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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Daddysdoll
Dat was awsome as always dear :) keep updating :) lov

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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"Let's give it a chance"

Part 3

(I had to add this sry for the inconvenience)

Her eyes filled with deep coal ,veil covered her head ,a pearl glittered over her parting enhancing the vermilion filled in it.That sacred thread shimmered on her neck making her look eternally beautiful.His eyes shone with pride , clad in an off white sherwani ,looking no less then a Greek God.Glimpses of there past striked his mind.
It was a destination wedding in the forts of Rajasthan,a big fat Indian wedding .Everything smelled of food. Platters filled with dal bhatti churma , a whole glass of spiced buttermilk and a sweet delicacy of jalebi and rabri were served ,but he had refused those thinking about the calories they contained and that's when she had jumped into his room with the platter .
"This is for you,have it" She had said.
"It's too oily" he had replied pointing towards the floating oil it had.
"Okay don't then " she choosed not to force him.
Instead she sat there and started enjoying the food,licking her fingers with every morsel she had.
She had kept on teasing him till the time he had started having his share from the platter. It was their first meal together...

His cell beeped making him shut close the album of memories.
It was a reminder for him to leave for his interview.
Hiding it in his side of almirah he left latching the doors behind.
It was a usual day for her but to her surprise she had 2 extra hours for herself. Finding no other pass time she headed back home,opened the gates with the master key .
Today her house had a different aura ,it smelled different more of his cologne then her lavender, today she had someone to wait for.
She turned on the heat and slipped in her usual shorts and a extra large T-shirt .
Turning on the TV she sat on the couch in the lobby .
"Indian daily soap's,all they show is a betrayed marriage" she spoke and a tear dribbled down her cheek which took her 1yr back.
Their 1st meet hadn't been pleasant.It was a usual Chandigarh night for her, hanging around with her friend's in an open jeep winds played along her hairs .Parth his childhood friend had been drunk rather made drunk as and they were heading towards vidushi's apartment to make parth confess his feelings to her ,which altogether landed into a different situation when a Ferrari had been hit by him.parth was always a shy guy, he was more than scared by the scenario but sanyukta was way to bold to handle situations. She had jumped of the jeep to interrogate the stranger on the other hand even though the she and kaustuki her childhood bestie were under fault
She was there to bang his head of .The guy jumped out of his Ferrari in a brown leather jacket , a white T-shirt hugging beneath ,paired up with a navy blue jeans.
"Don't you know how to drive Mr." She had shouted over him
"Look miss its all your fault ,I was driving properly ,you are the one who landed here out of no where." He had fought back
An hour had passed them arguing when Randhir had been pulled inside the car by kushwant and jiggy his frnds for life And sanyukta by koustuki.
She brushed it all away and went inside the kitchen to make the broth rather to divert her mind away from those memories which haunted her.
Soon she was done with the dinner and the door bell rang ,ending up her wait ,he was finally there on the other side of the door.
She checked herself in the mirror cleaning those dried saline droplets with perfection.
"Hi" she greeted him opening the door .
"Hello" he replied.
he seemed tired .Creases of fatigue very clearly visible on his forehead.
"Coffee" she questioned.
"Umm yeah "he replied placing his bag on the side table .
He landed on the couch without even removing his blazer which was enough for her to shout from the kitchen.
" go and freshen up , you are still the same..." She stopped in the midway recalling he used to do the same earlier.
He without uttering a word left for the room.He took a hot shower In a jiffy and came to the dining table in his navy blue trousers and white graphic T-shirt.
A warm mug of coffee awaited for him there and sanyukta was busy reading some article
"How was your day" he initiated the conversation.
"It was good ,what about your's" she reciprocated.
"It was hectic"he replied
" So got the job " she asked curious.
"No not yet ,have a few lined up for tmrw as well"
The warm liquid dribbled down their throat making them feel warm .She had caffeine but yet slumber took in without alcohol that day.They were still on the dining table ,her head rested on her knees and his over the table.
Time flew like seconds.It was 1 at night when he woke up as his stomach growled reminding him he had nothing the whole day .He shook her lightly to wake her up but instead she held his hand in hers .
"Sanyukta wake up" he tried for the umpteenth number of times and succeeded finally when she rubbed her eyes.
"I will reheat the dinner" saying this he left .
She blushed unknowingly to his shy side ...
Soon they drifted off to their room n slept a comforting slumber after long.

His slumber got disturbed with the morning alarm on his side he turned it off and stretched his arms waking up he saw the time ,it was 11 he had slept a lot and to his surprise sanyukta didn't woke him up.
His vision dropped on the note by the clock .
( breakfast is ready ,reheat it and have it ,don't get any fake assumptions I did tht Caz you seemed to be tired yesterday n m not tht ruthless as much u consider me 2 be)
He smiled to her innocent gesture.It was different from him but he was here to win her back not just his business...
To be continued...
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Guys thanks a lot for your response and very happy new year to all of you
May this new yr bring you all the happiness
But still I have a limit to reply n m sry for that as I can't personally reply all
I feel blessed to be here
Having such amazing writers by my side is such a boon .
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N n sry for the delay I had my exams we didn't even got winter break this time...so all m gonna do is make you wait
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Edited by SimmyScribbles - 10 years ago

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samridhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Resshhh
Unreshh..
Wow wow wow..
Ny new year treat wa..
Loved it..
Is he here to win her back??
Did i read it correct??
Awww she is still so caring..
Awww

Thanks for pm..
N happy new year to u too my baby..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: newmoon18
The update was superb
Beautifully written

U really write amzng
I so luved it

Rd cooking dat was nyc
Sanyu was lost in the food
She was having so tasty food after so many days

Sanyu is still uncomfortable with rd
Rd luking for job

He missed sanyu

Bt I really wonder what hppnd in the past
Cnt wait to know the mystery

Update soon
Wtng

All the best for ur exams

Luv u
Keep smiling

Thank you thank you thank you

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: sindhu18kashyap
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Loved the update
Keep writing
Love
Anu

Tinku love u you...

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Rashi Bhargava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Mind blowing update yr
With each update I m getting addicted to it more

U write fab dear
Really great job

Rd lost in memory lane
Their wedding
It seems they were vru hppy with their marriage
Bt what hppnd that they got separated

I think for their marriage fall rd is responsible
He seems guilty
He really luvs sanyu

How much sanyu running from her feelings
Still she luvs rd n is happy to see him around

She still cares for her
Bt is very hurt so scared to feel anything again

Rd has a motto he's not there for his business
He's there to get her sanyu back

Really this is getting intrstng

Wtng for ur next
Update whenever tym permits

All the best for ur exams

A very happy prosperous new year

Luv u
Keep smiling