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I am going to start writing new FF soon so get ready guys!!!!!!

I hope you all like it and sorry if I disappoint any one. CHARACTER SKETCH
Jeevika Kapoor - (j) she is a fashion designer
manvi Kapoor - (m) last year in college
viren vadhera - (v) lawyer
virat vadhera - (vi) fresh singer
avantika - (a)jeevika and manvi's mother, a business lady
vanshika - (vn) viren and virat's mother, avantika's best friend
Deepak - (d) viren and virat's father, successful lawyer
Chapter 1
vadhera's and Kapoor's are family friends, they often meet each other but their children were going to meet each other after a long time as they were busy studying in abroad.
J - mannu...come on wake up fast, today is holi. come on!!!!
she doesn't wake up so jeevika goes to her side of bed and puts color on her face and shouts: HAPPY HOLI MANNU!!!(she tries to run)
M - happy holi dii!!!! she gets up from the bed naughtily and take some color in her hands and runs behind jeevika.
J - no mannu, please not now, please
M - no dii today no one can save you from me.
they run around the house and put color on each other.
A - manvi beta please go get freshen up guests will be coming soon. go fast beta.
manvi goes and get ready till then jeevika takes blessing from her and wishes her happy holi.
M - happy holi mumma!!!! (hugging her)
A - happy holi beta😊
J - come mannu lets play holi outside
they go outside and the vadhera's come and greet everyone.
A - Namaste how are you vanshika and Deepakji after along time we are meeting right?
Vn - yes avantika thanks for inviting us.
vanshika calls viren and virat to come forward.
A - Namaste beta. how are you both?
V &Vi - Namaste aunty. we are fine.
Just then manvi comes to call her mother.
M - mom come lets...
(shocked) virat, viren you both are here happy holi . you know I am so happy to see you both after 3 years. ohh god!!! (hugging)😃 going towards vanshika and Deepak
Namaste uncle and aunty happy holi
Vn & D - happy holi beta (hugging)
beta where is jeevika? I am so eager to see her (slightly seeing towards viren) who was very eager to meet her best friend
M - (searching for her dii) she just chatting with her friends where did she go.(looking confused)
suddenly everyone gets silent and music starts to play
and jeevika dances with her girl friends
Jali Toh, Bujhi Na, Kasam Se Koyla Ho Gayi Hum
Lagi Hai, Tujhe Na, Kasam Se Tauba Ho Gayi Hum

Mila Na Koi Aisa, Mere Sapno Ke Jaisa
Mila Na Koi Aisa, Mere Sapno Ke Jaisa
Chhan Ke Mohalla Saara Dekh Liya
viren looks towards jeevika and says- she is still the same.
all others just smile and praise her.
Jawani Chadti Jaaye, Karega Kaun Upaaye
Jawani Chadti Jaaye, Karega Kaun Upaaye
Chhan Ke Mohalla Saara Dekh Liya

Jali Toh, Bujhi Na, Kasam Se Koyla Ho Gayi Hum
Lagi Hai, Tujhe Na, Kasam Se Tauba Ho Gayi Hum
Jali Toh, Bujhi Na, Kasam Se Koyla Ho Gayi Hum
Lagi Hai, Tujhe Na, Kasam Se Tauba Ho Gayi Hum

Pyaar Ki Hera Pheri Kar Ke Meri Sang Se Chura Le
Ya Mere Dil Ki Basti Nainon Se Loot Le
Dekh Ke Woh Albela Mujhe Akela Apna Bana Le
Ho Gayi Neendhein Sasti, Nainon Se Loot Le

Pyaar Ki Hera Pheri Kar Ke Meri Sang Se Chura Le
Ya Mere Dil Ki Basti Nainon Se Loot Le
Dekh Ke Woh Albela Mujhe Akela Apna Bana Le

Ho Gayi Neendhein Sasti, Nainon Se Loot Le
Hai Aisa Kaun Bata De, Jo Mann Ki Pyaas Bujha De
Hai Aisa Kaun Bata De, Jo Mann Ki Pyaas Bujha De
Chhan Ke Mohalla Saara Dekh Liya

Jali Toh, Bujhi Na, Kasam Se Koyla Ho Gayi Hum
Lagi Hai, Tujhe Na, Kasam Se Tauba Ho Gayi Hum
Jali Toh, Bujhi Na, Kasam Se Koyla Ho Gayi Hum
Lagi Hai, Tujhe Na, Kasam Se Tauba Ho Gayi Hum

Dor Se Kati Patangi, Main Satrangi Aaj Hui Hoon
Kyun Bala Basna Mera Apne Pe Hi Chale
Raam Yeh Kaisi Maaya Gori Gaaya Aag Hui Hai
Kyun Bala Tan Yeh Mera Paani Mein Bhi Jale

