premeer ff kis desh mein hai mera dil updating this sunday

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi i am keerthi!!! new to this forum i watched KDMHMD recently in utube and addicted to it .
i want to write an ff on our premeer.i am trying to write something for the first time!
so kindly ignore mistakes and feel free to comment.
this ff starts after the death of prem and takes an leap of 2 years.


PROLOGUE

In Juneja's house

Lalit: Gayathri  kal prem ki death ki pooja karni hai,sab taiyaariyan hogayi hai.


Gayathri:haan.lekin mujhe heer ki chinta horaiyi hai.kya isbaar ho maanengi pooja raknekeliye?

Lalit: humne prem ki baare mein in do saal mein kabhi baath nahi ki. wo prem ki death ko accept nahi karna chahthiye, lekin hume prem ki atma shanthi keliye yeh pooja karna padega.
mujhe heer se baath karna padega. PREM IS DEAD ,is sach ko heer accept karna padega.



sry for the ramblings, i really  don't know hindi. i just tried my best to write in hindi so ignore  my mistakes and feel free to post ur comments and opinions to continue this ff
thanks in advance.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Keerthi 😃
Welcome to the forum. Nice meeting you. 😃
So cool you're gonna write on PH wow 😎
So far it looks great.
Sad scene and it automatically reminded me of this episode in show.
You write so well. 😃
Please do continue.
Thanks for the story. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1: HEER'S ENTRY
In Heer's room
Heer is staring at the moon and self  thought:PREM tum kahan ho? ab tho do saal hogayi. mein apni 
 responsibilities  poori kardia hai.bauji ki business sambhala hai.preet bhi ab responsible hogaya hai.harman - maya se  aur preet-meher se shadi karli hai. harman aur bauji ki dooriyan bhi katam hogayi hai. nihal bhai veera ko apna liya. ab sab sath mein hai.maa ka bhi tabhiyath teekh hogaya hai .
         ab tum jaldi apni heer ki paas ajao prem.tumhe maaloom hai,
sabko yehi lagrahe ki tum hum sabse bahooth dur chaligayi ho.lekin mujhe batha hai prem tum zinda ho,tum apni heer ko chodkar hamesha ke liye jaa nahi sakthi prem.lautao prem and starts crying.
 
knock. knock
Heer wipes her tears and opens the door and lalit comes in.
LALIT:mein tumse baath karne aaya hoon beta.kya 2 min le sakthi hoon
HEER:boliye bauji.sab teekh toh hain.
LALIT:kal ka din tume yaad hoga beta. main chahthi hoon ki tum apni zindigi mai aage badna chaiye.
tumari ateet ki baare main nahi palki apne aanewali kal ki baareme soch beta.prem ab zinda  nahi hai.
PREM IS DEAD.is sach ko accept karo aur aage badne ki baareme socho beta.mein tumhe apni bahu nahi palki apni beti maana hai. issliye mein thumare khushi chathi hoon beta.

HEER:bauji mujhe maaf kijiye.mereliye prem zinda hai aur ho zaroor aayega. aapko patha hai bauji mene prem ke liye bachpan se hi intezar kiya tha.tab usko mein teekh se jaanthi tak bhi nahi hai lekin uske liye 14 saal meine intezar kiya hai. kabhi kabhi vishwas bhi utgaya aur yeh bhi sochne lagi ki shayad woh mereliye bani nahi hai. 
         lekin woh wapas aaya sirf mereliye aur mujhse bahot pyaar kartha hai .mere humsafar bana hai.maa hamesha bolrahithi ki rab jodiyon ko upar se banakar bejtha hai.mereliye woh prem ko  beja hai aur mein sirf aur  sirf uskeliye bani hoon. agar mein uskeliye bani hoon toh woh mujhe chodkar nahi jaa sakti hai. meri dil ko bata yeh ki woh teekh hai.mein uskeliye intezaar karunga.tab tak karunga jab tak woh nahi aayenge woh meri zindigi ki aakir din kyu na ho.

LALIT:bas beta. teekh hai. tum kal meeting keliye delhi jao aur  roshni ko saath lekar jao.
ab sojao beta. bahut raath hogayi yeh.
lalit leaves
HEER : prem jaldi aajao prem. good night prem and caresses prem's face on the photo.

