Love of her life - Raman Kumar Bhalla;28/11 Epilogue,pg8 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello guys! Truly touched by your response!Thanks from the bottom of my heart for caring to reply and like my work!

I had planned only a two shot. But thanks to your requests I am now inspired to write an Epilogue. But this is not an extension or a logical conclusion of the Mihika - Mihir crisis. It is only Ishra! Sorry folks no time for pm's.Really sleepy now.. Please comment on it to keep it pink and easy to spot!šŸ¤—

Epilogue

Ishita was used to waking up before most of the world woke up. Always before before the sun showed up.

The previous night's bliss, the unusual sensations that coursed through her body and mind, the unmistakable pleasant tenderness that she felt in her intimate parts made her smile in her sleep. She was ready for daybreak with infinite expectations. Her eyes preferred to be closed although the voice in her head asked to " rise and shine" as she would say to her little angel every morning tickling her awake. She loved their bed. Her husband's toasty skin filled her with warmth that she did not want to give up.

She stretched like a cat and reluctantly opened her eyes. To find two intense eyes boring into her with a contradictory smile on the rested face and fingers that were twirling her hair.

Raman...she stifled her yawn!

Good morning' she hugged him.

Gosh" she said screaming as her mind registered the sunshine that illuminated her husband's face.

" we are late...Ruhi has to leave in half an hour , I have to pack her lunch, her school stuff, make your break..." Raman silenced her with a kiss.

Ho jayega...don't worry Ishita...Is this how you wish your husband on your first morning... after a roaring night.

Roaring...it was the first stab Raman ...and it will stay with me forever...she blushed!

'Utho Madrassan warna '...she interrupted him a small bite on his ear lobe.

Paanch minute aur...she said hugging him.

I'm ok...to spend the rest of the day here like this! He sighed.

I wish' she sighed and sat up gathering the comforter..

Chodo...he tried prying it off her with a wicked smile.

" Raman I need to shower...please " she looked down realizing why he did that..

"Jao" he smiled " ankhe band kar loonga pur blanket chodnewala nahi hoon"

" How can I trust you?" she whined

"Is it that difficult you have trusted me with a lot more.." he teased shutting his eyes.

Picked his shirt that was at the foot of the bed she threw it on herself before she headed for her shower.

" Raman can you please tidy up" she said meaning the clothes that were strewn all over.

" Badle me kya miliga ... he asked as he saw her familiar form darting into restroom.

Raman picked up replaying the night in his head. He looked at the morning sky with a big smile. Ran his fingers over his stubble to pull out a long strand of hair smiling as he remembered how it got there.

Jaldi nikhlo otherwise I'm coming in' he knocked the door when she walked out draped in her robe reaching for the wardrobe.

He saw her sitting on the bed with all her clothes clutched to her chest, still in her robe and tears streaming down her cheeks.

He instantly realized that it was what had happened to Mihika that made her cry.

Ishita don't worry about Mihika, we are where we are Ishita, we have to take care of her.." he hugged her to his side and let her cry on his shoulder.

Are you worried about the papers? ...ishita you have to be strong...hum milkhe saab. Sambhalenge.'

"Nahi nahi Raman...I know aap ho, Mihik bhi strong hai ...she'll get over this..but Raman...'she kissed his throat and cried somemore.

" You know how special last night was for me...I have never felt more loved, more cherished or more complete ever in my life" she said as she grabbed his hand, parted her robe and rested it in on her stomach.

" Uss kamine Ashok...usne wo sab kuch cheen liya mere behen se" she whimpered. Her furious tears wetting his shirt.

" Teach your sister Ishita, teach her to get over her trouble and to feel clean she will find her bliss too."

" Raman it took someone as strong as you 6 years to get over a bad act... Mihiku ka kya hoga.."

"Look at me now Ishita" lifting her chin to make her look into his eyes " your love has made me feel pure and last night has shown how deeply connected we are. Mihir's love for her will build her again Ishita. I now know that it's is never worth your salt to remember what a vile person has done to you...

Life is a lot more rewarding when we remember what the person who loves you gives you; rather than obsess about what the one who hates you takes away from you"

" OH Raman" she turned to hug him hard; a hug that made his heart go mush all over again!

Edited by SWAN123 - 11 years ago
SAKIVIAM thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
nice end buddy.
dialogues were spot on.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
awesumm lovely and romantic ending! beautifully written!!! loved it!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Thank you for such a lovely ending.
I love the little touches that you weave in...
the way Ishu puts his hand on her stomach,
kissing his ear lobe 😳

but the most moving bit was how she
thinks of Mihika and what Ashok has done to her because of what she own soul stirring experience.šŸ‘
You have made Raman so drool worhty now!😳😳😳
Write more and make us happy!
Edited by blue5sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

nice end buddy.

dialogues were spot on.



Thank you my dear! Glad you liked the dialogues!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Lovely ending to the story...ā­ļø
It couldn't have been any more perfect..
Their conversation about life was awesome! Everyone gets a second chance, you just have to live it!

Awesome story dear.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful ending to a beautiful story! Well done.šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb ts
okk..i know m late
you wont believe...
Wen i read part 1 and was about to reply...you came up with part 2 and i had to wait to read it frst
and then same thing...epilogue came before i could reply...lol
you were quick in update...thats good
and such such sweet ts
just awesum
loved ishra moments
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the epilogue. Sweet morning after scene and I liked how it got heartfelt as well towards the end.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

nice end buddy.

dialogues were spot on.

Thanks Boss!😊

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