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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
THANK U VERY MUCH gujibabe AND GLAD THAT U LIKE IT...... 😊

THANK U VERY MUCH SAKSHI FOR WONDERFUL COMMENT 😊


THANK U FOR UR COMMENT shivgauri BUT DUN'T WORRY SHIV IS JUST PLAYING WITH IPSHITA AND HE IS NEVER INTERESTED IN HER OK N LIKE UR USERNAME SHIVGAURI, SHIV IS ONLY FOR GAURI 😃

THANX U FOR READING THE FANFIC N I M VERY APPRECIATE THAT U LIKE THE STORY Akaur.... 😃 SORRY FOR MAKING U WAIT BUT NOW I HAEV ALREADY POST THE 4TH PART SO DUN'T FORGET TO COMMENT...........

THANK U nihita N I M VERY HAPPY THAT U LIKE MY FANFIC 😛

THANK U VERY MUCH FOR THE COMMETN mint fresh N I HAEV ALREADY POST IT THE 4TH PART SO DUN'T FORGET TO COMMENT IT 😃


I M SO SORRY FOR MAKING U WAIT pritig BUT THANX FOR THE COMMENT 😃

KALSANG THANK U VERY VERY MUCH FOR THE COMMENT N ESPECIALLY THE SECOND COMMENT 😛 N I HAVE POST THE 4TH PART SO COMMENT OK




HEY GUYS THANKS FOR THE PATIENTS AND REALLY SORRY FOR THE DELAY N GUYS DUN'T FORGET TO COMMENT 😛 😛 😊


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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
this shiv is so !!!pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
kewl going ha!! and the change makes it sound more exciting!!! wonderful going and keep it up!! continue soon 😊 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
thanx 4 updatin
shiv is so big-headed but im sure gauri will change that!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
thanx shivgauri,SAKSHI and akaur for the comments 😃... so here is the part hope u guys like it n leave comements.... 😃


PART 5
Shiv was really angry 😡 😡 about what Gauri said to him. It was the first time a student has speaks towards him. he thought that y didn't he do anything that time he should have hit her but y was his hand was not responding to him.. 😕 😕 He thinks in his mind that this girl is really strong and thinks that he won't kick her out of this school but he would give her lots of hard time that she will leave this school herself n also make her life misreable.....so wad if she is kavya sis , he dun't give a damn cuz she has cross her limits now.

Consequently, she gets tagged and experiences all sorts of pranks and harassment from the other students. Exhausted, she goes to the rooftop and screams her hearts out at shiv and curses Shiv, not knowing that one of his friends is there, listening.


After hearing from his friend, Shiv promise to bully her even more. He also asked some of his friend to burn all her books. But still she vows not to be defeated.

Shiv also becomes really tired. Then one of his friend tells him that how about try to act that you love her and she might also love you. If she becomes so crazy for you, just break her heart by breaking the relationship.

Shiv: Thanks dude, that's a great idea. You got a big brain yo!!!

Friend: Shiv, I can think anything for you.

Shiv: Thanks a lot!!!! I need to know everything about wooing a girl.

Friend: Yes sir. I will do all the things.

Then it was their last period at school, Anjali and Gauri are doing some project when Gauri's Laptop gets rob by a student. Shiv comes and kicks the robber and takes the laptop and gives it to Gauri. (It was his entire plan actually.)




Gauri feels a little bit happy but Anjali tells her don't fall for him. You know what he has done for you n me. Gauri agrees with Anjali. Gauri tells promise me Anjali not to tell her family about Shiv .Anjali promises not to tell about Shiv too. And she doesn't think about him. At home, she just thinks about what happen today. Sujal comes and ask her whether she is okay or not. A girl comes into Gauri's room and she tells her that I am Anjali's sister. My name is Kashish Sharma.

Kashish: I am here to return the book that you borrowed to Anjali. She went to mall with mom so she asks me to return this book to you.

Gauri: My name is Gauri and this is my brother Sujal. ***Cough Cough*** 😉 😉

Kashish: I heard a lot about you Gauri from Anjali. So sometimes come to our apt ok

Gauri : Okay sure..

Kashish: Hey sujal..you study at Ryerson College rite.

Sujal: Yap..I saw you there yesterday.

Kashish: Ok then I have to go. See you bye.

Gauri and Sujal: Bye

Gauri taunts Sujal by saying that she is really nice rite….she will look really good with you. Sujal tells her that she is really beautiful, I like her the day I first saw her at college. Kashish hears everything what sujal said because she came back to get her keys which was left there. She smiles at Sujal and Sujal was so shy about what he said about her.




