Milan abhi adha adhora hai MG os surprisedno 2 on page 48 -7 june

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1. Milan abhi adha adhoora hai
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2.Love Touch and Injury
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part 2 -page 48
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os Milan abhi adha adhoora hai

Maaneet enetered in Maan house with all ritual yes today maan and geet get married its arrange marriage ,its arriange marriage and its happen in month because of maan job ,he have to go to other country for 3 year so jhat magni pat shadi ,all teasing maan ,because he is small yet devil member of family and now all taking badala on him making him shy shy with non stop teasing at last all ritual finish and maan take deep breath and look to his bride who looking breth taking in her briadal attire it is so hard to maan look away from her and now a thought that he going to spend time or night with his newly wedded wife so many goosbump giving to her body , he looking to her dark cheek which r turning more and more red with all teasing

He know how shy is geet because in their 3 4 meet and phone he is one who always chatting and she reply in hu , ha yes , /...like that so it is treat to maan but he want to heard her moan ...he snirk with his thought but just than some one pull his ear , he give dead glare to that person who s stop gazing to his own wife and he mummer what the he...but his all word died in mouth when he saw person it is his dadi who holding his ear maan cribedd dadi aj meri shadi hui hai

Dadi to ...main to tumare pota poti birth lenge tabhi tere aise hi kaan kitchungi samja

Maan - wo tab honge jab app muje meri biwi ke sath akel chod denge ...maan mummer in soft voice so dadi can not hear but geet hear that and deep her head more down like there is some beautiful things on floor

Dadi to kya karu kab se tumko awaj de rahi hu lakin tumara dhan hi nahi hai , chalo utho and went to adi bhi room

Maan feel like he heard something wrong he say dadi I cannot hear properly what u say

Dadi say with serious face maan I am saying go and sleep to your adi bhai room samje now maan eyes turn big in shock but how he will ask that why he sleeping in other room ...and what about geet kya unki SR adi bhai ke room main ,maan chided on his own thought and mummer maan to pagal ho raha hai

At last he call his mother ,mama dekho dadi kya bol rahi hai ...

Mom - kya maan maaji sahi bol rahi hai u have to sleep in other room because till pooja u can not start husband wife relation in all sense , tomorrow u have to visit our kul devata place than third day pooja than u get your room back till than u r sleeping in adi room and geet in your room get it

Maan make such face like he unwrapped chocolate for eating and some one snatch that from him poor boy ...his all dreams pooor boy

Other side anni come near geet and say her to come with her maan look to going geet from his side ,he thought ye kya ritual hai ,jaise sabse payyari cheez samne rakho and restriction isko 3 din tak chuna mana hai maan with havey heart wentto adi room and cried ye kya hai bhai

Adi say - ritual hai maan , sabko follow karni padti hai

Maan - pane bhi ki thi , bhai its so hard when u know she in your house , than how ...maan cried again

Adi ruffed his hair and say ,why u taking all negative , married hoke bhi u have a chance of adha ishq ,pura na sahi lakin adha to ...and mark my word ye 3 days tumare life ke sabse yaadgar pal banege

Jab hamara pyaar samne hota hai aur hum sab ke samne luka chupi ka khel kehalte hai , wo chupke se nazoro ka milna , wo chota sa touch , sab ke samne anjan banana , wo ajeeb si hichkichat aur same time attraction also , wo ek duze main kho jana

Adi word make maan realize that yes ,he never thought about this side ...maan lakin adi bhai ab main kya change karu mere kapade

Don't worry beta ye lo with that his mom entered with his things which he need in night,

Maan - love u mom , oh mom wo thik to hai na wo bidai ke time is she alone

Mo m and adi give teasing look to maan ...maan make serious face main to ,just like that

Mom ,hu adi kya mobile ise restriction main aata hai kya adi make such thinking face and say mobile let me think , nahi ma nahi aata

Next moment maan hug mother and pick her cheek and say thanks mama u r world best mama

