~Akdha FF Humsafar~ Chapter-3 updated Page No.-20 09/02/2015 - Page 9

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Congrats Krina...you became senior member...🥳
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Congrats Krina...you became senior member...🥳
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i don't know this thing.😛
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thank you Rasika.😃
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Lovely first chapter esepcially, especially JJ love for each other... Salim wants his mother to be away from him 😡 Waiting to see how Jallu finds out & hope JO enjoys with Murad & daniyal ... How many years Salim is ?
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Lovely first chapter esepcially, especially JJ love for each other... Salim wants his mother to be away from him 😡 Waiting to see how Jallu finds out & hope JO enjoys with Murad & daniyal ... How many years Salim is ?

Thanks abhi786. 😊salim is 16 years old. because he went when he was 11 years old. and after 5 years and 6 months he back so.😛
Edited by cuty1997 - 10 years ago
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Yar tere do din khatam nahi hui???
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Yar tere do din khatam nahi hui???

chapter 2 is ready in my dairy. and type in word file it's almost ready. i posting today it self.
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chapter 2 is ready in my dairy. and type in word file it's almost ready. i posting today it self.

actually i busy in my cousin marriage preparation so. i late.
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chapter 2 is ready in my dairy. and type in word file it's almost ready. i posting today it self.


Yar tu directly word use kar double mehnat kyun??
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Yar tu directly word use kar double mehnat kyun??

mene to ashe he story apni dairy me likhi the. 5 chapters in hindi on the based on promo like serial wise. and my cousin read she like it very much. and give me idea to post in IF. so i post . muje to bharosh he nhi tha ke muje etna acha respone milega.
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**~Chapter-2~**

Jodha roj ke tarha artie ke thal lekar shensha ke pass ate he. Par Akabr apne vicharo me itna khoya hua tha ke use pata hi nhi calta ke kab jodha uske pass ake khadi ho jate he. (Jodha comes to shensha with artei plate like daily ritual. But Akbar lost in his thoughts so he don't know when jodha arrival and standing.)

After some time waiting for shensha's respone jodha called shensha. Akabr back in his thoughts.

Jalal: je kheye jodha begum. (Plz said jodha begum)

Jodha: ye hum artie or prashad dene aye the apko. Par app khuch pareshanse lagrhe hume. Khuch bat he kya shensha?

Jalal (Taking artie and prashad): Nhi ase koi bat nhi he jodha begum bus hum kuch siyashi maslo ke bare me soch rhethe. Par jodha begeum app bhi hame kuch parsanse lag rhi he kalse. Ase kya bat he jo apko ander hi ander khye jarhi he.

Jodha: ase koi bat nhi he shensha hum ne apko batya thana kal ke mosum ke vaj she hame kuch becheneshi horhi he. Dekhiye na ketne thand he. Asi vajshe hum asvashth lag rhe he. Humne aushadiya leli he hum bhut jald thik hojayge. Phikar ke koi bat nhi he shensha.

Jalal (Thought): hum jante he jodha begum ke app ham she joth bol rhi he. Par hum ish vseme or jyada puch kar apko or pareshan nhi karge. Kyoki hum jante he app jo bhi karege shi hi karge.

Jodha (Thought): hume maf kardejye shansha ke hume apshe bat chupanipad rhi he. Par ketni ajeb bat he na shensha hum done ak dusre ko vachan diya tha ke hum ek dusre se koi bhi bat nhi chupayege. Aur aje hum ak dushre she he bate chupa rhe he.

Salima begum Arrival

Salima begum: adab shensha. Adab jodha begum

Jodha: pranam salima begum.

Jalal: kya hua salima begum app shubhe shubhe yaha?

Salima begum: je shensha hame abhi abhi moti bai se pata chala ke jodha begum ke halat nashasj he. To hum unhe dekhne unke hojare me gyete. Unke bandhi ne hume btya ke wo yaha he to hum yaha cale aye. Abb apki halat keshi he jodha begum.