Dor Se Kati Patangi, Main Satrangi Aaj Hui Hoon
Kyun Bala Basna Mera Apne Pe Hi Chale
Raam Yeh Kaisi Maaya Gori Gaaya Aag Hui Hai
Kyun Bala Tan Yeh Mera Paani Mein Bhi Jale

Raam Jhi Rog Mita Do, Vaid Ka Pata Bata Do
Raam Jhi Rog Mita Do, Vaid Ka Pata Bata Do

Chhan Ke Mohalla Saara Dekh Liya
Jawani Chadti Jaaye, Karega Kaun Upaaye
Chhan Ke Mohalla Saara Dekh Liya

Jali Toh, Bujhi Na, Kasam Se Koyla Ho Gayi Hum
Lagi Hai, Tujhe Na, Kasam Se Tauba Ho Gayi Hum
Jali Toh, Bujhi Na, Kasam Se Koyla Ho Gayi Hum
Lagi Hai, Tujhe Na, Kasam Se Tauba Ho Gayi Hum.
and jeevika's leg hit the stone while dancing and she leans downwards to fall but viren saves her.
jeevika open her eyes and see's viren she jumps in excitement and hugs him saying- happy holi viren!!! I missed u idiot.
Then she goes to viren's mom and dad
J - Namaste uncle and aunty. happy holi
Vn & D - Namaste beta and happy holi (hugging her)
beta I am so happy to see u. always stay happy.
J - mom u didn't even told me that the whole family is coming.(looking sad)
A - I wanted to give u and manvi surprise and other one is they are staying with us in our house till their house get renovated.
J & M - wow mom!!!! we are so happy and they hug vanshika and Deepak.
They all enjoy holi and get fresh in the evening. The all chat in garden with each other and enjoy there time.
I hope I get likes and comments
sorry if I did any mistake.
next update soon :)
INDEX
CHAPTER 1 - PG 1
CHAPTER 2 - PG 1
CHAPTER 3 - PG 1
CHAPTER 4A - PG 2
CHAPTER 4B - PG 2
CHAPTER 5 - PG 3
CHAPTER 6 - PG 4, 5
CHAPTER 7 - PG 6
CHAPTER 8 - PG 6
CHAPTER 9 - PG 7
CHAPTER 10 - PG 8
CHAPTER 11 - PG 8
CHAPTER 12 - PG 9
CHAPTER 13 - PG 9
CHAPTER 14 - PG 11
CHAPTER 15 - PG 11
CHAPTER 16 - PG 12
CHAPTER 17 - PG 13
CHAPTER 18 - PG 15
CHAPTER 19 - PG 17
CHAPTER 20 - PG 19
CHAPTER 21 - PG 21
CHAPTER 22 - PG 22
CHAPTER 23 - PG 23
CHAPTER 24 - PG 24
CHAPTER 25 - PG 26
CHAPTER 26 - PG 28
CHAPTER 27 - PG 28
CHAPTER 28 - PG 30
CHAPTER 29 - PG 32
CHAPTER 30 - PG 33
CHAPTER 31 - PG 35

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Sameeha.Tacker thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update!
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you guys for liking it and commenting!!!!!

