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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Chapter 32...

Sorry for the super late comments dear...
Why its always happen to Astha...
People taking advantage of her...whom should we blame...
is it because of her soft nature...everyone takes advantage of her...
Right from her birth...her father disliked her...he took advantage of her...
Because of her parents,her sister ignored her,she took advantage of her..
Because of her fear ,she has to marry james,her parents took advantage of her...
Because of her forgiveness,she stayed with him,james took advantage of her...
Because of her silents,he didnt listen to her,shlok took advantage of her...
Because of her calm nature,she lost her child,jail mate took advantage of her...
Because of her friendly nature,she end up in jail,Mary took advantage of her...
Is it right,poor soul has to go thru so many thing because of her own fault...
Coming to shlok...he is still fellling guilty for astha's state...
he is not ready to face her but cant resist him from having a glance of her...
Arjun is a true friend and a good collegue...
finally both of them trying to connect the dots...
My god...Mr Kannur...u can add me in...in his fan club...
just love the way he handing his boys...
loved each and every words he says...this guy rocks...
Astha and shlok has to go a long way to release their mistake and situation...
Hope they will clear everything soon...
Thanks for the super duper update...


Wow Sathu what wonderful words!
Thank you so much dear and no apology needed. I know just how busy you really. That's what makes you're comments even. More valuable.

Her worst phase in life is slowly coming to end. Once your down on the floor one does not have any further to fall. So from there it's only upwards. Like so, she will rise up and live her life. I'm sure of it. Things look gloomy and hopeless. Worst is over. Best is yet to come.

Send your application to Janie. She's the president, secretary and even the treasurer of the Kannar fan club.


