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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE: This is inspired by a Telugu movie...but made some changes in story...!

This is a story of two neighbours who are friends from childhood and their children also will be best friends from childhood but they cant live without fighting with eachother even atleast for one day...

CHARECTERS:

Mohan Kundra(MK) :Buissness man

Radha Kundra: wife of MK

Malik:Buissness man and best friend and neighbour of MK

Padmini:wife of Malik

Rishabh kundra:Handsome and dashing personality.And son of MK and Radha...

Madhu:Daughter of Malik and padmini...

KUKU Bhatiya: Buissness man

SuLtan:son of Kuku

MK ,Radha and Malik,Padmini are best friends and neighbours from many years

and also holds a Buissness in Partnership.Madhu and Rk are best friends sorry also

best enemies :) who cant live without fighting with eachother even a day since

from childhood.

I canT liVe without U


After 3years of Graduation Rk and Madhu both of them go to shiridi for praying.

RK to BABA (in temple): BABA plz...I may pass with A grade or not but she must

not get the grade...

M:baba plz..make me pass but that idiot shud not get more marks than me...

They both were back in bus which is from shiridi to delhi...

Then RK in bus sits with in one seat and puts his bag in the beside seat...madhu comes in the bus and...

M:hey Mr..what is this?

RK:this is a bag...

M:(throws the bag down) now That is the bag...

RK:U...

And both turn their heads and sit...there comes a jamun bejne waala...

M:Hey jumun come here...

RK:jamun doesn't come by itself...

M:shut up...

M(to jamun waala):how much is the jamuns

Jamun waala:there are only two and they are 4 rs.

RK:il give give it to me...

M:il give u 8

RK:10...

M:15

RK:18...

M:take 20...(and scratches the 2jamun and shows to Rk and teases him)

Rk taking out 2jamuns from his pocket: just now bought for 4rs. From the same person...(teases)

Rk and madhu reaches Delhi...and go to their homes in separate cars as their

parents know they wont come in same car peacefully..so they sent 2 cars...

Then both of them reach to their respective houses...

At Madhu's home malik was having break fast..padmini was also at table...

M:hi dad...(comes from behind and hugs malik who was on the chair eating)

Malik:hi beta...how r u ...

P:she is very happy...she is enjoying going to movies before the day of exam...

M:oh so...RK called you...

Malik:its ok...have ur breakfast...

Madhu:haacheee...(she is suffering 4m cold)

Malik: Madhu u got cold...

P:how she will not get...when she is attending rain dance...

M(to herself):oh...so before coming here that idiot told everything to u...now il tell about him with uncle and aunt...

Malik:ok but go after breakfast...

M:no my breakfast will be Rk's shunting from me...

Then Madhu goes to Rk's house with a cricket bat to fight with...

M:uncle where is Rk...

MK:came just now and u guys started ur catfight ha...

M:no he first started...he told all crap about me and...now I can also say about him...

MK:ok my darling..what did he do?

M:do u know he made a strike in college because of a stone came in his upma...and he doesn't pass this exams with A grade ...Il get grade...

MK:oh...so dats y hero went and slept calmly in his room...

M:oh he is in his room

RK see madhu from upstairs and goes into his room quiickly...

Madhu rushes upstaris to Rk's room for fight...by saying today il kill him...

Radha:oh god these guys been grown up but still didn t changed...

Madhu when sees Rk in his room shouts :aaa

All goes up to see what had happened...

RK was laid on his bed by putting tomato ketchup to his mouth like blood and slept pretending as dead...

Madhu by seeing Rk in that position shouts and starts crying...

MK:what happened...beta...

M:I didn't do anything uncle but don't know...when I came here he ...cries*

MK looks to RK...then Rk winks...Mk understood rk's play...

MK:madhu y did u do this...what ever it may be ...y did u bet him in this way...

M:no uncle...

RK(bY taking bread and eating teases):madhu...gets shocked naa...

Madhu gets angry and runs to Rk and Rk goes runniung from there to swimming pool and fell in the swimming pool...

The days pass...and the catfights between madhu and Rk continues...one day everyone plans for a picnic to ocean Park...

Madhu and rk with all the family playing in the pool...suddenly the chain of

madhu was gone in water...the chain has ancestors story...i.e it is one locket chain

divided for RK and madhu wen fought for it in childhood into two lockets...and

given to them...so...

M:oh god...I lost my chain...

Then suddenly RK dives into the water madhu says "no rK don't go" but rk now

gets back the chain...and puts in madhus neck...and "It is not a normal chain if it is

gone to be silent it is our elders blessings don't be careless...

Now madhu starts admiring him...his likes suddenly...

One day everyone Kundras and Maliks were sitting in the hall of Maliks...madhu

and Rk were playing cards...then..

Radha:Madhu if I ask u if wanna become my daughter in law I would feel happy...

M:oh god...I wont marry ur son...I don't like him...he always fights with me...if u

ask me for whole day fighting I would feel happy...

RK:hello I'l marry maid neha...but not u...k

M:oh... Ohhh..i wil marry our watchman...but not u...

MK:stop it...we asked ur view seriously but u r insulting even us with ur fight...

P:madhu uncle and we all of them loves both of u so...we had a wish of becoming

a relation but u guys if not intrested keep quiet don't make hell argument..

After a month :

Madhu comes from her friends wedding...staraight to Rk's house...

M:hi uncle I bought a shirt for u from my friends place...

