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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

wen r u going to update dear...


tomorrow,,,
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

that's a million dollar question!

n answer to that is tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

n answer to that is tomorrow

pakka?😲
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m up wid new chapter...

but first happy new year guys...

enjoy reading...



Chapter 21

RECAP:- jalal has come to know that jodha is innocent and he is trying to mend thing things with her with the help of abdul. Jo ja and gang are now gone to a trip where someone locked Jo in washroom coz of wch she misses her bus. jalal also misses his bus . and now they on their towards the hotel where everyone is waiting from. While on the bus ride they goes back to the memory lane from where it all actually started.

Jalal looked at her beautiful angelic face which was drenching in rain. D drops of rains was all over on her face which seems like dew drops on a fresh flower. She was totally drenched in rain which were making her curves more visible nd prominent. Her wet locks, her wet lashes everything was making him to lose his senses.

Jodha looks into his eyes only to find Desire nd Passion over dere. d same desire nd passion which was dere Deep in her heart too which she herself didn't know exist in her till now. his intense gaze was burning her but she didn't found lust in those gaze instead she found immense love in dat for her.

He slowly removes her wet strands from her face which were blocking his view nd tucked dem behind her ears while his one hand is still holding her from her waist caressing her bare back. His soft warm touch on her cold body was making her loose all her senses. She felt her knees getting weak. One more move of his nd she'll melt rite den nd dere.

His gaze move on her pink luscious lips nd d water droplets on dem which were tempting him badly nd he felt an unknown urge to feel dem, to drink dose droplets from dose petals. He closed his eyes nd bends down towards her lips. She could feel his warm breath on her lips nd she closed her eyes to melt in d moment. Her senses have stopped working long back. Her breathing gets heavied nd she parted her lips. Jalal moves his face more close to her nd he was almost touching her lips.

He couldn't hesitate d invitation nd finally he sealed his lips wid hers to which she responded at once. He gently sucked her lower lip drinking d rain drops fall on dem, gently nibbling dem nd soon his tongue gained entry in her mouth exploring each nd every corner nd dey both have a passionate kiss. Dey had no idea hw long dey were lyk dis. all dey know is dat dey were enjoying dat moment, enjoying each other in embrace.

Jalal entered her mouth n sarted tasting her sweetness and same was the case wid jodha. After a prolonged kiss they parted due to short of breath. Both were looking in each other eyes. Jalal was again bending for another round of passionate kiss when jodha pushed him went towards d car her back towards him. Jodha was breathing heavily closing her eyes. She felt someone holding her from back .

Jalal was removed her hair from her back agave her open moth kisses on her uncovered wet back which made jodha gasp. Jodha removed jalals hand from her waist n tried to go away from him but jalal took hold of her hand before she can go away from him and pulled her toward him and jodha landed on his chest. Her both the hands were on jalals shoulder while jalal hands were on her waits holding her tightly. Both of their bodies were stick to each other. The rain water from jalal hairs were falling on jodhas quivering lips making it more tempting for him to take those delicate lips of hers in his.

They both were looking into each other eyes the world around them was long forgotten. Jalal brought one of his hand up and slowly creased her cheeks with his long fingers making jodha close her eyes after creasing her cheeks he moved towards her long slender neck making jodha shiver with his every touch. Jalal bend a little and picked jodha up in his embrace and took her towards his their car. And they both came in the car all wet.

Flashback ends here :;

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Present

Sudden light weight on his shoulders brought Jalal back from his trance. He glanced over his shoulder only to find Jodha head resting on his shoulder, a smile crept on his lip. He kept looking at her sleeping figure with that mild n satisfying smile. He knew he has long way to go get Jodha back in his life with his side n this time forever.

But right now he is happy in this very moment with her and doesn't want to it to end.