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Part I
In extreme daylight
near the german countryside
not a person, not an animal
anywhere to be seen
the grass only present
to hide the rotten face
merrily jumped up and down
forming sultry waves
but in the fiery illumination
there was a submissive lad
walking in the darkness
on a meandering trail
his quizzical look
said everything
duller than the ditchwater
stoppeth the cuckoo sing
alas he came to a settlement
worse than any wreckage
this was not to be the end
of his pilgrimage
drain of the shower
magnet of the iron
and shine to the sunflower
became he
quoth the head;
watch your leg,
enter not in land
of glee
surprised by the greeting
walked to the head did he,
a shilling, few pennies
enough to keep him serene
he smelled the vintage
heard the cabaletta
n rotated
towards the iron
being the nucleus of the village
unlikely from the rest,
twas the white flesh
of the coconut case
antiquate door opened he
to step on deer drugget
sat on a creaking chair
and ordered a drink bucket
brought the aged vendor
the finest of the liquor
sipped on, sipped on
to end the long last pleasure
came another uncanny fella;
what thy upto?,
In the army I was
responded the man...
Part II
He commenced reciting;
the German Army Academy
I entered, The training we
started awfully
my room was like a rat's hole,
due to the size and mess,
in the vast institute
of increasing burden and stress
the headmaster Schindler
with his watchful observant eagle eyes,
catching the prey when noticed
from an immense height
the time of drill
came time and again
when the sun rose at dawn
leading to a roar of damnation
followed by a volcano it was
when Schindler beat us with rods
march, march, march we did
and finished the day with sighing nods
back ache, head ache
we moaned with our might,
joined in the morning
was a puzzle from the night,
yet, opened the eyes
without any repentance
march, march, march
to finish with greivance
with unchanged seasons
the days were greased,
and I had celebrated ma quarter
when the world seemed to cease
a bang outside the window
we were startled first,
nine ten bullets inside the room
and were running to be nursed...
Part III
The poles had started it
luring us into the war
killing the younglings
the plan was gore
the ball had hit the hive
and the bees flew,
the siren heard;
prepare for coup
filled was the lobby
with dumbfounded buzzes,
the packs into flocks
were converted in disbelief
no more firing was heard
until midnight,
but the kitchen into flames,
the situation became plight
called out schindler
names of honour,
the most trusted ones
were selected for cover
three were saved,
two were burnt,
helpless they had become
the sheep had learnt
After the sleepless night
the morning sun had risen
without the routinely drill
without the routinely curses
only the memories shrilled
the well known cook Laenord,
twenty years of his life
had devoted to the institute
without a word of strife
alas ma best friend Jason
always laughing was he
filled with tears am i now
i could do nothing,
nothing to save him free
I wasnt going to rest
and so wasnt anyone,
prepare for battle we would
and so we had pledged
Next day we entered the lobby
rather filled with determination
Schindler started chanting
the prayer followed by plans
Along with the squadron leader
two more were to go,
to capture the Polish border flag
shadowing the bombardment show
Schindler with pure concentration
began to list the list of doom
Dorken, an obvious name
along with Will Droon
Stopped my heart it did,
"But Why?"
asked the uncanny fella,
for my name was the latter...
Part IV
mixed emotions besieged me,
was i happy
or was i dismal,
i had been trapped.
Nevertheless I had to prepare,
and had to return,
to see the faces
of well familiarity
and yet again march we did
being watched by the eagle eyes
not only two, but many
of the envious observers
they would stare at us
and speak mean things
on the sly, worse than
hell it had become
Could not stand it us two,
decided to find the prime fox.
We asked the gullible Heite;
it is Garry Weenown,
he voiced in no time
instantly we met
our novel fox professor,
seeing us pace
he flew towards the door
shoot, shoot and shoot
we did, the crowd running
towards the entrance,
blocked was the poor fox cunning.
he lay on the floor
writhing in agony,
commended we were by schindler
to have caught a polish spy.
Nothing to be happy, to be chipper
for this was not the end,
it was rather,
the calm before the storm...
Part V
The day approached
like a lion in the hassock,
for we could do nothing
to make it stop
The squadron leader dismounted
the experienced one in the group,
the catalyst to the reaction
we moved another step close
Schindler saluted farewell
as we mounted on the P-51
Dorken assisted Mindler,
while I took over the gun
An unusual plan it was,
for not united with the
main army we had.
All alone in the mist
we travelled like an insect
in the mammoth ocean.
alas we reached the sleeping border
stealthy enough in the dark,
atleast thought so we did,
before the dog upon us bark.
Mindler tried beyond compare,
and we started praying,
but heavy artillery
did succumb our prayer.
falling were we
like a shooting star.
like an ant in the sink,
were we in the devil's own lair.
flowing towards the river
below, through a stagnant sky,
unaware were we of the
peril we would face.
One thousand curses!!
we missed the cheerless river,
and crashed did we,
breaking into slivers.
Dorken had a broken hand,
but Mindler shattered his leg,
there was shrapnel in my shoulder,
the effect diminished
by the cushioning forest.
For we heard the polish footsteps,
there was no time to waste,
Mindler unable to stand,
we had to plot in haste.
Dorken being the robust one,
carried Mindler on his back.
I carried the supplies,
shocked about what had happened,
and unaware of what would happen.
Why carry so much?
asked the exhausted Dorken.
What else, for the journey home!
I said, but he replied quietly,
There will be no journey home...
Part VI
We saw a grotto up ahead,
as if the earth opened it's mouth,
to gobble up the doomed travellers,
and take them into the darkness beneath.
But no choice we had,
for the footsteps boomed now,
and we entered the cavern,
unknowingly, unmindfully, carelessly.
They were still chasing us,
though the steps had fainted
along with the light,
and an unusual dreariness
surrounded us all.
For a minute or two,
we remembered the forgotten faces,
vanished did they,
after thundering crashes.
The poles had blocked the exit,
and we were concealed
in the sepulcher,
left only imagining our decaying destiny,
in the near future.
no flight of the wind,
nor any smell of leaves,
we could only taste dust,
and the sound of our tread.
We ate as much as we could,
and the food supplies finished.
but there wasn't no water,
to quench the desiccated throats.
Mindler was unable to endure,
the agony making him writhe,
we could hear his heart beat,
in the silent crypt.
But no longer were they audible,
and nor was his breath,
O creator! O destroyer!
could it have been worse?
The night did pass somehow,
Dorken and I terrified,
remembering the horrible university days,
which now seemed blissful.
We got up reluctantly,
the morning sun rose,
but we exclaimed in surprise,
how did we come to know?
The light did come from the left,
we followed it instantly,
after saluting our mate,
joyous and bitter we felt...
Part VII
We moved along the constricted
cavity, which was invisible at night,
noticing the sparkling opening,
getting larger and larger.
The scent of the cherry blossoms
reached our nose,
and filled our heart
with rejuvenating dynamism.
But found we did, only
to enter the enemy's camp,
that the efficacy had disappeared.
And we heard our heart crumbling within us.
They shot at us,
the bullet hitting Dorken,
he fell down and asked me to run,
I had no choice and no time to think,
and so I left him behind.
I have spent half a year,
wandering about the coast of poland.
trying to escape the country,
and reach East Germany.
Rivers I have crossed,
mountains I have traversed,
with the thought of Dorken,
at the death's door.
I have no news of my friends,
my companions nor of the war.
"Oh my friend! so you were in the army?"
said the fellow, "We have won the war!"
His shout stimulated the dead bar,
everyone crowding besides me,
as if unable to believe their vision,
They lifted me with all their adoration.
However, the actual verifiable truth
was different...
When we decamped the cave,
The wise Dorken had another plan.
"I would divert their attention,
you give me a backup." he began.
He passed without my acquiesce,
dumdfounded was I,
I had no words. I just stood there,
watching him fight, with a broken hand.
Alas my feet started moving,
and I was running to save myself,
laughing was my conscience,
at my cowardly act.
I escaped the fatal shore,
but left behind my comrades.
how could I go back to the university,
with the say of betrayal and defeat?
Now I was the idol of a village.
Yet, though Germany had won the war,
I myself, being alive had lost,
and Dorken having been asleep had won...
- See more at: https://allpoetry.com/poem/9154001-Courage-Under-Fire-by-Ananya-Chandra#sthash.gjVrRq2P.dpuf
Part I
In extreme daylight
near the german countryside
not a person, not an animal
anywhere to be seen
the grass only present
to hide the rotten face
merrily jumped up and down
forming sultry waves
but in the fiery illumination
there was a submissive lad
walking in the darkness
on a meandering trail
his quizzical look
said everything
duller than the ditchwater
stoppeth the cuckoo sing
alas he came to a settlement
worse than any wreckage
this was not to be the end
of his pilgrimage
drain of the shower
magnet of the iron
and shine to the sunflower
became he
quoth the head;
watch your leg,
enter not in land
of glee
surprised by the greeting
walked to the head did he,
a shilling, few pennies
enough to keep him serene
he smelled the vintage
heard the cabaletta
n rotated
towards the iron
being the nucleus of the village
unlikely from the rest,
twas the white flesh
of the coconut case
antiquate door opened he
to step on deer drugget
sat on a creaking chair
and ordered a drink bucket
brought the aged vendor
the finest of the liquor
sipped on, sipped on
to end the long last pleasure
came another uncanny fella;
what thy upto?,
In the army I was
responded the man...
Part II
He commenced reciting;
the German Army Academy
I entered, The training we
started awfully
my room was like a rat's hole,
due to the size and mess,
in the vast institute
of increasing burden and stress
the headmaster Schindler
with his watchful observant eagle eyes,
catching the prey when noticed
from an immense height
the time of drill
came time and again
when the sun rose at dawn
leading to a roar of damnation
followed by a volcano it was
when Schindler beat us with rods
march, march, march we did
and finished the day with sighing nods
back ache, head ache
we moaned with our might,
joined in the morning
was a puzzle from the night,
yet, opened the eyes
without any repentance
march, march, march
to finish with greivance
with unchanged seasons
the days were greased,
and I had celebrated ma quarter
when the world seemed to cease
a bang outside the window
we were startled first,
nine ten bullets inside the room
and were running to be nursed...
Part III
The poles had started it
luring us into the war
killing the younglings
the plan was gore
the ball had hit the hive
