]~~Gunjasa Hai Koi Iktara~~---A DhruLya OS![

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~~Gunjasa Hai Koi Iktara~~---A DhruLya OS


Disclaimer: First Time I am Writing and you have no choice but to bare with it!
😆

Scenario: After successful operation and treatment both Manik & Rishabh get discharged from the hospital on the same day. Dhruv is little tensed and confused to be around Rishabh so he maintains his distance from the scene!

Mukti: (Playfully) Dhruv, What are you doing? Look at your girl she is having trouble loading things in the car. Be a Man and help her out!

Dhruv immediately looks Alya's way!
Their Eyes Meet!
Pause!
In Haste, Turns away! *Awkward*

Mukti: (Signs) Where are you looking? (Manually turns him around nandini's direction) Your Girl is here! Go Help her loading!

He walks towards nandini while alya looks at him with anxiety! Dhruv lift the bags and load them in their cab and accidentally he comes in contact with Rishabh! Both start acting weird and their Attack is on the way!

Dhruv covers his head with his hand and stars shaking. Nandini noticing her brother's current condition, immediately runs towards him! Alya and Mukti watches him struggle with a shocked and confused look on their face. They Run towards him *worried* and try to help him by holding him.

Alya: Dhruv, What is happening to you? Are you Ok? Are you in some kind of pain(her voice trembles)
(Dhruv shuns away from them)

Mukti: Dhruv, talk to me .. Security!! Call someone! My friend here needs help!
(Alya Notices Rishabh's attack .. And looks at Dhruv with teary eyes)

Alya: Dhruv, stop this! You are scaring me! This is not Funny! Come Back!
(Dhruv is in no condition to listen to what his beloved ones are saying. The guards come in to control and calm him! Highly sedated Manik, who cannot move, shouts from a distance...)

Manik: Buddy calm down! It will be Fine. Listen to me buddy. GUITAR!!(Shouts).Where is my Guitar?? My Buddy needs my help!(Alya and Mukti Look confused)
The doctors arrive at the scene, sedate Dhruv and take him under observation! Manik informs his friends about Dhruv's condition and how it is connected to that "Fated Night" and Rishabh!

At Alya's House .. Her Thoughts: I don't believe that I was not aware of dhruv's Condition! Selfish manik as always kept us away from it! *wavers* Dhruv, he looked like he was in lot of pain!*signs*
I wish I could have done something to ease his suffering!
If only...if only I had known of his suffering, I .. I .. "suffering"(saddens) ...
He Suffered and I had no idea! All these years I had known him, (keeps her arm on her chin) he was always there for everyone of us. Silent yet reliable, Reserve yet Loyal, Cool yet Hot(blushing smile) he was there for us all. He was There for ME.. He did not judge me for my mistake. He understood my insecurities! He stood by me. He read me like a book, the first one to know my secret, the one who kept my secret a secret, lied to his best friend to save me! And I, I tried to use him for my selfish deed! (tears fall out) I gave him false hopes! I .. I am Useless (squeezes her head in the pillow.. ) Oh Dhruv! I don't know what to do! I feel lost. I feel .. I feel like talking to you. I want to talk to you. I want to see you! I want.. I want you (*dreams*..then comes back with a nod) .. I want you to be happy. I will make you happy,(realizing what she just said) I mean .. I will make sure you are happy!(relieved wala smile)

The Next Morning Alya Visits Dhruv. He was in lying down and when he saw alya enter the room, he welcomes her with his smile.

Dhruv: Hi.
Alya: Hi.

Dhruv: Good Morning.
Alya: Good Morning Dhruv. How are you?
Dhruv: I woke up in a hospital bed this morning, I've been better(smiles)
(Alya looks down ...)

Dhruv: Hey come on, It was a joke. Was it really that bad?
Alya: Dhruv, these attacks? Why did not you tell us before? don't you trust us?
Dhruv: I trust you guys more than anything or anyone. It is just I did not want to worry you.
Alya: Did you know how much scared and worried I was .. I mean both mukti and I was when we saw your suffering? I thought.. I was gonna loose you!

Dhruv: Sorry to have scared you Alya! No more secrets anymore, ok? Just Smile now.(gets up and sit)
Alya: But Dhruv, how did you.. I mean how you .. Calm ... (searching for the right word) Y.O.U.rsel..f !!

Dhruv: (smiles) Buddy! Buddy was always there for me. The best remedy was Buddy and his Music. His Songs always calms me down.
Alya: (nods) You and your damn buddy!(smiles) .. So music eh? (looks around the room..finds his guitar, takes it and seats beside dhruv.)

Dhruv: Alya? You and Guitar? Do you know how to play?
Alya: I have seen you guys play for these years and I might have learned a trick or two from you (winks..smiles)
Dhruv reciprocates with a smile!

