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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely OS Mahi. Read 3 part in one go .
Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey,
amazing research, have to admire your patience.But thank you, as your information is a reality check for everyone, who visits your thread and reads it and it encourages everyone to do the right thing. So thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi all ha thoda late ho gaya

this part written by our disha31





Part 4

Geet was worn out physically and mentally. But today meeting Pari and Dadima gave a little peace to her heart.The affection and care that she got today from their caring words made her to believe that still someone can care for her.She yearned for that love and care ..but none in her family were ready to give her.With a heavy heart she went to her so called home...




As she was not feeling well she just went to her room to take rest.She closed her eyes to sleep...but sleep as far away from her eyes.Just then she heard her sasuma's sound. She and her friends were returning home after visiting the temple.Sasuma opened the door with spare key...she was unaware of Geet's presence...



F1:Savita...where is Geet.Time is 7 now,till now she hasn't reached home kya?




S : Don't know ..why till that maharani didn't come home...



F2:I told u na Savita,don't say ok to this girl...girls who are working won't be taking good care of the family




S:What to tell Seema.Before marriage itself I told to my son that she is working and not it for our family.But my son,he only wanted a girl who is working .



F1:Haan..nowdays all boys think like this only...see my son too...yahi haal hai mere ghar mai bhi..par when she became preg..my son strictly told that she should not go for work...par ithni si bath ko meri bahu ek bahout bada thamasha bana diya...



S:Aaj kal ki ladkiyaan sab aise hai...sab apni manmaani



F1:Haan..she too wants to work...she said that she want to work..it was her dream..hr parents worked hard to make her study... blah... blah..



S:Phir kya hua?Is she going to job now too...



F1:Nahi ...mera beta sher hai...he made her to come in track...hearing this all laughed.



F2:Savita tell ur son also to do the same...warna ur bahu will get in ur head and u have to do all the work from taking care of the baby to house hold works...




S: Haan mujhe kuch karna padega...ab pata nahi humare hismat mai pota ya pothi lika hai..agar ladki hui toh...




F1:Haan u r ri8...ladki hui toh with that maharani you have to bear that burden too...




S:Wahi toh darr hai..so only today I prayed to devi maa that ladka hona chahiye...and their talkings continued...





All these were heard by Geet...hearing her sasu,her friends made her numb,how could they think their DIL as a burden. And more than that didn't she think twice before saying her baby as a burden.what is the difference if it is a boy or girl...on the whole it is a life na.Suddenly a fear engulfed her...what if they tried to harm her baby if it a girl..she put her hand on her tummy and said baby I won't let anything happen to u..its ur mom's promise...and tears were continuously flowing from her eyes...she was helpless..where to go..with whom to share her fear ...sadly none were ther to hear her silent cries...



(This is the thing that is happening in many houses.In houses where girls are considered as a burden...where always there is a difference between BOY and GIRL.don't those girls have any dream, don't they need love and care..don't they have rights to decide or take a decision in their life...why always they have to obey someone's rule.She have to take care of everyone... her husband ,her in laws...what about her?Who will take care of HER?who will listen to her silent cries...who will wipe her tears...who will give her a shoulder to cry..who will take care of her when she is ill...her husband?her in laws?who...from where to get answer...yeh sawaloon ho unsuna kardega ye society...)


In KHURANA Mansion...

Maan, Pari and Dadi were sitting in the hall.Pari was playing game in Maan's cell.



Dadi:Pari bete...kya game khel rahi hai aap?



Pari:Angry Birds game Dadi..



Dadi:How to play it bete...tell me too na



And pari explained the game carefully to dadi...



Pari:Dadi..i love the red color angry bird..its cute na



Dadi:But I like the blue on...woh bilkul aapki tarah hai...bahout chote...



Pari:Papa dheko na Dadi telling me choti..me big girl na...



Maan took Pari in his lap and said...haan u r big girl



Pari kissed Maan's cheeks:You are the BEST papa...I love u.. a lot ..



Dadi turned her face with faking anger and said Nobody loves me...


Pari and Maan gave a look to each other.Pari..hello Drama Queen aapna drama band karo...any ways papa loves me more than you and I love my papa more...and she hugged Maan.



Dadi looked with a pout and Maan and Pari giggled.



Dadi:papa ki chamchi and she started tickling Pari...her laugh filled the whole mansion.



Maan: Dadima.. tomorrow we have to attend a party.Mr.Chopra invited us all.So be ready at 6 in the evening.Pari beta u too get ready soon...



Pari:ok Papa..Papa will Geet aunty come there.




Maan:No beta ...kyun?




Pari:Papa call her also na..plss...I really want to meet and play with her..plzzz..she asked with a puppy face.




Maan was surprised to see Pari asking for Geet...He know her daughter was reserved type and it would take her some time to mingle with others..but with Geet she got attached very soon...



Dadi:Haan Maan bete,call her too na..it will be really nice.



Maan:Dadima aap bhi...she has a family too...and more than that its not some professional party...then with what reason I will call her.




Dadima:OK...aap fikar math karo...mai aur Pari usko bulathe hai...haina Pari..both Dadi and Pari hi-5ed eachother.Maan just nodded his head at their antics and went away...None know what their fate had decided for them tomorrow...


Precap-May be last part...






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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update mahi...
disha really well written yaar...👏👏
patha nahi yeh sasuma log isse kyu bolthe hai
why they forget that they were also bahu at one time...
ha hering their talks 😡😡
poor geet😭😭
patha nahi wo bhi ka khyal kaise rakhengi...
and dadi and pari are so cute...
maan and pari pulling dadi leg...
just so cute bonding dear...
wow dadi and pari calling geet to party..
continue soon mahi...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear wet is going trough so much how can she thinks girl a burden she forgo tenon that is also a lady
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesm part👏 disha u wrote really well👍🏼
so geet's so cald MIL talkng wit her frnds nd telng dat DIL r burdens so wt were u when u got married😡
i dont understand y dis indifference btw boy nd gal if boy does smthing which is nt gd parents try 2 cover it nd supprt their future hire bt if gal didnt do anything wrng livng her life d way she wants in a gd way den also she is blamd nd was forcd 2 obey their order y dis indifference v too hv mind 2 think v too can undersatnd wts gd nd wts bad still v r treatd as their pets y is dats o? whoever it is parents,inlaws,husband daughter DIL nd wife is just a slave?
lovd maan pari nd daadi's bondng😃
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Feeling 4 Geet! she is sad! she overheard wt they sed! These women r so disgusting! Maan n Pari share a wonderful bond! Pari asks 4 Geet! update soon! superbly written
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey mahi...u always come up with new and unique concepts...aur en main se kuch asse hote h jin par shayd koi baat hi nhi krna chahta ya fir sun kr bhi unsuna kr jate h...but ur work always aware us about some useless so called society customs, a girl sufferings...thanks!! dear for writing these kinds of stories for us...which always have a lesson...

i read all parts in one go...very nice dear...just brillient...continueee soonnn dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear, why our society think girl is a burden, sasuma is also a women, some one's daughter, sister wife, mum, etc. how can she says another girl to burden, shame on these people
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Posted: 10 years ago
kya maan aur geet milenge...

nice update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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