and the bees flew,
the siren heard;
prepare for coup
filled was the lobby
with dumbfounded buzzes,
the packs into flocks
were converted in disbelief
no more firing was heard
until midnight,
but the kitchen into flames,
the situation became plight
called out schindler
names of honour,
the most trusted ones
were selected for cover
three were saved,
two were burnt,
helpless they had become
the sheep had learnt
After the sleepless night
the morning sun had risen
without the routinely drill
without the routinely curses
only the memories shrilled
the well known cook Laenord,
twenty years of his life
had devoted to the institute
without a word of strife
alas ma best friend Jason
always laughing was he
filled with tears am i now
i could do nothing,
nothing to save him free
I wasnt going to rest
and so wasnt anyone,
prepare for battle we would
and so we had pledged
Next day we entered the lobby
rather filled with determination
Schindler started chanting
the prayer followed by plans
Along with the squadron leader
two more were to go,
to capture the Polish border flag
shadowing the bombardment show
Schindler with pure concentration
began to list the list of doom
Dorken, an obvious name
along with Will Droon
Stopped my heart it did,
"But Why?"
asked the uncanny fella,
for my name was the latter...
Part IV
mixed emotions besieged me,
was i happy
or was i dismal,
i had been trapped.
Nevertheless I had to prepare,
and had to return,
to see the faces
of well familiarity
and yet again march we did
being watched by the eagle eyes
not only two, but many
of the envious observers
they would stare at us
and speak mean things
on the sly, worse than
hell it had become
Could not stand it us two,
decided to find the prime fox.
We asked the gullible Heite;
it is Garry Weenown,
he voiced in no time
instantly we met
our novel fox professor,
seeing us pace
he flew towards the door
shoot, shoot and shoot
we did, the crowd running
towards the entrance,
blocked was the poor fox cunning.
he lay on the floor
writhing in agony,
commended we were by schindler
to have caught a polish spy.
Nothing to be happy, to be chipper
for this was not the end,
it was rather,
the calm before the storm...
Part V
The day approached
like a lion in the hassock,
for we could do nothing
to make it stop
The squadron leader dismounted
the experienced one in the group,
the catalyst to the reaction
we moved another step close
Schindler saluted farewell
as we mounted on the P-51
Dorken assisted Mindler,
while I took over the gun
An unusual plan it was,
for not united with the
main army we had.
All alone in the mist
we travelled like an insect
in the mammoth ocean.
alas we reached the sleeping border
stealthy enough in the dark,
atleast thought so we did,
before the dog upon us bark.
Mindler tried beyond compare,
and we started praying,
but heavy artillery
did succumb our prayer.
falling were we
like a shooting star.
like an ant in the sink,
were we in the devil's own lair.
flowing towards the river
below, through a stagnant sky,
unaware were we of the
peril we would face.
One thousand curses!!
we missed the cheerless river,
and crashed did we,
breaking into slivers.
Dorken had a broken hand,
but Mindler shattered his leg,
there was shrapnel in my shoulder,
the effect diminished
by the cushioning forest.
For we heard the polish footsteps,
there was no time to waste,
Mindler unable to stand,
we had to plot in haste.
Dorken being the robust one,
carried Mindler on his back.
I carried the supplies,
shocked about what had happened,
and unaware of what would happen.
Why carry so much?
asked the exhausted Dorken.
What else, for the journey home!
I said, but he replied quietly,
There will be no journey home...
Part VI
We saw a grotto up ahead,
as if the earth opened it's mouth,
to gobble up the doomed travellers,
and take them into the darkness beneath.
But no choice we had,
for the footsteps boomed now,
and we entered the cavern,
unknowingly, unmindfully, carelessly.
They were still chasing us,
though the steps had fainted
along with the light,
and an unusual dreariness
surrounded us all.
For a minute or two,
we remembered the forgotten faces,
vanished did they,
after thundering crashes.
The poles had blocked the exit,
and we were concealed
in the sepulcher,
left only imagining our decaying destiny,
in the near future.
no flight of the wind,
nor any smell of leaves,
we could only taste dust,
and the sound of our tread.
We ate as much as we could,
and the food supplies finished.
but there wasn't no water,
to quench the desiccated throats.
Mindler was unable to endure,
the agony making him writhe,
we could hear his heart beat,
in the silent crypt.
But no longer were they audible,
and nor was his breath,
O creator! O destroyer!
could it have been worse?
The night did pass somehow,
Dorken and I terrified,
remembering the horrible university days,
which now seemed blissful.
We got up reluctantly,
the morning sun rose,
but we exclaimed in surprise,
how did we come to know?
The light did come from the left,
we followed it instantly,
after saluting our mate,
joyous and bitter we felt...
Part VII
We moved along the constricted
cavity, which was invisible at night,
noticing the sparkling opening,
getting larger and larger.
The scent of the cherry blossoms
reached our nose,
and filled our heart
with rejuvenating dynamism.
But found we did, only
to enter the enemy's camp,
that the efficacy had disappeared.
And we heard our heart crumbling within us.
They shot at us,
the bullet hitting Dorken,
he fell down and asked me to run,
I had no choice and no time to think,
and so I left him behind.
I have spent half a year,
wandering about the coast of poland.
trying to escape the country,
and reach East Germany.
Rivers I have crossed,
mountains I have traversed,
with the thought of Dorken,
at the death's door.
I have no news of my friends,
my companions nor of the war.
"Oh my friend! so you were in the army?"
said the fellow, "We have won the war!"
His shout stimulated the dead bar,
everyone crowding besides me,
as if unable to believe their vision,
They lifted me with all their adoration.
However, the actual verifiable truth
was different...
When we decamped the cave,
The wise Dorken had another plan.
"I would divert their attention,
you give me a backup." he began.
He passed without my acquiesce,
dumdfounded was I,
I had no words. I just stood there,
watching him fight, with a broken hand.
Alas my feet started moving,
and I was running to save myself,
laughing was my conscience,
at my cowardly act.
I escaped the fatal shore,
but left behind my comrades.
how could I go back to the university,
with the say of betrayal and defeat?
Now I was the idol of a village.
Yet, though Germany had won the war,
I myself, being alive had lost,
and Dorken having been asleep had won...
- See more at: https://allpoetry.com/poem/9154001-Courage-Under-Fire-by-Ananya-Chandra#sthash.gjVrRq2P.dpuf
Part I
In extreme daylight
near the german countryside
not a person, not an animal
anywhere to be seen
the grass only present
to hide the rotten face
merrily jumped up and down
forming sultry waves
but in the fiery illumination
there was a submissive lad
walking in the darkness
on a meandering trail
his quizzical look
said everything
duller than the ditchwater
stoppeth the cuckoo sing
alas he came to a settlement
worse than any wreckage
this was not to be the end
of his pilgrimage
drain of the shower
magnet of the iron
and shine to the sunflower
became he
quoth the head;
watch your leg,
enter not in land
of glee
surprised by the greeting
walked to the head did he,
a shilling, few pennies
enough to keep him serene
he smelled the vintage
heard the cabaletta
n rotated
towards the iron
being the nucleus of the village
unlikely from the rest,
twas the white flesh
of the coconut case
antiquate door opened he
to step on deer drugget
sat on a creaking chair
and ordered a drink bucket
brought the aged vendor
the finest of the liquor
sipped on, sipped on
to end the long last pleasure
came another uncanny fella;
what thy upto?,
In the army I was
responded the man...
Part II
He commenced reciting;
the German Army Academy
I entered, The training we
started awfully
my room was like a rat's hole,
due to the size and mess,
in the vast institute
of increasing burden and stress
the headmaster Schindler
with his watchful observant eagle eyes,
catching the prey when noticed
from an immense height
the time of drill
came time and again
when the sun rose at dawn
leading to a roar of damnation
followed by a volcano it was
when Schindler beat us with rods
march, march, march we did
and finished the day with sighing nods
back ache, head ache
we moaned with our might,
joined in the morning
was a puzzle from the night,
yet, opened the eyes
without any repentance
march, march, march
to finish with greivance
with unchanged seasons
the days were greased,
and I had celebrated ma quarter
when the world seemed to cease
a bang outside the window
we were startled first,
nine ten bullets inside the room
and were running to be nursed...
Part III
The poles had started it
luring us into the war
killing the younglings
the plan was gore
the ball had hit the hive
and the bees flew,
the siren heard;
prepare for coup
filled was the lobby
with dumbfounded buzzes,
the packs into flocks
were converted in disbelief
no more firing was heard
until midnight,
but the kitchen into flames,
the situation became plight
called out schindler
names of honour,
the most trusted ones
were selected for cover
three were saved,
two were burnt,
helpless they had become
the sheep had learnt
After the sleepless night
the morning sun had risen
without the routinely drill
without the routinely curses
only the memories shrilled
the well known cook Laenord,
twenty years of his life
had devoted to the institute
without a word of strife
alas ma best friend Jason
always laughing was he
filled with tears am i now
i could do nothing,
nothing to save him free
I wasnt going to rest
and so wasnt anyone,
prepare for battle we would
and so we had pledged
Next day we entered the lobby
rather filled with determination
Schindler started chanting
the prayer followed by plans
Along with the squadron leader
two more were to go,
to capture the Polish border flag
shadowing the bombardment show
Schindler with pure concentration
began to list the list of doom
Dorken, an obvious name
along with Will Droon
Stopped my heart it did,
"But Why?"
asked the uncanny fella,
for my name was the latter...
Part IV
mixed emotions besieged me,
was i happy
or was i dismal,
i had been trapped.
Nevertheless I had to prepare,
and had to return,
to see the faces
of well familiarity
and yet again march we did
being watched by the eagle eyes
not only two, but many
of the envious observers
they would stare at us
and speak mean things
on the sly, worse than
hell it had become
Could not stand it us two,
decided to find the prime fox.
We asked the gullible Heite;
it is Garry Weenown,
he voiced in no time
instantly we met
our novel fox professor,
seeing us pace
he flew towards the door
shoot, shoot and shoot
we did, the crowd running
towards the entrance,
blocked was the poor fox cunning.
he lay on the floor
writhing in agony,
commended we were by schindler
to have caught a polish spy.
Nothing to be happy, to be chipper
for this was not the end,
it was rather,
the calm before the storm...
Part V
The day approached
like a lion in the hassock,
for we could do nothing
to make it stop
The squadron leader dismounted
