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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys.thanks for a lovely feed back .love you all.so here is chapter 5 .i have written it in hurry .hope you like it
chapter 5

Next morning at jodha- karan's home .they were doing breakfast together

"karan mujhe promotion mil gayi"said jodha with a sad tone

"oye tere ko doctor ke paas jana chahiye"said karan

"why?doctor kyun?"asked jodha

"dude tujhe yeh baat exited aur happy hokar batani thi but tu to sad ho rahi hai ya phir dar rhi hai ki tujhe koi saddu boss na mil jaye"he said

"haan, aaj mujhe feel hua ki humare boss kitne ache hai,I am afraid agar mujhe tujh jaisa akru boss mil gaya to,main to frustrate ho jaungi"she said

"oye jodha ki life mein dark is cheez ka naam hai,don't worry teri kismat meri jaise achchi nhi hai"he said

They finished breakfast and went to there respective work place. jodha went to tanishaand asked "kuch pata chala humara promotion kaha hua hai"

"haan we are promoted as crime journalists in FDI" tanisha said

"what??yeh to wahi jagah hai jaha karan kaam karta hai !!oh no,ab karan ka khadus boss mera hi boss.jodha you need to be strong"she muttered to herself

"oye kahan kho gayi.i know voh tere karan ka workstation hai but ab sapne mat saja uske saath rehane ke"tanisha teased jodha with a naughty smile

"tanu tujhe last time keh rhi hun he is just a FRIEND,if you know hindi then you will understand"she said and went to car which was waiting for them. soon tanisha joined her and they went to FDI quarters.

After around half an hour, they reached FDI .they were already late so they directed to conference room where three people were sitting. jodha recognized one,he was karan.tanisha asked "hi ,can we come in?"

Three of them turned back.karan saw jodha and was delighted to see her.sharifuddin was standing open-mouthed mesmerized by jodha's beauty.

"are jodha you and tanisha are the two journalist joining our team"he asked "omg!! Ab meri bestie mere saath kaam karegi"he said and hug her

"humse bhi milao karan "said ruqaiya

"ya jodha ye ruqaiya and ye humari team ki ek lauti ladki thi but ab nhi and ruqu ye hai tanisha"said karan

"hi" replied both jodha and tanisha in unison

"and jodha and tanisha he is shariffuddin"karan said

"no offence but yeh kitna old fashion name hai"whispered

tanisha in jodha's ear

"but jaise yeh jaise dekh raha hai na he should be chipuddin"jodha whispered in tanisha's ear

"so apke boss kaun hai??kaun hai wo mahan jiske gungaan karan din raat karta hai"asked jodha

"acha to karan ne umhe jalal sir ke baare mein sab kuch bataya hai"ruqaiya asked

"haan karan to tumhare sir ki itni baate karta hai ki sometimes I feel he is in love"jodha said

On this everyone laughed

"jodha tu khud mil le jalal sir se yahan se right cabin.gud luck"said karan

"luck was always with me"jodha said and went

In jalal's cabin

"may I com in sir??'jodha asked

"come in"jalal said without looking towards her

"hi I am jodha.apki team ki nayi member ek journalist"se said non-stop

He looked up.

"tum???"jodha said

"ms.jodha ,lagta hai apko apne seniors ko respect dena nhi aata"jalal said

"huh!!senior acp sahab apne kaam mein to mein hi yahan par senior hun,haan age mein aap senior ho sakte hai...you never know pata hai aaj kal budhape ko chupane ke liye kitni creams aa gayi hai.kai apne unmein se..."she was interrupted by jalal's shout

"ms jodha,out"he said

"acp sahab out hone aayi hoti to in kyun hoti??point to be noted my lord"said jodha and went out

"allah!!ab ek journalist ki bak bak saho"he said and sat down with a frown on his face.

How was it?? I think it was boring.soory for the mistakes.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
nice update
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
it was awesm update..😊
bt vry short
next time plz long update..
plzz update soon😉
n pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
finally updated... short but goood ... update next part long ;) ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Nice...sorry for d late review but must say, brilliant update😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
REALLY IT WAS AMAZING I READ ALL CHAPTERS IN ONE GO...

I LIKED IT VERY MUCH...😊😊

PLEASE UPDATE SOOONNN...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
I really like your story . It's awesome pleaseee PM me.Thank you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Pls don't discontinue d ff, l read all chapters in one go all r simply superb and pls update soon .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Nice, but don't understand the conversation, english please or please 😭

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