SAHIL SS:TU HI MERA..(part 2 on page 1)

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This is a story of a man who is considered heartless,egoistic,inhuman by the world but is it the truth??.this is also a story of a beautiful angel who was the only one to look through the beast's facade.what will be the outcome of this love story of a beauty nd a beast.come along in my journey of rediscovering love with sanam and aahil 😊

Character sketch
Aahil raza Ibrahim:a well known and most powerful businessman of Bhopal .belongs to thw nawab family but is a self made man who have single handedly developed his construction business.short tempered,heartless,devil in disguise but noone sees the broken,bruised,lonely and lifeless child hidden behind this devil.age-31years.

Nida Ibrahim:beautiful,graceful,witty and cunning.she loves being aahil raza Ibrahim's wife just because she can live her life kingsize.married to aahil from past 4 years but she cares oly for the Mrs aahil raza Ibrahim tag nothing else .

Begum sahiba ie tanveer ie step mom of aahil:a very cunning women who married the nawab of Bhopal just to enjoy the richness and status who was 15 years older to him.appears sweet and a prefect mother for aahil but loves oly her son rehan and daughter shazia .

Rehan raza Ibrahim:24 year old cute,understanding and lively young brother of aahil .oly he cab bring a slight curve on his aahil bhai's face.very close and attached to him .doesn't like his mother's selfish nature much and prefers to stay away from her.has completed his civil engineering but main passion lies in music .want to become a music director.

Shazia raza Ibrahim:an 20 year old pampered,cheerful daughter of Ibrahim family.apple to her brothers eyes who adore her .very close to her brothers and the three siblings share a very strong relation.doing her mbbs.

Khala and khalo:tanveer's distant relatives stay with her and are her hutch dogs who follows every order of tanveer blindly.

Badi begum sahiba:paralysed grandma of aahil loves him very much .always prays that aahil gets back his happiness which he lost with his mother's death.Hates tanveer but unable to say anything as she is bedridden.

Nawab abid raza ibrahim:father of aahil now dead loved his first wife a lot but after her death during childbirth turned him bitter and alcoholic.dint like aahil and beat him for every small mistake of his.married tanveer a bar dancer as he impregnated her and for his reputation sake married her .

Khans
Dilshad khan:grandma of sanam and sehar .strong lady .after husbands death single handedly took care of her children and again when her daughter in law and son passed away in a road accident she took up her granddaughters responsibility and brought them up alone.owns a small boutique.

Sanam khan:A 23 year old beautiful and intelligent granddaughter of dilshad .she is a mature girl compared to her twin sehar.completed her bcom .

Sehar khan:witty,intelligent,outspoken and bubbly granddaughter of dilshad.upcoming fashion designer.loves het small family to bits nd her bf rehan Ibrahim

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It sounds great !! loved it...
waiting for the plot !! 😃
Do pm me when you update...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds interesting ! pm me when you update
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Chapter 1

