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mandu

@mandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

I read all three updates in one go...you have a way with words..I can picture the dismal rain..and I can sort of picture the characters too, though raman is very vivid for me... She is intriguing me ...cannot settle on a visual of her...I don't know if I'm making sense,but would love to read more...I want to hear more from her.

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pomegranate

@pomegranate

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

loved how carefree she is but at the same time, there is a human side to her and Raman is already attracted towards her despite her profession.

I thought it was a good idea that u used a pseudonym for her because it would be unlikely for a sex worker to reveal her name, but I think it would be appropriate for her to reveal name towards the end? I wanted to ask if everything here will be similar to chameli or are you going to bring in your own twists?

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Angel

@hasiniangel

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Fab!!!

totally different and tooo goood

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

she is mysterious...it was funny when she faked her stories...

loved the way he was affected by her and still denying it...how he was imagining the scenario where she was not what she was...

cont soon!!!!!!

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

I dont know sure.

But I think Ishita is not what she is pretending and she is doing some documentry on them.

Now just irritating Raman.

I dont know for sure But I think it is possibility.

But nice one

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

awesome update
sure her story is more terrible
or may b she is not that what she pretend
don't know BT its very interesting
so update soon

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: pomegranate
loved how carefree she is but at the same time, there is a human side to her and Raman is already attracted towards her despite her profession.

I thought it was a good idea that u used a pseudonym for her because it would be unlikely for a sex worker to reveal her name, but I think it would be appropriate for her to reveal name towards the end? I wanted to ask if everything here will be similar to chameli or are you going to bring in your own twists?

@bold I would be lying if I deny some sort of connection, Yes I have to this... my main moto along this story is just to write the end... only if I could have asked my readers to watch the movie and think all through like I was thinking... read things between the lines... but I couldn't, so I had to write it... It would have my twists and to some extent the story would mold according to my wish, but the initial characterization, dialogues and words, I don'y know... I think they were quite fascinating in the movie, and secondly I don't want to change them, nor that I would out-better them... they were perfect, and its nothing wrong in copying from the perfect!😆

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

nvr xpctd frm her tht she vl cook up these stories...

nd laughing... andmaking advnce towards raman...

wondrful updte...

RKB was in aww of dis woman...

cant wait fr nxt...

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Brilliant update! The lady I assume to be Ishita her tradegy filled story left Raman speechless! How soon he melted! Loved the update! The last part whr she seduces him with her talk! Looks like Raman started liking her!

Cont soon! Cant wait to read how their relationship gets started off!