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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair
on part 46
uff i'm fanning here...
this thread is getting more n more temperature as the chappies go by...

the pain content.. pls reduce it yaar... the bleeding heart is intolerable!!!
it kills me... reading the update becomes too difficult...

Don't you want hot update, Di? I am sorry, Di par kya karun bas hojata hai!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair
drunk ardi!!!!
now this is interesting... n thank you thank you thank you thank you sooo much for the stress buster...

ha ha ha!!! gaawwwddd i'm dancing here... drunken ardi!!!!
u know what is the advantage of getting drunk... its the license to divulge!! 😉

update phata phat!!! 😉

You are welcome, Di!! Thanks a lot!! I know, license to do everything we want to, and we know what ADi wants to do!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: AikaSheikh
OMG!!!! They were drunk!!!! 😲😲
The dance floor part was so Hot, Yagyaaa~ ☺️
And I wonder... what will happen in the next update? ☺️☺️activate javascript
I love the banner! Nice edit!
Do update soon, Dear! Thank you for the PM! 😉

Thanks a lot, dear!!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
Yagya, what a jhatka!!
Great job...you made everyone sit up😆
Now we are all on tenterhooks for the next part...
Loved the fact that Paarth drank unhesitatingly for the sake of his love...awww...
And as for the room, knowing Paarth he will be the perfect gentleman!!

Change your thoughts, Mamta!! I am going to change my Arya here!! I was just awwing at it while proof reading it!!! Thanks a lot!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti
oh my goodness Devranijee u r drunk 😲 Kauravraj kab sudhrenge 😕 myyy gawwwd Devarjee to is drunk I was expecting some confessions bt I think unhe aur books kharedke deni padegi!!
I want SPM soon
Srry for nt being here...I know I m nt here for long bt plzzz keep PMing ur Jethanijee mujhe bhool na jana...I luv this u give ur bst to this FF...u drag me along with this... Dnt go ruthing on me na 😳

Thanks a lot, jethanijee!! Haan, teach him how to deal with me!! I will continue to send PMs, don't worry!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
Yagya my dear when is the update coming?😊

right now, Mamta!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Part 48:
The night was still young, so were their desires. Their love so profound and pure that every action showed it. But today their eyes had the glint of desires along with love. Desires that were long suppressed, desires that were curbed down, desires that were crushed under the destiny, and desires that were forbidden to them.

Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha
Dekhatee hai jis tarah se teree najare mujhe, mai khud ko chupau kaha
Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha

Intoxicated were their senses today, but not due to alcohol but due to their intoxicatedly magical love. The burning gaze of him, which was piercing her, which was burning her, which was pining for her, was just making thisnight longer for them.

Yeh pal hai apna ,toh iss pal ko jee le
Shwalo kee tarah jarah chal ke jee le, pal jhapakte kho na jana
Chhuke karlo yakin, na jane yeh pal paye kaha
Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha

Every touch of her, today on him was just a torture. Though not in complete senses, hewhere his limits lie. But her cold hands on his chiseled chest and her hot breaths were making him lose his senses completely. It was their moments, finally, a moment for which they had to wait for ages but now, they can't let it slip so easily.

Baaho me teree yu kho gaye hai, arman dabe se jagne lage hai
Jo mile ho aaj hamko dur jana nahee, mita do saree yeh duriya
Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha
Dekhatee hai jis tarah se teree najare mujhe, mai khud ko chupau kaha

The grip on her which she always wanted to last, his hot hands onbare cold waist, arising the desires long forbidden. The cursed distance betweenthem of only 2 inches, breaths mingling, desires burning, heart pining and souls touching. A distance after this proximity would have been a curse to die for them.

Kuchh bhee na samjhe yeh, kuchh bhee na mane
Dil kar raha hai kitne bahane, tumko dekhe tumko chahe
Iss tarah se kabhee, hamne kisee ko chaha kaha
Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha
A love which was said to be divided, a love which was not recognized, got its name today.Today there was no need to find excuses to touch each other, a desires which were meantto have each other's name on it, were finally making them make their moves. The silky obstructions of her to the beautiful constructions of God, were today meant to be removed.The red saree, as their painful past was soon on the floor, as they wanted to leave behind their past.

Lo tham lo yeh lamho ke dhage, ham chal pade hai sapno ke aage
Rasta yeh hai kathin, par iss safar me kabhee na hongee koyee abb duriya
Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake abb jaau kaha
Shama tujhko khinchtee hai aaja, parwane meree baaho me aa
Let this moment be at a halt, when they finally met each other. More than passionate, were their kisses, more than wild were the bites, morethan romance was the act and more than love was their feeling. This night,inch of her pined for him, every inch of him called for her. A distance tonight, was forbidden between them.
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TBC
Special dedication to Mamta, who loved my previous Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai, update!I need a special review from you, dear!!
Hope you liked it!

Edited by Yagyaseni - 11 years ago

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Resinggg Devranijeee 😛
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Unresing
ye meine kya padha😲 so hawwwtyyy update
loved it😳 Devranijee u made me blush so much imagining ur nd my Devarjees private moments
hayee mere Govvvinddd kshama karna!!!

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#469

RES

UNRES...

Passionate update Yagya 😳

Finally Yagya & Arjun are together, their love now turned into desire burning them together & the song...uff this song always makes my cheeks go red with heat 😆 so when I read the song along with the emotions & desires of Arjun & Yagya...I went ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
This was one hot update Yagya & finally they both lost their control & the last part ...uff hawwttt

Continue soon

Edited by ...Hemangi - 11 years ago