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very emotional update
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part 49
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part 50
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part 51
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Part 52:-

Etf conference room..

Chree n aayesha chatting..

Aayesha:guys..tommorrow 15th august he..independance day..department ke headquarter me celebration rakha he..we all are invited..

Chotu:are ha..fir toh kal bravery award function bhi hoga..riya ko bhi toh bravery award milane wala he na altaf ke case ke liye..

Shree:but ri he kaha..??woh toh abhi undercover se wapas aayi hi nahi..

Chotu:toh kya hua..rathod sir he na..he will accept her award..

Shree glare chotu..while aayesha get sad hearing this..

Chotu(trying to coverup):I mean..rathod sir is our chief..so he can accept her award on behalf of her..

Aayesha(trying to change the subject):waise kitna accha hoga..agar riya aur arnav kisi tarah uss award function se pehale aa jaye..

Shree:ya..i hope..woh aa jaye..

Chotu:hey bhagwan..plz riya ko bravery award function ke liye bhej do..mein tumhe 51 modak ka prasad chadauga..

Shree:chotu..??

Chotu:are tension mat le..bhagwan thodi na itne modak khayege..woh sare toh mein hi khauga Prasad samazke..

Shree raised eyebrow..

Chotu:accha baba..agar uss me se kuch bache toh tuze bhi dunga..

Shree shook his head in disbelief n smile..while aayesha laugh a loud..

Their chit chat get silenced when rathod entered in conference room..he sat on his usual chair..n started reading file..

Chotu(mutter to shree n aayesha):chahe kuch bhi ho jaye..rathod sir ke ye sadu aur serious expression change nahi hone wale..

Shree smile..while aayesha glare chotu..

N then our supercop entered in room..sit on his usual chair..putting is head inside a file..

Shree(mutter):chal..inaki hi kami thi..kaam suru karte he..warna hamper barsege..

They started doing their work quietly.

Suddenly sam's phone buzz..he saw the caller id..get shocked n happy too..

Sam receive the phone hurrily..

Sam:hello..

...

Sam:really..??ok..ya..thats cool..

...

Sam:ok..tum mere ghar pe shift ho jao..ok..?

..

Sam:ya bye..

Sam cut the phone..

Shree(mutter to chotu):sir..itna smile karke aur happily baat kar rahe he..kisaka phone hoga..?

Chotu(mutter):usse apne ghar shift hone ko bol rahe he..i guess..ri toh nahi..?

Shree too nodded..

Here sam's conversation on phone snatch arjun's attension also..he give him questioning look..

But sam don't bother to answer him..

At afternoon:

Everyone is busy in their work..n sitting at conference room..

Suddenly door get open n they all hear a soft but chirping voice,..

"hi...guys.."

All turn happily to hear the voice..n their smile get wide seeing the person..

Its none other than riya..

Everyone was about to rush her,but they get shocked seeing the person who reach to her first..its arjun..

Arjun(with heavy voice):riyaaa..

Saying this he immigiately hug her..she was somewhat shocked seeing his reaction..

But before she could react on it..he broke hug..n stared her lovingly with teary eyes..

At next second he cup her face..n kiss her forehead..

Arjun:tum kaise ho..?kab aayi mission se..?tum thik toh ho..?

Riya(getting away from him,mutter):I m ok..

Sam clear his throat to get their attension..

Riya rush to him..n hug him..

Then she hug choree n aayesha..

Sam:tumne itna time kyo laga ghar se aane me..?tumne toh kaha tha ke tum arnav ko ghar chodke sidhe office aaogi..

Riya:tumhare ghar ki halat dekhne ke baad..mein kaise aise hi aa jati..

Sam:what do u mean by mere ghar ki halat..??tum aane ke chances he issliye meine khud kal raat sari saaf-safayi ki thi..

Riya:oh..really..waise muze nahi laga ke ghar ki thodi si bhi saf-safayi hui he..

Sam:are ghar he yar..hotel thodi na he.. thoda sa to dust hoga hi..

