sandhir poem cum os|| my take on their feelings in my style||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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💔SANDHIR💔

I don't know where are we today,
i don't know why we are like this today,
I don't know where am i,
I don't know where will be in the next second.

Today , I am dying thousand deaths.
I thought You are mine,
I thought you will always be mine,
i have dreamt of you,
I have always thought of you,
you have lived in my breathe,
you have lived in my heart.
you have lived in my dreams,

but you have shattered everything.
you have broken all my dreams,
you are no more mine,
you have found someone else,
i thought our dream is same,
but you have a nightmare and i have a dream,

i want to stop you,
i want to hold you back ,
from falling down,
but what have you done?
you yourself have pushed me,

just leave darkness of hatred and come to the light of love with me,
I am here standing for you with open arms which you have jerked away.

I have nothing to say now,
I have nothing to dream now,
I am just following my old dream,
I thought you wud be with me,
but just jerked me away forever...
😭


💔SANDHIR💔



I know where I am today,
I wish you could be there with me,
You had promised me that you wont leave me ever,
But you broke your promise,
I am all alone,
But still following my mission,
I know i am not right,
I know I am not correct,
but I have never got always correct,
just faced injustice,

the woman who brought me into this life,
never gave me her love which i am craving for,
she has always kept me deprived of her love,
just gave me materialistic things which do not exit in my life,

I can't see her showering that love on those who are new to her life,
for them she has left me,

and you have also left me,
my motive is just revenge,
with you or without you,

my heart died thousand deaths too when i was around her,
she is not mine, you are mine,
that kiss has no meaning,
just believe me,
but i know you won't,

I will be back soon to you,
coz i have no other world except you,

my dream is you,
my life is you,
my heart is with you...


i am so much hurt with today's episode.. that i couldn't stop myself writing this.
i wont ask u all to give your reviews its totally upto ur choice.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww this is beautifully written

Todays episode was indeed heart wrenching for Sandhirians 😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one Sam... Well written!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Niceee Sammy di ... Just dreaming
I request u in advance to write the continuation of this poem when they unite again
Thanks for Pm...
Love it <3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.

Niceee Sammy di ... Just dreaming

I request u in advance to write the continuation of this poem when they unite again
Thanks for Pm...
Love it <3



I HAVE WRITTEN MANY SUCH POEMS..
VISIT MY WRITING INDEX..
U WILL FIND ALL..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez



I HAVE WRITTEN MANY SUCH POEMS..
VISIT MY WRITING INDEX..
U WILL FIND ALL..

oh wowie ... Sure I'll view it.. Thanks 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I just couldn't bring myself to terms and watch today's episode. I don't know the exact sequence of events that followed the betrayal but I know it for sure that both of them were shattered though Sanyukta was broken beyond repair.

The Poem has so apty depicted the heart wrenching emotions and portrayed them so overwhelmingly.
The poem is definitely beautiful but the situation here is worst.
A splendid summation of their condition through individual point of views, this is great.

Had it been any other time I would have appreciated more but my mind is not in coherent terms so as to feel any emotion other than the despair that is over-powering my senses. Sorry.

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its beautiful awesome superb lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
very very nice and amazing
you describe they are feelings beautifully
just love it.😊

But what happen in today's episode?? i wasn't see.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudipto-69

its beautiful awesome superb lovely

lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
very very nice and amazing
you describe they are feelings beautifully
just love it.😊

But what happen in today's episode?? i wasn't see.



U are lucky that u didn't watch it .
It wud better if u wont watch it further.. Lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

I just couldn't bring myself to terms and watch today's episode. I don't know the exact sequence of events that followed the betrayal but I know it for sure that both of them were shattered though Sanyukta was broken beyond repair.

The Poem has so apty depicted the heart wrenching emotions and portrayed them so overwhelmingly.
The poem is definitely beautiful but the situation here is worst.
A splendid summation of their condition through individual point of views, this is great.

Had it been any other time I would have appreciated more but my mind is not in coherent terms so as to feel any emotion other than the despair that is over-powering my senses. Sorry.

Regards
Keya


Aww thanks a lot keya..
I m not a kind of person who ask for long comments..
For me a single genuine word is enough. Iknow what u are feeling right now.. Coz I feel the same.
So don't be sorry..
Also I have not written it for any review.. Just shared my heart out.
Thanks for ur beautiful comment.
Love
Samridhi

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