swaron ss: shaadi updated p3 on pg9

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan
after soo long u updated this SS
nic update
but it was tooo small
waned a longg update after such a long wait
swayam blushd at the gangs commentss
awww
and yup he was ri8
if sharon comes into the siren mode
then she wudnt marry him
waiting 4 deir shaadi
update nxt part soon
and pm me too

thanx dear
sure i will pm u

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

hey guys sorry nxt update is too short
i personally not satisfied with it
i think i lost my interest in it
give m lil time ill b back soon with a long update promise
till then u can critize m
n soory for a short update once again
nxt read on u r own risk not proofed

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Part 4
Raiprakash mansion

The tapped on d door made all d girls looked at door " Sharon r u ready ..." Sharon's mom stopped to say further she was looking at her daughter
The little princess of their is getting married today
" mom" Sharon's word broke her trance
" your looking beautiful angel " she said with teary eyes
" see my little princess is getting married now ...itni badi kab hui pata hi nhi chala "
" I'm sorry Sharon I know u miss us when we were busy in our businesses life we just lost that moments ...mom ko maaf kregi na ?? "
" mom don't say like that " said Sharon
" no baby its true BT I know swayam will give u all d happiness ...I love u baby "
" I love u mom "
" achha listen I know my baby is fighter she can handle everything BT remember u r now going to marry so u have to take care of a whole family u have to do some adjustment " " just remember its now u r home n if anything bother u we r always there for u " n she kissed her on her forehead Sharon just nodded on this
Again there was tap on d door sharons cousine came in n said " chachi paditji is asking abt u "
Yup coming dear
"Di baarat aagyi " came one of sharons cousin all excited
All d girls got excited Sharon got excited bt also lil nervouse She wanted to saw swayam bt girls stop her by saying she cant do that by d ritual bride cant see d groom's face before marriage Sharon had no choice bt to accepted it
she just smiled at all of them
Sharon we just came back we r going to dance
This is not fair girls sharon said pouted
" girls u go im here with her " said kriya
" oh kriya u r darling thanx we will back soon " said rinni
" n btw aapko apke dulhe ka photo dekhna types nhi hain kya??" Asked ashi
" what?? Really aashi tum swayam ka photo laogi wow thank u " said sharon happily n hugged aashi
All girls laugh on sharon's antic
" now girls go warna dulha mandap main baith gya to photo kaise nikaloge n dance kaise kroge ?? " said kriya
" yup we r leaving "
" now u r happy " asked kriya to sharon
"yes im " said sharon smiling broadly

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Another small update

Bt atleast update to h

Hayee sharon is like a child.
Loved it

Edited by Rockingbhardwaj - 10 years ago

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

finally u updated..

thanks for the PM..

kitna chota sa update..but loved this update..

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Finally u updated!!!nice update

Sharon is just like a child...soo cute

Eagerly waiting to read nxt chappy...😊

Update soon

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

read all the chapter it was so good and especially 2nd chap was too good yaar awesome confession cute and adorable swaron and even chapter 3 was nicely written chapter 4 is also cute but short doesn't seems that u are not a writer u write well do update soon

Edited by 8085548022 - 10 years ago

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

nice update

sharons mom and her convo was cute

emotional

waiting 4 the shhaadi

thnx 4 d pm

update nxt part soon

and give us a long one

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avya98

@avya98

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Aww swayam all blushy blushy 😆 in the previous chp

Such an adorable update plz update sooner

Edited by avya98 - 10 years ago

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Shailja

@Kshailja

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Finally read all the chapters till now...
Really Nice story...
Sharon's proposal was unique...
Swayam kitta cute nd handsome lg rha hoga...Just luv him...
Thora bara update next tym..plsss...
Nd plsss pm me also next tym...

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