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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SethuParvathi

first & foremostly...how are u meri jaannn!!!!❤️ long tym noo see!!!!😉

sorryyy...lyk million tyms i couldnt comment to many of ur posts!!!! dis was amazinnn...i loved!!! especially dat one line..."coloured in my colours"!!!😉❤️ continue soon...ur buddy's waitin here!!!🤗

Awww, my Paro!!!!🤗 Kaisi ho tum? Main thik hoon!! Haan long time no see!! Sorry ke koi avashyakta nahi cause I understand!!! Mere Rang mein Rangnewali!!! Hope to see you soon, dear!! Thanks a lot!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Sorry for late reply Jiji, but beautiful update 👏 I loved the flashback part the most 😃 very sweet update 👍🏼 & loved how Arjun is calling her 'praanpriye' aap kaisa jaadu jante ho Jiji 😊 sab ap par itna mohit ho jate hain!! Waiting for next update!

It is okay, Devika!!! Thanks a lot!! Hamari Devika ko bhi shrungar achcha lagta, yeh hame gyaat nahi tha!!! Meri Jaadu to mere priya jan hai, meri shakti aur meri samarthya tum sab se hi hai, Devika!! Thanks a lot!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 42:

Yagya pulled herself away from Arjun's grip.

" Please Arjun, don't make this more difficult for me!!" said Yagya while joining her palms in front of Arjun, which had shocked him and made him serious in an instant.

"What did I do, Yagya? And what did I do so wrong that you can't even give a chance for me to prove myself to be worthy of you?" said Arjun while gently holding her shoulders, while she glanced at those arms and said,

" When I need these arms, there was No one to hold my arms! There was no one to listen the cries of my heart!! Half-fulfilled are my wishes and broken are my dreams!! Not of mistrust, Arjun but there was walls of pain in between us!! So thick are those walls that, when surrounded by them even victory seems to be a loss! My Heart Beat Steadfast and Breathing is broken and uneasy in those walls!! Tests of my love and stories that were written in this love, infinite. Because my life had been a punishment for loving you! My life...My life is ruined in your... love, Arjun!! It... is ruined in your LOVE!" said Yagya while brushing those arms, in which she found painful solace, always.

Arjun has heart-broken, to see the person residing in his heart break. Did she regret loving him, all this while? Did she even love him, now? Yes, he could see love in her eyes, infact a fire of love, which was consuming her now. Drop of tears escaped from his eyes, time halted, breaths unstable, steadfast heartbeats and a broken soul. Could there have been a love, more painful than this for the great warrior and the mighty empress?

Pain consuming them, love breaking them, words unspoken and actions undone, but they never complained. But today was the day, she complained. She complained about the pain in their love, a love so pure, that pain approaches to them, to cleanse itself.

Arjun had no words to speak as everything seemed to end. Their re-birth seemed in vain to him. But he decided to try fighting for his love, as without her love, never did exist Arjun. Yagya was about to leave when he held her wrist and He painfully spoke,

" Yagya, you were the one who made my lifeless heart come to life with your love. But it was your love which made it distraught. From that wrenched heart, came Deep Sighs of love. Even I lost everything, I had in your love! There were fleeting moments of happiness, treasures full of sorrows and then was the aching seclusions of tensions. Kabhi Aashru to Kabhi Aahat, Kabhi Shikhwa to Kabhi Nale Hriday mein Goonjthi hai!(sometimes tears , sometimes sighs , sometimes complaints, sometimes wailful songs echos in my heart )
But I have been looted in this love. Parmatma gave us a heart of glass, and the ability to love! Prem keval Milan se parypt nahi hai, Yagya vichow bhi anivarya tha!( In love there needs to be both meeting and separation) Even after so much of pain, I never regret loving you because even at the loss of everything I had gained YOU, Yagya! And losing you would be the last thing I would ever want to do!"
Said Arjun pouring out the feelings of his heart, breaking the silence echoing through the ages.

Yagya was shocked to see him speak about their love. She said in a painful whisper,

" But you already lost me, Arjun! There are people from the past who will not be given justice and I will not be one of them! I was never only yours but of Pandavs! So it is injustice if my names gets attached only to yours! So let us stay in our limits and make this event successful" said the Strong Yagyaseni in her.

Kyon Nazrein Teri Yun Anjaan Hai,
Ankhein Hai Meri Bhi Nam,
Kyon Paa Kar Bhi Tumko Khoya Hai,
Ham Kyon Na Bann Paye Ham,

Kyon Dard Hai Itnaa Teri Hi Ishq Mein,
Rabba Ve...Rabba Ve...Rabba Ve Rabba Ve

Arjun was speechless about her words. He thought that she needed time and he ready to give it to her. As he was ready even to wait for a lifetime for her. He thought,

" I never lost you, Yagya! Only physical distance can occur to us but never mental! I will never let the physical distance to occur again between us! Justice will happen but your name will be joined with mine, forever!"

Yagya decided to leave him alone and put her foot forward when he held forearm and said,

" Kya Yeh Dooriyan Tumse Sehan Ho Paayenge, Yagya?"

He still didn't understand me? How can this distance be ever acceptable to me? But if this distance can make Arjun's life better then, distance is painfully acceptable to me, thought Yagya.


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TBC
Thanks a lot, Radhey for the amazing siggy!!!
Hope you liked it!!
WHo told you Yagya is done with her signature painful updates?
Please comment and like!!




Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It Brought Tears To Mine Eyes !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aare meri di Kya apne tragic story writer se tuition liya hai ? Ya ap naya Romeo and Juliet banana chahi ti hai ? Harek baar tragic update . Lekin tragic one meh bhi jaan leker ati hai
Sach meh di dil ko jeet liya apne. Apke sabdha bahut real thiye . Speaking the truth jo prashna apne jeeju se pucha wohi question mere maan meh kahi dinou se thi. Yagya 's disappointment was understandable and poor jeeju😭
Aur Kya apka naam panch pandav se juda hai ? Ha yeh toh dwarparyug meh sach tha lekin iss Yug meh ap sirf hamare jeeju Arjun k hai aur ap chahe ya na ap k piche sirf jeeju ka hi naam lagega kyu ki iss Yug meh hum jaisi crazy ArDi fan and writers ne janam liya hai 😉
Continue soon and I have no complains regarding sad updates , mujhe ap k sad update aur pasand hai 😆
Edited by Texie-Shady - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

It Brought Tears To Mine Eyes !

that's a huge compliment, Radhey!! bringing tears through anything is not easy!! Thanks a lot, Radhey!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update deariee!!!👍🏼 aftr a lyf tym...dey r pouring out der feelings for each other!!!!😭 get dem close physically as well...dat too...asap!!!😉 u kno wht i mean😛😉...every tym arjun makes the scene romantic u the gr8 "yagyaseni" on dis earth makes it emotional and make mee too cry!!! 😭😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow! Yagya the writer in you is developing so wonderfully!
A beautiful update that left me completely at a loss of words.
Bas an yahi intezaar hai ki yeh dooriyan jald hee mit jaayein kyunki nafrat pass aane na de mohabbat door jaane na de...Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Soon?
Woah! I quoted IPKKND successfully!👏
But seriously this was so emotional and full of profound feelings! I loved it!😃
Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful , just wonderful!!
what dhamakedhar dialogues by both of them!!
Hopefully they will slowly inch towards a happy solution soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome.. Beautifully written.. Thanks for pm..

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