the experienced one in the group,
the catalyst to the reaction
we moved another step close
Schindler saluted farewell
as we mounted on the P-51
Dorken assisted Mindler,
while I took over the gun
An unusual plan it was,
for not united with the
main army we had.
All alone in the mist
we travelled like an insect
in the mammoth ocean.
alas we reached the sleeping border
stealthy enough in the dark,
atleast thought so we did,
before the dog upon us bark.
Mindler tried beyond compare,
and we started praying,
but heavy artillery
did succumb our prayer.
falling were we
like a shooting star.
like an ant in the sink,
were we in the devil's own lair.
flowing towards the river
below, through a stagnant sky,
unaware were we of the
peril we would face.
One thousand curses!!
we missed the cheerless river,
and crashed did we,
breaking into slivers.
Dorken had a broken hand,
but Mindler shattered his leg,
there was shrapnel in my shoulder,
the effect diminished
by the cushioning forest.
For we heard the polish footsteps,
there was no time to waste,
Mindler unable to stand,
we had to plot in haste.
Dorken being the robust one,
carried Mindler on his back.
I carried the supplies,
shocked about what had happened,
and unaware of what would happen.
Why carry so much?
asked the exhausted Dorken.
What else, for the journey home!
I said, but he replied quietly,
There will be no journey home...
Part VI
We saw a grotto up ahead,
as if the earth opened it's mouth,
to gobble up the doomed travellers,
and take them into the darkness beneath.
But no choice we had,
for the footsteps boomed now,
and we entered the cavern,
unknowingly, unmindfully, carelessly.
They were still chasing us,
though the steps had fainted
along with the light,
and an unusual dreariness
surrounded us all.
For a minute or two,
we remembered the forgotten faces,
vanished did they,
after thundering crashes.
The poles had blocked the exit,
and we were concealed
in the sepulcher,
left only imagining our decaying destiny,
in the near future.
no flight of the wind,
nor any smell of leaves,
we could only taste dust,
and the sound of our tread.
We ate as much as we could,
and the food supplies finished.
but there wasn't no water,
to quench the desiccated throats.
Mindler was unable to endure,
the agony making him writhe,
we could hear his heart beat,
in the silent crypt.
But no longer were they audible,
and nor was his breath,
O creator! O destroyer!
could it have been worse?
The night did pass somehow,
Dorken and I terrified,
remembering the horrible university days,
which now seemed blissful.
We got up reluctantly,
the morning sun rose,
but we exclaimed in surprise,
how did we come to know?
The light did come from the left,
we followed it instantly,
after saluting our mate,
joyous and bitter we felt...
Part VII
We moved along the constricted
cavity, which was invisible at night,
noticing the sparkling opening,
getting larger and larger.
The scent of the cherry blossoms
reached our nose,
and filled our heart
with rejuvenating dynamism.
But found we did, only
to enter the enemy's camp,
that the efficacy had disappeared.
And we heard our heart crumbling within us.
They shot at us,
the bullet hitting Dorken,
he fell down and asked me to run,
I had no choice and no time to think,
and so I left him behind.
I have spent half a year,
wandering about the coast of poland.
trying to escape the country,
and reach East Germany.
Rivers I have crossed,
mountains I have traversed,
with the thought of Dorken,
at the death's door.
I have no news of my friends,
my companions nor of the war.
"Oh my friend! so you were in the army?"
said the fellow, "We have won the war!"
His shout stimulated the dead bar,
everyone crowding besides me,
as if unable to believe their vision,
They lifted me with all their adoration.
However, the actual verifiable truth
was different...
When we decamped the cave,
The wise Dorken had another plan.
"I would divert their attention,
you give me a backup." he began.
He passed without my acquiesce,
dumdfounded was I,
I had no words. I just stood there,
watching him fight, with a broken hand.
Alas my feet started moving,
and I was running to save myself,
laughing was my conscience,
at my cowardly act.
I escaped the fatal shore,
but left behind my comrades.
how could I go back to the university,
with the say of betrayal and defeat?
Now I was the idol of a village.
Yet, though Germany had won the war,
I myself, being alive had lost,
and Dorken having been asleep had won...
- See more at: https://allpoetry.com/poem/9154001-Courage-Under-Fire-by-Ananya-Chandra#sthash.gjVrRq2P.dpuf
Part I
In extreme daylight
near the german countryside
not a person, not an animal
anywhere to be seen
the grass only present
to hide the rotten face
merrily jumped up and down
forming sultry waves
but in the fiery illumination
there was a submissive lad
walking in the darkness
on a meandering trail
his quizzical look
said everything
duller than the ditchwater
stoppeth the cuckoo sing
alas he came to a settlement
worse than any wreckage
this was not to be the end
of his pilgrimage
drain of the shower
magnet of the iron
and shine to the sunflower
became he
quoth the head;
watch your leg,
enter not in land
of glee
surprised by the greeting
walked to the head did he,
a shilling, few pennies
enough to keep him serene
he smelled the vintage
heard the cabaletta
n rotated
towards the iron
being the nucleus of the village
unlikely from the rest,
twas the white flesh
of the coconut case
antiquate door opened he
to step on deer drugget
sat on a creaking chair
and ordered a drink bucket
brought the aged vendor
the finest of the liquor
sipped on, sipped on
to end the long last pleasure
came another uncanny fella;
what thy upto?,
In the army I was
responded the man...
Part II
He commenced reciting;
the German Army Academy
I entered, The training we
started awfully
my room was like a rat's hole,
due to the size and mess,
in the vast institute
of increasing burden and stress
the headmaster Schindler
with his watchful observant eagle eyes,
catching the prey when noticed
from an immense height
the time of drill
came time and again
when the sun rose at dawn
leading to a roar of damnation
followed by a volcano it was
when Schindler beat us with rods
march, march, march we did
and finished the day with sighing nods
back ache, head ache
we moaned with our might,
joined in the morning
was a puzzle from the night,
yet, opened the eyes
without any repentance
march, march, march
to finish with greivance
with unchanged seasons
the days were greased,
and I had celebrated ma quarter
when the world seemed to cease
a bang outside the window
we were startled first,
nine ten bullets inside the room
and were running to be nursed...
Part III
The poles had started it
luring us into the war
killing the younglings
the plan was gore
the ball had hit the hive
and the bees flew,
the siren heard;
prepare for coup
filled was the lobby
with dumbfounded buzzes,
the packs into flocks
were converted in disbelief
no more firing was heard
until midnight,
but the kitchen into flames,
the situation became plight
called out schindler
names of honour,
the most trusted ones
were selected for cover
three were saved,
two were burnt,
helpless they had become
the sheep had learnt
After the sleepless night
the morning sun had risen
without the routinely drill
without the routinely curses
only the memories shrilled
the well known cook Laenord,
twenty years of his life
had devoted to the institute
without a word of strife
alas ma best friend Jason
always laughing was he
filled with tears am i now
i could do nothing,
nothing to save him free
I wasnt going to rest
and so wasnt anyone,
prepare for battle we would
and so we had pledged
Next day we entered the lobby
rather filled with determination
Schindler started chanting
the prayer followed by plans
Along with the squadron leader
two more were to go,
to capture the Polish border flag
shadowing the bombardment show
Schindler with pure concentration
began to list the list of doom
Dorken, an obvious name
along with Will Droon
Stopped my heart it did,
"But Why?"
asked the uncanny fella,
for my name was the latter...
Part IV
mixed emotions besieged me,
was i happy
or was i dismal,
i had been trapped.
Nevertheless I had to prepare,
and had to return,
to see the faces
of well familiarity
and yet again march we did
being watched by the eagle eyes
not only two, but many
of the envious observers
they would stare at us
and speak mean things
on the sly, worse than
hell it had become
Could not stand it us two,
decided to find the prime fox.
We asked the gullible Heite;
it is Garry Weenown,
he voiced in no time
instantly we met
our novel fox professor,
seeing us pace
he flew towards the door
shoot, shoot and shoot
we did, the crowd running
towards the entrance,
blocked was the poor fox cunning.
he lay on the floor
writhing in agony,
commended we were by schindler
to have caught a polish spy.
Nothing to be happy, to be chipper
for this was not the end,
it was rather,
the calm before the storm...
Part V
The day approached
like a lion in the hassock,
for we could do nothing
to make it stop
The squadron leader dismounted
the experienced one in the group,
the catalyst to the reaction
we moved another step close
Schindler saluted farewell
as we mounted on the P-51
Dorken assisted Mindler,
while I took over the gun
An unusual plan it was,
for not united with the
main army we had.
All alone in the mist
we travelled like an insect
in the mammoth ocean.
alas we reached the sleeping border
stealthy enough in the dark,
atleast thought so we did,
before the dog upon us bark.
Mindler tried beyond compare,
and we started praying,
but heavy artillery
did succumb our prayer.
falling were we
like a shooting star.
like an ant in the sink,
were we in the devil's own lair.
flowing towards the river
below, through a stagnant sky,
unaware were we of the
peril we would face.
One thousand curses!!
we missed the cheerless river,
and crashed did we,
breaking into slivers.
Dorken had a broken hand,
but Mindler shattered his leg,
there was shrapnel in my shoulder,
the effect diminished
by the cushioning forest.
For we heard the polish footsteps,
there was no time to waste,
Mindler unable to stand,
we had to plot in haste.
Dorken being the robust one,
carried Mindler on his back.
I carried the supplies,
shocked about what had happened,
and unaware of what would happen.
Why carry so much?
asked the exhausted Dorken.
What else, for the journey home!
I said, but he replied quietly,
There will be no journey home...
Part VI
We saw a grotto up ahead,
as if the earth opened it's mouth,
to gobble up the doomed travellers,
and take them into the darkness beneath.
But no choice we had,
for the footsteps boomed now,
and we entered the cavern,
unknowingly, unmindfully, carelessly.
They were still chasing us,
though the steps had fainted
along with the light,
and an unusual dreariness
surrounded us all.
For a minute or two,
we remembered the forgotten faces,
vanished did they,
after thundering crashes.
The poles had blocked the exit,
and we were concealed
in the sepulcher,
left only imagining our decaying destiny,
in the near future.
no flight of the wind,
nor any smell of leaves,
we could only taste dust,
and the sound of our tread.
We ate as much as we could,
and the food supplies finished.
but there wasn't no water,
to quench the desiccated throats.
Mindler was unable to endure,
the agony making him writhe,