Other side geet who sleeping with pinky in guest room beacue all want maaneet entered in their room together ,geet now also feel maan nearness ,his touch and teasing gaze she one side feel relief that she get three day for adjust with her new life and other side she start to miss her husband maan

He is talkative but after getting her shy nature he make distance and never try to touchy touchy unnecessary she remind maan puppy face like kid when ma say about ritual she mummer cute so cute

feel write this so hope u will enjoy it

part 2
Sleppp is away from maaneet eyes thou geet took deep breath that she get more 3 days for adjust her in new life with her husband poor girl don't aware of that what she have to face ...from maan (Mahi Blushing) devil maan intension ...geet lost in their past moment thou because of her shy nature maan don't try to touch her but his eyes that touch her soul also his intense gaze geet cheek turn red in shyness ...same time her phone viberate and she look who is such late naight and get shock its maan

She first look to pinky who sleeping other side ,with shaking hand she open massage its from maan

Tu chupi hai kaha main tadapta yaha

With crying smiley , a smile come on geet face , she mummer babaji

But now she is fix reply du ki nahi ager du to kya du she playing with mobile butten ,and froze with pinky voice ans de do geet nahi to wo yahi aa jayega reply ke liye

Geet - shuttered and shy with sudden voice of pinky poor girl turn more in red color

Geet just reply huuu

Pinky - ok now me sleeping sachi wali u continued

Geet reply - gn maanji kal morning main jaldi uthana hai

Within 30 second she again found another massage

"hum to humara haal a dil suna rahe hai

Lakin unko to sone ki padi ,hum to ish adoori

Raaat ke baar main souch rahe hai aur wo'

To raat chod din ke pitch lage hai"

Geet read that and mummer maanji bhi na she reply him ,

malum hai ye raat abhi adhori hai alkin kal ki subha ko to hume intazzar hai ku ki wo subha humko ...hamre kisi ko humse mila degi

Maan again re read massage he was not expecting such massage from geet he bold out but he massage her

wo so mrs. Khurana ko kisi ko milna hai morning main is liye ha can I know who is that lucky person

Geet - hu ...hum naam nahi bolenge bas apko clue denge app pata kigiye

Wo hai sath sath pata nahi kitne sadiyo se

Koi na puch unko ko ke rista hai unka

Wo hai ek duze bina adhoore ,unka hai

Itna gehara rishata lakin ajeab ek baat hai

Koi naam nahi hai rishte ka ...

Lakin wahi denge apne rishto ko ...ek nayi surwat (start)

Maan try to get clue ,ye kya hai geet ko kisko milna at last he sleep with thinking itself and in early morning around 5 adi start to wake up him ...and poor boy mummer please geet sone do na ...and adi giggle on maan and slap him hard on shoulder and maan wake up with jurk and give confused look to adi

Adi - little bro abhi three day hai , geet tuze uthane ke liye tab tak apne bro se hi kaam chala lo

Maan cried adi bro please ek to biwi hai jo romtic massage dene se jada puzzal deti hai aur app early morning meri need kharab kar rahe ho , wo to mujse jada kisi aur ko milne ke liye bakarar hai

Adi - ask with strin voice ...maan

Maan - ok ok bro don't angry dekho app hi bolo iska matlab

Adi read that 3 4 time and slap maan head and say geet is brilllent than u

Maan make pout like small baby bro...

Adi sit near him and say she want to go our radha krishna mandir our family god

Jinke rishte ka koi naam na hoke bhi wo sabse attot rishta hai buddu msk samje

Maan get awww with geet word ...she saying about radha Krishna ...their blessing for them

Maan run to bathroom to bath and all ,he want to look once to her ...he in theft leg reach near guest room and his leg frozen on entrance itself she is standing in front of mirror in red salwar with sindoor and small manglesutra but in minimum jwel and make up also she is looking divine ...maan lost in beauty which is in front of him

Maan come out from geet dream world when someone tap his shoulder but maan shruggel his shoulder

