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Sethu parvathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Oh My Paro!!! Long time, sweetie!! Thanks a lot, dear!!!

I kno...very longg tym!!! I hardly see u online!!! Missin u sweetheart!!! 😭

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Krishnaa Nair Kooriyil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#392

updated my post on pg 50

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LiveYourDream

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Posted: 10 years ago

#393

could not play the song and read the update at the same time until now!!
Just great Yagya!!
I loved this line "Every heart-beat of her had his shadow on it and his every cell had her name"
And the song was superb...with every word you wrote adding more meaning to it!!

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ayu_8

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Posted: 10 years ago

#394

hellooo jiji... !

not happy to see that u havnt updated much... ur readers will loose the track of it!

anyways... what if there arent quantity of updates... but i do get a quality of updates from u...

no comments for ParYa😉👏

update soon... no such pressure!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti
last both updates were beautifully written😊👏
u know somewhere I felt shy tht I am sensing the private emos of my devar nd Devrani😳
nd I ws gonna even PM u tht in the update avoid songs bt u did it so without my PM😊 I did nt bcoz I felt its ur FF i shouldnt interfere😛
I liked jab u both were immersed into each other
Srry 4 nt being here this is something I miss lot when way frm FF😳

Are you trying to embarrass me by saying this, Jethanijee? All my readers can always suggest, dear!! Hope to see your comments more often!! Thanks a lot, darling!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
This Was So Beautiful !! The Dance Performance Was Brilliant ! Hope The "Shubh Punah Milan" Will Happen Soon Enough ! But The Best Part Here Is, The First Line, Where You Very Efficiently Personified Time ! Loved That !

Very glad that you liked that first line, dear!! I was nervous for that!! It will happen very soon now!! Take this as a official declaration from my side!! Thanks a lot, dear!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
could not play the song and read the update at the same time until now!!
Just great Yagya!!
I loved this line "Every heart-beat of her had his shadow on it and his every cell had her name"
And the song was superb...with every word you wrote adding more meaning to it!!

Come on, Mamta! You will have to read it in the signature way for me!! Thanks a lot, dear!! That sentence has a lot of meaning for me!! I take a sensual song to make it poignant, who does that!! I might be khoonifying the original meaning!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: ayu_8
hellooo jiji... !
not happy to see that u havnt updated much... ur readers will loose the track of it!
anyways... what if there arent quantity of updates... but i do get a quality of updates from u...
no comments for ParYa😉👏
update soon... no such pressure!

I was busy, Ayu!! As per my updating schedule, I update this FF once a week!! And all my FFs get updates only once a week!! Or else I would have died writing updates for 5 FFs!! Thanks a lot, dear!! Means a lot!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair
after a long time u gave a pleasant one with less pain update dear...

n the song selection was too good!!!

i can totally imagine "her" in red saree n "him" in white doing this!!! 😆 😉
i'm not gonna swim in pain here.. rather i'm enjoying the flow of this story!!!! now take it to the next level!!!

c'mon dear!!! its Christmas lets make a celebration!!

Oh Yes, Meery Christmas, Di!! I so forgot to wish all of you, I guess!! Aage aage you will have a lot more updates which may have pleasure rather than a pleasant feeling!! Thanks a lot, Di!!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#400

Part 46:
The never stopping time halted for these star-crossed lovers. The compromising pose had no effect on their heartbeats or breaths for they now ere ruled by each other.
The last pose of the previous song, became the initiation of the next.

Kaate nahi katate ye din ye raat
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Kaate nahi katate ye din ye raat
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Lo aaj main kehta hoon i love you

Never was such a day which passed without the thoughts of each other, and never was a night, which was spent without pining for each other, but the sweet words which their hearts ached to listen, their souls shuddered to be touched with, remained unsaid.

Koi nahi bas tum ho saath
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Koi nahi bas tum ho saath
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Lo aaj main kehti hoon i love you

Physically bound to be apart, mentally apart to be bound, emotionally they were bound together. When thoughts scared, memories haunted, it was only their mental presence that soothed each other, but not even in dreams did take place this confession.
Kaisi hava hai dhuli dhuli
Aaj fiza hain khuli khuli

Saara nazaara naya naya
Saara nazaara naya naya
Dil ne pukaara piya piya
Dil ne pukaara piya piya

Tumne jo li angdaai hai
Phir baat vahi yaad aayi hai
Lo aaj main kehta hoon i love you

A sensualistic dance, which seduced people to a painful extent, was actually a pain to a unconfessed, unnamed and maybe unrecognized love. Not that they didn't recognize their love, but none of them could ever differentiate between love or pain, in their feelings. Hearts wrenched, romance bloomed but love, remained unexpressed.

Mahaka mahaka tera badan
Bahaka bahaka mera ye man
Chhalaka chhala ka roop tera
Halka halka nasha mera

Kah doon jo dil mein hai mere
Lo aaj main kehti hoon i love u

The sensual swaying of their perfectly toned bodies, which showed the way of their relationship which was always swinging between love and pain, the fast pacing of their hearts, which showed their love, a figure which allured, a love which attracted, a magic which spread was picturized in every pose they made, every lift and every twirl.

Kaate nahi katate ye din ye raat
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Koi nahi bas tum ho saath
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Lo aaj main kehta hoon i love you

Lady in red, with a bleeding heart which sang out the rhyme of love and the man in white, whose heart crystal clear, broken to make a sound of love. Will this love ever be heard by each other? Will the noise made by each other's heart, reach to their pining souls? Will love...win?
---TBCHope you liked it!! One more update close to my heart!! Why am I doing this to all sensual songs of B'Wood!! O Mere Govind

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago