SwaRon FF Life Partners *note on pg 78* on 11/4/16* - Page 32

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Posted: 10 years ago
Baby u cant discontinue plzzz baby
plzzzxxxzzz
u have always supported me
plz aaj u cant use this reason as urs, plz jaan
we love ur writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mansi, Come on. You can not do this. As a writer myself, i understand how you might be feeling and empathise with you.
If you are feeling down, keep the work on hold. Till you get alright. But don't discontinue it. Coz there are many readers who read this FF. Including me.

Think it over.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii guys
m here
I have agin started to write
for some specials people who really liked my writing and encouraged me
so this updated is dedicated to those speial people
also thank u all those who have hit the like button on the previous chapter and also commented

(Banner credits goes to shini aka shinningshanu)
Chapter 8


Next morning someone knocked on their bedroom door swayam woked up 1st by the sound,he opened his eyes and immediately looked at the clock"abhi to sirf 3 baje hai,itni raat ko kaun hoga??"said swayam to himself and opened the door in hurry he saw his mom standing at the door and asked"kya huva??dadi to thik haina??"

"ma ko kuch nai huva mai to sharon ko ye yaad dilane aai thi ke aaj karva chauth to 4 baje taar ho kar niche ajaye apni sargi lene"said swayam mom

swayam was about to tell her about sharon's health when sharon interupted"ok ma mai aa jaugi"Said sharon with a smile,swayam's mom went away nodding and sharon went to her cupboard for taking out clothes

after she went swayam closed the door,went after sharon,facing her back he said"tumne ha kyu bola??u know na tumhari halat kharab hai,u r not even able to stand properly,kal bhi tumne kuch nai khaya and aaj pura din tum bhukhi kese reh sakti ho???"

"ofo swayam,hojayega ismai kaunsi badi baat hai"said sharon finally selecting a dress and turn around now facing swayam

"nahi,ye bohat badi baat hai,tum pura din bhukhi nai reh sakti it will affect ur health"said swayam

"swayam mujhe kuch nai hoga see am totally fine today,see i can walk,jump,run,turn,dance...ahhh ouch"when sharon was saying this she was doing all this when she was doing a dance step she fall down holding her leg

immediately swayam ran to her and started checking her leg"jyada zor se to laga kya??"asked swayam to which sharon nodded in a negative"tch kya karti ho sharon,dekha tum thik se dance nahi kar pa rahi ho so tum fast nahi rakhogi"said swayam glaring and pointing her leg

"but i am able to walk"said sharon with a pout

from inside swayam melted seeing her pout face he was about to smile but he quickly stopped himself and started glaring more"you are not doing fast and thats it"said swayam giving his final decision

"nahi mai to fast rakhugi,dekhti hu mujhe kaun rokta hai"said sharon and went to bathroom to freshnup and change her clothes

Sharon came out after sometime from washroom wearing a red chudidar backless dress and saw swayam sitting on the bed with folded hands,seeing him a smile formed on sharon's face she knew he was sitting like that because he was angry she went towards him putting the wet towel on the bed and sat on the bed beside and tapped on his shoulder

"kya hai??"said swayam with a stern and angry voice not looking at sharon

"gussa ho??"asked sharon

"nai...nai mai kyu gussa hone laga"said swayam with more anger

"ohhkkk,mujhe laga tum gussa ho,but acha hai tum gussa nai ho...to phir thik hai mai chalti hu 4 bajne hi vale hai"said sharon smiling and getting up from the bed and turn around to go at the dressing table

"mai gussa hu tumhe dekhar nai pata chalta"said swayam and got up from the bed making an irritated face

"but you only said na you are not angry...to maine socha..."said sharon facing him

"bolne ko to mai kuch bhi bol sakta hu,vaise to tum meri koi baat nai manti to ye kese maan li"said swayam with anger

"excuse me maine tumhari haar baat mani hai"said sharon

"for example???"asked swayam

"kal ratko maine tumhare kehne par medicines khai"said sharon with see-I-said-na tone

"aur???"aked swayam folding his hands

"aur...aur..."said sharon thinking deep but not remembering

"aur kuch nai..."Said swayam and turn around to leave the room but sharon stopped him by holding his hand n making him face her,she hold her ears and mouthed a sorry

