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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
nice part...
asim's mom too much...
devika's father refused...
both asim and devika sad...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
part 40

A life of Devika and Asim is complicated their dream rocking. he returns home after his conversation with Devika's father Asim joined his room and rest until night fell his brain frozen he don't know what to think or what to do he wanted to call Devika and tell her : you flee with me and come on to live our love away from these bungler of pious sentiments he wants to tear her to this life that hurt her and the confronts her at an endless sadness to take her to a life of paradise where there is only their two hearts he wanted to say all that but he is afraid of her answer he is afraid that she does not want to start a relationship with an unknown ending which will can spoil this love and he said nothing he waits for the sun rose to illuminate his thoughts maybe this sunbeam will bring with him all the answers he loves hear

for her part Devika does not sleep too look at the sky Take little by little this sunbeam to go to her beloved to protect herself in his arms and tell him I'm here by your side take me away take me where our love survives where my heart will continue to beat for you where his breakers will not reach me

the sun rises and the lovers prepare each on his side for go to present their show and continue their work which reunites them and allows them to forget all the worries. the show which will be the last for start a presentation afterwards which will define the best couple of the year. at the theater Devika joined a lodge to prepare and go forgetting the pain of the real life during that she put the jewelry a gentle hand is posed on her back nude helping her to attach the thread of the back of her sari she improperly restrained a slight fear at first but seeing her passion behind her she close her eyes and let that hand caressing her back to give to her warmth that was missing after the last thread was attached Asim returns delicately Devika to him put his hands around her waist and begins with a kiss on the cheek and closer to catch the lips but she prevented him from doing and said

-:what are we going to do now Asim I have not slept all night

-: I also did not sleep (he said keeping her in his hands) I thought all night and I have found only a single solution

-: Which one Asim (she asks knowing in advance what he will ask her and has already prepared her response)

-: We get married and confronts them by our decision I can not wait that my mother agrees for your father makes the same

she threw herself at him hugs him very strong tears in her eyes and said

-: Never I went beyond the will of my parents but I will do it for you for our love and if you want We flee away from them

-: No I'm not asking you to flee just get married and leave things as they are

Devika accepted the proposal of Asim satisfied he looks at her by love and continue to kiss her on it until someone comes to stop this nostalgia

the show begins the couple as always succeeded and it was like every time their moment when they close their eyes they let themselves go with the same dreams ending up in the clouds only with their love

after the show Devika goes back to the lodge a lady waiting at the hall she wants to talk to her she thinks it's a fan and said with a smile

-: Yes ma'am what can I do for you

-: I just want you to talk if you will

Devika ask the lady to enter in the lodge always a smile on the lips and listens to her talking

-: I'll go direct with you (she said with an air that worried Devika and looks at her for hear what she has to say) let my son quiet

-: Excuse me ma'am (Devika said annoyed) I don't know who is your son

-: My son Asim who you trapped

hit Devika found herself in front a situation delicate don't found what to say swallowing her words trapped by this woman meeting her hands under her chin and greets her

-: Excuse me my aunt I've not recognized you

-: I'm not your aunt and leave my son alone lets him live his life lets him find a real wife

-: Asim and me are in love aunt and we don't intend to break up our relationship

-: Listen miss (she don't said even my daughter) Asim has not need love for do his life you're amused too much and now it is time he think to his future that is not with you

-: Why my aunt what you reproach me?

-: Looks at yourself she said (she made to her with hand) you think be a good wife who can serves her husband and his family

-: But my aunt I ... (she allows her not to finish)

-: I see that you are beautiful and that's what attract my son but you believe that he will live his entire life with a dancer

-: You reproach me of being a dancer? aunt? but ...