Alya:
So? Manik Sings for you eh?
Dhruv: What? you are going to sing? This is a hospital alya! There are patients in here and you cannot expose them to any danger! Do you know how to sing? (naughty face)
Alya: hahaha Very Funny! look who is making jokes!(gently hits his shoulders) just because you boys don't give me a chance, it doesn't mean I don't know to sing! (dhruv blushes).. Just shut up and listen.
Alya in a low tone: Hope you like it!
(Dhruv gets ready .. Excited yet covers his ears with fingers , winking his right eye)

*Song Starts.. Guitar Starts Playing*
Alya Plays Guitar ... Dhruv Looks at Alya with bewilderment!
*She Stars Singing...*
"orey manva tu to bavra hai
tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai
tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai bavre
kyun dikhaye sapne tu sote jaagte"

(She looks at dhruv)
"jo barse sapne boond boond
nainon ko moond moond"

Chorus:
"nainon ko moond moond"(Dhruv Smiles)

"jo barse sapne boond boond nainon ko moond moond
kaise main chaloon dekh na sakoon, anjaane raastein"
(Alya Smiles Back at Dhruv)

Chorus:
"gunja sa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara
gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara
dheeme bole koi iktara iktara, dheeme bole koi iktara
gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara"
(the eye gaze continues..)

"sun rahi hoon sudh budh khoke koi main kahani
poori kahani hai kya kise hai pata"
(Alya smiles to herself")

"main to kisiki hoke yeh bhi na jaani" (looks at dhruv with uncertainty!)
"ruth hai ye do pal ki ya rehgi sada"(smiles to herself)

Chorus:
"kise hai pata? kise hai pata" (Dhruv looks down and smiles )

"jo barse sapne boond boond nainon ko moond moond
nainon ko moond moond
jo barse sapne boond boond nainon ko moond moond
kaise main chaloon, dekh na sakoon anjaane raastein"

(Alya Smiles at him and in gesture asks him how is her singing and he replies in gesture <awesome> and then starts blushing)

Chorus:
"gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara
gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara
dheeme bole koi iktara iktara, dheeme bole koi iktara
gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara"

(Dhruv leans forward alya to touch her hand .. The dream sequence starts with the chorus and the instrumental that follows)

*Dream Sequence*
In a Dark BG, DhruLya in White, light focused on them, Dancing in ballroom style!




Back to Reality>
*Alaap:*
Both of them lean forward to kiss- Getting closer -Closer- at that moment, Dingdong .. Mukti enters!

Mukti: Hi guys.. Whats Up? How are you Dhruv?
DhruLya: (In a Awkward state .. Sitting straight up) .. Hi .. Gu .. Good Morning!
Mukti: Erm...Whats Goin On??


PS> I don't own either the song or the Gifs! 😳
Edited by Haruhi - 10 years ago

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keerthu27 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres
that was really lovely!!
u stopped i thought u would continue!!
BTW they r a cute couple!!😳
Edited by _keertu_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I Thank Fenice For The Idea!😊

Originally posted by: Fenice

I would love to see Alya singing for Dhruv or playing Casio for him.
I don't want Dhruv to end up in hospital, I won't more DhruLya scenes instead, cute, subtle ones like we saw today.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome!! Finally a DhruLya OS!!! Was waiting for one!! Loved it a lot!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Eeek, res! BTW, your new DP is amazing *.*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _keertu_

res

unres
that was really lovely!!
u stopped i thought u would continue!!
BTW they r a cute couple!!😳



Thanks .. I lack inspiration & motivation 😆
May be i'l come up with another in the future 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshirox97

Awesome!! Finally a DhruLya OS!!! Was waiting for one!! Loved it a lot!!



Thanks 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserve.
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Unresed!!

Damn girl u hv done it...we all were wanting to read a dhrulya OS n here it goes...this is so awesome...!!
Dey r such a cute couple!!! They way your portrayed Dhruv... Naughty...funny...lyks to pulls legs...!!
I have always admired dhruv-manik friendship!! One of the best bonds...!!
Coming to dhrulya...dey r so cute...here I wanted to see this in the show immediately...although I knw it won't happen...!! Dey fail to focus on their storyline!!:'(
Well do write more...n why the abrupt end...I would hv luved to read more!!<3
Regards
Safrena
Edited by -ScaredAngel- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Haruhi

I Thank Fenice For The Idea!😊




Arrey bas bas...itna credit toh mujhe meri Teacher ne bhi nhi Diya aaj tak..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Haru...😊
Finally a DA OS sees the light of day. DA is making Writers out of people who need to complete their presentation works..😆 ( just kidding..)
Loved the Dhruv in the OS...he is miles away from the show Dhruv. This Dhruv is playful, funny, joking.
The only complaint...why no kiss? I was like...abh hoga...abh hoga..but NO! Mukti barges in just at the wrong time. Why you do this to me?😭
My favourite was the Dream sequence.
Do write more. 😊

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