Khan house
Khan house was a small but warm house which reflected a homely feeling.dilshad sighed remembering her mansion which asad had bought with his hard earned money but after his and zoya's death she wasn't able look after business and khan mansion nd khan construction was sold by bank to settle the loans asad had taken And with the left over savings nd jewelry she was able to buy this small home for her granddaughters.najma's husband imran also helped dilshad to buy this home nd a small shop on rent where she now successfully ran a boutique for nearly 18 years now.najma ,imran and their daughter haya left for states soon after.buy she was forever grateful to imran for his emotional nd financial support he provided like a real son would do .she saw the decorated home and remember how last time it was for najma's marriage and now its again decorated for her granddaughter sanam who would ne getting engaged to ashraf tomorrow.her eyes misted remembering zoya and asad who would be soo happy seeing sanam as a bride but alas the cruel Destiny snatched her son and daughter in law and parents of sanam sehar leaving them orphans she had tried to become their friend,mother,father ,guide everything but she knew she can never take her parents place.but she was proud of her granddaughters who were diamonds beautiful,helpful,down to earth and loving young souls where sheer was spunky,outgoing and cheerful sanam was always the quiet,shy,soft spoken child who kept her pains Amd worries to herself and tomorrow she would be gettin engaged and married within a months time this thought made her heart wrench in pain of letting go another of her loved one but she just wishes and prayed that her sanam should get all the happiness of the world.
Someone hugged her from behind breaking her trails of thoughts:uffo drama queen phirse meena kumari ki tarah lag gayi na aanson bahane?? Asked seher playfully.aur waise bhi sanam ki kal sirf engagement hain agar engagement mein ganga Manuka bahadoge toh shadi mein toh tsunami aajayega ..
Dilshad:chup badmash she said in mock anger.aur Mau ache se janti hoon ki sanam ki ruksati par tsunami mai nahi tu laayegi bhale hi badi strong lagti hain tu lekin sanam ko saber zyaada miss tu hi karegi..
Seher:ji nahi aisa kuch nahi hoga mujhe poora karma milega aish karne ke liye toh mai kyun roungi she said nonchalantly.
Dilshad:dekhte hain khair abhi jaake soja kal bahut tayyariyan karni hain .
Seher:good night meena Kumari she said and ran off before dilshad could catch her.
Dilshad:pagal kahiki AnD went away to sleep.

SASE's room
Sanam was standing and watching the full moon sky with moist eyes remembering her ammi abbu and missing their presence .seher entered and sighed seein sanam's upset face she could never handle sanams sadness.
Seher:le tu bhi yahan rote huwi khadi hain .agar badi ammi meena kumari hain to toh junior meema kumari.itne aanson aaye Kaham se hain .
Sanam:ammi abbu ki yaad aarahi thi seher.
Seher sighed painfully:unki yaad toh mujhe bhi ATI hain sanam magar sach toh yeh hain ki woh hamesha hamare paas hain haina.both sisters hugged each other emotionally.
Sehar:chal ab soja aur apni ashraf miyan ke sapnom mein doobja she said playfully And went to made her bed.
Sanam sighed she dreams everyday from past one month but not about ashraf but about that handsome stranger who had saved her life and respect by fighting the rougs who had followed her on her way home.if not for that stranger she would have either been dead or lost her respect till now.the anger ,the pain and the emptiness that reflected in that strangers eyes haunted her till today and somehow made her feel connected to him.the way he had forcefully held her pushing her in his car and dropped her near home made her heartbeat rise even now.his touch lingeres on her skim even now.sanam knew that feeling so many stranger feeling isn't right especially when she was getting engaged to another man but she was helpless that stranger never left her mind how much ever she tried .she removed this thoughts and slept hoping for a better day tomorrow..

Precap:sanams engagement 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start but too short ! Plz continue...
Btw, Aahil married to Nida in this story...?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg...Aahil is married with Nida ?? 😲
Sanam getting engaged with a stranger and she is thinking about a stranger !! šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
Awesome update...do pm me the next update...😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

Sase's room
Sanam was again having a restless sleep she was again dreaming about that night when she had to go far to deliver some dresses and it was late when she returned nd her taxi also got punctured when she had to walk on a lone road.nd some thugs followed her makin comments on her .their stare made her shiver even in sleep.they tried to snatch her dupatta when her knight in shining armour appeared though drunk he protected her nd beat the hell out of those thugs .they ran seeing him seething in anger.then she saw her angel .red eyes,handsome face nd frown on his forehead.she was literally bowled by his handsomeness.he forcefully made her sit in car nd asked only one thing address which she said hurriedly not wanting to invite his wrath.he dropped her without a word nd went away.for a moment sanam felt it was a dream but alas it was a reality.she still remembered that handsome man after almost six months if meeting.his touch,his anger did somethin to her heart but she was helpless now she was going to be someone's wife and this thought wer a sin to her.she sighed nd got up it was already five therefore she went to do wadhu for fajr namaz.