we could hear his heart beat,
in the silent crypt.
But no longer were they audible,
and nor was his breath,
O creator! O destroyer!
could it have been worse?
The night did pass somehow,
Dorken and I terrified,
remembering the horrible university days,
which now seemed blissful.
We got up reluctantly,
the morning sun rose,
but we exclaimed in surprise,
how did we come to know?
The light did come from the left,
we followed it instantly,
after saluting our mate,
joyous and bitter we felt...
Part VII
We moved along the constricted
cavity, which was invisible at night,
noticing the sparkling opening,
getting larger and larger.
The scent of the cherry blossoms
reached our nose,
and filled our heart
with rejuvenating dynamism.
But found we did, only
to enter the enemy's camp,
that the efficacy had disappeared.
And we heard our heart crumbling within us.
They shot at us,
the bullet hitting Dorken,
he fell down and asked me to run,
I had no choice and no time to think,
and so I left him behind.
I have spent half a year,
wandering about the coast of poland.
trying to escape the country,
and reach East Germany.
Rivers I have crossed,
mountains I have traversed,
with the thought of Dorken,
at the death's door.
I have no news of my friends,
my companions nor of the war.
"Oh my friend! so you were in the army?"
said the fellow, "We have won the war!"
His shout stimulated the dead bar,
everyone crowding besides me,
as if unable to believe their vision,
They lifted me with all their adoration.
However, the actual verifiable truth
was different...
When we decamped the cave,
The wise Dorken had another plan.
"I would divert their attention,
you give me a backup." he began.
He passed without my acquiesce,
dumdfounded was I,
I had no words. I just stood there,
watching him fight, with a broken hand.
Alas my feet started moving,
and I was running to save myself,
laughing was my conscience,
at my cowardly act.
I escaped the fatal shore,
but left behind my comrades.
how could I go back to the university,
with the say of betrayal and defeat?
Now I was the idol of a village.
Yet, though Germany had won the war,
I myself, being alive had lost,
and Dorken having been asleep had won...
- See more at: https://allpoetry.com/poem/9154001-Courage-Under-Fire-by-Ananya-Chandra#sthash.gjVrRq2P.dpuf
Part I
In extreme daylight
near the german countryside
not a person, not an animal
anywhere to be seen
the grass only present
to hide the rotten face
merrily jumped up and down
forming sultry waves
but in the fiery illumination
there was a submissive lad
walking in the darkness
on a meandering trail
his quizzical look
said everything
duller than the ditchwater
stoppeth the cuckoo sing
alas he came to a settlement
worse than any wreckage
this was not to be the end
of his pilgrimage
drain of the shower
magnet of the iron
and shine to the sunflower
became he
quoth the head;
watch your leg,
enter not in land
of glee
surprised by the greeting
walked to the head did he,
a shilling, few pennies
enough to keep him serene
he smelled the vintage
heard the cabaletta
n rotated
towards the iron
being the nucleus of the village
unlikely from the rest,
twas the white flesh
of the coconut case
antiquate door opened he
to step on deer drugget
sat on a creaking chair
and ordered a drink bucket
brought the aged vendor
the finest of the liquor
sipped on, sipped on
to end the long last pleasure
came another uncanny fella;
what thy upto?,
In the army I was
responded the man...
Part II
He commenced reciting;
the German Army Academy
I entered, The training we
started awfully
my room was like a rat's hole,
due to the size and mess,
in the vast institute
of increasing burden and stress
the headmaster Schindler
with his watchful observant eagle eyes,
catching the prey when noticed
from an immense height
the time of drill
came time and again
when the sun rose at dawn
leading to a roar of damnation
followed by a volcano it was
when Schindler beat us with rods
march, march, march we did
and finished the day with sighing nods
back ache, head ache
we moaned with our might,
joined in the morning
was a puzzle from the night,
yet, opened the eyes
without any repentance
march, march, march
to finish with greivance
with unchanged seasons
the days were greased,
and I had celebrated ma quarter
when the world seemed to cease
a bang outside the window
we were startled first,
nine ten bullets inside the room
and were running to be nursed...
Part III
The poles had started it
luring us into the war
killing the younglings
the plan was gore
the ball had hit the hive
and the bees flew,
the siren heard;
prepare for coup
filled was the lobby
with dumbfounded buzzes,
the packs into flocks
were converted in disbelief
no more firing was heard
until midnight,
but the kitchen into flames,
the situation became plight
called out schindler
names of honour,
the most trusted ones
were selected for cover
three were saved,
two were burnt,
helpless they had become
the sheep had learnt
After the sleepless night
the morning sun had risen
without the routinely drill
without the routinely curses
only the memories shrilled
the well known cook Laenord,
twenty years of his life
had devoted to the institute
without a word of strife
alas ma best friend Jason
always laughing was he
filled with tears am i now
i could do nothing,
nothing to save him free
I wasnt going to rest
and so wasnt anyone,
prepare for battle we would
and so we had pledged
Next day we entered the lobby
rather filled with determination
Schindler started chanting
the prayer followed by plans
Along with the squadron leader
two more were to go,
to capture the Polish border flag
shadowing the bombardment show
Schindler with pure concentration
began to list the list of doom
Dorken, an obvious name
along with Will Droon
Stopped my heart it did,
"But Why?"
asked the uncanny fella,
for my name was the latter...
Part IV
mixed emotions besieged me,
was i happy
or was i dismal,
i had been trapped.
Nevertheless I had to prepare,
and had to return,
to see the faces
of well familiarity
and yet again march we did
being watched by the eagle eyes
not only two, but many
of the envious observers
they would stare at us
and speak mean things
on the sly, worse than
hell it had become
Could not stand it us two,
decided to find the prime fox.
We asked the gullible Heite;
it is Garry Weenown,
he voiced in no time
instantly we met
our novel fox professor,
seeing us pace
he flew towards the door
shoot, shoot and shoot
we did, the crowd running
towards the entrance,
blocked was the poor fox cunning.
he lay on the floor
writhing in agony,
commended we were by schindler
to have caught a polish spy.
Nothing to be happy, to be chipper
for this was not the end,
it was rather,
the calm before the storm...
Part V
The day approached
like a lion in the hassock,
for we could do nothing
to make it stop
The squadron leader dismounted
the experienced one in the group,
the catalyst to the reaction
we moved another step close
Schindler saluted farewell
as we mounted on the P-51
Dorken assisted Mindler,
while I took over the gun
An unusual plan it was,
for not united with the
main army we had.
All alone in the mist
we travelled like an insect
in the mammoth ocean.
alas we reached the sleeping border
stealthy enough in the dark,
atleast thought so we did,
before the dog upon us bark.
Mindler tried beyond compare,
and we started praying,
but heavy artillery
did succumb our prayer.
falling were we
like a shooting star.
like an ant in the sink,
were we in the devil's own lair.
flowing towards the river
below, through a stagnant sky,
unaware were we of the
peril we would face.
One thousand curses!!
we missed the cheerless river,
and crashed did we,
breaking into slivers.
Dorken had a broken hand,
but Mindler shattered his leg,
there was shrapnel in my shoulder,
the effect diminished
by the cushioning forest.
For we heard the polish footsteps,
there was no time to waste,
Mindler unable to stand,
we had to plot in haste.
Dorken being the robust one,
carried Mindler on his back.
I carried the supplies,
shocked about what had happened,
and unaware of what would happen.
Why carry so much?
asked the exhausted Dorken.
What else, for the journey home!
I said, but he replied quietly,
There will be no journey home...
Part VI
We saw a grotto up ahead,
as if the earth opened it's mouth,
to gobble up the doomed travellers,
and take them into the darkness beneath.
But no choice we had,
for the footsteps boomed now,
and we entered the cavern,
unknowingly, unmindfully, carelessly.
They were still chasing us,
though the steps had fainted
along with the light,
and an unusual dreariness
surrounded us all.
For a minute or two,
we remembered the forgotten faces,
vanished did they,
after thundering crashes.
The poles had blocked the exit,
and we were concealed
in the sepulcher,
left only imagining our decaying destiny,
in the near future.
no flight of the wind,
nor any smell of leaves,
we could only taste dust,
and the sound of our tread.
We ate as much as we could,
and the food supplies finished.
but there wasn't no water,
to quench the desiccated throats.
Mindler was unable to endure,
the agony making him writhe,
we could hear his heart beat,
in the silent crypt.
But no longer were they audible,
and nor was his breath,
O creator! O destroyer!
could it have been worse?
The night did pass somehow,
Dorken and I terrified,
remembering the horrible university days,
which now seemed blissful.
We got up reluctantly,
the morning sun rose,
but we exclaimed in surprise,
how did we come to know?
The light did come from the left,
we followed it instantly,
after saluting our mate,
joyous and bitter we felt...
Part VII
We moved along the constricted
cavity, which was invisible at night,
noticing the sparkling opening,
getting larger and larger.
The scent of the cherry blossoms
reached our nose,
and filled our heart
with rejuvenating dynamism.
But found we did, only
to enter the enemy's camp,
that the efficacy had disappeared.
And we heard our heart crumbling within us.
They shot at us,
the bullet hitting Dorken,
he fell down and asked me to run,
I had no choice and no time to think,
and so I left him behind.
I have spent half a year,
wandering about the coast of poland.
trying to escape the country,
and reach East Germany.
Rivers I have crossed,
mountains I have traversed,
with the thought of Dorken,
at the death's door.
I have no news of my friends,
my companions nor of the war.
"Oh my friend! so you were in the army?"
said the fellow, "We have won the war!"
His shout stimulated the dead bar,
everyone crowding besides me,
as if unable to believe their vision,
They lifted me with all their adoration.
However, the actual verifiable truth
was different...
When we decamped the cave,
The wise Dorken had another plan.
"I would divert their attention,
you give me a backup." he began.
He passed without my acquiesce,
dumdfounded was I,
I had no words. I just stood there,
watching him fight, with a broken hand.
Alas my feet started moving,
and I was running to save myself,
laughing was my conscience,
at my cowardly act.
I escaped the fatal shore,
but left behind my comrades.
how could I go back to the university,
with the say of betrayal and defeat?
Now I was the idol of a village.
Yet, though Germany had won the war,
I myself, being alive had lost,
and Dorken having been asleep had won...
- See more at: https://allpoetry.com/poem/9154001-Courage-Under-Fire-by-Ananya-Chandra#sthash.gjVrRq2P.dpuf