Edited by ganeshamsk - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow thanks dear for updating so quickly :D
rmotional convo betw Bauji and Heer Aww
Heer is very positive but family thinks she is in denial. This is similar to the episode :)
Who's Roshni I wonder!
Exciting Heer is going on a trip :D
She will meet Prem there hai na? Hope so :D
Pls continue when u can. * hugs*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH:
PREM JUNEJA/GAURAV SHARMA:same as in the show
HEER MAAN: same as in the show
otherr characters:
siddharth khurana:best friend of gaurav important cupid between premeer
roshni patel:best friend and secretary of heer
sanjana rampal:loves prem/gaurav sis of rishab rampal
rishab rampal:villain of the story
virat sharma:bestie of sid and gaurav

others are same as in the show

index
chapter 1-page1
chapter 2-page2
chapter 3-page2
chapter 4-page3
chapter 5-page3
chapter 6-page4
chapter 7-page5
chapter8-page6
chapter9-page7
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

Wow thanks dear for updating so quickly :D
rmotional convo betw Bauji and Heer Aww
Heer is very positive but family thinks she is in denial. This is similar to the episode :)
Who's Roshni I wonder!
Exciting Heer is going on a trip :D
She will meet Prem there hai na? Hope so :D
Pls continue when u can. * hugs*


thank u so much dear for ur comments. it means a lot to me aasus.😊😊 
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Keerthi Ty for character sketch :D
Ur so sweet. Very excited to read next part :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Keerthi 😊 Welcome to the forum 😃 Wowww awosome start 👏 love it... eagerly waiting for the next part pls update soon :) :DEdited by tarannum6 - 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 2: JUNEJA FAMILY
lalit entered his room and found gayathri lost in thoughts.
LALIT:gayathri.kya soch rahi ho
GAYATHRI:heer ki baareme. prem ki jaane ki baad usne hum sabko sambhala aur hamara hosla banaya.ab uski zindigi ki baareme sochna padegana ji.
                  aap usse baath ki .kya kaha usne?
LALIT:meine usse baath ki lekin woh abhi bhi sach ko maanekeliye tayyar nahi hai.kal ki pooja ki baareme meine nahi bathaya tha aur usko ek meeting keliye delhi jaana hai.agar woh yaha rahengi toh prem ki antim sanskar nahi karnedengi. ab heer ki janam din bhi aanewali hai.hum usdin koi na koi faisla karengi.ab tum sojao and he also closes his eyes and thought:heer ki takdir toh prem hai.lekin usne heer ko chodkar bahut door chalagaya.ab uski khushi keliye kisi aur ko lana bhagwan.and fell in the slumber.

NEXT MORNING

In the family,every one feels the void left by prem and they are trying to accept it. but preet is the most affected.preet loves and worships prem like a father-figure and mostly a god-figure.he not only misses him but also blames himself for the prem's absence.he took the responsibilities of office and also married meher when harman left her in the mandap and leaves the house for love of his life,maya.he now respects and worships heer like his PB. if she says something then there is no questions same like for PB.
kuldi and her family settled here itself due to mother,s ill-health.lalith lost his hope and pride,his everything when prem,s death news came. gayathri's world comes to stand-still at that time.
nihal exposes rishab's evil intentions and accepts veera.daljit chachi is back with her family citing ashlsha as an reason and heer convinces lalit to make them stay.

heer gave them strength and hope to come back to normal life.she also took responsibility of office and helps preet in the need. she also takes care of gayathri maa.after six months medical treatment, she is fine and trying to cope up with the loss. she also convinces bauji to accept harman and maya and he accepted. now all are in the same roof.harman is the legal advisor of the juneja hotels  and also  top most advocate in the city. maya is the fashion-designer and running her own fashion-house.preet and meher relationship are also  in the progressing stage.ashlesha is trying to cope up with her heartbreak and trying to be normal. daljit wants to avenge for her daughter's heartbreak and waiting for the right time to strike.heer never accepts that prem is no moreand trying to be normaly for the sake of family.but family thinks that she is in denial mode except one.

heer wakes up and wishes prem good morning and gets ready for delhi trip.she calls roshni,her betie and secretary and tells her to come to the airport straight. heer comes to the living room and sees the arrangement for the pooja. she takes blessings from bauji and ma  and goes to pooja room and prays to lord siva:mein jaanthi hoon yahan prem ki antim sanskaar horaha hai.Issliye bauji mujhe delhi bejraha hai.lekin issbaar mein kuch bhi nahi karnewali hoon.jo bhi karnaye aap karenge,agar meri yekin sach hai toh yeh pooja aap hi rokengi.aap kaise rokengi mujhe nahi patha 
lekin mein nahi rokhrahihoon.aap kisiki haath mein rokna hain roklijiye. ab mein delhi keliye nikalrahi hoon. ab aapki haath mein hai sab kuch.mein chalthi hoon bhagwan.



so guys,any guesses who is the one going to stop this ? who believes in heer's belief?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tarannum6

Hey Keerthi 😊 Welcome to the forum 😃 Wowww awosome start 👏 love it... eagerly waiting for the next part pls update soon :) :D

thank you.next part updated. taran