Riya:thoda sa dust..?

Sam realize he cant win against her on this topic..he just strug off his shoulder..

Shree:waise ri..tu kab aayi..??aur tera mission kaise raha..?

Riya:mission..ekdam fantastic tha..subah hi Mumbai aa gayi thi..par arnav bhi sath me tha..aur meine apna rented flat chod diya tha mission pe jane se pehale..issiiye sam ke ghar shift kiya..thodi si cleaning ki..aur arnav ko maid ke pass chodke commissioner sir ko final report submit ki..n then I m here..

Aayesha:that's gr8 ri..chotu..lagta bhagwan ne teri sun li..ri sach me award function se pehale aa gayi..

Shree:ha ..ab bhgwan ko chotu ke hath se 51 modak khane ko milege..wait..ya fir ye kahe ke chotu ko bhagwan ke Prasad ke modak khane ko milege..

All started laughing..even sam n arjun too have their best smile..

Arjun(in mind):tum aa gayi ho..toh jaise ronak aa gayi he..

After finishing their work everyone retire for the day..

Arjun:riya..woh..arnav..

Riya(to arjun,sternly):tumhe agar arnav se milana he..toh tum mil sakte ho..but ha..usake liye tumhe Sammy ke ghar aana padega..i hope u don't mind..

Saying this she too leave..

Arjun close his eyes to stop tears..

Next day:-

Its independence day..the whole police department gathered to celebrate it..

After that they have bravery award ceremony..

Riya get bravery award fo the way she fight with altaf n his goons..

Everyone happily clap for her..n not only etf but whole department is feeling proud of her..

After the ceremony get over they goes to office ..

After finishing their work all decided to have a party for riya..

So everyone decides to gathered at sam's home..

Sam's home:-

Riya is sitting on couch quietly..

Sam:dam it..ye sab log abhi tak aaye kyo nahi..?

Riya:come on Sammy..5 baje tak toh ham sab office me hi the..sab ghar jayege..fir ready hoke aayege..time toh lagega na..

Sam:hmm..waise baki sari preparation toh ho gayi he..dinner,softdrink arrange ho gaya he..

Riya:hmm..

Sam sit besides her..

Sam:kya baat he..?tum itni dull kyo lag rahi ho..?

Riya(with teary eyes):aaj..mom-dad ki bahot yaad aa rahi he..u know..muze award lete dekh woh bahot khush hote..unhe bahot proud hota muze aise dekh ke..par..par..

Sam:toh baat karlo unse..

Riya:nahi..

Sam:oh come on pari..call them..

Saying this he left in kitchen to check all things..

Here riya keep thinking should she call her parents or not.

After lot of thinking she finally decides to call..

She dial her home's number..her mother received it..

Mrs.mukherji:hello..

Riya(get teary hearing her mother's voice afer long time..in shaken voice):m...mm..mom..

Mrs.mukherji:riya..??riya..beta..kya tum ho..?

Riya:ji..ji..mom..

Mrs.mukherji(delighted):kaise ho beta..?thik ho na..?arnav.tumhara beta kaisa he..?sab thik he na..?tumhari aawaz sunane ke liye taras gayi thi mein..

Riya:sab thi he mom..aur arnav bhi..

Mrs.mukherji:ab toh..ab toh chalne lag gaya hoga na mera pota..?

Riya:ha mom..chalane kya..daudta rehata he ghar bhar..

Mrs.mukherji(have happy tears):hmm..

Riya:mom..pata he..aaj na..muze..bravery award mila he..meine..meine..bahot miss kiya aapko aur dad ko..

Tears rolled down from both's eyes..

Mrs.mukherji:sach me..?ye toh..bahot khushi ki baat he..congrats beta..i m really proud of u..(getting sad)kash mein tumhare sath reh pati..

Riya:mom..??dad..dad he..?

Mrs.mukherji:he par..

Riya:aap bas unhe phone dijiye..

After a minute.

Mr.mukherji:hello..??kyon baat kar raha he..?

Riya:dad..mein riya..