/~~~\
|~~~|

She gazes round

Are you there?


The GREAT ABANDONING
is the only thing going down



She is looking for those who are looking to see
Who are still looking for those who are looking
For those unafraid to be seen

(Are you here?)



Soon soon
OH SO VERY SOON!

Only WAR
Only DEATH shall be known



She stands alone in the lonely
Bar

"Hey babe come home with me"

Are the only words that are spoken

Words that she shall never heed,..

her POV ..
Edited by deepavasudev - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bm11

Anu, this is my second favorite chapter. Total wisdom pack👏

I don't know haw many members our Kannar Fan Club has. I bet a lot😳😆
I am thinking already about writing to him or about him😉

Fathomless wisdom of this man leaves me speechless as well as people around him.
I thank God he works for the state.
Men like him in the Criminal Cirlce become Don Corleone Type. Unconditional absolute leaders.
No wonder he is a legend.
Generous, principled, loyal but at the same time sarcastic beyond measure, ruthless, able to kill with his own hands.
God, I envy his woman. He is hardbut very interesting to live with, to learn from.

Were you inspired by Vito Corleone himself? Confess😉

His managerial style is called "Perish Style" but what impresses me most he is dtill people oriented. He knows what to say when and to whom.

I won't be surprised he will play the greatest role in bringnig them together, to reunite.

His talk to Shlok reveals he sees how these two love sick people are foolish.
He shows Shlok how mistaken he is betraying her, the only woman that understood him.

Conversation to Astha is amazing. Best ever.
He is a father figure for her. The father she has never really had.
He has a daughter, Myra. I bet he talks to her this exact way.

What I loved best here. The wisest things:

Be thankful for all that God has given you

Rise and fight. As long as you're alive you have hope.

All that you need to live is within you. Inside you. You just have to look. You may not be able to see it the first time or the second time around even. But don't be disheartened. Keep looking. Trust me it's there. If I can see it in you standing five feet away ... then surely it is there.👏

Don't let others dictate terms.

Don't give others the power to make decisions for you. Be you're own master not others slave.


He became Astha's inspiration and her strength.
God, who is this guy? I'm in love irrevocably. In case he divorces I'm the first in the line. Always waiting.

Anu, please tell him that. I'm ready to send him my photo😆 in case he is interested.
I'm Janie too😳


I urge you to put your words on to paper and share them with us all. You're bordering on obsession I feel. So please do write to him of him but please make us part of it. I beg you.
I'm happy that you like the update so much. Makes the effort all the more sweet. Thank you!