-: You will make the shame of our family people will talk about us they will criticize Asim if you really love him you will not accept that it happens. my son needs a wife who takes care of him and you are not that woman the girls of your kind I know and I'll face you I will never allow you to marry him forgets him and seeks for you another prey lets him find a life. it's because of you he left his fianc who was perfect for him

Devika remained silent in front of all these remarks Asim's mother accuses her of being a girl not well a girl who brings shame to her family she looks this lady who accuses her of all these bad things the tears in her eyes said nothing

-: I think you understood what I said (declare mother of Asim) I leave you with your conscience (and out)

Nita arrived at the lodge saw the lady left enters finds Devika upsets in tears she asks her

-: Who is this lady Devika? what did she do to you? she has destabilized you

-: This is Asim's mother (she responds to her sad) she came asking me to leave her son

-: And you cry for that? Asim will never leave you (she reassures her) you know very well

-: He has defy her for me she told him bad things about me that he did not support (continuous crying) she don't loves me because I am a dancer I will do a shame to their families she said

Nita trying to calm her friend who goes into a terrible grief and she suggested her to go home to be calm

Devika comes home pass next to her parents she does not want to show her grief goes to her room she thinks to what said the mother of Asim

-: She see that I'm a disgrace to her son (with tears in eyes) this woman will not let me quiet I can't get married without her consent she can separate us I have to refuse the proposal of Asim and wait that she accepts (she continuous thinking about Asim and at this ardent time that she shared with him this morning and at other times she does not want forget and let drop so easily)

after she left the theater Asim looking for Devika he does not find her found Nita and asks her

-: You did not see Devika? I seek her since just now

-: She returned home There are one hour (she responds to him lets look a regrettable air)

-: Without saying goodbye? Why? what's happen?

-: Your mother Asim (Nita said. he looks at her with a face of question mark to say, what happen with my mother) your mother was here, and she talked with her

-: What she has said for she leave like that

-: I don't know but she was very upsets I told her to go home

Asim suspecting what has does his mother he call Devika on her phone but she did not respond he imagines that his mother has deeply wounded Devika and decided not to stop there

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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
amazing part...
this asim's mom shame on mothers name...
she wrongly accused devika...
devika so upset,,,,,,,,,,,,,
asim will make all fine...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
part 41

Asim sees that their problems to him and Devika don't stop and at this time he thought of her and her feelings after a visit of his mother he wondered what she was told her he hopes that she does not hurt her and she did not tell her the reason for her refusal he recalls her on her phone and this time she responds to him

-: Devika tells me how you feel (he said stressed) I know that my mother went to see you

-: Yes she came to see me (she responds to him sad) and she told me the reason of her refusal why you have said nothing Asim?

-: comes Meet me Devika we need to talk

-: No I don't feel well I don't want you to see me in this condition (she responds him heartbroken)

-: Please come I'll pick you in fifteen minutes (he said with love)

still in their intimate place Asim his hands on the cheeks of Devika and said (with tenderness)

-: What did she told you Devika ? she hurt you?

she makes him yes by the head crying withdrawn his hands from her cheeks and she declares

-: I can't accept your proposal Asim I can't marry you while your mother denied me

-: And if she will never accept (he said putting his hands on her arms delicately she looks at him without saying anything eyes shine) it means we will never marry?

Devika back turns to avoid facing his eyes and said

-: Can be your mother is right you should not have to break with Charita it's the kind of wife that you need

Asim gets angry what says Devika bothers him furious he pulls her by the arm severely hold her against him and tells her obstinate looking her into the eyes

-: never repeat that. neither you nor my mother would tell me with whom I have to live and what kind of wife I need you understand? if I wanted Charita I will be marry with her today. I did not do everything what I did for hear tell this now

-: sorry to have says that Asim (she said still with tears in her eyes) but what your mother told me hurt me she made me understand that I am worth nothing she wants a girl like Charita for her son and that's my fault if you left her

he looks at her by affection and regret to leave her confront this situation and hear hurtful words he kisses her eye to wipe her tears and said

-: This is not your fault if I stopped my relationship with her it is because I have loved you my heart is only for you (he kisses her hand and continuous) I regret all what my mother has told you forgets all that and let's get married I need you by my side

-: No! Asim forget that idea to marry against their will I can't while your mother hate me

-: you have given up to our idea? you don't want to marry me you don't want to live with me ?(he hugged her and continuous) please accepts

Devika refuses she will not marry without the family especially after what think the mother of Asim to her she refuses for not private Asim of his mother she know that with time he will suffer his separation with her she refuses marriage but she does not refuse his love

-: I don't gives up our marriage I don't gives up to us I'm just asking you to wait that things back in place I will do everything so that your mother loves me and accepts me

-: What is important to you? the consent of my mother or my love for you. you chooses the family and you forget all the good times we spent together?

