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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Awesome part continue soon eagerly waiting for the next part😃


Thank u so much
vl update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part - 17

They clicked some more pics and then came out of the studio

E- mumma, mere ko bhukhi lagi h

S- haan beta chalte h ghar ... phir bana doongi jo ap chahoge...

R- no beta,roz apni mumma k hath ka boring khana khate ho,aj yahan ka khana
khayein??

E- haan ...he said with an excited face

S- shut up randhir .. iske liye ghar p hi
khana banayungi mein .. tumhein yahan khana h to kha lo

E- mumma plz mujhe yahin khana khana h ..

He insisted her .. and she aggreed .. they had their lunch and after that they went in
the center of mall ... there was a counter present there ... there was a contest for couples due to valantine's day ...

E- mumma,papa mujhe wo psp chahiye ..

S- par beta uske liye to contest jitna pdega na ..

E- haan to phir .. ap log jitoge na mere liye??

R- beta apko mein market se la dunga ..

E- par mujhe yehi wala chahiye ...competition wala .. plz mumma,plz papa

S- beta plz zid mat kro itna aj kal boht
ziddi hogye ho app .. ek cheez k piche hi pad jate ho ..bilkul randhir ki tarah ..

She bit her tounge and randhir smilled proudly remembring one day of their collage .. both went into same flashback

flashback

Sanyu was working in lab alone ... randhir came and hugged her from back .. and started kissing her kneck

S- kya hai randhir kyu disturb kar rhe ho ... tum is tarah mujhe studies se distract nhi kar sakte

R- arey .. mein tumhein distract nhi kar raha hoon .. mujhe neend nhi a rhi thi,so socha k shayad gf se good night kiss lene k baad neend a jaye ..

She turned to face him and gave him an irritated look

S- randhir jao yahan se

R- no ways ..pehle kissi do mujhe .. he
said like a child

S- shut up randhir ... she was trying hard to control her blush

R- sanyu peezzz.

S- get out of here ..

And there was a small cute fight between them and at last sanyubgave a peck to him on lips...

#fbends ...

E- mumma,papa khan kho gye ap dono ... he nudged them ..

S- ah .. kuch nhi beta .. bas koi purani baat yaad agyi thi ...

R- haan beta chalo ab competition mein part lena h ya nhi??

E- haan chalo

S- wait ...m too tiered so i will no participate ..

E- mumma ...

he made a fake angry face..

R- sanyu ehsas ka man rakhne k liye khel
lo game ..

S- par ..the two guys insisted her and at last she agreed

they decided to play valantine's game which was especially for married couples and the name of game was BEST MUMMA & PAPA COMPETITION..
The competition started ...

E- all the bestvmumma,papa .. ap dono hi jeetna,warna meinvkatti ho jayunga apse ..

S- beta we will try

R- beta we will surely win.. hum dono rank 1 & 2 h collage k time se hi har kam mein so hum dono nhi harenge .. and winked at sanyu

Host- so i request all the mumma's and papa's to come in center ..

All gathered in center ..

Host- so the 1st round is about the
eye-contact .. jo couple sabse zyada time tak eyecontact bana kar rkhega,wo jeet jayega .. your time starts now ..

All couples were looking in reach other's eyes.. Couples wich were breaking eyelock,they got disqualiffied

Tu jo mila to zindagi hai badli
Main poori nayi ho gayi
Hai be-asar duniya ki baatein badi
Ab teri sunu main sadaa
Hmm..Milne ko tujhse bahaane karun
Tu muskuraye wajah main banu
Roz bitanavsaath mein tere
Saara din mera
Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah
Kya hua asar tere sath reh kar na jaane
Ke hosh mujhe na raha
Lafz mere thhe zuban pe aake ruke
Par ho na sake woh bayaan
Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le
Aankhein bhi paigham yeh de
Teri nazar ka hi yeh asar hai
Mujhpe jo huaa..

Both were so lost in each other's eyes..4
couples were out of competition .. now only 6 couples were elimated .. next round will be played with these 6 couples ..4 couples among them broken their eyecontact,but they were not disqualified,just winner of competition will be given extra points

Now randhir knew k now they will not be disqualified,Suddenly he remembered sanyu's statement -' randhir mein
tumhari ankhein dekh kar bata sakti hoon k tumhare dil aur dimag mein kya chal raha h so mere sath kuch shaitani karne k bare mein sochna bhi mat'

Randhir felt an urge to kiss sanyu ... she imidately blinked her eyes ..Host anounced that they are on 2nd number ...Sanyu gave randhir a disgushed look ... randhir just smriked .. ehsas gave them an angry look .. sanyu gave him a sorry wala smile .. randhir signalled him that they will win next round .. ehsas just rolled his eyes ..

