Abhigya OS - Leave it to destiny

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey,


So this idea has been stewing in my brain for a while, thanks to the intense discussion we've had about the current ongoing track in the AT. Everyone seems to think there is a plan and even though I doubt there is this seems to have latched onto my brain so I have decided to write down what Abhi might be thinking.


Please note that there is no intention of stealing anyone's work so if there is any similarities its unintentional(and obviously because you're an awesome writer) so if you do find any please let me know and I will acknowledge the writer.


I dedicate this to all my sisters in the AT(too many to mention)


Enjoy and please leave any feedback and positive criticism.



Destiny brought them together and fate kept them there, she thought as she folded her clothes for the final time, but it was time to change their destiny. She was finally leaving; her haven; her prison; her foe; her ally; her saviour. Shaking her head she went back to putting in the last of her clothes in the bag open in front of her, a small smile playing on her face as she thought of all their almost romantic moments together.

He found her sitting lost in her own thoughts, a small smile on her face, that didn't quite reach her eyes. That was the picture he drank in and etched in his memory, with all the others he had, because he knew she was unaware that he was in the room. He'd forced her hand and now she was leaving him, but he had had enough of watching the people he considered closest to him hurting the one person who cared completely for him.

She hadn't heard him walk into the room, so he knew he was safe for now. As he watched, he went back to the first time he'd seen her. He knew she was different from other girls he knew, very frank and straightforward. She had neither been afraid to speak her mind nor was she worried that him being famous would create problems for her. She had stood by right irrespective of what people had thought of her and that had earned her his respect. He'd felt an instant connection with her when he unknowingly spoke to her on the phone and had only realized once Purab's truth was out that it was her he had spoken to her that one day long ago. Her mother had cleared some of the other misunderstandings about her when he found out that Dadi had picked her for him but she did not think it to be a good match.

He hadn't understood why then she had done what he had seen in the video and he'd gotten his answer when he looked for answers and found them in Aliyah's phone. Fate played a hand in that; him needing to borrow Aliyah's phone to make a call as his battery had died and reading the message that Tanu had sent that their plan was finally working. He'd started looking through her phone then, without any thought of invading her privacy, and what he'd found had shaken him to the core; an unedited version of the same clip he'd been sent and that showed an entirely different picture. He sent it to his phone, but he knew it would never become public.

He knew then what he needed to do. She was never ever going to have any peace in this house because his sister and his "girlfriend" had gotten it into their heads that they were going to get rid of her. To save her, he would close all her paths for coming back into this house that rightfully was hers even if it meant having to live a life without her.

So he gave in to her demand for a divorce, even though he wanted to shout at her, hold her tight, ask her to stay; he had always wondered if she had any feeling for him or if it was all for others that she acted with concern and he got his answer when he'd almost kissed her; her hitched breath, closed eyes and erratic heartbeat. It took all it had to stop himself for going all the way knowing if he did she might never leave him and he needed her gone. So he started his taunts, hurting himself a hundred times more with words he said to hurt her, turning himself into the villain, creating enough hatred in her heart for him that she would never want to come back.

And that was why she was folding her clothes, getting ready to leave, because she had had enough. He did not know where she would go, whether she would stay in Mumbai with her family or move to another city, another country or an entirely different continent. He would always keep tabs on her, to know she was doing okay, to help anonymously if need be, to make sure she was happy, because one day they would be re-united, of that he was certain; because he knew destiny had brought them together and fate would hopefully keep them there.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg resss i'm sposed to be asleep but ahhh

quick thoughts- ufff utter perfection mini me!! so abhi is the one making the big sacrifice here! bewakoof kahin ka, total heroine behaviour!😛 but also, awww!!! 😃

loved the circular ending, though ouch what angst that they have to be separated now only to get back together later

thanks for writing and posting mini me, hope to get back to you with a detailed response when it is actually day time here ;)

love love love!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

omg resss i'm sposed to be asleep but ahhh

quick thoughts- ufff utter perfection mini me!! so abhi is the one making the big sacrifice here! bewakoof kahin ka, total heroine behaviour!😛 but also, awww!!! 😃

loved the circular ending, though ouch what angst that they have to be separated now only to get back together later

thanks for writing and posting mini me, hope to get back to you with a detailed response when it is actually day time here ;)

love love love!


No worries mina Di...take your time...thank you thank you..w.aiting for a more detailed response and yes abhi making the big sacrifice...don't ask why that's what came into the brain...lol

Sleep Di...speak soon.love, hugs and kisses
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi minMehra,
Nice One shot.. Ohhh Abhi's scarifice 😭 Abhi in +ve angle😊 👏.

Keep up dear.

Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh Minmin ... that was so beautiful and heart rending!!!! Abhi's pain and sacrifice ...!!!! His trust that they would surely end up together again!!! I loved this ... so reflective of the current happenings!!!

Thank you!



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu_frn

Hi minMehra,

Nice One shot.. Ohhh Abhi's scarifice 😭 Abhi in +ve angle😊 👏.

Keep up dear.

Update soon


Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: indi

Oh Minmin ... that was so beautiful and heart rending!!!! Abhi's pain and sacrifice ...!!!! His trust that they would surely end up together again!!! I loved this ... so reflective of the current happenings!!!

Thank you!




Thank you indi...Lovely words!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! That was amazing!
Abhi finally using his brain and doing the right thing. His pain and remorse so obvious.

So beautifully written <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AmanaR

Wow! That was amazing!

Abhi finally using his brain and doing the right thing. His pain and remorse so obvious.

So beautifully written <3


Thank you Amana!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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MINMIN MEHRA!!!! ❤️ ufff love love love it!!!! ⭐️

Now can we please have this in the show!! 😉 loved the beginning and ending lines.Abhigya so in sync. Oh how I wish for this to happen for real!! 😛 Great job behena!! And thank you for the dedication! 😉

Keep Rocking!! ⭐️ love loads!!! Kisses and hugs to my pyaari MMM!! 😃

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