-: Asim understands me I'll be uncomfortable if I do that

Asim gets angry he does not understand what is happen on in the head of Devika he made some steps forward leaving Devika behind him see him repress his anger he return to her

-: At the beginning it was my mother I challenged her and told her that I will marry with you even if she does not agree after it was your father and now you

-: I'm really sorry I cant (she responds to him annoyed)

Asim says nothing he see she is determined with her decision gets into his car she goes next to him and he leads her at home silent along of the route she looks at him from time to time she remark his anxiety by times she wanted to tell him she will leave everything and go marry him but the image of his mother harasses her and says nothing keeps this image of this sad face of Asim who saddens her deeply continuous to roll over until Devika's house Asim stop the car and he waits her to come down she puts her hands on him and said

-: I'm sorry Asim

he don't even responds turns his head at the other side and let her come down from the car then he goes away without even looking at her arriving home he finds his mother sitting in the living room with guests a friend of hers with her daughter she call him and told him

-: Asim!! comes I want to present you my friend and her daughter

Asim approaches them he greet and is preparing to go to his room his mother asked him to sit with them saying

-: Asim sit and get to know Hiya (speaking of the daughter of her friend)

Hiya is a beautiful girl she throws a glances on Asim which remains indifferent and understands what want do his mother he looks her with contempt apologizes and goes to his room very angry by the attitude of her son waiting for her friends left and go talk to him

-: What did you do Asim how you behaves like this with my guests?

-: Why you went to see Devika mom (he said not replying to her question) what are you told her

-: I see that you are very angry my son I presume she understood and she left you alone don't worry I have found you another girl she is very well and beautiful too

-: I don't want the girl that you have found (he said avoiding to get worked up) and Devika has not left me

-: Since you know this girl you began to Lack me respect I know that this girl is a problem and I've done her know

-: Leave me alone mom (he said with an air painful) I don't want to talk more than that

Asim stays alone in his room think about what said his mother he realized she strongly hurt Devika and that's why she gives up to his idea of wedding. a pain gnaws him at in inside upsets turns in his room does not find a solution to his problem think long until he concluded that he did not have to withdraw and try again to convince her until she accept and he begins to think about a way to do so

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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Asim's mother is the worst a woman can be...she isnt his mother, doesnt deserve to be called a mother...and doesnt deserve the respect Devika is giving her...
I wish Asim does something drastic to his health, showing Devika that he cannot live without her...atleast then she will agree...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
part 42

Asim a half of the night he thought of every day he had lived with his love all the beautiful days with their beautiful dances and all the hugs. even the sad days that obliged him to move away from her and among all these memories the moments when he almost lost her by his imprudence .men who hoped to seduce her, Baldev the young man audacious who made his request in front of everyone this gesture has not gone unnoticed for Asim he thinks about it and an idea passes through his mind he regret sulking, includes her situation but decided to retake her of another way

the tour was over but the presentations are ongoing. they continue to go to the theater to prepare for a promotion that will change their career life in her dressing room Devika sad Asim did not want to talk to her the previous day and she knows the cause while she was preparing thinking to Asim and his grief because she was denied the secret marriage he enter she sees him head down for express her regret she wants to ask him forgiveness she said unhappy face

-: Asim !! I ...

