Beauty and the Beast - now COMPLETE (Pg 22) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: mahnoormalik

WOW what an amazing concept!!

waiting eagerly😳



Don't know about great. But i hope you like the story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
res!

KAT KAT KAT KAT KAT KAT!!!!!!

kat kat kat kat KAT KAT KAT!!!!!

It was awesome!! Ufff!!! I can't even tell you how much I love that you've made it an urban, contemporary story but completely shot through with fairy tale feels - or is it the other way around, fairy tale base with contemporary feels?! I don't know but the combination is alchemical! I am hooked!

Loved Pragya as marketing genius, and what an appealing sensibility she has. Loved her Beetle. And that Purab is still manager! Yay! Heart aching for dark mysterious Abhi already although I do hope he doesn't remain as enigmatic...I shall be patient in the hope of a slowly revealed mystery :D

BTW I had no trouble imagining AbhiGya as themselves, despite having the other idea in mind. So kudos to you for creating such vividness for your readers!!

Again, loved it all. Thanks so much for sharing, this is going to be fantastic. I'm so thrilled. Yay!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Phew!!!

Okay!!

KAT! KAT! KAT! WHAT DO I SAY!!!! 😲

MORE PLZ!! AND SOON!!! PLZ!!

Gosh!! Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!! I so want to copy paste Mina Di's comment here!!! She has worded it perfectly!!

The whole concept! Fairytale feels combined with urban setting!! AbhiGya as the beauty and the beast!! The backstory!! Uff all this is just PERFECT!! ❤️

Thank you so much for this story Kat!! Loving it already!!

Hugs to you!! ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
A fantastic start Kat! I loved it! Thanks for posting this, was waiting for a long time to start reading! Love it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Plz do continue.. It's really good
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: kdsubs



Ummm, who is Amar?

Thank you rbb. Hope you will enjoy the tale.

stupid phone always changes the words sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
wow the first chapter is brilliant I like your style of writing it's different and really good, can't wait to read more and find out what happened to him and how he became like that, it's nice to see Pragya in another profession, hope you post the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: -mina-

res!

KAT KAT KAT KAT KAT KAT!!!!!!

kat kat kat kat KAT KAT KAT!!!!!

It was awesome!! Ufff!!! I can't even tell you how much I love that you've made it an urban, contemporary story but completely shot through with fairy tale feels - or is it the other way around, fairy tale base with contemporary feels?! I don't know but the combination is alchemical! I am hooked!

Loved Pragya as marketing genius, and what an appealing sensibility she has. Loved her Beetle. And that Purab is still manager! Yay! Heart aching for dark mysterious Abhi already although I do hope he doesn't remain as enigmatic...I shall be patient in the hope of a slowly revealed mystery :D

BTW I had no trouble imagining AbhiGya as themselves, despite having the other idea in mind. So kudos to you for creating such vividness for your readers!!

Again, loved it all. Thanks so much for sharing, this is going to be fantastic. I'm so thrilled. Yay!!



You liked it? Thank you Mina. Let me know what worked and what did not, will you please? I would love to get some critical feedback.

Abhi's past isn't really very mysterious you know. I touched on almost the entire back-story here. Just a point or two remains and that will come out in the next update. I think.

Lol - glad you could "see" them. At least i got that part right! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Diahh

Phew!!!

Okay!!

KAT! KAT! KAT! WHAT DO I SAY!!!! 😲

MORE PLZ!! AND SOON!!! PLZ!!

Gosh!! Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!! I so want to copy paste Mina Di's comment here!!! She has worded it perfectly!!

The whole concept! Fairytale feels combined with urban setting!! AbhiGya as the beauty and the beast!! The backstory!! Uff all this is just PERFECT!! ❤️

Thank you so much for this story Kat!! Loving it already!!

Hugs to you!! ⭐️



First of all Diahh - HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! May the day and the coming year be full of good cheer, happiness, good health and success.

Lol. Laziness not allowed in comments 😉. Glad you liked it. Hope i can maintain the fairy-tale feel through till the end.

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