S- kitne gande ho tum,mere bete ka mood off hogya tumhari vajh se idiot khin ke

R- oh .. ulta chor kotwal ko dante .. blink tumne kia aur blaim mujhpe ..

S- zyada bano mat..tum kya bakwas soch rhe the sab pata h mujhe

R- acha kya soch raha thavmein... he took step closer ..

Sanyu steppedbback... they heared an announcment for next round ...H- so in next round,papa's apko smell karke batana h k apki oops apke bachon ki mumma kaunsi h..Every one laughed ..

All couples tried one by one,3 couples were eliminated and guess by 2 couples was right .. now it was intelligent & naughty rd's turn

He was blind folded and he had to recognise sanyu among 6 ladies ..

Rd(to himself)- arey mein to apni sanyu ki 100's logon mein se bhi pehchan sakta hoon,ye to sirf 6 h and smriked

He directly went near sanyu leaving everyone in shock,enhaled her lips's smell , cluched her waist and kissed her in front of eveyone... everyone was claping and hooting for them ..

Sanyu jerked him away after a few seconds .. randhir removed his blind fold and smriked looking at her ... sanyu gave him a disgused look ... ehsas too was smiling and clapping ..

S- itne ghatia ho sakte ho tum mein soch bhi nhi sakti thi ..

R- oye apni wife ko hi kiss kia h,aur kisi ki wife ko karta to tumhein kaise lagta

S- u go to hell,i don't care ..

Host- mrs.shekhawat ap gussa mat hoyie
mr.shekhawat se .. good joab mr .shekhawat itni asani se pehchan lia apne apni wife ko .. gr8 .. well done ... and showed him a thumbs up sign

Randhir smiled .. sanyu was still angry .. but just because ehsas was smilling,she forgoten all her anger ...

Host- so next round is about ur understanding and co-operation .. sabhi papa's eyes p bllind fold hoga aur mumma's k mouth covered honge .. muma's ko ek shop ka naam bataya jayega jiska name papa's ko nhi pata
hoga, papa's ko muma's ko uthana h aur
mumma's kuch hints dekar unhein shop par lekar jana h aur wo bol nhi sakti .. jo couple sabse pehle pohnchega,wohi winner hoga ...

Only three couples were left ...

Randhir picked sanyu in his arms and as per rules,randhir 's eyes were closed and sanyu 's mouth was shut ..
randhir was enjoying this movement,same with sanyu,but suddenly when she looked at ehsas she remembered what happened 3 yrs ago .. so she wanted to complete this competition as soon as possible ..

At last they won ... they were given their prize ...Ehsas was supper dupper happy randhir lifted him in his arms.. he kissed
on sanyu & randhir 's cheeks ... when they were about to kiss on his cheeks,he backed off and their lips touched for a second ...ehas laughed loudly...

sanyu backed off quicly .. and they went back to home ..

Hope you all liked it ...
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Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg .. ehsas is sooo naughty... Lol !!
Thx to him for sandhir's moment...
Nicely one yr...😳
Continue soon
Thx for Pm
Luv
Chandu
Edited by .chandu.parsh. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awwwie
The couple game was damn cute.
Just loving ehsas and his cute antics!!!
Perfect family photo_ Sandhir and ehsas foreevr
Brilliant update
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Posted: 10 years ago
resss
unres
awesome part!!
ehsas is too cute...
sanyu said he is just like rd awww
the fb was too cute..
ehsas forced them to participate in the competition
the competitions was too romantic!
rd is so naughty!!
bt sanyu knows him too well
n dat kiss was unexpected!!
ehsas really is carbon copy of rd..
uski hi tarah naughty h
uski wajah se ek aur kiss ho gya 😆
continue soon
thnx for pm



with love
shreya
Edited by sweetshre - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
shoo damn cute. ..yrr..
lovely ...dear ..update asap and keep muskaraing
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super update yr
I luved it


Really dear u r amzng
This is getting intrstng


Ehsaas is damn cute yr
He forced sandhir to participate in competition
They participated

All the rounds r awsme

Rd was rite no one can beat them after all they r rank no 1 and 2


Rd kissed sanyu
She was so shocked n irritated
Bt for ehsaas she faked smile


Ehsaas he's so naughty
Sandhir again kissed


Cnt wait for next
Update soon


Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm
Awesome update👏
Eshsas is so cute😊
Loved sandhir's moment😊
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb beautiful lovely update
rd was so naughty
thanx for pm
continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome
thanks for the pm...
continue soon...

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