At school,

Gauri was reading books at library when Shiv comes there and says sorry to her for everything he did to her. Gauri reminds what Anjali said to her into her mind. She just neglects him. Shiv gives her an invitation of a party at this school. (He is thinking that he is gonna insult her at the party because these middle class wears some kurta and salwar.) Shiv tells her that I want to forget what ever happen between us so wannabe fren. Gauri just neglects him. Shiv thinks into his mind (tough girl). Gauri runs to Anjali and ask whether she is going to the Paty or not.

Anjali: I love party and I am so excited to go. And did u get the invitation.

Gauri: I got the invitation from Shiv. I really don't want to go to his party.

Anjali: Just forget him. You just have to enjoy. I will be with you every time and Kavya would be there too. So don't be afraid.

It was the party night, every students from the school was there. Shiv was waiting with his friends and Ipshita at the front door for Gauri. Kavya comes and Shiv asks her where is your date?

Kavya: You didn't tell us that we have to bring dates…

Shiv: So you mean that you dun have date..( Shiv's Friends laughs)

Kavya: No no..My date is here.

He pulls Anjali from the side and tells shiv that here's my date. Anjali kinda felt nice and she smiles at Kavya. shiv apologize anjali about the earlier incident.Shiv asks Anjali that where is your that fren Gauri.. She will be coming.

A girl from a car comes and Shiv and all the frens gets shocked. One of Shiv's fren tells him that who is this new sexy girl?
Shiv: Ipshita, you are now dumped officially by shiv.( 😆)Now go away. Act like I and you never met. And he tells his entire friend that that new girl is mine. Mukti was near shiv and she heard shiv dumbed ipshita and she was very happy. She told the break up to anupam and anupam told other person and the break up spread all over the party............

Shiv goes to the girl and tells hey sexy. When the girl turns around and it was Gauri. Shiv steps back. Gauri looked so beautiful. Shiv becomes totally shocked. and was Mesmerized by her beauty....

Shiv: Gauri, Tum

Gauri: What happen, it's me Gauri..

She just goes away from him and enters the party. She feels bit bored because she didn't had any partner. Shiv comes and ask her for dance but she tells him no.

Gauri: I am not interested in dancing with you.

Shiv feels really embarrassed because no other girls have ever rejected him. He feels really angry too. Shiv goes in front of the stage and tells everybody that Gauri is my new girl. Everybody claps and cheers for them. gauri was first scared that wad if kavya bhai have heard wad shiv said...... she called anjali and ask them where they are when anjali said she is at home cuz she have headache so kavya gave her lift to home.... gauri was relieved and she rejects shiv and storm off, leaving a bewildered Shiv behind, not believing she just rejected him!

Tomorrow at school, Shiv thinks about bullying her more and more. He makes her stuck in the washroom and makes her eat fish soup (which tastes awful). Actually she was vegetarian. She gets really sick when she eats fish. Shiv didn't know that she would really get sick by eating fish. Gauri faints in her class while they were having a lecture. Shiv tells the teacher that she is sleeping. Teacher slaps her so hard and asks her to go. But she does not wake up. Anjali screams at teacher and tells him that she is sick and she is unconscious now. Call doctor. Oh my god.



At hospital,

Prerna and Anurag rushed to hospital and ask the doctor if she is ok or not. Doctor tells them that she is very serious now. doctor said: didn't your back home doctor told u that not to give fish to her. I think she ate fish that's why she is really sick. Anjali, Sujal, omi and Kavya gets really worried. Sujal and Omi ask Kavya and Anjali that what happened.

Anjali: I didn't know much but she just felt unconscious in class. She was really sick.

Anjali thinks in her mind that Shiv must have done something. But I shouldn't tell Sujal Bhaiya about this because Gauri told me not tell about Shiv.

Kavya: I was in other class but I didn't know much about that.

Anjali goes to Shiv's house. And there was shiv sleeping in his room. He tells who is this trying to wake me up.

Anjali: You scoundrel , you must have done something to Gauri. What did you do to her?

Shiv: What happened to that gauri now?

Anjali: (cries) Gauri is really sick now and she is really serious. What did you do to her?

Shiv: I just made her stuck in wash room and made her eat the fish soup. How can people get sick by getting stuck in the wash room and eating fish soup?

Anjali: She has allergy with fish. She gets really sick when she eats fish.
Shiv: Oh my god, Nahe mosibad..

Shiv goes to hospital with anjali to see whether she is ok or not. Shiv writes a check of 10,000 dollar and tells anjali that give it to Gauri's parents for her medicines.

At hospital, Prerna is crying a lot and Anjali ask them whether Gauri is ok or not. Prerna tells her that Gauri is not breathing. Dun Dun Duhhhhh.. Shiv and anjali gets shocked.


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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
😆 the part where Shiv "officially" dumps Ipshitha was so funny 😆

pls continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
ur welcum
and anod amazing prt!
keep it up 😊 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
wats wrong with shiv!!!
poor gauri 😭 😭
ippy got wat she deserved
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
poor gauri. hope she gets well soon.
plz cont soon

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