IKK -Gen-X-Pt45 Pg76 'Bachelor Parties' - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome parts!! So cute!! I love the relationships!! Hmm, yea make Tia and Karan a couple. I gotta go find out whos whose child again. lolz. cont soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was really cute Adi and Mets stuck in the closet thing soz aint got used to the names yet (Ria and i forgot hius now) 😆 the song KK sang was funny Tujhe dekha tho yeh jaana sanam 😆 😆 😆 cont soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys thankz 4 the lovely lovely comments 😃 anyways.....next part....will try get it done tomorrow....i have to go out in the morning, not sure when i'll b bak but when i am ill try my best to continue 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hmmmm didnt get time yesterday plz forgive....next part will b up soon enuff
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thx.......I was waiting for so long..... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i luv ur fanfic its gr8 👏 plz cont. soon
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Previously

KK - what's up?
R - nothing...want to go for a walk?
KK - sure

Roshni and KK stand up and turn to leave when Karan sees them

Kar - where you two going?
KK - somewhere....you carry on reading

KK follows Roshni outside while Karan watches wondering where they are going.

Part 5

KK and Roshni walk outside side by side, both are silently walking around on the field, KK looks at Roshni as she admires the beauty of nature around them. He smiles faintly
KK - so tell me, what were you thinking about earlier?
R - when?
KK - while we were in the cafetria, you were day dreaming about something
R - oh it was nothing
KK - come on, tell me
R - KK its nothing seriously
KK - fine
R - I was talking to bhai and Karan, and I told them that when you fall in love....
KK grins
KK - you mean IF I fall in love
R - shut up.....WHEN you fall in love, that I'll be the first one to know, so I will be right?
KK - erm....yeah sure
R - good
They walk further ahead and lean against a tree, Roshni stands while KK sits on the grass leaning against the tree, he puts his head back, sees something and does a double take, he pulls Roshni down to the grass
R - ouch! what was that for?
KK - look!
R - at what? the grass?
KK - no the tree!
Roshni looks confused, KK turns her head to face the tree, she gasps
R - oh my gosh.....I remember dad telling me they all came to the same college but....wow
KK - can you imagine......our parents were probably sitting right here.....
Both smile, on the tree there is "Angad loves Kripa" "Sujal loves Kashish" and "Prithvi loves Suhana" carved. KK grins
KK - thats it..if and when I fall in love, I'll put mine and...whoevers name on here, right next to dads....in fact, we all will
R - whatever....come lets go, the others will probably be looking for us
Roshni gets up, she looks at KK but he is still engrossed in the tree so she pulls him up with much difficulty which causes both to fall on the grass with KK on top of Roshni, both have a staring moment, Roshni clears her throat and KK tries to get up but his watch is stuck in Roshni's neclkace, both fumble to free it, once its free KK gets off Roshni and stands up and begins to walk up
R - erm...KK
KK turns around
KK - yeah?
R - you mind....helping me up you moron
KK - oh sorry...
KK pulls Roshni up and both walk back to the cafeteria. When they get there they find the others bickering, they sit down and glance at each other and shrug their shoulders, after a while both get irritated
KK - shut up!
Suddenly they stop talking and look at KK
KK - now firstly...Tia when did you get here?
T - a few minutes ago
KK - secondly...why the heck are you lot bickering like two year olds?
Ar - because Ria thinks she is the most popular person in college and we all know that she isn't....because I am
Ri - whatever Aryan, the whole college knows its me
T - argh! they've started again, thanks a lot KK!
KK - both of you be quiet!
Aryan and Ria stop talking and look at KK
KK - theres a simple solution to all of this.......neither of you is the more popular one......because you both are, Ria is the most popular girl and Aryan is the most popular guy...simple now all of you lets go
They all get up, Aryan and Ria walk ahead with Roshni, Tia goes off with her friends while Karan walks with KK
Kar - wow bruv that was very clever of you, and big of you to say they were both the popular ones
KK chuckles
KK - you crazy dude? I just said that to shut them up, otherwise we all know I'm the most popular guy
