SS - Song Of Dawn (Pt 16) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

awww he is not able to find words to talk with her
i love how they both are communicating without talking so less
awesome updates dii 👏 👏

Thank you Roop...! Arre yaar ... itne bhi chup nahin hai... they did speak... bas... maine detail main wo sab nahin likha! 😊 Part 15 mein mention zaroor kiya hai...😉

heyy...part 16 is damn good yaar...

shes soo innocent...giggling away...and hes her knight...wanting to protect her for ever.

i love your description of her too. vulnerable...tht one word says so much. like u said she neednt be superbly pretty...

sitting up all night to talk...😃😃...

the entire thing is very real...i mean the way she sits with her chin to her folded knees...not prim and proper in one stoic position. completely at ease...listening to music..great update.

Originally posted by: apapap

heyy...part 16 is damn good yaar... Thanks yaaar!!

shes soo innocent...giggling away...and hes her knight...wanting to protect her for ever.

i love your description of her too. vulnerable...tht one word says so much. like u said she neednt be superbly pretty... Yeah I love that word... it jus conveys so much!

sitting up all night to talk...😃😃... Yeah.. isko tho abstract mein convey kar diya...!! 😉

the entire thing is very real...i mean the way she sits with her chin to her folded knees...not prim and proper in one stoic position. completely at ease...listening to music.. Awwww great update. Awwie... thank you!

awesome sareeta di......
the way they observe each other...... amazing
as usual im bit behind in reading FFs 😆 😆 😆
so sorry for the late reply 😳

Originally posted by: ash9

awesome sareeta di......
the way they observe each other...... amazing
as usual im bit behind in reading FFs 😆 😆 😆
so sorry for the late reply 😳

Thank you Ashu!!! Oh I know , you are one kachua speed reading woman when it comes to FFs!!! Itne der se padti ho ki writer bhi bhool jaata hai usne kya likha!! 😆 Glad you liked it... but I hope you noticd.. I am yet to wrap it... it aint over yet hun! 😉

Originally posted by: sareeta

Thank you Ashu!!! Oh I know , you are one kachua speed reading woman when it comes to FFs!!! Itne der se padti ho ki writer bhi bhool jaata hai usne kya likha!! 😆 Glad you liked it... but I hope you noticd.. I am yet to wrap it... it aint over yet hun! 😉

yeah thank god i cn read fast...... but way behind my usual schedule these days
yeah i knw..its nt over yet
will b bck to read the rest...dnt worry😛

Originally posted by: ash9

yeah thank god i cn read fast...... but way behind my usual schedule these days
yeah i knw..its nt over yet
will b bck to read the rest...dnt worry😛

Jus Kiddin'😊