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Originally posted by: dundumol96
I just read two parts ...i must say wonderful story and rare concept... .waiting to read moreee... Update sooon
Originally posted by: desire_nikki
Sorry for super late comment..!!
But yeah just read 1st chap..!!It was such an awsumm start..!!yeah a totally different concept..!!Though i can tell i have read the same concept before in AR version...But its different..!! Plotting of characters n all is different ...and i really liked the way...No offence..!! I really loved the part..!!Every piece concept plot suits on IshRa..!!Loved it..!!Good job..!!
Originally posted by: desire_nikki
NOw for part 2..!
It was seriously awsummm..!! Though i felt lil bad for the girl..whose name is still not disvlosed yet..!! But yeah,,,It is ishita ..!!Raman took side for her infront of that inspector..!! I really felt weird and bad for her...!!then their nok-jhoks n small fights..heheheh..!!Nd their sweet simple convo was too awsumm..!! Poor her...u stopped it at wrong tym..!!Plz cont soon..! 1I am so eager to read more..!!Thanx for pm.!do pm me for updates as well..1 :)
[NOTE: Not Proof-read, oblige errors if any...]
Part 3
"Ghar..." she looked at him wide eyed, for a moment he thought that she was scared, and lost. Just for a moment, he found himself infront of her naked soul, just for a moment.
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For a moment there she didn't know where her thoughts ended, but soon she recovered and let go of the reverie and composed herself quite effectively and looked at him and surprising him and herself started,
"Koi iss line mein shauk se nahi aata saab, mai bhi yaha aayi par majboori thi... Hum log gareeb nahi the, ghar ache se chalta tha, meri Ma aur baba bohot pyaar karte the mujhse, par Jab mere baba ko lakwa(Paralysis) hua tab sab kuch khatam ho gaya, unki naukri jati rahi aur ghar ki khushiyo pe jaise grahan sa cha gaya", and then she stopped quite lost as if in deep thought, while he looked at her curiously, "mere door ka rishtedaar mujhe yahan naukri ke bahane laya...aur phir uss H****** ne mujhe yahan bech diya..."
For a moment both stood their silent, he was completely out blown by her tragic life's story and she was, as it seemed was lost.
But then next moment she, surprising him burst into peels of laughter, and asked, giggling, "Kaisi lagi?"
"Kya?" Raman asked confused and word bound at her behavior.
"Kahani..." she said grinning, and the continued, "Jhoothi thi." And continued giggling like she had cracked world's biggest joke and continued, "Ye story customer ko sunao toh 500 rupay extra milte hain..." and again burst into new laughter.
While he just looked at her in disbelief, how can a anyone build such a tragic tale and then laugh about it! It was beyond his imagination...
She laughed for full five minutes, as if mocking him for felling for it. And then said between the peels of laughter, " Aap bhi soch rahe hog ke kaisi aurat hai... Par aaj ki duniya mein imandari se pet nahi bharta... isiliye humare dhandhe mein thoda sa jhol jhaal karna padta hai... thoda sa..."
While he stood still in thoughts, when she, subsiding her laughter spoke in a tone that meant that she was totally into the words, "Meri Maa bohot khubsurat thi, chota sa parivar tha... sab kuch tha... phir baba mein karza le liya aur jab vo nahi chukka paye toh unnlogo ne mere baba ko maar dala... aur Ma ke saath..." And then she looked at him, and sighed and continued, " aur mujhe bhi... " and then she looked at him, directly in his eyes and was surprised to see shock, a genuine emotion, and then shook her head in negative and smiled and asked, "filmo ki tarah tragedy hain na meri story mein?" and then looking away and sighing said, "Par sachh ye bhi nahi hai..."
And then looked at him,. Who inturn looked astonished at the revelation.
"Agar ye story customer ko sunao toh 1000 rupay extra milte hain..." and then looked at his face that was expressing shock beyond wits and said, "Aur kya saab... Ab meri real kahani sunoge?" she asked genuinely.
While he just shook his, disgusted and said, "Nahi!" and turned away, from ear shot.
And then she murmured, "Achha hai... jhel nahi paaoge..."
While for a minute second he looked at her, her eyes as if telling him to reconsider, while her deception made him to think twice.
How can a woman, with such innocent eyes lie so blatantly? How can a man like him, who virtually ruled half of the business world, be deceived so easily?
While lost in thoughts he sat down on the nearby bench, when he heard a tring-tring of a bicycle, he looked up and to his surprise saw a boy of around 13-14 years riding a bicycle and stop in-front of them, while the woman smiled at the boy and asked authoritatively, "Kya abrahim... aaj itni der kyun?"
