Zaya Os Roller Coaster Ride

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hola guyzzz i m back with another torture ...so be ready
No proof reading
So plzz ignore typos ...

Zain usman abdullah came running inside his house the huge barkat villa searching for his mom ...
Who wad nowhere to be found he searched every nook and corner of the house ...

Zain : mom ...mom...where r u ...mom ...i want to tell u something...mom

Suraiya abdullah came out from the kitchen wiping her soft elegant and perfectly manicured hands with kitchen towel

Suraiya : stop zain why are you running...and plzz zain stop shouting

Zain who was running in the speed of light immediately stopped ...he was breathing heavily due to running and shouting

Surraiya knelt down infront of her 8 years old cute son

Suraiya : ok tell me why r u shouting ...

Zain : mom you know what ...

Suraiya :no i dont know...

Zain : offo mom stop irritating me ..and listen plzzz..

Suraiya : ok fine ..tell me champ what happened ...

Zain : mom we are going on picnic tomorrow ...funcity ... there are alot of rides...roller coaster ...over riders ...dynamites ...bumping cars ...mom i am very excited ...

Suraiya could see the glee and excitement in his eyes ...

Suraiya clapped her hands ...

Suraiya :yay i m very very happy for u .so who else is coming along with you champ ...

Zain : all my friends mom rizwan , sanam , ayat , gauhar , shazia ...everybody ...

Suraiya : aliya also...

Zain groaned listening the name of his enemy...

Zain : ya mkb is also going ...

Suraiya : y r u so irritated champ she is so sweet ...and she look so cute in her two ponytails ...

Zain rolled his eyes hearing her praise...

Zain : plzz mom she is anything but sweet ...

Suraiya :come on zain she is your only cousin u should make her your friend she is so good ..

Zain : mom she is not good she is junglee billi ..she always pulls my hairs and those scratches i got on my handsome face was all her doing ...

Suraiya :thats because you always tease her zain ...ok now like a good boy you promise me that u will take care of her on picnic ..you know that she is scared of heights ...plzz zainuu promise me ...

Zain rolled his eyes ..

Suraiya : plzz zain ..
Pouting cutely ...

Zain let out an exasperated sigh ...

Zain : fine mom i will take care of her ...i promise ..
Suraiya smiled and kissed his chubby cheeks ...

Zain : now will you give me something to eat i am starving mom ...do you want me to die out of hunger

Suraiya chuckled at her son's nautanki ...she got up and picked zain in her arms and marched towards kitchen ..

Suraiya : i made a special pasta for u let me make you eat


While on the other hand in haider mansion aliya ghulam haider was sitting on the couch in her lavish hall crossed leg lost in her thoughts ...
When shabana haider entered looking at her 8 years old daughter

Shabana : what happened baby aloo where are you lost dear ..
She came and sat beside her daughter .

Shabana : aloo what happened baby ..
Aliya looked at her mother who was looking at her expectantly ...
Shabana : what happened aloo ..

Aliya : we are having picnic tomorrow ..

Shabana : so its good news why are you sad ..
Aliya : nothing i dont want to go ..

Shabana : why ...dont you want to go ...your friends are coming right ..
Aliya noded her head in yes

Shabana : so why you dont want to go ...
Aliya : because zain will tease me infront of every one ...
Shabana : oh come on aliya ..he is your only cousin...and you also tease him equally ...

Aliya : i dont call him kitkit infront of everyone thats something personal between us but that stupid always call me mamu ki bhanji infront of everyone and everybody laugh on me ..

Shabana : aww but i find mamu ki banji a cute name it shows how much u love your mamu ...

Aliya : ya i love mamu and mami but i hate their creation...i hate zain ...

Shabana : there will be a day baby when u will like him ..ok now you promise me that you will take care of him you know that he always get injured on picnics so you have to take care of him ..
Promise me aloo baby ...

Aliya rolled her eyes ..

Aliya : fine i will take care of him ..

Shabana smiled and kissed her daughter ...
Shabana :come let me make u eat some thing ...


Next morning

Suraiya n shabana dropped zain n aliya ay school and exchanged words with teachers to look after them ...