Than someone mummer pyyri hai na

Maan mummer hu bahot pyyari

Other person voice - to maan bhar gaya dekh ke

Maan - kaha nahi na mann to kya kya karna chahata hai

Acha and some grab his ear , that brake maan gaze he cried ahhh

And look to person its pinky bhabhi who asking all to him

Pinky - maan deverji kya bol rahe ho app ha

Maan now come in his mode and say wahi jo adi bahi bole the apke liye kuch salo pehele

And before pinky get meaing of his word he kiss pinky forehead looking to geet who is looking to them after pinky maan voice

He passed massage thru his eyes ye kiss kis ke liye hai and geet cheek start to get hot she bend her head

Here maan run to kitchen , all set for travel adi and pinky going with maaneet along with their son Vicky ,maan wnet to kitchen and hug her mom , say gm mom miss u so much

Geet and pinky who also come behind him geet look to him and his word and his gaze she get this word for her

Mom - acha ji wo ku bhala ,main to yahi thi na kahi gayi bahi nahi ,she make so innocent face

Maan cired kya mom main apko miss nahi kar sakta kya

Mom - ha wo to hai lakin aj se pehel u don't say like this na so

Maan hug agin mother and kya app bhi ma aj laga aise bolne ko bol diya

Mom - oh oh mera pyyar beta ,now stop your nautanki jisko ye massage dena tha na usko ye massage send ho gaya hai \

Dekh uske dress se jada red to uske cheek laga rahe hai ku pinky thik hai na

Poor geet bend her head and start to bite her bottom lips in shyness , maan so want to stop her and say why she torchering his property ...

Mom slap maan on head chal abho dono milke took blessing from god than so u can start your journey but sabko dhood pike nikalna hai and no excuse samje she say with streen voice all nodded like child

And in next 5 to 10 min all settal in car driver in front along with nakul ,on next sit adi and pinky and on last sit maaneet poor geet in shyness sit away from maan near window her heart start to make dhak dhak , he is looking so dashing in jeans and t shirt ,she can not stop herself to look to his side

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part 3

And in next 5 to 10 min all settle in car driver in front along with nakul ,on next sit adi and pinky and on last sit maaneet poor geet in shyness sit away from maan near window her heart start to make dhak dhak , he is looking so dashing in jeans and t shirt ,she can not stop herself to look to his side

She pray babaji please sambhal lena kuch galat na kar du

(mahi thinking don't worry geet tumarha galat maan ke liye

Sahi hoga )

She feel like her hand turning cold with tension

Other side maan who sit totally confatable ,when he saw geet sitng so away from him ,he mummer kya wife hai yaar , ye itna dur bet jaayei to jo thoda bahot touch karne ka chance milega uska kya ...please godji madat and like god lesion his pray and vicky adi son come with cry face cachu I want to sit here near this winow ,ma papa ke pass nahi

Maan want to make bhagra like mann main laddo foota he took vicky and make him sit near window now vicky sit one window in middel maan and one side geet ,now maan smirk

What will u do now wify

After few min vicky sleep in his place itself and maan cover him with shwal and start to look to geet side without her knowledge because of vicky when maan little come near her she feel so many butterfly dancing in her tummy ,her one hand in between maan and her

Maan once gaze to pinky and adi and driver and touch geet hand with his long finger poor girl gasp with shock and voice come out from her mouth pinky ask with care kya hua geet

Geet expecting maan should take his hand back but he engaroled his finger with her more firmly first maan finger

Little touch send a gosebump from her body and now he totally took her hand in his hand

Maan smirk on geet like give ans mrs geet handa and poor geet mumer I soft voice kuch nahi di main wo aise hi ...