CHAPTER 2
At night after dinner 9:00 pm
JEEVIKA'S ROOM
She was lying on her bed and reading a book " The fault in our stars " and there was a knock on the door.
J - kaun hai ?
V - jeevika its me viren.
J - ohh ya come in the door is open.(adjusting herself)
V - hey kya kar rahi ho ?😊
J - nothing yaar just reading book. come sit here ( pointing besides her)
V - so did u missed me ?
J - nope I never missed but I think u missed me a lot see urself u are staring me like u saw me for first time.😆
V - to tell u the truth I always missed sharing my secrets with u, laughing with u, teasing u, caring for u and most importantly ur smile.(emotionally)
J - 😳 I missed u too dear!!!(hugging him) Then she broke the hug and smiled looking at viren.
V - so what are u doing these days jeevs?
J - (making her comfortable) nothing just working form home these days. Tell me what about u?
V - I am free this whole month and joining my job in april. till than I have u to time pass right ?😆
J - how mean I am time pass for u.🥱 u just wait and watch now
and she throw her pillow on him and started fighting with pillows.
V - okay okay I am sorry please maaf kardo please!!!
J - okay but only on one condition.
V - okay say
J - so you have to make some coffee for me right now.
V - okay so done just wait here I'll be back in few minutes.
J - okay be quick.😊
viren comes after 5 minutes with two coffee mugs and see a beautiful view of his best friend. she is sleeping peacefully hugging her teddy. Viren goes towards her side of bed and cover her with her pink blanket and kiss her forehead and heads towards his room as he switch off the lights.
I hope you all liked it. please do comment.😊
I'll soon update.
sorry this was short and only virika.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it the whole story liked virika scene totally
amazing update
superb
fantastic
mind blowing
wonderfull update
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey u should move this story in fan fiction forum ya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Nice update!!! do continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 3
The clock stuck at 2:00 am when jeevika woke due to some noise in the kitchen. she quickly got up from her bed and went towards the kitchen and saw virat doing something in the kitchen. she than went towards him and put her hand on his left shoulder.
J - virat ?
Vi - hey jeevika. what are you doing here ?
J - virat I should ask you that. anyways what are you doing here?
Vi - ohh yah woh actually I was not getting sleep so I thought to get some tea and work on my application.
J - ohk. but do you know where are the things?
Vi - actually no, and that's the reason the things are falling and I woke you up by the noise. I am so sorry.
J - It's alright. you should have woke me up I should have helped you. okay now I'll help you. wait a minute.
Vi - okay!!!
Jeevika gets tea from the storeroom as it wasn't there in the kitchen.
J - virat you do on thing you go and work and I'll get your tea in your room.
Vi - are you sure? aren't u sleepy?
J - actually not anymore. you go I'll get you in 5 minutes.
Vi - okay😊
After 5 minutes jeevika went to the guest room where viren and virat were staying. she entered the room and saw his best buddy sleeping peacefully with a smile and she remembered the night incident where she told him to get coffee and she fall asleep. she just smiled looking at him and towards virat who was busy in his work.
J - here you go virat your tea.
Vi - thank you so much jeevika.
J - its okay virat. so goonight I'll see u in the morning. you better sleep after finishing your work.bye
Vi - yah!!! bye and goodnight.
Jeevika glanced towards viren and went to her room and slept.
Next morning it was around 7:30 am when everybody was ready and came towards the mandir for the morning prayer. when suddenly they realized jeevika wasn't there.
A - manvi beta where is jeevika ? did she woke up?
M - mom I don't know. even she didn't came to wake up this morning so I thought she might be busy in work.
Vi - I think she is still sleeping as unintentionally I disturbed her sleep at midnight.
V - its okay I'll wake her up aunty.
A - okay beta.
Viren goes towards jeevika's room and he finds her sleeping with her teddy like a cute baby. he goes towards her and smiles and than sits on his knee near herand tries to wake her up.
V - jeevika come on get up you are late today.
J - please viren let me sleep. (eyes closed)
V- come on please get everybody is waiting for you in mandir for morning prayer.
J - please...🥱
After trying so much she doesn't get up so at last viren takes the water bottle from the table and pours all of them on her face and runs towards the door and stands there. jeevika gets up angrily and tries to run after viren but she falls down and shouts.
J - I'll kill you viren. you idiot. I hate you.😡
V - I am soory jeevika but you were not getting up so I had to do it and everybody is waiting for you in mandir come fast.( he runs smiling)
J - viren you have to pay for this.😡
She than goes towards bathroom to freshen up.
I hope you are liking it. please do comment and hit like.
I'll update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was so cute.
thanks for the updates :D
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CHAPTER 4
After getting ready in beautiful long skirt, white top, hair one sided and with long earrings she headed towards the mandir.
7:45 in the morning
they all saw jeevika coming towards mandir. viren was just staring at her as he was mesmerized in her beauty and smile.
J - I am sorry because of me you all got late for pooja.
Vn - It's okay jeevika beta. come we will start the pooja.
Jeevika goes and stands in between virat and manvi ad looking at viren with anger who was beside virat.
soon the pooja got over and manvi gave everyone Prasad.
They all headed towards the dining table for breakfast.
J - manvi come and sit beside me I want to talk to you. please.
M - dii we can talk later. I'll sit beside virat after a longtime I am with my bestie. please diii...
J - okay as u wish.
viren came and sat beside jeevika with a naughty smile and winked to manvi😉
V - jeevika can you please pass me the plate.
jeevika totally ignored him.
A - jeevika, jeevika..
J - yes ma
A - arey beta viren is asking you to pass the plate to him. help him beta.
J - okay 😡
Soon they finished breakfast and cleaned up everything. they all were busy in there work like vanshika and avantika went to market, Deepak went to his work, virat went for his practice for his show and manvi was guiding him.only viren was left out so he thought to go to jeevika's room and pacify her. as he entered the room he saw jeevika throwing things on the floor and was angry. he went towards her and pulled her to face her towards him.
V - are you so angry with me? that you are throwing your stuff on ground.
J - you just don't talk to me. its all because of u and by the way I am angry with u but now I have some different issue.
V - so tell me I'll help u.
J - I lost my pen drive and I have some important stuff in it.
V - I'll help u to search it okay. cool down hmm.
After searching for awhile viren got her pen drive near her diary on the table and just smiled .
V - jeevika here you go your pen drive.😊
J - thank you (low voice)
V - jeevika please I am really sorry forgive me please.😔
I hope you all like it
sorry it was a short update.
thanks for reading it.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved the whole update
liked virika scene
and jeevika angry towards viren
totally
superb
fantastic
amazing
mind blowing
wonderfull
continue soon

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