ASYA new os -My seacret cursh became my love of life

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Hi guys this is first time i am writing something i dont know how it will be turn n i am sooo nerves guys if there any mistake plzz ignore it😳 so here is the story

ZOYA"s POV"s
Hi i am Zoya Finally i am in the train going to my best friend Najma"s wedding am so excited its been 2years that i didnt see her because after college we got busy in our personal life n talking of her how can i forget her brother that handsome guy who used to be so shy n never talk to girls.I had a cursh on him a huge cursh ok maybe more than a cursh but i never dare to voice it because i know that will never happen.And i only talk to him when i need something or 4 najma.He is studying in USA that time i only got chance to see him in summar hollidays n he used to b so shy i wonder if he has any girl friend now also "sing" .And here i am out of the station.She told me that some one coming to resieve me.So am looking around n sudanly my heartbeat getting race so fast because there stood he ASAD omg am i dreaming what is he doing hear am standing death in my track.His eyes met main n he is slowly coming towards me n he just came to me n give a peak on my cheek n i was almost dead.He said "Hey Zoya r u this beautifull in college or i am blind not to see" i was wearing red tee n black jeans i was shocked n finally i compose myself n ask him "how r u doing" "i am fine lets go".We were driving he is looking at contineusly but i dont dare to look at him because i know if i look at him i will faint.We reach our destiny am so happy to see najma after 2years n glad she got a guy who is her love of life Imran.I get freshen up i heard a knock on d door.There is najma asking me to go n check the decoration because i love these things decoration,food,etc; n told me to take Asad also with me n i was like on could nine.I knock on his door no response so enter d room i was looking around when i heard a click sound i turn n i am dead 2nd time in one day there he stood without a shirt n OMG he has 6pack i mean 6PACK i was like WOW.Our eyes met n he smirking like hell i was all red i tried to look away but cant he took one step towards me n i take one step backwards until my back hit the wall n he is standing so close to that our breath got mix with each other n he kiss me on my lips OMG he kiss me i dont know what to do i just stand there its just 5seconds some one call me he just took out his lips but still standing there n smiling i tell him that najma is calling us n i run out of his room.And after some time we tow r checking d decoration n all he is smiling all d while n just looking at me n i am blushing like hell.The wedding went so well n all of us r so happy n its time 4 dance all d jodies r dancing suddnly Asad came infront of me n ask me 4 a dance.We get to d dance floor he put his hands on my waist , my hands around his neck we r so close to each other i was wearing a black sari n backless blouse his hands r touching my bare back there is playing a soft romantic song n he look at my lips i cant help but blush he bending towards my ear n wisper "I LOVE U" n look into my eyes i was shocked n just looking at him n he kiss me not like d first time it was so intense i too kiss him back we kiss like 5minites n broke out 4 some air i was blushing like hell n he ask me d most beautifull thing "WILL U MARRY ME" i just look at him n said"YES" n we again kiss happy tears r in my eyes i cant belive it my secret crush became my love of life.
THE END
thats it guys plzzz tell me how was it good or bad if there r anything boring feel free to comment😃 n telling again this is first ever story⭐️


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Breathe Zoya breathe

I mean you are going on and on without even a pause no punctuation


Aww Zoya had a crush a huge crush more than a crush on Asad but never dared to speak to the shy guy


Yes Asad you were blind not to notice her or did you but did not say anything till the right moment


Shadi ke mausam mein love is in the air


Ek ki shaadi mein many more shaadi's get fixed


Yay ILU, proposal and a yes


Why is it that a girl or a boy always falls for the best friend's sibling?


But i love when it happens like that


Good one

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very Sweet,Simple n Cute😳..Love it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved it really cute 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

Breathe Zoya breathe

I mean you are going on and on without even a pause no punctuation


Aww Zoya had a crush a huge crush more than a crush on Asad but never dared to speak to the shy guy


Yes Asad you were blind not to notice her or did you but did not say anything till the right moment


Shadi ke mausam mein love is in the air


Ek ki shaadi mein many more shaadi's get fixed


Yay ILU, proposal and a yes


Why is it that a girl or a boy always falls for the best friend's sibling?


But i love when it happens like that


Good one

thank u so much this so long comment am glad u like it thank u again 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess101

I loved it really cute😃

thank u sooo much glad u love it 😃
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Originally posted by: -Hurya-

Very Sweet,Simple n Cute😳..Love it!

thank u so so much 4 u r comment 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os. Asya were cute. Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb os
it was cute story😊
asad and his 6packs😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww...
seriously i cant believe this is ur first try
'it was so cute!
loved it!
do write many many more in future
and do pm me!
zoya so cute
asad as usual hot!! ☺️

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