ETF/CID Case SS : Restored Innocence. *Ch 3 pg 11*

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

@ Skrafty : Yipeee 😃 U literally commented first in all my stories *muah* Yeah, yaha Sakshi ka past is marred slightly... and yaha se toh case shuru hota hai - stay tuned dear!

@ Shefu : Haila! Itna bada bada bada comment! *me faint* Thanks a ton 🤗 Kavin is Gaurav Khanna :D Hehe... don't worry... idhar sabki gaddi thodi thodi thodi aage badi hai! Yep both the teams are having their own fun time :D Yep, Jhumpi's death will create the case now!

@ Shivani : Don't worry... har baar Sikki nahi hota na... from here does the story actually start!

Edited by Armagadon - 10 years ago

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Start
Loved it
Amazingly Written
Loved Arjun-Jhumpi-Sakshi moment
Everyone were teasing Abhijeet
Loved CID Team's fun moment
OMG! Jhumpi ki lash...!!!
Continue Sooon
Waiting for the next part

Glad u loved the update so much dear! Stay tuned!

Originally posted by: SeharishFatima
Yippee new story
Awsum starting
Plish cont. Soon
P.s welcome back

Glad u loved it Miss Sassy 😃

Originally posted by: aditiarakshi
awesome update
Sakshi seems to have a painful past
love ETF n CID moments
love Arjun-Jhumpi-Sakshi moments
jhumpi dead 😲
par kisne use mara aur kyun???
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon😊

Kisne aur kyun, yeh next update pe pata chal jayega! Stay tuned and thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: Areesha566
oh wow mere tow fav shows ek sath😃🥳
amazing and superb start arma di👏
cid part was funny
sakshi😭
no sikender???
toh phir woh sab kisne kiya?
what no hp? ummm i like him, plz usey bhi include karo
arma di juldi wapis aao
missing you soo much😭

Glad u luvd it chutki! HP??? Will try to come back jaldi :)

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: meera851
Update next part soon
Ab aage kya hoga

Thanks dear! Stay tuned

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
res/unres...

Awsome Awsome Awsome start Rockstar!!!!!

Reallly loved this update!!!!!!

The best of story a little smily Arjun nd as always his miss publicist!!!!

The new little girl part with arakshi was beautifulll!!!!

Saki having past nd jumpi dead😲!!!

Like CID part also!!!! kavin is gaurav khanna or someone else?????

Con.sooonn!!!!!!

No thanks Princy 😳 Arakshi will be shocked by the death of Jhumpi. Yeah Gaurav Khanna :D Isliye ACP Rawte ki khoon khola!

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
I am speechless...
Even in midst of ur hectic schedule u managed to write a new SS..
It's superb.. Very beautifully written..
From first to last u got me hooked up..
The bond between Jhumpi and Arjun is beautifully described..
The masti and love atomosphere of CID is...
I am at loss of words..
Mwaaahhh...
But what have u done at last!!!
Jhumpi is dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Don't u dare to DC this story..
Con whenever u have time..

You would ask something and I won't give, how is that possible Eeshu?

Glad u loved the story dear!

It means a lot to me!

Stay Tuned 😊

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: savali
Beautiful start
Etf aur CID sath me.
Sakshi arj part was awesome.
Arj knows abt saks intention to send the couples together.
Sakshi ka bhi painful past hai.
Loved their time with jhumpi.
Cid fun was also good.
Arjun rawte jealous???
OMG Jumpi died,arjun khudko kaise sambhalega?
Waiting to know n cont soonish.

Thanks dearie! Yep dono sath sath main 😆

Arjun ke nazar se kuch chupti hai kya 😉

Haan Rawte thode se jale😉

Stay tuned dear! 😊

Originally posted by: Sisha
awesome start
very nice update
loved it...
do continue this story...

Thanks dear!

Originally posted by: angle1shanu
superb start...love the concept...cid mai be love is in the air...and same in etf...sakshi ka bi painful past hai...!!!! Love the jhumpy arakshi moments...superbly written...so nice ...arjun amd purvi jeleous...hehebehe...but ye kya hua jhumpy died...???? Kyu...???? Plz continue soon..!!!