MK:oh..this is medium size...this fits for Rk...give it to him...

Rk was in his room getting ready...

M:hey...i didn't bought this shirt for u but it is ur sized so for u...

RK:ok let it be just say me how am I looking...

M:Y r u going for any match fixing...

RK:ya...and how do u know...

M:really r u going to match fixing...

RK:yes... u rejected me...that doesn't mean everybody rejects so..meeting a girl..for getting married...

Madhu unknowingly get tensed...

M:"wer r u gng to meet..

RK:at coffee day...bye...

Madhu in herself..couldnt take this matter as light...she unknowingly gets tears and thoughts of Rk going far from her and jealousy...

Madhu hurriedly takes an auto and goes to rk's meeting place with Trishna(who is his becoming fiancee)...

When madhu went to coffee day there will be also sultan who is the son of Kuku...at the other table and looks madhu and admires and losts in her beauty...

Madhu comes near rk and Trishna table and gets a chair and sits without permission of them...

M:hi...u forgoten ur mobile at home...

RK:oh thanks but u came for...

M:for giving mobile...

RK:gave naa now u can go...

Madhu makes a puppy sad face...feels bad and jealous of trish and develops more

feelings for rk and turns to go...but trish suddenly holds madhu's hand and stops

her...

T:oh Rk...don't u introduce her...plz be seated madhu..u r my guest...

M:ok thank u (smiles)

Rk gets a call and goes out and talk...mean while...

T:so madhu tell me about u and Rk...

M:we both are very much best enemies and our fathers are best friends but we

cant live without fighting for even one day...

T:what type of dresses Rk likes because we r going to get marry so I should know abt Rk's taste right...

By listening to trishna's words madhus face becomes pale and she becomes numb...

M:she holds her pink duppatta and "he likes traditional wear not modern" by

(indirectly pointing trish)

Trishna feels uncomfortable but asks...and...

M:he doesn't like girls..having lengthy nails...(indierctly pointing to trish)

Rk then comes after his call...

RK:hey did u come for giving mobile or making trishna bored with ur words...

M:no I m now trish's guest I wont go from here...

Trish:but now im saying u to get out from here...

RK sees madhus sad face and trish in anger and...says madhu wait for me in car...

Madhu being sad moves from there...

And then...

T: Rk...Y r u marrying me wen u r loving eachother...

RK:no nothing is between us...

T:Rk..a girl can understand what is in the heart of other girl...and by the reaction

on your face wen I scolded madhu I was conformed with ur love and u people

cant live without eachother either it is fighting or love u both cant be without

each other...go and propose her...she is loving u deeply...

After sometime Rk and madhu were in car...madhu was in tears...RK stoped car

at nearby park...

RK:get down of car madhu...

Rk comes to madhu side and...

RK: Y r u crying...

M:madhu bends her head down and goes to leave but from back Rk holds her hand and pulls and ...

RK:don't u love me madhu...

madhu looks into RK's eyes and cries with happiness and hugs him tightly

M:Rk I love u a lot...i cant live without u...plz don't go away from me...fight with

me..scold me...but don't go away from me...

Rk smirks and cups her face in his hands and by clearing her tears with his hands...

RK:even I cant be without u idiot...

Then they both hugs and RK kisses her on her lips passionately and also madhu

kisses him back and feels his lips..and they both enjoys the kiss and Rk after that

goes down his knee and proposes madhu...

Then after some time they both go home but...they wont tell anyone right then...

There comes a phone call from Factory of their parents as the whole maal is

burned...the malik,kundra,Rk go to factory and clears everything...then the next

morning the news is in paper and public comes and fight for their amounts in

their buissness...there were no money to give them...and there comes sultan

and helps RK's company which was in loss and was In fights for public amounts...

And after the help Rk and his father and uncle say thank u but sultan in return ask

for madhu's hand then they without asking agrees...Rk sacrifices because of their

parents and the help Sultan made...madhu who after sometime knows about

this and cries but RK makes madhu promise of marrrying sultan...but trishna,who

is working in sultans company comes to know about his evil plan of putting fire for

RK's company wantedly and asking for madhu and then comes to marrige hall directly...

T:Please stop this marriage...u stupid how can u think of this evil plan...uncle,Rk

all of u listen this idiot made loss wantedly and asked madhu who is loving u...he

made weakness of ur company and made u to sacrifice madhu by he becoming a

positive,...but u r out sultan...

Then Rk holds sultans collar and gets him out of mandap and...

RK:get out from here never show ur face again...and verymuch thanx trishna...

Trish:I know ur love how can I keep quiet...

RK:but ur job...

T:oh..il get in ur company hero...

Madhu comes running and hugs tightly Rk and cries on his shoulder...and then

they marry and lives with fights everyday but...they "CanT Live without

Eachother"

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hilarious os. Loved it.
that jamun & tomato ketchp scene was funny.
lol..they r ready to marry maid & Watchman but nor eachorher lol,
finally these two crazies got married to fight life long lol..
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Starting was so hilarious! Thank God! In the end ,Trishna came as angel and rescued Rishbala from separation 😊.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG ! How many OS today.
Can't read everything in one day.
This was a crazy one.
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wohooo! so many lovely n awesomwe stories in only one day.
Im sooo happy .
Thank u dear. God bless u!πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hilarious story πŸ˜›
Loved it πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os loved the ending and RishBala cute fights and love confession ❀️

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