While the boy smiled affectionately and said, "Kya sister, baarish mein dhandha achha hota hai na..."
And then the boy looked at Raman and then darted his gaze over her, and asked hopefully, "Coffee?"
"Inn saab se pucho..." she replied politely, surprising Raman.
The boy looked towards Raman, hopefully. While Raman just smiled and nodded for a yes, and said, "Two coffees..."
The boy happily obliged and poured two cups of coffee, and while handling thermacol cups to them he asked, "Cigarette?"
Raman looked at the boy and politely nodded for a NO, while the woman purchased one box, while Raman looked at her, but said nothing.
Raman paid for the coffee, while the woman said, "Aye... iske(Cigarette) paise kal le jana..."
"Theek hai... arre haan, woh school ki fees bhi toh bharni hai..." the boy said.
"Hmm... theek hai... kal hi de doongi..." the woman said, and the looked at him and inquired, strictly, "Gutka, paan masala phir se toh nahi khaya?"
"Nahi, dekho..." the boy replied, and opened his mouth so she could inspect.
"Hmm... kal aa jana..." she said, while he rode away.
"Tum... uski fees bharti ho?" Raman asked amazed.
"Haan... saab. Bachha hai... padhne ka shauk lekar iss narak mein paida ho gaya... Itna toh kar hi sakti hoon mai..." She replied.
Raman looked at her in awe. He had met lot of men and women, even he himself never had done something like this, even after being rich, he had never thought about someone like this without any ulterior motive. May be it was the idea of being a crude businessman! One has to be heartless, one has to think with mind not heart, one must give away all the selfless thoughts and run behind profits, that's how the life of his-like people is.
"Par... tumhe aise use paise nahi dene chahiye... school mein kyu nahi jama karwa deti..." he said suggesting.
"Kyu? Aapko kya lagta hai? Woh school mein jama nahi karta, kuchh khud hi kharch kar deta hai?... kya farak padta hai saab, thode le bhi leta hai toh kya... aakhir bachha hai... kum se kum bakiyon ki tarah toh nahi hai... chori toh nahi karta... khoon toh nahi kiya hai na usne... dalal toh nahi hai kisi ka... drugs toh nahi bechta... bachha hai saab..." and then she looked at him and said, " behan manta hai mujhe... duniyan mein who ek hi aadmi hai jo mujhse kuch nahi chahta... varna baki sab bass ek hi cheez chahte hain..." and with that she looked at him, who looked at her speechlessly.
"Vaise aap bohot seedhe hain... " she said while looking at him, like she was reading him.
"Matlab?" he asked curious.
"aapne kabhi koi jhol-jhaal nahi kiya kya? Naukri mein... ?" she asked.
A small laugh escaped from her throat at her incredulous question, and nodded for a NO.
"Kabhi nahi?" she looked at him, it was clear from her instance that she was believing him, "Aur uss mamle mein? Love-shuv??" she smiled naughtily at him, as if trying to get under his skin and knowing the truth.
"Nahi..." he said.
"Kabhi nahi? Only home cooked?" she asked, as if mocking.
While he nodded and turned away, embarrassed!
"Kabhi toh mann karta hoga..." she said huskily, her voice heavy from the idea, and she came close to him.
While he moved back... until his back collided with one of the brick pillars. He was trapped, from back with the pillar and from front by the woman.
"Abhi bhi nahi?" she came more close, only few centimeters away and smiled seductively at him, her red lips were moist and her eyes were laden with heavy emotion, that was making him afraid. He couldn't say anything, no word was registering in his mind, it was not that he was not used to women... well it was opposite, woman used to throw themselves at him, and he would just ignore them, but this woman was not among them, those woman were prostitutes in disguise, while she was... And this time he couldn't say it, not even in his mind, and continued to look at her. Her playful self.
Only if she would not have been it, he wondered, he didn't wanted to think about her, but he just did... that scenario, the one that was simply impossible to imagine... what if she was not what she was! And then he looked at her eyes, her smile, her depth in thinking and understanding, her selfless deeds, and then at her work! What a contrast!!
He didn't wanted to admit it, but he was in awe of her, he was happy to have met her... he was! But he was not affected, not when she was so close, not when her milky white skin was so radiant, when her eyes were so captivating, not when her lips curved and made his heart flutter. He detested her... yet he was enjoying her company, and more than what he would have done at the party of rich associates...
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Okay that's it!
I hope you would like it...
Please tell me hows it and iff I should continue it?
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