Khan apartment
Khan apartment was decorated beautifully.dilshad was making arrangements nd running here nd there .seher had to literally force her to sit down nd relax.
Sanam descended the stairs looking beautiful in her peach nd maroon combination lehenga.all were blown by her beauty and simplicity.but sanam couldn't be much happy as her heart wasn't accepting azhar as her fiancee but she smiled forcefully seeing dilshad nd seher's happy faces.
Both exchanged rings nd azhar's mom started taunting dilshad.
Azhars mom:yeh ring itni saadi kyun hain.aur isme sirf ek hi heera hain woh bhi itna chota.
Dilshad:agar pasand nahi hain toh hum dusre lelenge shamim ji kal ya parson jaakar jaisa AAP kahenge she said maintaining the situation.
Seher nd sanam both felt bad at azhars mom's taunt and seeing their grandmother soo helpless infront of her but due to guests they kept quiet.the whole engagement concluded with azhars mom'a taunts sometimes on food or sometimes in gifts but dilshad heard everything quietly.

At night.
Dilshad's room
Sanam nd seher sat on bed seein dilshad arrange the gifts nd jewelry of sanam in the cupboard when seher spoke.
Seher:woh azhar ki ammi kitni Besharam hain badi ammi aapne unhe kuch kaha kyun nahi har ek cheez mein nuqs nikla rahi thi woh.said seher angrily.
Sanam:haan badi ammi mujhe bilkul acha nahi laga.unhe toh samajhna chahiye ki kitni mehnat se aapne saari tayyari ki hogi magar nahi inke taane to khatam hi nahi huwe.
Dilshad:uffo tum dono kya leke baith Gaye ho.shadi mein toh yeh sab chalta rehta hain beta woh dil ki buri nahi hain.
Sanam:magar badi ammi...
Dilshad:bas ap mujhe kuch nahi sunna .tum dono bhi thak Gaye honge jaap jaake sojao.kal interview bhi haina tera sanam jaa jaake soja.
Both girls left for their room.

Sase'a room.
Seher :chill sanam woh Teri SaaS shadi ke baad apne AAP patri pe aajayegi don't worry mai hoon na she said to lighten sanams mood.
Sanam:nahi sehar main kal ke interview ko leke tensed hoon .Allah kare mujhe yeh job miljaye.badi ammi ki kuch zimmedariyan kam hojainge.
Seher:arre kyun nahi milegi zaroor melegi after all rehan ki bhai ki company hain sanam.
Sanam:sehar mujhe sifarish ki naukri bilkul nahi chahiye abhi se boldeti hoon. sanam said sternly.
Seher:k meri satyawadi matey mai kuch nahi bolungi rehan se theek hain chal ab mujhe toh badi zor ki neend aarahi hain good night.with that sehar nd sanam both dozed off due to tiredness.

Some bar
Ahil kept drinking it was already 1 am ,the regular waiter came nd told aahil politely
Waiter:sir bar ban karne ka samay hogaya hain AAP please ..
Aahil:nahi mujhe ek aur drink chahiye do ek aur drink mujhe he said stubbornly.
Waiter helplessly:sir plzz aaj meri wedding anniversary hain biwi ghar pe intezaar kar rahi hogi .mai already late hoon AAP jayinge to mai jaa paunga.
Aahil:Ohj happy wedding anniversary dost.hope tumari shadi successful rahe jao jaake celebrate karo ache se .aur yeh lo kuch paise he kept a bundle of 1000 ra notes kuch acha lelo biwi ke liye khush hojaiyegi.
Waiter:but sir yeh bahut zyaada hain..
Aahil:kuch zyada nahi hain meri biwi toh roz aise hazron rupayee udati hain sirf parlor mein agar yeh Paise tumhe aur tumari biwi ko thodi khushi de sakti hain toh il be happy.waise bhi mere pairs ache kaamon mein bahut kam istemaal hote hain he said nd walked away stumbingly.
Waiter:najane kab inki zindagi mein khushiyan aayengi.hey bhagwan inki zindagi mein khushiyan Dena aur Unka akelapan door kardena.mujhe intezaar rahega uss din ka jab yeh yahan aana bandh kardenge.he prayed sadly nd closed the bar .

Precap:sanam in aahils office..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept
Waiting for next chapter
PM me next time when you update

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