-: Shuut (he said putting his finger on her lips) said nothing more (he puts a hand on her waist and kissed her on the cheek) I should not have be angry yesterday. excuse me but it does not matter even if you don't want to get married now the most important is that you are with me

-: I want more than you to be your wife and to wake up every morning to your side but ... (she did not finish her sentence because Asim included)

-: Our love will not break as easily I can wait until that you're ready (and he continued with a smile) because I will try everyday to convince you by seducing you

Devika offered him a smile too, and hugs him very hard they forget themselves a great moment in the arms of one another until that Nita enters she finds them like that and said apologetically

-: excuse me Asim I did not know you were there but the teacher wants to talk to everyone and I came to tell Devika

a teacher reunites them to tell them the last measure of the show they have presented and give them the new instructions for promotion

-: I want to talk of the promotion. the judges will define the best dancers of the year there will be three places for the three best female dancer and equal for male and better pair. in this promotion you should choose your songs and your dancing you can choose from the one you already presented or create a new one the choice is yours you have a month before you show us that we are the best and our group is the best

the participants begin to see for the choices and the teacher talks to Asim and Devika

-: I count on you two and be the best couple

-: don't worry ( answers him Asim because he has already an idea in the mind he already know what to do) you will be proud of us

the days pass and before this promotion Devika and Asim does not leave a single day they spends their day together in the theater for repetitions but Asim does not want to work he did some dancing that they have already done and enjoy for escapes by taking her with him hidden in a corner to looks or go out outside to enjoy to tell her about his love but never what he will do for the promotion Devika is worried she asks him everyday

-: What we will present Asim you have an idea?

-: be Patient he said all will be fine

every day in this way Devika is worried but Asim don't even think about that or maybe he already thought and know what he will do three weeks before the presentations she is concerned seriously and said

-: Asim !! it remains one week and we have not yet prepare what we will present may be we must start

-: do you trust me (he said taking her hands she responds yes to him by the head) we don't need to prepare our dances we know its we will choose one

Asim did not tell her the truth he gets an idea in his head he knows what to do that day he did not be concerned of the promotion and less of the trophy more than anything else he prepared a surprise for her he did not want to say

the day of the promotion arrived Devika very stressed alone in the lodge of the participants wondered how her presentation is going to be Asim. is late he is even not at her side to reassure her she call on his phone he does not respond her anxiety increases she thinks he became careless and he did not even interested for the success of her pair after a long waiting he comes he enter to see Devika finds her very stress he said

- Why you're like that Devika calm down all will be well

-: You are very late Asim I don't even know what we will present how do you want me to be quiet

-: trust me (he told her holding her by the waist) not afraid we will succeed (said very confident)

-: I am very confused Asim I don't even know what I should do

-: you Do nothing let me do everything just follow my movements and my steps (he whispers her in the ear) let me handle your pretty body and you'll see the things coming (and then he kisses her on the cheek to reassure)

-: Ok Asim (she said) but please help me to understand you and understand what you want

-: You'll quickly understand what I mean (he said with a smile) you will love I'm sure

Devika understands nothing of what Asim wants to do but she trusted him she knows he wants succeed also but she has no idea of what to expect Asim has prepared a surprise that will make her change her decision he has prepared a plan to seduce her. takes of his bag a gift box and said

-: I want you to put this before going on stage I want to see you wear it

-: What is Asim (she asks)

-: A sari ofcourse I bought it for you when I saw in the store I saw it on you and I could not help myself so I bought it

touched by this gesture she hugs him and tell him

-: thank you Asim I'll put it for you

-; goes to prepare (said Asim happy) I expect you for start (and go out waiting with impatience his turn with Devika to begin their dance and put his plan in execution

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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
awesome parts...
devika denied for marriage...
asim and devika both suffering...
asim mom started searching girl for him...
he is so upset...
but he won't let devika go easily...
he gifted devik a saree...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Awesome
Asim loves Devka
He gave her a saree
Will they get married or not?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 43

the presentations of this promotion starts and the competitors succeed each. the applause leaves a fright for Devika and now the presenter declares