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Flashback

Jalal carried a wet jodha to his car n made her sit in it. Slowly he leaned towards and she moved back till her back was pressed with that of door of the car.

she was breathing heavily ...jalal could feel her softness against his chest...her hot breath on his face...he was holding tightly. He was aware of her deep cut top which was revealing her cleavage n bosom which was rubbing his chest. He smuggled into her hair...his hands tightened around her bringing her more into him...now their faces were inches apart. She started twisting n turning in jalal's arms wanting to break free...but jalal was holding her strongly in his arm which was letting her get success ...jalal just enjoying the sensation...finally not getting any success she let go of her struggling

jalal pulled her close to him. Jalal was watching her without a blink...he noticed her bosom rising up n down..

his hungry gaze going from her face to her soft pink lips...they were tempting him to touch them ...to kiss them hard n deep.

Jalal felt his burning desire rising...he wanted to make love to her then n there.

His heart leaped as he kissed her cheeks...then he went down n started kissing her neck madly! He was crushing her more n more while kissing... their hearts were pounding at such a rate as if it was going to explode!

After sometime he stopped and looked at her pink trembling lips...god!! Her lips were tempting him! He had a sudden craving for them so without wasting anytime more he took her lips into his... as soon as his rough lips met her soft one she moaned...

he started making love to her lips but this was not enough for him he wanted to explore more...his tongue started forcing her lips to apart...she couldn't hold it much longer so she parted her lips n his tongue entered her mouth.

He kissed her passionately as if there is no tomorrow... he kissed her as long as he wanted...they parted for air...she couldn't meet his eyes..she was all red..

Jalal again kissed her neck ..going further down to her cleavage he kissed her half revealing bosom...she moaned

Jalal continued kissing her. He bit her leaving red marks everywhere...he kissed her gave her love bites until he was satisfied

:- "jalal pls stop" she pleaded

Her plead brought jalal back to his senses, n his moved back while jodha adjusted her cloths. They both were still breathing heaviely. Jalal slowly glanced toward her n saw her trembling maybe becoz of cold as she was all drenched .

Wid this he again looked toward her n asked "are u alright?" to which she just hummed then he again said "m sorry I shouldn't..' but before he could complete his sentence she interrupted him "its ok u don't have to be sorry about it... It was one of the most beautiful memory of mine now ... n u didn't do anything wrong ...n I love u" she said all this cupping his face in his hand. He smiled at her and said "I love u too " n then hugged her. n after their hug dey drove to their den where their frnds were waiting for them to come.

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Present

At the hotel

A frantic ruqu was walking fro and back in her room.

Ruqu " yeh nhi ho sakta jalal aur jodha phir se ...nhi mujhe unse baat karni hii hogi ... unhone mujhe promise kiya tha ki aisa nhi hoga ... haan mein mein unhe call karti hun. She picked up her phone dialed a no.

Ruqu hello..helllo"

Person "kya hua tumhe tum itni dari hui kyun lag rahi ho?"

Ruqu "kyun ki jalal ko jodha ki sachai pata chal gayi hai... Aur who who usse apni life mein wapse lane ki koshish kar raha hai... Aur mujhe darr hai ki kahi woh iss mein kamyab ho gaya toh ?? nhi mein jalal ko phir se nhi kho sakti plz do something" she almost pleaded that person on the phone.

Person "relax sweetheart aisa kuch nhi hoga. I will never let him ruin my all efforts. Jodha will not forgive him this easily for wat he did with her and if she wants then also I wont let her. All u have to do right now is to keep him as much away from her as much u can till u r on this stupid trip while I make arrangement here so that she would never be able to come back from that trip EVER .. hahahhah" and that person started laughing evilly.

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PRECAP - the accident

that it

love u all...

Edited by oshinchaudhary - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wer is the update dear??????????
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

wer is the update dear??????????

I thought you'll give it on Tuesday.. its Wednesday today.. no update!😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

I thought you'll give it on Tuesday.. its Wednesday today.. no update!😭😭

me tooo😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
hello miss
where is the update? you told na wednesday you will update...
update plz plz update plz

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