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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsmile

me read now 1st part

now really waiting for this one to continue
waiting egerlyyy


updating sweety


in this week
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

sorry for late

superb story
congrats for new one
me asking how you manage lots of storiesss


thanks dear

i also dont know

how to manage


mein sch kahu

khud bhool jaati hu 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

going to update in this week
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Posted: 10 years ago
heyyy


going to update in this week


i know...bhut late kiya maine
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Posted: 10 years ago
CS Is Very Interesting
Waiting for story to unfold

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Posted: 10 years ago
will b waiting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 2

Alarm buzzed at 5 A.m., he goes out for jogging & after come back to home...

Oye tu jag gya

Bol toh tu ase raha hai

Jaise mein zindagi mein phli baar jaga hu

Oye tere us truck ke alarm jaise horn ke chakkar mein mujhe daily jaldi uthna pd jaata hai

Oye sukr kar tu alarm clock ka

Jo shi time pe utha deti hai

Warna teri tarah puri duniya

Soye - soye apne sapne pure karna chahti hai

Aur sapne band aankho se pure nhi hote

Unhe pure karne ke liye

Raat - din ek krna pdta hai

Oye yaar bs kr

Chl tyaar ho jaake jaldi se

*************

Carbonater kharab ho gya hai

Change krna padenga

.

Oye sun

Is nyi car ka carbonator nikalke

Us purani car mei dal de

Aur is purani car ka us nyi mein

.

Ji aap zara dubara smjhayenge

.

Dekho nyi car ka carbonator is me dalonge

Toh ye toh chalengii

Aur wo wali car aayi hai

Wheel change karane ke liye

Do din ke baad wo dobara aa jaayengi

Humare pass

Smjh gye

.

Smjh gya

.

Ab tu smjh chuke ho

Ab usse mt smjhana

.

Wah wah suklani sahib

Gadi mein bhi milawat

.

Dekho

Hum log yah ape

Paise banane aaye hai

Isliye ghadiya bnate hai

.

Welcome - welcome ali bhai

Humare is garage mein

.

Ye kya ali bhai

Ali bhai krte rhte ho

Ghadi kaise thik krti ho

Har dusre din ye firse kharab ho jaati hai

.

Ali bhai

Aap tension na lo

Is baar mein aapki car apne expert ko dekhta hu

Uske hath lagate hi car bilkul thik ho jaayengi

.

Maan

*********

Maan car thik ho gyi

Sir car ka kuch nhi ho sakta

Car mein manufacturing defect hai

Aap company pe case kr dijiye

Car nyi mil jaayengi

Ali baba : lekin mein kaise maan lu

Jo tum kh rhe ho

Wo thik hai

Khi case krna mujhpe

Mehnga pad gya toh

Maan : aaj tak

Car ke mamle mein

Maan ka daava kbhi galat nhi nikla

Don't take tension

Just do it

*********

Mujhe apne kal pe barosa hai

Dekhna ek din asa aayenga

Duniya ki sb sadko pe

Mere designs ki car gumti huyi nazar aayengi

.

All the best Maan

.

What are you doing adi

For writing one line

You wasted so many pages

.

Oye maan

Ghar walo ko letter likh raha hu

.

Mail ke jaamane mein

Letter Adi

.

Maan maa ab ghav mein rhti hai

Dad ko gujarne ke baad

Wo waha shift ho gyi

Baki family ke sath

.

Aur waise ghar walo ko letter likh raha hu

Toh ek line mein kaise likhi jaayengi

.

Mein likhe dikhata hu tujhe

.

Le likh

.

Maan start writing & adi start reading his lines..

Am fine here, I hope all of you also fine...your son "maan"

.

Dekh ho gya adi

.

Ye koi letter tha

.

Toh tujhe kya lag raha adi

.

Maan teri aur meri soch mein bhut farq hai

Mujhe lagta hai

Family ko bs itna batana ya khehna km hai

Aur tere liye sayad ye bhi jyada hai

.

Dekh adi

Tu yaha America isliye aaya hai

Taki tu paise kama kar

India jaake settle ho sake

Apni maa , behn ka wo sb kuch de sake

Jo tere dad dena chahte the

.

Ha maan

Jo sapna dad ne dekha hai

I want fulfil his dream...

.

Lekin mein asa kuch nhi sochta hu adi

Kyunki jo desh

Mujhe sb kuch de raha hai

Naam ,paisa, taraki

Usse chodke wapas kyun jaayu

Adi : maan nhi jaana

Toh mt jaa

Par what about your family

Maan : sb kuch acha hi honga

Ghar pe bhaiya bhabhi hai

Dekh baal krne ke liye

Jis din mein settle ho gya

Sb mere pass aake bhi rh sakte hai

********

maan you forget me, one day

oh geet , am going for study

toh isme mein tumhe kyun bul jaayunga bala

.

Daadi dekho na

Ye kaise ro rhi hai

Geet daadi : geet beta

Kuch hi dino ki toh baat hai

Geet : daadi kuch dino ki baat nhi hai

Ye saalo ki baat hai

Daadi : geet waqt bhut jaldi bit jaata hai

Maan man laga ke panda

Tumhe engineer banana hai na

Maan : ji daadi

Bye geet

.


Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
seems maan is ambitious here
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Posted: 10 years ago
Now that was a Vibrant Update

Adi wants to fulfill the dream of his dad while Maan wants his family
with him when he has reached his goal

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb part
maan wants to be with his family

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