Soon all the students were leaving towards their bus ...and sat i their seats ...
Aliya was sitting on a window seat and the seat beside her was empty ...
Zain came inside the bus but he didnt found any place to sit ..so letting out a sigh he sat beside aliya
...

Aliya turned to see him ...she forced a smile ...and greeted him ..

Aliya : Hi zain ..

Zain : Hi mkb ..
The bus started and soon they reached funcity

All the kids were really excited ...aliya and zain were also very happy they started palying with their friends zain and aliya were checking at each other that weather the other is fine or not ...

Everybody knew that aliya is scared of heights ...but nafeesa challenged her to go alone on roller coaster ...
Zain told her not to do it but aliya accepted the challenge ...

Zain : aliya plzz dont do it ..its not safe ..plzz aliya .

Aliya : dont worry zain i will be fine ..

Zain : i dont think so ..

Aliya : trust me zain i will be fine ..

Aliya gave him a reassuring smile ..

Zain : are u sure ...

Aliya :yes..

Aliya went to buy ticket and soon she sat on her seat she was hell scared but because it was a challenge she had to madk a brave look on her face ...
Soon she placed the belt tightly around her waist ...
Zain was looking her from down he was very much afraid for her ...
But soon the ride started and it took the life out of aliya ...it was very fast and height was very much which scared aliya more after few halts the roller coaster stopped midway on the height aliya looked down and she started crying ...
Zain saw her crying ...he ran to the man hadling the ride ..

Zain : why did it stop ...
Man : there is some problem ...thats why ..dont worry...

Aliya was crying more badlu now she was hell scared ...
Zain saw her ...
Aliya : zain plzz help me ...

Zain : aliya dont worry nothing will happen to you...

Zain : hey u plzz do something fast my aliya is crying cant you see..
Man : wait dear we are trying our best ...
Zain : aliya stop crying i m here nothing can harm u ...wait i am coming ...
He started to climb on the roller coaster ...

Aliya : plzz zain save me ..plzz

Zain : dont worry i am coming ..

He climbed on the roller coaster again .he slipped several times...scaring aliya more .
Aliya : zain carefull..

Zain: dont worry i m ok .

His teacher were shouting at hin from downwards but zain didnt pay heed to them
He climbed more seats and finally he reached near aliya..
And sat beside him ...
Aliya hugged him tightly ...
Aliya : thank u zain thanks for coming ...

Zain was shocked but he hugged her back ...

Zain : dont worry i am always there for you ...dont cry ..
He wipped her tears ...
And held her hands tightly ...
Zain : i am here ..
She smiled at him .

She tied his belt as the man handling roller coaster told them that the ride is abt to start...

Aliya and zain held hands through out the ride ...and they also enjoyed the ...they giggled when the sleed increases..soon they came down still holding hands...
Teacher look at them to see any injury ..but they were ok ...

Teacher : ok children lets leave ...
All the children make que and leave for the bus ...zain and aliya sat beside each other still holding hands ...

Zain : sorry ...i promise i will never tease u again
Aliya : even i am sorry ... i also promise i will not tease u ...

Both of them smiled at each other ..

Zain : friends ...

Aliya : forever ..
They shake hands with each other ...

The end ...


Ok guyzz leave ur precious views ...
Means alot ...
For typos i m really very sorry ...

Take care all lots of love

Alina

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KitkitMkb thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Alina it was so cute ! zaya chota packet version , loved it and continue soon lone mila di jodi or else i will spam ! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Hw cute!
Zaya pocket version!
ADORABLE!
ISKA FAST FORWARD MILEGA?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Hello Alina😊
It was amazing
Zain is soo cute!!!
"MERI Aliya" Childhood love😳
Again...it was a very cute update


Nidhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
so damn cute😳
thanx for pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute os!
Loved it

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
It was so cute...
Loved it...
Keep writing..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
aweii sooo cutee chotta version mein they luk soo cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
its really really cute one.
love ZaYa kid version kitkit.
thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hayee this was so damn cute...
I loved it...ZAYA as kids...the start reminded me of ZAYED and dadi talk...
And the ending was really sweet...
Keep writing more...

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