can't stay away from you -- SANDHIR FF CHAP-5 UPDATED

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Posted: 10 years ago
#1
i have changed the title.. yo!
character sketch
sanyukta - tomboy , full of attitude, rude. , rich , intelligent, owner of aggarwal automobiles
randhir - funny, attitude, smart..
priyanka aggarwal - fashion designer, modern , always busy in her work
manik aggarwal- sanyu's father , loves her daughter.
riya singh shekhawat - rd's mom, loves her son., always supports rd
harsh singh. shekhawat - loves his son and wife, fav.line -- randhir office mein chalo.. :D..,

prologue

randhir ne olx par id banayi
sanyu - i want to sell my iphone..., want to buy iphone 6 plus
randhir - sanyukta naam ki ladki iphone 5 sell kar rahi hai, he messaged her
I WANT TO BUY IPHONE 5, SO KAHAN MILNA HAI?

sanyukta messaged.
okay , meet me in **** cafe

randhir messaged
I AM COMING

in cafe

randhir - you are looking good
sanyukta - yeh lo mobile, 5 months old hai..
randhir - but mere paas abhi paise nahi hai, dad ne diye nahi , bolne lage ki office chalo.. 😆😆😆
sanyukta shouted
you moron.. mera time waste kar diya.. stupid..

actually rd sanyu se milne aaya tha..:D



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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
INDEX
PROLOGUE - PAGE 1
CHAPTER- 1 PAGE 1 😆
CHAPTER -4 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117148789 (i guess link is wrong) --- page 4
CHAPTER - 4 PAGE 4
Edited by SHQ_forever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
intersting...
rd is funny LOL, pocket mein no money
do pm me..


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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Interesting Prologue,
Continue soonish...:)
and do PM me for sure...
Love Anu :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
CHAPTER - 1
Sanyukta - dad, i want to buy a new mobile.
dad - okay...
mom - 5 months toh huye hain..
sanyu - mom, meine aapse nahi puchha..
mom - shut your mouth sanyukta!
dad - sanyukta khud earn karti hai, jo buy karna hai karne do
mom - whatever!

randhir - sanyukta naam ki ladki iphone sell kar rahi hai, he messaged her
I WANT TO BUY IPHONE 5, so kahan milna hai?
sanyu messaged him

OKAY, MEET ME IN.. ... CAFE
randhir messaged .
I AM COMING!
in cafe


randhir - you are looking good

sanyukta - yeh lo mobile, 5

months old hai..

randhir - but mere paas abhi paise

nahi hai, dad ne diye nahi , bolne


lage ki office chalo..



😆😆😆
sanyukta shouted


you moron.. mera time waste kar

diya.. stupid..

actually rd sanyu se masti kar raha

tha..:D


randhir - ab aa hi gaye hain cafe



mein coffee pi lete hein

sanyukta- not interested,

randhir - aap toh gussa ho gayi

sanyukta - am going

randhir - din achha ho gaya ...


sanyukta is in her cabin...


sanyukta shouted.

rahul, file kahan hai?

rahul - mam do minute.

sanyukta - 1 minute hai, nahi

toh job

sanyu's dad- sanyu subah -2

gussa kyun kar rahi ho? kisi ne

masti ki hai?

sanyu - haan dad, tha koi

badtameez


shekhawat mension

harsh - yeh newspaper dekho,

randhir .. young girl sanyukta

aggarwal..

ne kitni success paa li .. aur tum


ho ki ghar bethe rehte ho!

randhir was shocked

rd smiled

randhir - dad mein iss se mila

hun, teekhi mirchi hai

hamesha time

randhir. dad - time ki ehmiyat

hai.. tum mere office chal rahe

ho..

randhir - no..

randhir. dad - okay then, no

new laptop, mobiles, apne

paise kamao..

rd - dad mein job karunga,

lekin aapke office mein nahi.

rd.dad- but, shekhawat job

karega...

rd- dad bye

precap- randhir in sanyu's office














Edited by SHQ_forever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice starting

do pm me next time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Amazing concept dear..loved it
Update soon n ya plz decrease the size of the letters a bit :)
Thank u

N do pm me whenever update :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
loved it pm me plz when next part is updated..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
interesting very interesting
loved the first part
continue soon
pm me next time
keep writing
update soon
with love
RIDDHIMA
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
very very interesting
awesome superb lovely stating
very very funny update
very very nice
love it. update asap.
thanx for pm me.😃

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