Pinky again closed her eyes and geet took her breath she forget to take breath , because maan start to make pattern on her mehandi hand just caressing her mehandi design poor girl

Closed her eyes in shyness

Maan touch she bite her lips to stop her moan at last maan

Give some mercy but he bend little near geet ear and mummer

In husky voice geet oh she found her name so beautiful in maan mouth ...abhi to main sirf haat (hand) ko chua hai abhi to bahot kuch...he stop there and say take a breath mrs khurana poor girl want to run from their but other

Side she liking it also

Geet took deep breath and put her head on window she closed her eyes to escape from maan teasing eyes and when she herself don't get her eyes closed with sleep but maan found her head moving with car speed ,he sit near her so she put her head on maan shoulder geet press herself more into maan for feel more worm maan chukeel with her move and mummer agar jagi hui hoti hai to window pakadti hai now look

He adjust his camera and take pic he know it will help him for teasing her she looking so beautiful some hair start disturbed her in sleep .maan put that behind ear and mummer beautiful misty her rosy lips he so want to touch it test it

Mummer control maan contro more two day after all is yours

Adi stop car near hotel for fresh up and brake fast and pinky turn to called maaaneet but stop while when she look maaneet sleep so closed to each other she mummer kitane sweet lag rahe hai dono hai na adi

Adi - jago inko thoda kha lege ,pinky mummer ok u go I will

Pinky - maan , maan and maan open his eyes look to pinky pinky pointed to hotel and sleeeping geet tilll now adi went with vicky to give order ,maan nodded in yes and pinky went from there

Maan try to call softely geet ,geet but she more pressing herself in him in sleep , maan mummer geet ut jao ise se pehale main kcuh kar betu ,geet face so closed him making him so crazy with nearness of geet

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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so dear tale me konsi yaade taza ho gayi
u know me and my reader r so innocent 😉
hai na mommy ke bacho ...
part 4
Maan try to call softely geet ,geet but she more pressing herself in him in sleep , maan mummer geet ut jao ise se pehale main kcuh kar betu ,geet face so closed him making him so crazy with nearness of geet she pressing herself more to him

He feel he will do something which he don't have to doen before their pooja

At last some how he control his flowing desire and little loudly called geet utho and that work she open her beautiful hazal to loook around and look source of voice and get shutter with ...that she almost in maan hug both so near to each other she blush hard and mummer sorry

In soft voice she is really embarrassed

Naughty maan just bend to her ear and mummer

My pleaser mrs khurana , we have to go for BF they r waiting for us

Poor geet nooded in yes and she come out from car thou maan want to hold her and so many things but he have to wait but he loving this hide and seek romance

Geet went to washroom with pinky and joined adi and maan

Maan gaze on his lady and pinky smile on maan antic she bend little to maan and mummer , deverji stop to eat my devrani with your eyes

Maan smile on bhabhi teasing and look other side to hide his smile

Same time he saw something stuck near geet lips and maan stand from his chair and went near geet and cup her face and and try to eat that food which stuck near her lips he going to touch his lips near geet lips someone slap on his back and he look back ...

Poor boy found himself on chair itself and adi slap on his back

Adi - maan fisnish your Bf we have to move ...

Maan mummer ye lo abhi sapane main bhi restriction

He took deep breath and some how finish his food

All again went to car for further journey and deriver start car but he miss khadda of road and geet bump to maan she lost balance maan hold her shoulder geet look to his choclate eyes and lost in it same time song start on radio

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain gup-chup gup-chup chup chup...

do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke...

sabko ho rahi hai haan sabko ho rahi hai khabar chupke chupke

Secretly, silently...

Two hearts are meeting, but quietly.

Everyone is noticing; yes, everyone is quietly noticing.

Geet come out from la la land and when she found maan not pulling off his hand he mummer softly I am ok ...apke haat (Hand ) than maan come out from his dream world and pull his hand from geet shoulder geet again settle in her sit sshe start to play with her dupaata with her finger and maan mummer in soft voice huuu lucky dupaata usko jo itna attention and pyyar mil raha hai poor geet trun her face to window to hide her shy face

After one hour journey they stop to first temple and all come out maaneet and adipinky took pooja thal from shop and went in temple pinky ask poojari to bless new wedded couple and maaneet took blessing from god and poojari

That place was so beautiful and peaceful, geet realy like that place and she want to spend some time there only but how she ask it ...hear maan try to read her face he get she want to say smoothing but not saying or stoping herself

At last maan sms her mrs khurana u can say your wish

Geet get surprise with maan sms , how he read her mind she answer she want to spend some time here and maan nodded in yes

Maan - bhai kya hum log yaha kuch der aur ruk sakte hai , adi who want to say no but stop with maan eyes who pointed geet and get that its geet wish he nodded in yes and maan mouthed thanks to adi

Maan - bro hum log ek chakar laga kar aate hai

Adi - ha lakin jaldi aana

Pinky give teasing look to geet and geet bite her lips for control her smile and blush

do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke

saanson mein bari bekaraari

aankhon mein kayi raat jage

kabhi kahin lag jaaye dil to

kahin phir dil na lage

Two hearts are meeting, but quietly and secretly.

