#2 Ashlok FF GUILTY - Last Chapter finally updated 26/03 - Page 66

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Wow that was an awe chapter..u finally made my day with that..and that too after sooo long..so all things get back on track...shane realises the value of the most prettiest fellow out there..and kudos to the newly engaged..poor poor myra...my heart goes out to that fiery tigress..and whoa she has learnt lot from daddy dear and has decided to trust him...

Now am mad at our hero..y did u break my dearest princess's little heart..anyhow u mended the Queen's heart..so forgiven..
So it s definitely mission accomplished for mrs.kannar.. And here jay has no say...so its shaadi mubarak for shlok and astha agnihotri...
Wonderful story dear.. And that court scene will always be etched in my mind..that was and will always remain my fav part...thanks for this story... Hope u write more...waiting for the next!!!


I know I'm guilty of talking forever to post the last update, I'm truly sorry.

Thank you dear for your constant love and encouragement. And for sticking by when I dissapeard. 😛

Everything is on the right track for now. So my hope is that, they manage to stay on course Nd not loose their way yet again. Very few people get second chances. they all got that. So hope they make full use of that.

The court room drama was so mcuh fun to pen as well. I'm glad that you enjoyed it as much as I did putting it into words.

We all crave for love. Even a cynic and the realist needed love. so what hope do we have?

Thank you once again and I wish you Love and hope be a constant in your life as well.


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Posted: 11 years ago


Thank u so much Akki for this inspiring n hopeful FF which make me see life in a new light 👏. Thanks to introduce me with SSP Kannar a men with excellent sarcasm,heroic courage,inspiring n ever hopeful thoughts about life in most difficult time in short a perfect men 👍🏼. His Janie girl n Lady Myra a family with full of aliveness. Now came to his Seeta n Geeta proper student of Kannar class both r poles apart but brilliant in their work.
Lovemethotri & his Cow girl after Kannar who make me fall for this FF n their love story with so many up n downs finally find it's happy way with help of all this ppl. But i miss them a bit in last part but as they say hope they will have a wonderful family along with Pancy n Queen.
Arjun n Shanelle also find their true love a match made in heaven😊. Feel sad for Lady Myra but i'm sure she will get her real Prince Charming cause she's Kannar after all.
All in all a memorable story which will be close to my heart n i will miss it very much 😭. Best of luck for u n your family Anu take care stay happy n blessed 🤗.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely end. You wrote a really beautiful story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Happy Ending
Thank u for Rollercoaster ride 👏
Love the myra drama ...Jay going train her daughter to face odds of world or he manipulating her to mold her in his terms😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for this beautiful story anu
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Posted: 11 years ago

FIRST OF ALL A BIG SORRY FOR COMMENTING VERY LATE...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Coming to your update...
its simply superb...

A perfect ending to a lovely story...

Loved the way u gave importance to each and every character...

u brought in everyone into the finally frame...

shane released her mistake and rushed to Arjun...

Poor Myra...so heart broken...but she will cop up...as she is kannar and jane daughter...she will learn to fight back...

loved the wedding part...finally the D day come to them...

when u r in love...u will reach ur goal...

happy to see ashlok and shanearjun together...

kannar should be proud of his jane...who brought his puppies together...

thanks for the awesome finish...

Eagerly waiting to read ur next creation...

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