"mujhe tumhara sorry nai chahiye"said swayam holding her hand

"to kya chahiye apko??"asked sharon with a smile

"please tum fast mat rakho...see tumhari halat vaise bhi bohat kharab hai mai nai chahta aur kharab ho jaye"said swayam holding her hands tightly

"swayam i know that you are worried about my health but meri situation bhi samjho,u know na already mom is not happy with me...n i dont want her to be more upset from me...n mai unhe mana nai kar sakti...besides this is my duty to keep fast for you"said sharon freeing her 1 hand and keeping it on his hand

"but sharon please..."said swayam in a pleading tone

"shhh...please meri baat sunlo ye sirf ek din ki hi to baat hai kalse to mai khane hi vali hu na besides mai abhi bhi khane vali hu...so mai pura din bhukhi reh sakti hu"said sharon

"hufff...thik hai but tum abhi jao aur bohat sara kha lena"said swayam finally agreeing to her

"thank u thank u thank u so much"said sharon hugged him,he also hugged her back smiling,suddenly they heard a knock on the door and they broke the hug

sharon went and opened the door and saw taani standing"oho bhabhi ye kya hai aap abhi tak taiyaar nai huve..jaldi karona sirf 10 minutes baki hai 4 bajne mai..."

"ha mai bus taiyaar hi ho rahi hu...mai 5 minutes mai aai"said sharon and taani went away saying ok

while sharon was getting ready swayam was looking at her smilingly sitting on the bed,sharon also saw him looking at her through mirror she was enjoying his gaze on her,she was feeling happy under his gaze

"chalo ab mai chalti hu...tum so jao..."said sharon smiling at him

"ese jaogi??"asked swayam

"ese matlab..."said sharon and check her in herself in the mirror

swayam get up from the bed and went towards her,her back was facing him and she was looking at him through mirror,he move his hand forward and tied the dori of her dress and said"hmm..ab jao"sharon gave a embarssing smile to him and mouthed a thank you

as she was about to put her step out of the room,swayam stopped her by asking"can i ask u a question???"

she turn around facing him and said"ya"

"tum ye fast sirf isi liye rakhna chahti ho kyuki mom wants u to keep and its ur duty to keep fast for me??"asked swayam standing taking the support of the wall

"nai...ek aur reason hai"said sharon with a smile

"and vo reason kya hai"aked swayam getting excited

"sorry 1 question at a time"said sharon and went away winking at him spoiling all his excitment

"are sharon but sunno to...chali gayi...but abhi nai to badmai hi sahi mai tumse bulvakar rahuga what is the 3rd reason"said swayan to himself,smirking

so guys how was it
do tell me
will be waiting for ur reviews
for my further PMs add Mansi_PMs
thank you
love
Mansi
Edited by Mansi98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Mansiii...

Im double happy today...😃

One is because u decide to continue to write..😊

And other one is because after many days I got a chance to comment first😆

Hehehehe😆

It was more than awesome mansi...👏

I loved it...

Amazing one...👏

So sweet and cute...

Loving their bond...

Its becoming so strong..

I hope nothing will go wrong...

Hayeee sharon keeping karwa chauth for swayam ...😳

Good to see this sharon...

Poor swayam he didn't get his answer..

Even im waiting with him to know the third reason ,,

And to know how will this move forward..

I want to read how love will blossom between them...

Loved the dori scene hayee...

He is so caring for her...

Loved it to its core...

So sweet and beautiful...

And u r an awesome writer mansi...

Dont stop writing for others...

Keep writing...

I love to read ur this ss...

Ohhkkk plzzz...

Do continue soon...

Im waiting to read more...


With lots of love..

Keechu 🤗



Edited by --Keechu-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing mansi
It's wonderful:)
Good to see their bond
Next part update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sharon keeping Karwa chauth for Swayam :)

Their cute fights

And Swayam's concern for Sharon

Sharon's cute antics

It was lovely to read

Swayam tying her dress

And the third reason

Well will be fun to see Swayam Shekhawat in action 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hayeee so cute update 😳
BLushing 😆
Next part sooonnn 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
aaawww... such a cute & adorable update... loved it... please update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
res

unres

awasome chapter mansi

loved it

luv this swt cute swaron

aww sharon keeping fast for swayam

hyee swayam so caring

swaron bond become stronger

dn dori scene

update nxt part soon

luv iman
Edited by Iman_taarey - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks 4 continuing it

amazing update

loved swayam's concern

like swayam me too wanna Know the 3rd reason

update soin

thanks 4 d pm

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