He's the one with the power to bring light to others lives. He's seen, heard and lived through so much. He sees through them. Astha and Shlok are extremely lucky to be recipients of his wisdom.

And you know the way I found him and how the fiction turned out to be a freaky reality. Don Corleone type you say...but not ruthless like him.

Janie came all the all way from Scotland, left her family and friends without a second thought. You know why? It's all the reasons you said before. She knew he's the one and she knew what you know now. You're too late baby. He's taken. Divorce it ain't ever happening, over her dead body.

May be I can set you up with Almeidas killers? Interested? Call me.

Let me quote your first love once more...

We're all in the gutter. But some of us are looking at the stars. - Oscar Wilde

He teaches Others to look at the stars. He's showing Astha and Shlok the same. Let's Hope it's a clear sky,and the stars are visible. Even if today happens to be cloudy night tomorrow or day after.

He knows all about you Janie. And he does have soft corner for all Janie's. He's seen you and he likes what he sees.




Edited by Anunilmini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: miac

Anu loved it,no loving him more who u know????ssp kannar...He is a wise man and have compassion too.A real hero a brave one


Thank you so much Raji. Janie you have some serious completion Baby!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter Thitry Four

Arjun landed in Bangalore late in the evening, he did miss his partner. Damn you Tyson. He cursed his chief. He was met by his counterpart Detective Nisarg Shastri at the airport. Arjun was briefed on the course of action. They have trailed him for one day and Taha himself has led them to Mary. They were living in a studio apartment. One of their constables had gone undercover as a direct Marketing sales personnel and double checked the identity of Mary. After doing so only they had called Arjun. He was very pleased and impressed indeed with the thoroughness in his initiative. Nisarg informed him that he had kept round the clock watch on her. She was not working and stayed at home. Even at the moment Nisarg informed Arjun that she was at home. And if he's got the warrant for her to be questioned. Arjun showed him the papers.

Nisarg called for back up just Incase. And they made their way towards Hedge Nagar. Arjun, Nisarg and with two female officers out of one was in civilian clothes. She knocked on the door, they stood out of her sight. Mary opened the door after asking few qustions. Once she showed mary her ID she opened the door and others barged in. Arjun introduced himself along with the rest of the officers. He showed Mary the the papers. She looked him straight in the eye and told him that they have made a mistake. She's not Mary and she's Shafeeha Taha. Then Arjun showed her the pictures of her with Astha and her father. Her facial expressions changed rapidly. They could see guilt and remorse. Even though she tried to hide her emotions it was too late. Arjun told her "Mrs. Taha, we known everything about you. And it's too late to deny who you are and what you have done. We have all the evidence we need to put you put you bund bars for a very very long time. The men you hired to kill Mr. Almeida were busy cutting deals with the public prosecutor with their voluntary confessions. They gave you up without a second thought. Don't be a fool and make things worst for you and you're husband. You have to come with us". Arjun showed her the warrant and she froze. Her composure totally vanished and she looked like a cornered Deer about to become the next pray of a hungry pack of Wolves.

When the officers tried to grab her she realised the gravity of the situation. She kept saying she's done nothing wrong and that's they are are mistaken. They'd had to put he handcuffs for she resisted coming with them.

Arjun was glad that female offices were there to arrest her. He didn't mind having to drag out men, vulnerable girls was not his cup of tea. Arjun, Nisarg, Mary and the two female officers in one vehicle and the rest in the other. Once at the Bangalore Crime Department, she was duly processed with fingerprints, DNA and a complete profile.

Arjun soon found out Mary is no average young girl who fell pray to love and sold her soul to the devil. She had done everything with much thought and calculations. She was not as naive as she looked. Looks can be very deceiving. They didn't want to wait until the fingerprints and the DNA results were available to interrogate her. Nisarg had fast tracked the process. He knew they were loosing precious time. Arjun was ready to try a bluff with her. He already told her that Ajith had identified her. Now it's time to drive the lie even further and get a confession from her. But all his hopes failed When she refused to talk to them without a lawyer present. Proving his point Further more. She had done her homework before getting involved in all of this.

Arjun didn't have to wait for long. They'd got the fingerprints analysis and hers was a perfect match to the once taken from the debit card, the steering wheel and the sunglasses which was found later in the central console of the Range Rover. Nisarg pulled all the strings to get a court appointed lawyer for Mary. Arjun was very grateful to his counterpart for all that he's doing.

Next day Arjun was still sleeping when Nisarg called to inform him he's on his way to pick him up. How is he up already and on his way after all the late night clubbing and boozing. May be its Bangalorian thing. More stamina, he's younger than him anyways. He was up and ready nevertheless.

On the way Shlok called him wanting to know the course of action for the day. He felt bad telling a white lie to Shlok. Shlok had tried to call him last night. Arjun just told him he forgot to change it from silent mode. He didn't want to look like a jerk clubbing and having good time when he's going through the worst phase of his life.

The lawyer was to come around 9 o'clock and speak to the Mary. After that only Arjun could question her in the presence of her lawyer. Finally after two hours of waiting they were ready.

Mary looked calm and unassuming. One female officer was present as well, and suddenly Arjun felt it was very crowded. Then he remembered Astha telling him she was pregnant when she left Mumbai. He decided to start with that.

"Mrs. Taha, what happened to the baby? Or did you lie to Mrs. Almeida about it too?"

"No! I did not. My husband made me terminate the pregnancy since it was too early to have baby. We both weren't ready. And call me Mary" she said looking down at the table in front of her.

"Ok. Mary... Have you ever driven or been inside Mrs. Almeidas' Range Rover?" Asked Arjun

"No never"

"How many times have you used her Debit card to withdraw money"

"Just once. She gave me the card when I asked for some money. I gave her the card and the receipt as well"

"Mary! It's still not too late for You to do the right thing. You have betrayed the one person that stood by you in your hour of need. And today she's all alone in a prison cell and guess whose responsible for that? You are. You misused her kindness and trust in you. You back stabbed her. Tell the truth. Who hired you to pretend to be as Mrs. Almeida? You can make all this wrongs, all this lies right with one truthful answer. Choice is up to you. We can dos do this the easy way. Or we can dos this the hard way. Either way you're going to have to pay for your crimes. If you corporate then we can do something to make sure you get a reduced sentence. But you have to make a decision now. The public prosecutor is a not a very patient person" Arjun said to her trying to get a reaction from her.

"I didn't misuse anybody's trust or kindness. I don't know what you're talking about. I have nothing more to say" she said.

"Mary...you're digging you're own grave. I tried to help you. But you can only help someone that's willing to be saved not one that's hell bent on dying" Arjun said with regret in his voice. He wanted to do this for his partner and friend. Looked like they are going to fight it out in the court.

"Sir, how is Astha di" she couldn't resist. He was picking up some papers that was on the table. Indicating that the questioning was over.

"How do you think she's doing Mary? To have her husband so brutally murdered right in front of her eyes and then to be accused of committing that terrible act. Sent to prison for a crime she didn't commit. Had no part in. Getting beaten and almost bleeding to death the first night in remand custody. I would say peachy! Don't you think too Mary?" Arjun was given a small window of opportunity and he grabbed it both hands. He saw her eyes filling with tears. He went for the kill. "You call her "di" and you had no idea what hell she's been in while you were busy playing house with the money you made creating that hell. I'm glad I don't have any sisters like you. You're a disgrace to the word sister"

Arjun waited for her to say something. She didn't she just kept her head down. Unable to face him knowing what she had done to her Di. It's too late for her to go back now. If I don't think about myself who will. That was her thinking, that's how she rationalise her actions.