-: And here is the couple who conquered the hearts of thousands of spectators the couple whose talking about all newspapers and magazines here is Asim and Devika

on stage she stepped forward followed by a light which lit up she remains standing did not know what to do a music declared a very beautiful song that Asim has chosen for this special day the day where he will prove that his pair is the true and real couple a song with beautiful lyrics bringing with it a request of Asim to Devika ( tumko paya hai tho jaise khoya hoon) another light brings with it the young man with a beautiful view traditional he began by taking her hand approached her take the other hand puts it on his shoulder and moves her to him by her waist keeps his hand and repeated the words of the song leaving understand a reality from his deep

-: I have found you and I forgot myself I wanted to tell you but what language? I can't find the words (he moved behind her and repeated in her ear) I can't tell you what you are for me your beauty we don't find it in this world (all his words he found them in the song but he adds his own words he repeated while the music helped them dancing he carried her in his arms) I found you and I don't want to lose you come with me and agrees to stay at my side (these words leads him to the lips of Devika and tries to kiss her not paying attention to the public and forgetting that he is in competition but she denies this kiss for repeat this song also for say) you are beautiful this day (stroking his cheek) that's our story today because you and me we are moving on the same road I'll come with you with all that you say. I'll follow you and I'll leave everything for you. it was a statement of Devika to Asim that he takes seriously he continuous his movements that led him to the end of the song landing in the arms from each other and after the dance ended Asim remain standing for a moment to look at her with eyes shining of smile he crouched holds her hand and make his marriage proposal in front of everyone saying

-: Devika the first day I saw you, you lived my mind I have loved you all days and you could not leave my heart I left everything for you I've faced for you and I want to live with you I don't want to see you on day and let you go at the nightfall I want you with me all the time Devika !! would you marry me

Devika looks at Asim respecting his courage admiring his great love for her. she can't tell him no she can't push him away and she can't do him suffer any more than that she responds to him

-: I want Asim I want to come with you there where you want (he rises very happy that she accept he hugged her very strong and he looks at the jury and he told them

-: Excuse me sirs this dance we did not prepare we just create it and the last part is not a part of the show does not takes account I prepared everything for do my request it's a real request not for be the best couple (he said that by tightening her hand which he held) it does not matter if we were not selected as best couple (he looks at her by love and continuous) most importantly we ended up

the applause concatenates all the audience stands up even those who came to encourage the others can't stop to applaud and screaming they are the best dazzles by the courage of Asim and among the audience there's Asim's family and that of Devika the couple go to join the others participants Asim's mother furious goes to see him

-: What did you do Asim you've asked her in public you have no shame everyone will be talking about us now if you marry her you will not be my son

-: I don't want to choose between the two of you mom why do you ask me that but if you want me to do a choose I will not leave her I'm going to marry her

-: Do what you want (she said and she goes)

Devika who was not far away heard all the conversation approaches Asim who looked sad his mother go away she puts her hand on his shoulder he turns around finds her next to him he holds her hand and kisses it

-: Asim !! I'm sorry (she said affected by his sadness)

-: No don't be it's she who wants it (he says keeping his hand on hers) my mother does not understand that I have the right to live my life as I want. forgets my mother and tells me (said with a smile) you are ready for marriage

-: Yes I'm ready I never want leak me too

before going to execute their plan Devika and Asim must participate in the nominations even as Asim don't think he will be nominate after what he presented but most important to him is that Devika is with him and soon she will be his wife he does not want anything else it is his happiness

the jury began to nominate arrived to the couple of the year Asim does not believe what he hear he is chosen with Devika as the best couple dancer of the year they have been chose thanks to their real love. for the jury they had incarnate the reality Asim hugged Devika very strong it is not him who had this trophy it is his love that won it's a trophy of a great love a recognition of that love

The jury recognized that this couple no one can beat them although that Asim used the promotion to express everything in front of everyone and make his request to Devika for express her that he can't live with anyone but her the jury has not withdrawn them the nomination contrariwise he wanted to give this nomination to the real and true couple who was able to express all in public their dances were real and the trophy was given for a true love

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story

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