Their breaths are unsteady;

they've stayed away nights on end

Sometimes when you fall in love

you aren't pleased by anything.

Booth hearth start to sound dhak dhak for little time but they r alone with each other ,both r silent like searching for word or they don't need any word ku ki unki khomoshi bhi baate karni lagi thi both try to hold their heart which r all ready to run each other ...both enjoying nature with silence and same time maan hand slightly touch to geet but its give goosebump to them

apne dil mein zaraa thaam luun

jaadu ka main ise naam duun

jaadu kar rahaa hai asar chupke chupke

I'll just keep hold of my heart,

since I recognize that this is magic.

Quietly the magic is taking effect.

do dil mil rahe hain ...

Now both some near a water fall and sit near for while and start to look each other wih theft eyes

aise bhole bankar hai baithe

jaise koi baat nahin

sab kuchh nazar aa rahaa hai

din hai yeh raat nahin

They sit so innocently,

as if there's nothing at all going on.

But everything is apparent (to those around them).

This is broad daylight, not the dark of night.

Like playing hide and seek game , some time maan looking to her sometime geet looking to him , when bothe gaze meet each other they start to talk with their eyes same time some water drop fall on geet face and in sun light its start to look like dimmmond on her face maan so much want to suck that drops with his lips and he don't know when he bend near geet face , he stop just inch away from her face when geet bangel make voice he closed his eyes and mummer ohhh geet ye do din kab khatam honge ...

kya hai kuchh bhi nahin hai agar

honthon pe hai khaamoshi magar

baatein kar rahi hain nazar chupke chupke

do dil mil rahe hain...

What is it, if it's nothing at all?

Their lips are silent, but...

silently their glances speak to each other.

Two hearts are meeting, but quietly and secretly.

with maan question geet look to maan and lost in his love full eyes who looking her with so much love she so much want to touch his M shape lips ...with her hand ,finger ...

kahin aag lagne se pahale

uthta hai aisa dhuwan

jaisa hai idhar ka nazaara vaisa hi udhar ka samaa

dil mein kaisi kasak si jagi

donon jaanib baraabar lagi

dekho to idhar se udhar chupke chupke

Before flames burst into life,

smoke like this arises.

And it looks just like it does right here.

What an ache awakes in the heart!

Both sides seem (to feel it) equally.

Look from one to the other, silently.

do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke

sabko ho rahi hai khabar chupke chupke

part 5 on page 19

part 6 on page 21

part 7 on page 26

part 8 on page 29

surprised on page 40

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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congratz 4 d new OS mahi🥳
maaneet got married its arrange marriage😃
maan was eagerly waitng 4 his SR bt daadi ne bomb daaldiya😆
maaneet cant start their martial journey till dey do sm rutials nd it ill take 3days😲 bechara maan😭
maan is sharng room wit adi nd adi made him 2 understand hw 2 make these 3 days bful😳
maan's mom gave idea of phone ❤️
otherside geet is also thinkng abt maan😳
waitng 4 d nxt part mahi update soon
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woww..mommy new os
bechara maan...🤣sarae plan pe pani..pusss😆
dadi from cupid to devil😈
and maan is youngest..hayee...loved it😃
i think adi k sath bhi aisa hua hai...bade experience se baath karaha hai😆
superb mommy👏




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Lovely start..
Poor Maan kya kya plans banaye the aur saare paani mein mil gaye..
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awesome os...
maan talkative.. and geet shy...👏
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Aww this is so cute... loved it...
Waiting for the next part.
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