Mr.mukherji get shocked n happy to hear his daughter's voice long time..

Riya:dad..kaise he aap..?aaj aapko bahot miss kar rahi hu dad..aapko lagta he na ke meine aapke sapne tode he..meine aapka vishwas toda..par dad..aaj aap zarur apni beti pe proud feel karege..u know..muze bravery award mila he..u know altaf bahot bada criminal usse aur usake aadmiyo se akele bahaduri se ladne ke liye muze ye award mila he..

She waited her father to speak something..but he don't..so she continue..

Riya:aaj toh aapka sapna pura hua na dad..ab toh aap garv se keh sakte he ke mein aapki beti hu..aap kuch bol kyo nahi rahe dad..??aap kush nahi hue ye sunake..??

Her father get teary..n could not say anything..

Riya:aap muzse baat bhi nahi karege dad.?muze congrats to kahiye..?helllo..dad,..aap sun rahe he na..?dad..

Tears rolled from mr.mukherj's eyes..

Riya:hello...helloo..dad..dad..

She cut the phone..n started crying..here her father is also crying..

Sam saw riya crying..he rush to her..n tried to make her calm..

After sometime..riya get relax somewhat..

Then the doorbell ring..

Riya wipe her tears..

Choree n aayesha come inside house..

They all started chatting with riya..arnav too having funtime..

This make riya change her mood..

After sometime..

Arjun too come..

Arjun:ummm...woh cake lene gaya tha..issliye late hua..

Shree:are..haa..cake ke bare me toh ham sab bhul hi gaye the..accha hua arjun sir le aaye.

They cut cake..n took dinner..arnav get happy seeing the all celebration n started clapping..

They took dinner..have some chit chat..n all other leave..

While sam is helping riya in cleaning kitchen n all..arjun is busy with playing arnav..

After finishing work riya come out..n saw arjun n arnav..sam was making coffee for them..

Arnav is sitting on arjun's stomatch..n trying to pull arjun's nose..

Arnav(to arjun):mammaa..mamma..

Riya come to them..

Riya:arnav..beta mamma toh mein hu..ye baba he..ye aapke baba he..say "baa baaa"

Arnav:mamma..mamma..(ab kya karega usako dusara word aata hi nahi abhi..)

Riya shook his head in disbelief..while arjun just smile..

Arjun get up..

Arjun(to arnav):ok..ab bahot ho gaya..ab so jao baby..bahot raat ho gayi he na..?fir arnav ne party me itni sari masti bhi ki..toh ab so jate he..ok..?

Arnav:mamma..mamma..

Arjun(to arnav):yes beta..mamma ke pass hi toh jana he aapko..

Ariya look to each other..

Arjun:riyaa..kuch baat karni he..

Riya:kya..?

Arjun:bas thanks bolana tha..

Riya:kisliye..?

Arjun:kyo ki tumne muze samzaya ke meine tumhare sath jo kiya usse tumhe kaisa feel hua hoga..tumne muze ehsaas dilaya ke apne bte se dur hone ka gam kitna mushkil hota he..tumne muze saccha pyar kya hota he ye sikhaya muze..thank u..

Riya don't understand what to say..

Arjun:ek aur baat..

Riya:kya..?

Arjun:don't worry mein tumhe aur arnav ko kabhi alag karne ki koshish nahi karuga..aur nahi tumhare life me firse aane ki koshish karuga..because I realized..i deserve this lonliness..i deserve this pain..bye..

Saying this he left..

Riya keep looking to his retreating figure..

Precap:-

(should riya forgive arjun n give him last chance..?? waiting for ur suggestions..plz mention what u think in ur comment..)

Sam n riya conversation about arjun's change behavior..

N exora2 virus case..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Pta nhi story hai what you like but one part is saying no whatever it is other [art just for arnav but after divorce they can live separate ney whatever it is it is always good
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Posted: 10 years ago
good one dear

as a mother i just say...

for sake of arnav...wo second chance diya tho...?

ye meri soch hai...

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