arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#571

awesome update

WOW Khushi slapped shyam, he deserve it.

I hope Arnav will calmly listen to Khushi and will not draw conclusions immeditely. I can't wait to reas his reaction.

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#572

Rhea, just read only the last part of update. Very happy to know that khushi finally confessed about shyam to arnav...
I'm sure Hameshaa's Arnav will not blame khushi. Maybe yes he will be angry to know the truth so late and not sooner.

Will be back with more and not to forget unres my previous comment.
sorry for still not unresing my comment for my niece not my AD is currently keeping me busy.

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#573

Awesome update Rhea!!! Loved it totally!!!

Hmm she confessed about Shyam to Arnav but will he believe her or will he believe snake? Poor Anji hopefully she will not break with shyam's revelation.

NK and Akash they are so funny and Payash aww so cute, please update soon!!!!!

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spanny93

@spanny93

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Loved this beautiful story... Each update remained me of our fav couple Arnav and kushi... I wish the story in the serial had been like this... Read all chapters in one go... Loved ur writing... Arnav and Kushi started accepting each other into their lives in a natural way like it was bound to happen... Kushi took a good decision in telling Arnav the truth about shyam... She can't start her life without disclosing this to Arnav... Hope both of them find a way to safe guard Anjali...

Waiting for next update...

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#575

that was another beautiful update...Anjali is so happy ..already imagining on leaving all the bad memories behind with her Chotte and Kushiji...but now i wonder what she would do with the storm of destruction thats headed her way with what Kshi has revealed to Arnav about Shyam...

What will Arnav do lash out at Kushi or be with her Hamesh to leave the bad memories behind...looking forward to the next update...

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#576

It's good that khushi is going to tell arnav about Shyam. Hope that arnav will believe Khushi and not doubt her.

Continue soon

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#577

the vibes of a function esp., a ladies only gathering like Mehendi is well brought out alongwith the feelings and apprehensions of a new bride to be - this is with ref. to Payal as it is quite difficult to say so with SankaDevi 😉

Khushi and her Dilwale ... each in a world of their own wondering whether their life would roll like a well oiled wheel with NK and Akash to add speed breakers inbetween 😆

the letter written with so much feeling makes an immediate connect with its reader bringing out so many emotions and passions...

the thread has run smooth upto now and here comes the knot testing the strength of the thread - will the knot break the thread or will it be smoothened out ... time possesses the answer

thanx for the pm...pls continue soon 😃

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#578

Finally Khushi is telling Arnav about Shyam. I hope Arnav trusts her.

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#579

"There can never be another Arnav Singh Raizada and Khushi Kumari Gupta. May their love story live forever.."
I Loved this quote of yours in the beginning, truly no one can be like them
Sweet cute update
The last part was awesome, wish we could've witness something like this in the show
Just that Arnavji trusts khushi and use his shaatir dimaag
Thanx for the pm
Eagerly waiting for the next update
Thanx for liking my username, my husband suggested it to me :p

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#580

I loved the update.

Especially, Arnav noticing Khushi's each and every detail when she was sharing her idea with NK and Akash, loved how Arnav was teasing her about his names and was telling her what he thinks of her.

I loved the emotional and lovely moment between the siblings and how Arnav turned the 14 year old to believe in his Di that he can have a chance at happiness. And from there I started feeling fearful that something wrong will happen.

It started to happen with Shyam being present at poolside instead of Arnav. Happy that Khushi slapped him but Anjali just missed it. And agin I'm happy for that. Will come back to why.

I loved how you finally used the letter from Arnav's mom to be given to Khushi in her hand rather being assumed that what she is doing without knowing like the show. No, she needs to know and thanks for that. And I loved Khushi's reply to Arnav's mom, her little chat with her and her realization that she needs to tell Arnav everything.

And this the why I was happy, that it has to be Khushi who should tell Arnav what happened instead of him finding out any other way. Whether he believe her or not but it had to be her as per my POV. I know I'm fearful what will happen next and how hurt Arnav will be as his fear of not lasting happiness coming true if not for him than for his Di.

Yup you left us at the very scary moment but I guess that was required.

P.S. Yes I want you to let Anjali know that Khushi is the same girl who fell in Arnav's arm in lucknows show.