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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEY FRIENDS...

ONCE AGAIN I COME WITH NEW FF...I CAN'T STOP MYSELF AFTER WATCHING THIS MOVIE ..JUST IMAGING ON DREAMY & ANGEL...


I KNOW...I KNOW...MANY ALREADY ONGOING ...AND NOW A DAYS AM NOT UPDATING REGULARLY DUE TO MY HECTIC SCHEDULE... BUT WHAT I DO... I CAN'T STOP MY SELF...


SO AM POSTING PROLOGUE BELOW ...THIS STORY INSPIRED FROM ONE OF BOLLYWOOD MOVIE...MANY YOU ALREADY WATCH THIS MOVIE...BUT I SEE YESTERDAY ONLY...SO HERE IS START OF THIS NEW JOURNEY ON MY ALL TIME FAVORITE COUPLE...

I HOPE AND WISH ...IS BAAR BHI YOU ALL LIKE THIS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PROLOGUE


Mr. khurana we saves her but

but what doctor...

now she is in coma

he fall down on bench ...
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i know this is so sort...but i already give you many hint...already 😉

HAPPY NEW YEAR😃
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INDEX

Prologue on page 1


part 1 on page 1

part 2 on page 23

part 3 on page 31

part 4 on page 38

PART 5 on page 47

part 6 on page 53

PART 7 ON PAGE 62

part 8 on page 70

part 9 on page 76

PART 10 on Page 90

part 11 on page 96

part 12 on page 109

PART 13 ON PAGE 119

part 14 on page 123

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MY OTHER WORK


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PART 1

Wo Humsafar Tha...

This Story starts from back past 15 years... where two different souls meet with each other 1st time... She playing with her friends hides & seeks in garden & bump with him... she sweetly said sorry to him & asks about her friends...

She : aapne mere friends ko dekha khi

.

Wo hum hid n seek khel rhe hai

He : khel mein no cheating

She : Isse cheating nhi help krna khehte hai

Her one friend come outside & supports him...

He is right geet...game mein tum isse kyun puch rhi ho

Geet : pari

Jb tu puchti hai tb

He left without saying any word...next day again both meet ...this time she asked his name ...

He simply said "maan"

Geet : tum mera naam nhi puchonge

Maan : I know

Geet : kaise

Maan : kal pari ne tumhe geet khke bulaya tha

Geet : intelligent

Par ye galat hai

Ase kissi ki baatein nhi sunte

Maan : tum shi galat ki baat na kro

Toh jyada thik rahenga

Geet : tum bad boy ho

Her daadi come & stop her...

Daadi : geet ase baat nhi krte

Say sorry

Geet : daadi maine kya kiya

One voice comes from behind ...divyani tum yaha

Daadi : savitri

Tum yaha kaise

Mein toh yhi rhti hu

Savitri : wo ram ka transfer huya hai yaha

Abhi kuch din phle

Bs

.

Kitni pyaari beti hai

Divyani : geet namastey kaho

Geet : namastey aunty

Savitri : aunty nhi

Daadi

Hum maan ki daadi hai

Aur aaj se aap hume bhi apni daadi smjhiye

Geet looks towards divyani ...she nodded...

*********

Meeting increases both become friends ...both share great bonding...but all things changed with time... His care lightened love in her heart...but it same happen with him or not...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start interesting.waiting to start
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Starting was good waiting to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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happy new year priya
but yeh kya new year main humari geet ko coma main bhej diya
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Happy New Year! congrats on the new FF! interesting prologue! update soon. btw which movie is this?
Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago

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