_*LoVe BiRdS*_*FF* Prt 5 on pg 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys this is my first ff on IF i have read all the ff on this forum n i loved all of them. i have been a slient reader before but now i got this story in my mind n i have to write it down so please do read it n comment me on the mistake i have done so that can improve so if u dun't like it than u can tell me n I will stop writing it ok so plsssssssss bare with me n yeh if there is any mistake than do forgive me do comment n if u like it i will update it tomorrow thanx guys

INTRO

NIKHILA KAPOOR : she is shiv's mother n is very nice n love her family n her husband very much.

MAHEN KPOOR: he is shiv's father n is a very serious man never get time to spend the time with his family as he is very bussy with works.

SHIV KAPOOR: he is 17 years old and he is a flirt. He is a very popular guy in his high school n every girls drool over him but he doesn't even care. He is only child of his parents and very spoilt n always think that he is rite when he is wrong n has lots of attitude. he and his family lived in London.

ANURAG BASU: he is gauri's father and is very loving n caring father n husband. He is now at London and has been in London for three or four years because he want his children to have better educacation so that's y he has been in londn n after 4 days later his family is going to come at London.he and mahen are close friend in the past as they now have forgotten about each other.

PRENA BASU: she is gauri's mother and very loving n caring n loves all her children and miss her husband a lot as he is been in London for three or four years.

SUJAL: he is elder brother of gauri's n he is very cute and very handsome too from all of his brothers. he is 20 years old.he used to go to boarding school but now it is at his own house packing as they will be leaving to london forever. he is very a smart person and is very understanding person n loves his sister n is very protective and is much more like a parents to her than her brother. he is only brother that is very close to his lil sis.

OMI BASU: he is gaur's secound elder brother n is 19 years old. he is very handsome. he annoy gauri a lot. him n gauri are the only one that don't go to boarding school and alway fight for little things as they both are spoilt n at last their mom stop them by hitting them as they always fight they beak something😆😆.
KAVYA BASU: he is gauri youngest brother n is 18 years old and is very handsome and hot,all the girls drool over him but he is drool over his girlfriend Anjali. he used go to boarding school but now he is at his own house as his family is goingt o move to london forever. he loves his sis but never show it n always help gauri in playing pranks n loves soccer.

GAURI BASU: she is 17 years old n love singing. Also loves watching n is a very simple girl as the people thought but who knew her closely would have described her as a naughty child that has spoilt by her three brothers and her parents but specially by her dad. She is the ladli of the house. She loves to watch movies of her favorites actress preity n kajol and she never have missed any of bollywood movies but some of them she has as she didn't like it one bit. She is from a middle class n is from south India. She has a best friend from baby n they are far far cousins. His name is prem.

PREM BAJAJ: he is gauri's best freind from baby and is a 5 month older than her but it look as if he is younger than her cuz she very intelligent than him and always beat him in the test as she get first price, he get second price. he call gauri motti and gauri call him pinky. he is very shy when he was at india but soon he is also going to be at london as his father is also at london as gauri's father so he is soon going to change his attitude at london.

Hey guys once again thank you very much and yeh this part is kind of boring but after the second part it will be funny and there will be more shiv and gauri. And I know there wasn;t much of shiv in these part so sorry….

PART 1

On a bright sunny morning the birds were singing and we see a very big and beautiful house then we hear a big noise from the house that was saying SHIV………then we see nikhila kapoor who was calling her son as he was always late for the school. The camera moves to a bedroom and the bedroom was very clean that as if nobody has ever lived in this bedroom. The we see a huge bed and suddenly somebody stand up but has not shown his face and was murmuring something to himself saying why the hell mom always yell n why can't she not let me sleep peacefully. He yells mom I m coming. The we see his eyes that has angry in them and we see his face expressing a angry look and it is Mr. shiv kapoor n he stomp his angrily walking to his bathroom.

On the other hand we hear a voice saying bhai give me back my remote or else I have no chance but to kill u. the bhai was saying do whatever u want I won't going to give u this remote as I have to watch cricket. The girl saying so what I have to watch kasauti too you know everyday I watch my favorite serial kasauti and today the episode is going to be very good so I want to watch it ok. The bhai shake his head saying nope. She gets very angry and turns around n calls her mommmmmmmmmmmmmmm and it is our gauri. The bhai also show his face and it is omi and he was also laughing seeing his lil sis angry face. Then a lady came who was prena basu n was saying what nowwwww. Gauri told prena that omi won't let her watch kasauti as you know today is going to be a very good episode then prena let omi give the remote to the gauri and they watch kasauti. After they done watching kasauti and eating dinner they went to pack up as tomorrow they are going to London. Prena asked where are their brother when garuri and omi said they went to meet their old friends and hang out………..……

So plllllsssssssss comment guys
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good continue the starting si good
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice story...so shiv if he flits with gauri he will have to face three dashing bros of gauri.....oops shiv becarefull otherwise u land in hospital.

yar cant see shiv as 16 yr old make him 24 yr dude.....omi friend ......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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interesting...pls continue 😳 gauri basu 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!

go for it.. hunnii, please do continue!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys thank you so much for the comment i will start very soon as i have to go to school now so i m getting late n once again thank you very much for ur appreciation
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no worries ... all in good time..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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its very interesting
cont..... soon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very interesting!!!
im confused about 1 thing though
is shivs familiy in london and gauris familiy in india???
continue soon plz!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys once again thank you very much and yeh this part is kind of boring but after the second part it will be funny and there will be more shiv and gauri. And I know there wasn;t much of shiv in these part so sorry 😭 😭 ….

PART 1

On a bright sunny morning the birds were singing and we see a very big and beautiful house then we hear a big noise from the house that was saying SHIV………then we see nikhila kapoor who was calling her son as he was always late for the school. The camera moves to a bedroom and the bedroom was very clean that as if nobody has ever lived in this bedroom. The we see a huge bed and suddenly somebody stand up but has not shown his face and was murmuring something to himself saying why the hell mom always yell n why can't she not let me sleep peacefully. He yells mom I m coming. The we see his eyes that has angry in them and we see his face expressing a angry look and it is Mr. shiv kapoor n he stomp his angrily walking to his bathroom.


On the other hand we hear a voice saying bhai give me back my remote or else I have no chance but to kill u. the bhai was saying do whatever u want I won't going to give u this remote as I have to watch cricket. The girl saying so what I have to watch kasauti too you know everyday I watch my favorite serial kasauti and today the episode is going to be very good so I want to watch it ok. The bhai shake his head saying nope. She gets very angry and turns around n calls her mommmmmmmmmmmmmmm and it is our gauri. The bhai also show his face and it is omi and he was also laughing seeing his lil sis angry face. Then a lady came who was prena basu n was saying what nowwwww. Gauri told prena that omi won't let her watch kasauti as you know today is going to be a very good episode then prena let omi give the remote to the gauri and they watch kasauti. After they done watching kasauti and eating dinner they went to pack up as tomorrow they are going to London. Prena asked where are their brother when garuri and omi said they went to meet their old friends and hang out……….................
So plllllsssssssss comment guys 😃 😃

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