Jodha: je hum thikh he. Wese humare ladle shejade murad khahe. Danial bhi nhi dikye de rhe. Wese shensha ek bat batye apko apke samne to kuch nhi bol te. Par jeshi app yaha se jate he wo dono prashad ke dadoo ke leye ek dusre she ladi kar na suru kar dete he. Hum jeetne ladoo thal me rakhe kum padte he. Aur app to jante hi he danial ko ladoo kitne pasand he. Ishe liye murad unhe ash bat par satate he. Un dono ko eshe ladte dekh esha lagta he ke wo abh bhi bache he. Par apne abbujaan ke samne dono ke bolte bandh ho jate he.

Salima begum: jodha begum bilkul shi kehrhi he shensha. Kabhi kabhi un dono ke bachpane ko dekh kar hume bhi hashi ajate he.

Jodha: ek baat khe salima begum uger apne salim ke jane ke bad murad ke jimmedari hume na de hoti to hum na jane apne app ko kese sambhal te. Hum salim ke bena ake pal bhi nhi reh pa rhe the. Appne murad ke jimmedari hume somp kar hum par bhut bada ehsaan kiya he salima begum. Murad or baki bachone kabhi bhi hume salim ke kami mehsoosh nhi hone de. Varna ye sade pannch sal humri jindgi ke keshe kat te hum?

Salima begum: eshme ehsaan ke koi bat nhi he jodha begum. Weshe bhi murad bhi to aphi ke bete he jodha begum. App unki badi ammijan he. Balki wo to apko apni masha mante he. Aur ishi liye wo apno masha kehkar pukar te he. Or sirf murad hi nhi balki danial bhi apko masha khkar pukar te he. Sath me qutub aur haider bhi apko apni badi ammijan ke tarh mante he. Un sabke liye app unke ammijan she bhi bad ker he.

Jalal: salima begum shi kh rhi he jodha begum. Hum ne khi bar mhsosh kiya he jodha begum danial, qutube, aur haider koi bhi parshani ko lekur apni ammijan ke pas jane ke bajye wo apke pass ate he. Kyo ki uhe pata he ki unki jodha ammijan unshe behad mohabbat karte he. Wo unhe har parshani me madad kargi. Aur Murad ko to app janti hi he. Wo to apke pass apni choti se choti bat lekar apke pass ate he.agur rukiya begum apko kuch mamle ko leker kehde to wo rukiya begum se bhi naraj ho jate he. Unke rehte kishi ki majal jo koi app ko kuch keh jay.

Murad: kyo ki hamme pata he shensha huamri masha kuch galt nhi kar sati. Wo kishi ke bhi shath kuch burani ho ne desakti. Adab shensha adab amijjan. (jodha ke per chukar) adab masha. Humara prashad masha.Weshe kya baate horhi thi humare bare me ammijan.

(Jodha give prashad to murad)

salima begum: hum aur shensha jodha begum ko bata rhethe ke app sub bacahe unshe kitni mohbbat karte he.

Jalal: app bhut khushnshib he jo apko do - do maa o ka pyar nshib hua he.

Murad (tears in eyes): app such kehrhe he abbujjan. Hum bhut khushnshib he jo hume salima ammijjan aur jodha masha jeshi maa ye mile he. Hum ne apni janum dene vali mako to nhi dekha. Hum unke bare me khuch nhi jante par hum itna jarur jante he ke wo bhi hume itna pyar nhi karte jeetna ye dono humshe kar te he. Humre liye ye dono aur app hi humari duniya ho. Agur hume firshe ish dharti par janum lene ka mouka mila to hum dua karte he ke hume inn done ke kokhe se janam mile aur hum iss dunia me aye.

Jalal: hume appki bate sunke badi khushi hui. Ke app apni dono ammijan ko kitna pyar karte he. Acha abb hume agya dijye. Hume siayshe mashlope todarmal shab aur raja birbal se kuch bat karni he. App loge bat kijye.

Precap: Murad know about Jodha and salim issue.

So guys how was update. Sorry for posting in Hindi. Actually I was writed 5 cahpters already in my dairy befor starting posting story on forum. And I try but its take long time to translate and post word to word. And I promise you I post today. So next time I post in Hindi and English both. Thank you so much for giving such a nice respone. I not expected this much response.

Edited by cuty1997 - 10 years ago

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