Glad you loved this one dear! Haan... ETF aur CID main lowwweee is in the air *wink*

Kyun kya hua... stay tuned!

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Interesting case
so jhumpi is dead
waiting for next part
update soon

Glad you loved the story!

Originally posted by: manurocks
awesome awesome awesome awesome update...
aww jhumpi-arjun bond so cute...
sakshi as usual the chirpy bird...hmmm so her past is painfull...
ohno... jhumpi... pls dont ...
ohno mere hero ka kya hoga...!!!!!!!

Glad you loved it so so so so much dear!!!!

Tumhara hero sambhal jayega *wink*

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Dear friends,

Thank you so very much for your comments and likes! It truly means a lot to me *tight hug*

The next chapter would be coming up really soon :)

Please do scroll up for the replies of your comments!

Loads of love, 😳

Arma

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

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Armageddon

But this story won't end...

Not at all... 😉

Par yeh safar yaha nahi... bas kahi aur...

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Yay! me first!! 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Awesome story dear

loved it

Ch 1

ETF n CID together.. oh..what a treat!😃

Sakshi didn't wanna be a haddi in the kebab.. Shriza n SaSha..lovely!😳

Loved Arakshi convo.. they're hilarious!🤣

What mistake did Sakshi do? Really intriguing.. something related to her sister? Maybe!

Jhumpi.. loved her n Arjun's bonding.. even Sakshi's too😳

It was her birthday.. Arjun made it really special😃👏

Sakshi remembering something about her sis.. the past haunting her..

She wore the dupatta like a saree.. Arjun commented n she became shy..hehe.. sweet!😳

CID was lively n lovely enough.. nice..hhaha..😆

Case..

Team ETF is no less.. bechare Sam n Shree.. Rawte ne pakad liya..😆

Sakshi said the words of her heart.. we..us..😉

Kevin n Sakshi friends.. Arjun n Purvi jealous.. hmm..😉

n what's this.. body of Jhumpi..🤢 no.. Arjun ka kya hoga..???😭

Ch 2

Arjun was broken seeing Jhumpi dead😭

the scene was beautifully penned!👏

Sakshi remembered something..what happened 5 yrs before??

Arjun's outburst.. the slap was quite unexpected.. he was feeling guilty for it..

CID team was investigating the matter.. everyone is sad seeing the dead girl..😭

Arjun cried his heart out.. that was needed!😊

Sam ne aate hi apne sawal puch liye.. she answerd the needed robotically..

Sakshi asked Kavin about..umm.. her sis??😉

ETF n CID working together.. wow!

Child trafficking..

loved the small SamJun scene😳

Jhumpi's house..

poor Daya n Chotu.. confusiya gaye..kya kare..khole ya tode..🤣 Freddy took the way out

Arjun gave good SYS to Jhumpi's parents.. the dealer also caught!

Arjun did her last rites😊

loved the two ACP's talk..👏

Commissioner doesn't want them to go ahead in case.. n Sak-Kav agreed.. hmm.. kuch to choot raha he..

do continu soon

Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago

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Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Awesome start..amazing..👍🏼
Arakshi and jhumpi bonding together was so sweet..
loved Cid part too..
lOved the little parts of masti, fun..Sakshi getting emotional..
and jhumpi..it was altogether a beautiful update except for the last
part where you have shown Jhumpi dead.😡
waiting to see how both the teams solve the case together..
I stopped watching CID long back so have no idea who these new-comers are but still it was nice..and i liked it!

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

That was really an Emotional update

Rula diya yaar

Poor Jhumpi😭😭

How can her parents do this😡

feeling bad for Arjun

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

nice update
case of child trafficking and sakshi knew much abt the case and also kavin may be it was related to sakshi's sis in past and kavin being her friend he also knew
arjun was shattered but he should not have hit sakshi no matter what u just cannot take out ur anger on some one else that too one who is equally hurt
culprits behind jhumpi's state were arrested and put behind bars but then what sakshi and kavin said was true they have to go deeper but comm. stopped them
is he also involved and both sakshi and kavin knows that so now what will these two do 🤔
wise advice from one ACP to other ACP shayad arjun ko pratayuman ki baat samaj aayi
thanks for pm and when ever u do next update iss wali ka update zaaror dena 😊