... Don't worry...(kriya in his arms stopz crying) "rey aap warm ho humesha mujhe ase hi pakadke raknaa plzz

Rey had a mixuter of feeling at that moment...happy abt kriyas statement .sad for kriya and raajz enagement...confused why kriya is telling this when she is in luv with raaj".

Rey reaches home ...usse laga tha ki kriya tub thak sochuki hogii

He takes her to his room carefully putz her on the bed... And goes to get the first aid box

Wo waapse aake dekthaa he kriya beti hui thi aur uss taraf iss tarf dekh rahi thi..wo rey ko dekthi he aur smile karthi he ...jese usse pichlaa kuch yaad hi nahi ...per usske aansoon abhi thak ruke nahi the

Rey paas aatah he and pyaar se ansoon poch tha he and : "I know bohut duk raha he ...don't worry teek hojayegaa ".

Kriya : agar aap ase ithne pyaar se ansoon pochoge tho mere aankon se me humera ansoon baha the hi rejaaungi deknaa... Aur aapko kya laga ye jo ansoon beherahe he ye iss chot ke wajaa se he? Nahi ...ye issliye behe nahi rahe he

Rey : kriya kya bol rahi ho!

Kriya:plzz rey let me talk! Ye jo chot he isse tho dard hi nahi ho raha he ...dard tho aapke dil me mene kiyaa huaa chot de raha he rey !! uss chot se koon beheraha he ... per phir bhi aap kuch nahi dikaarahe he ...i knowaapne man me soch liyaa hogaa ki usski kuchi meri kushi he ...per aap mere bhinaa nahi rehe paaoge I know that!!

"kyun rey kyun chod diyaa aapne meraa haath ...me chathi thi issliye ...mujhe patha he aap jaanthe ho ki me raaj ke saath ithni kush nahi hun jothni aapke saath hothi thi.

Aur kese kush rehethi me aapse aur sub se joot jo bola tha!!

Rey :joot kesaa joot kriyaa!!

Kriya putz her hands around rey neck and places her cheek on his shoulder :haan jhoot bola tha rey!! Mrs raaj benneke bare me!!im not engaged to raaj! He is my friend !aur mene usse help maanga tha!

Ye sunke rey was so damn happy ...he was on cloud nine and :kriya thum such bol rahi honaa! Ye nashe ke wajah se nahi he right?

(she liftz her face from his soulder and pichs him hard)

Rey :"aaa aa kriya kya kar rahi ho"

Kriya :aapko yakeen dilaa rahi thi ki ye sach he"

(she keepz her cheek on his shoulder again)

Rey :kriya thank u thank u ! thumne meraa life wapas de diyaa mujhe u know me ithnaa low feel kar raha tha ...ur magic of my life!!

Rey goes on talking to her but at one point rey notices that kriya had stoped answering him...he jst liftz her head a lil bit and sees that she had already slept.

Rey : "meri pyaari baathcutter...humesha ke liye meri he .kissi aur ki nahi hogi...cant wait fo 2mrw ...jub kriya ko me bathaunga ki ussne mujhe kya kya bathaya".

swayam kroya ke paav se glass ko hataake .dressing kar detha he...

(The sun raises)

Kriya uthi he ...usske sir he seviour pain hotha he ..usse kuch yaad nahi hotha ki kya hua tha raath ko .usse wo kumara jaana pehechaana sa laga .

"me yahan kub aayi ?ye konsaa ...(she recollects abt the room) ye rey ka kumara he "

Rey :"ye rey ka kumara he kriyaa !!! (smiles)

Kriya : "rey me yahan kese pohochi !!aur baaki sub kahan he !!

Rey : tumhe yahan me leke aaya kriya...aur baaki sub wahan he resturent me " (smiles)

Kriya: "per aap kyun leke aaye ...ummm?

Rey:"tumhe kuch yaad nahi henaa ...let me tell u!

Kriya: wat do u mean1

(Rey narrates the whole thing) and: kriya thum nashe me thi thub thumne job hi kaha such kaha...ab koi bahana ya joot koi naya cover up story ?" (smile)

Kriya: ummm ahh umm rey wo ..."

Rey : "no no more jhoot bas ! (cums close to her and hugz her tight)ab thum kahi nahi jaane doonga me ...never!

Kriya bursts out in tears : "im sorry rey .really sorry...i just wanted u to move on . im sorry".

Rey : shhh don't ...plzz ase hi rehene do thodi der ".

Kriya : "I luv u rey ...i luv u soo much ".

(Reyz phone ringz ) rey:

Swayam ka call he kriya let me take it plzz

Haan swayam bol !

Swayam : "rey kahan gayab he thu aur kriya bhi nahi he! Yahan sub wapas hosh me aagaye he...kriya there saath he naa??

Rey :"swayam kriya meri he humesha humesh keliye ..."

Swayam :"wat? Rey thu kya bol raha he"

Rey :me such bol raha hun ! KRIYA SIRF MEI HE SWAYAM

(He holdz kriya hand)FOREVER !

by pam

Edited by devilishpam - 11 years ago

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