YOU BELONG WITH ME
SO, ITS MY FIRST STORY AND I M OVER EXCITED + NERVOUS... I DON'T KNOW THAT YOU ALL WILL LIKE IT OR NOT LEKIN KYA KAROO OH LADIES MAI HOON ADAT SE MAJBOOR...š
SABSE PEHLE A BIGG WALA THANKSSS TO AKU aka AKANSHAJAš ...for helping me , belive me yrr it wouldn't be possible without you...i m dedicating this whole ff to you...I LOVE YOUUUš³
SO MY
FF YOU BELONG WITH ME is a love story between our fav jallu and jodha in 21st century
CHARACTER SKECTHES
JALLAL : he is a 16 year old boy , in 11th standard. He is caring+carefree funloving+serious ,a brilliant student, a perfect son,brother,friend and most importantly a LOVER.
JODHA : she is a16 year old mature , serious , studious , responisible she is also in 11th standard .
JALLAL AND JODHA are CHILDHOOD BEST FRNDS . THEIR PARENTS BHARMAL AND HUMAYUN SHARE A 50% PARTNERSHIP AND R VERY GUD FRNDS TOO. OUR JALLAL IS MADLY IN LOVE WITH JODHA SINCE HIS CHILDHOOD BUT FOR JODHA , JALLAL IS HER BFF AND HER ONLY FRND (KYUNKI VO JODHA TO INTROVERT HAI , THODA YAAD RAKHA KARO)
HAMIDA , MAINA , MIRZA , SUJAMAL , BHARMAL IS SAME AS IN THE SHOW AND HUMAYUN IS ALSO VERY MUCH LIKE BHARMAL.
CHAPTER 1
Jallal : oh god ! I m late , Jodha to mujhe mar dali gi , aree driver kaha hai... mom ,mom where r u ????
HB: kya hua jallal??... kyu shor macha rahe ho??
Jallal : mom mera driver kaha gya?? Abhi to yaha tha!!
Driver : sirji ...
Jallal : aa gaye ap ...badi jaldi nahi aa gaye...
Driver : sorry , sir ji
Jallal : sorry!!!!! Tumhari sorry se kya hoga ??? ...kuch bhi nahi ,dat to mujhe padne vali hai , jante ho naa ki Jodha ko late latiip log nahi pasand hai...ab lecture to mujhe hi suna padega. Said jallal in cryie + angry tone.
AT JODHA'S HOUSE
Jodha : ufff! Ye jallal...lagta hai ajj nahi aayega...
And the door bell ranged : ting tong
A servant opened the door and saw jallal there , he respectfully greeted jallal "good evening sir"
Jallal to servant in a very sad tone "yrr ab evening good nahi reah gayi"
He went inside and saw maina , Jodha and sujamal sitting, he saw Jodha in a white chikan kurta and blood red colored legging and jo's anger was clearly visible on her face.
Jalall to himself " ya allah , when she is angry , she looks more beautiful . jallal to all 3 "good evening everybody"
Maina amd sujamal replied him but jo was sitting quite. She didn't even looked at him
Maina " arre beta aa gaye, hum tumhara hi intezar kar rahe thee"
Jallal " waise mom main hoon hi itna khaas ki log mera intezar kare"he said it in a funny tone
Maina " han vo to hai,accha movie ke liye late nahi ho raha kya???
Jallal " haan ma , late to ho raha lekin app jaisi khoobsurat khatoon (lady) ko dekhkar mai sab kuch bhool gaya tha"
Maina " jallal tum bhi naaa"
Jodha looking towards jallal "agar ap logo ki baatein khatam ho gayi ho to hum chale"
Jallal was shocked after listening to jo. He had thought of receiving a big lecture on punctuality but she didn't said any thing...
Jallal to himself " lagta hai ki ajj nayi tarah ki punishment milne wali hai"
Jallal to Jodha " haan Jodha chalo" jallal and Jodha said a gud bye to maina and sujamal.
Driver was ready with BMW M3 GTR ( its my favorite car...look wise) Jodha and jallal were sitting at back and the song naina from the movie khoobsurat was playing in the fm radio .
Jallal : hey! sweetie why are you so upset?
Jodha didn"t said anything jallal again tried to start a conversation " sweetie have you done maths homework"
Jodha " haan , kar liya, tumne??
Jallal " ha ,sweetie kar liya lekin ques 24 nahi aa raha tha , I tried a lot , kam se kam 7 bar kiya , lekin hua hi nahi" he said it in a cryie manner with a puppy face thinking it will wash jodha's anger but he failed , then again a idea flashed in his brilliant brain . jallal to driver " hey! Uncle...stop the car"
Jodha " lekin kyu ??"
Jalllal " meri ma, tera questions puchna zarori hai kya?
Jodha " haan , zarori hai bahut zarori hai" she said it in a irritated manner
Jallal " ap gadi rokiye" this statement of jallal added fuel to jodha's fire.
Jallal quickly went out of the car and started walking ... jallal to himself " I m sure that my this gift will surely make you happy.
IN THE CAR
Jodha was cursing jallal for leaving her alone and then jallal's phone started ringing , Jodha quickly picked his phone but before se could say anything the call ended. She unlocked jallal's phone as she was the only person on the earth who knows jallal password ofcourse after jallal. But before she coud open the call log his wallpaper caught her attention. It was their childhood pic in which joja were hugging each other , after seeing it, Jodha was smiling cutely and there comes our jallal with a bunch of red roses. Jallal to Jodha "beautiful flowers for the most beautiful lady"
Jodha " hmmm, jallal you know me the best" she said it in a cheerful tone
Jallal " yrr maine apna pura bachpan tumhare saat bitaya hai, to tumhari pasand napasand mujhse bhetar kaun janega" he said it in a romantic tone. Jodha gave him a cute smile and rested her head on his shoulder.
Jodha " soon , we will get married, I will bre married to my best and only friend... I m sure our marriage life will be successful" she said it in a litte serious+happy tone.
Jallal " I will enjoy my whole life with my sweetie" he said it in a romantic tone and exchanged a sweet smile.
Jallal to himself " Jodha you are right that our married life will be successful lekin we will get married not as best friends but as 2 lovers, I promise Jodha that I will make you realize how much you love me and how much I love you but after that terrible incident you have loose your faith in love and I m promising it to you that I will bring that faith back , I will bring that old Jodha back."
Precap - akdha in school, cutii cutii akdha moments.
Upcoming track - jallal will have a fight with some boys vo bhi humari Jodha ke liye.
How was the story?? Should I continue , please tell me plsss
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And ushu darling it's not that ek villain inspired story , I will surely post it but after some time.
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Regards
Arunima
CHAPTER 2
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