The two laugh and go to their class. After college has finished the gang head back to their houses. KK and Karan arrive to the Khanna Mansion to find Kripa and Angad arguing with each other
Kar - mom...dad.....hey guys...hey!
Angad and Kripa stop arguing and stare at KK and Karan
KK - so...whats with the big argument?
A - kids your mother has gone crazy
K - oh so now you're calling me crazy? you imbecile!
A - imbecile? see..see you should at least respect me in front of my sons.....
K - your sons? your sons! who went through 30 hours of labour?? I don't remember you screaming your head off....in fact I remember you fainting!
Kar - you fainted?
Karan and KK begin to laugh, Angad glares at them and they stop but can't hold it in and burst out laughing and quickly hide behind Kripa
KK - ok...whats the problem?
K - we recieved this in the post
Kripa hands KK a card, he opens it and sees its an invitation to the 24th college re-union, he shows it to Karan
Kar - and how is this a problem?
K - your father is refusing to go
A - what's the use? we'll go there, see some people we probably don't even remember, see some teachers who probably don't remember us, eat some food and go
K - and meet some old friends!
A - you don't have any friends!
K - what? I have friends
A - Kashish and Suhana do not count as friends as they are family members....so other than them name....two
K - there...is....Priya
A - ha! you haven't spoken to her because she refused to come to our anniversary party...next
K - ....well...
Kar - how about Sneha aunty?
K - oh yes...Sneha
A - hey....you're not meant to help
Kar - you never said anything about that....
KK - ok ok dudes.....
Kripa glares at KK
KK - I mean mom and dad.....no more fighting....and dad you should go to the party, it won't look good if mom goes on her own...and besides how many guys will there be there who used to like mom.....and might want to....oh I don't know...rekindle their lost love?
K - oh yes.....how very true KK, never mind Angad, I'll go alone
Kripa begins to walk off when Angad pulls her back
A - oh no you ain't, I'm coming with you
K - but you just said you're not
A - and now I say I am...final decision
Angad storms off while KK and Karan continue to laugh with Kripa. Meanwhile something similar is happening in the Bose Mansion, but here its not Suhana or Prithvi refusing to go but rather Ria forbidding them to go
Ri - no!!! you can't go!
Su - why not? we've been invited, everyone else is going
Ri - but then everyone will know your my parents!
P - and thats a bad thing because...
Ri - dad I'm the most popular girl in school.....I can't let you ruin it!
P - and how will that happen?
Ri - knowing you.....you'll end up doing something silly and showing me up..please don't go
T - she's only saying that because she doesn't want Rahul to see her with you
P - Ra....who's Rahul?
Ri - no one...and shut up Tia
P - no more arguments Ria....your mother and I are going......and so are you two
Ri - wh....no way dad!
T - I agree.....I'm not going with you guys
Su - your father has said yes, now no more arguing, go upstairs and do your homework
Both girls storm off while Suhana and Prithvi laugh with each other. Meanwhile in the Garewal Mansion Aryan is arguing with Sujal and Kashish because they won't allow him to go with them
S - its our re-union, what will you do there
Ar - well....
R - bhai only wants to go so he can flirt with your friends daughters
Ar - thats.....very true but still...KK and Karan are going, I have to make sure KK stays out of trouble
Ka - Angad is there to do that
Ar - but we'll be so bored at home
R - we'll? don't drag me in this
Ar - oh be quiet, you know you want to go
R - I do?
Aryan pulls her to a side and whispers in her ear
Ar - if you don't agree with me, then I'll tell dad that you skipped a day off school to go watch a movie with Ria
R - you wouldn't
Ar - oh yes I will....
Both go back to their parents
R - I'm coming aswell
Ka - you too.....fine Sujal we'll take them
S - but.....
Ka - they're both very stubborn.....like you...and won't drop this until we agree, so to save hassle just say yes
S - fine....you can come
Ar - yes! thanks guys
Aryan runs upstairs while Roshni frowns and follows him.
coming up - the re-union
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome Part very cute and sweet
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!! lol angad-kripa= guys who want to rekindle love 🤣 Sujal-Kashish- Aryan wants to flirt with girls 😆 && Suhana-Prithvi- and Ria doesnt wanna be seen with her parents!! lmao!! lovedd it!! cont soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part as usual!!!!! plz do continue soon 😊 😊 😊
Edited by laksh_ktfan - 18 years ago

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