Just then Nisarg got a call and he walked out of the room, but returned the next minute with a photocopy. It was the fingerprints analysis. It was a perfect match. Arjun didn't have any doubt on them matching, but he didn't Expect to get them so fast. He was pleasantly surprised indeed with the level or professionalism and efficiency. He had his first tangible evidence to counter prove her lie.

"What have you got to say now Mary?"Arjun asked placing the matching fingerprints on two sheets of see through plastic. And he put one on top of the other and showed it her. They overlapped perfectly. "You said you have never been inside the Range Rover. Then how come we were able to find complete set of fingerprints from the sterling wheel. And the sunglasses that was found inside the vehicle.

"There's has to be some mistake sir! This cannot be. I'm being framed" she said panicking.

"Sorry to burst you're bubble Mary...but this ain't going away anytime soon. If you keep quiet now you will pay they will enjoy the loot you made them with your life. Is that what you want to do? Once they get what they want they will not even care whether you're alive or dead. They won't even look at you. Let alone help you. Don't be stupid. Do you think they'd be willing to sacrifice anything for your benefit. Nothing or no one will help you except one person. Yes! You know who it is. The same person you're sending to the wolves. Why are you saving the same person that wouldn't think twice before doing the same thing that you helped them do to Mr. Almeida" Arjun kept trying to prove his point. Create a doubt in her mind.

But she kept silent. Finally her lawyer asked if they have any more questions. He did indeed. He asked "Mary tell me where and with whom you were on the 10th of September"

"Morning I attended tuition classes at Excel Study Centre. I finished the morning lessons and bunked the afternoon classes and went to watch a movie with Shabir at Regal Cinema in Colaba"

"What is the name of the movie and what time?" Asked Arjun.

"Finding Fanny. 1:45" she said very sure and proud of herself. As it to say I told you so.

Arjun quickly took out his mobile and typed something. Mary looked at him with anxiety and fear.

"Are you sure about the movie" asked Arjun.

"Yes. I just changed my name and my religion not my head. Arjun and Deepika were so cute in it" said she.

"Well forgive me for not blushing thinking of me and Deepika. But guess what? unless you got a special screening on Wednesday the movie released two days later. You're lies are adding up. And don't you think a new head too would've been ideal too. From what I've seen and heard so far i wish you had" said Arjun with a smirk. Her credibility was falling apart. Which will only work in Asthas' advantage. He finally felt they are getting somewhere with Mary as the imposter.

"I'm not mistaken. It's you that's got all this wrong. You just want to some how get this pinned on me. I'm not stupid. I th..." Her lawyer stopped her from speaking further. She was getting irritated and before she could say anything more incriminating against her he did the ethical thing. Arjun wished the lawyer wasn't so righteous.

He knew that was the end of their interrogation. And the next time it will be in the court room in the presence of judge and jury. Stakes will be higher all to gain and so much loose. She was to be transferred from Bangalore to Mumbai. Arjun had to endure the 16 hour long train journey along with Mary and the travelling party which consisted of two constables and a female officer. If only Tyson had made provisions for the air tickets. Of course he would've signed the approval in a heartbeat. And kicked his ass all the way from Mumbai. He didn't have a choice. It was his case and he was in charge, she was his responsibility. He was doing his job.

The next day Arjun was at the station in the lions den waiting to brief him. Shlok was present too. SSP Kannar walked in with his slight limp, remnants from his past. They only know what was written in the press releases as to what happened to him in the jungles of Chattisgrah. Not the actual accounts. To have survived what he did is certainly what legends are made of. And he never ever boasts about it. They had met officers who had survived lame attempts on their sorry lives without even getting a scratch on them and talk about it on every given opportunity even when not inquired about.

Then they have Their Chief who went to hell and lived there for five days and came back and says anybody in his position would've done the same. He didn't do any heroic act just his job. What he was trained to do. It's this quality in him that have garnered the most respect amongst everyone who works with him and who's come to contact with him.

As he entered the cabin they automatically got up and saluted him. He acknowledged and gestured them to sit and said "To what do I owe this honour girls?" Looking at them with a very rare mile or more like a smirk.

"Sir! Mary is our custody now. She refuses to confess nor accept any part in the murder. But she has contradicted her own statements sir!" Arjun said feeling good about his work. And he knew he's not going to get any words if praise from his chief. The Arjun handed over a claim form to be signed by SSP Kannar. Taking it from his hand he said to Arjun " I hope you didn't add the booze and extra curricular activities to the expense and expect the department to pay for your thrills". Arjun looked at him with astonishment. How the hell doe she know about it. He was sure even Nisargs Chief didn't know about it. Omni present Tyson. Shlok looked at him giving the "I knew it" look, Arjun wished he would be swallowed by the ground opening up. He would've died a happy death.

"Didn't you tell Geetha you met Rita? Don't look so surprised Gohkle! I know everything that you girls do. It's ok to enjoy but don't do it do it on my watch" said the chief.

"Sir, their were no women involved. Mr. Shastri just took me out for few drinks Sir." That's all Arjun could think of. His plans of not telling find out failed miserably. It always does, they always back fires on him.

"Prepare a letter of appreciation for Mr. Shastri and his team and give it to me. I'll sign it. Don't write a love letter stick to the facts"

"Yes Sir" he barely managed to say.

"Gohkle... Mrs Almeida will be discharged from the hospital today. I want you to make sure she's kept in a separate cell. But don't keep her in solitary confinement either. Keep her with Sunny. She's the woman who tried to save her" said SSP Kannar looking at both of them.

"Ok sir" it was Arjun again who was doing the talking.

They had evidence to create reasonable doubt. Lawrence seemed to be most likely person who stood to gain the most by killing his brother and with Astha being convicted. Shlok and Arjun had been discussing the matter at length. But they felt as if they were still two steps behind. They had given the last will to be analysed by their legal expert. Shlok felt the clause was something that does not serve a purpose to someone who has already decided to that she should get everything that belonged him. It just gave a motive for others plot and scheme against her, and something Shlok felt he wouldn't have wanted Ashta to deal with nor worry about. He was trying to make things right for her, make up for the things he never delivered but promised to.

They were still waiting for the DNA analysis from the hair strands from the Range Rover. But none of these things prove without doubt she was the one who hired Ajith to kill Almeida. Her lawyer could argue since she lived in the house Astha herself planted those hair stands in the car. But they couldn't counter the fingerprints in on the steering wheel. Unless Mary changes her initial statement of never been inside Vehicle.

And until and otherwise the real perpetrator or perpetrators are put behind bars Asthas life could be in Danger as well. So just proving her innocence wasn't enough. They have to fine the real guilty party.
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Anu, I will repeat it ten times more but it's damn good written.

You give the real story with many characters. Way best that the original soap.
I see everything vevidly as if I'm present within. I don;t mint it of course to meet the characters I like most.
Arjun is trying so hard to be the real policeman. He has all the abilities but he is still very young and easily manipulated but he has a teacher that will lead him😉

Feel very sorry for Astha. A good-natured girl still unable to find her place in this world despite her financial stability and prospects. Were there actually any people befoe she met this police detective that ever loved her? I guess not. Manipulated buy everyone she has met.
You show interesting angle. Usually people hate police but here in this story a lost person finds solace in the place least expected. LIfe is unpredictable.
Looks like there still good guys in the forces. I want to believe (as in x-files)😆

Thank you for the chapter😊

Seetha meets Rita👏
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lovely, thank you😉
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Originally posted by: bm11


lovely, thank you😉

if I say I love u.. wil u then hate me..
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Ausum. update 👏 thanks anu 😉
I loved the convo with tyson of both arjun and shlok ,i was laughinng when tyson caught him and he connfessed 🤣
update soon 😊 🤗

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