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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aao na



It had been quite a long time they had come out of their monotonous schedule. The same office clinic school and the same idli Palak paneer and gobhi.

One evening Ishita decided to ask Raman for a family outing. Ruhi would get delighted and Raavan Kumar will get some time with the family as well besides his files and Mac book..

After all the pleadings and requests Raman agreed to leave his office for few days.

After a long discussion and arguments among all the family members destination was decided to b Goa...

They left the next weekend... Raman booked a cottage at one of the beaches for the entire trip...


Everyone was enjoying... Ruhi was so happy being with her Ishima and Papa and she wasn't leaving them for a minute.. They both were also enjoying their time with their princess and Raman was so happy'..

One night all youngsters thought of playing a game of dumb charades...

Raman was not interested so he was with Ruhi sleeping in his arms sitting there...

Two teams were

Bala, Mihir and Ishita


And


Romi, Mihika and Vandu

Ishita gave Romi

"Krodh"

Romi went to his team and made a stern face and pointed over to Raman.

Vandu:- Attitude

Romi signaled the word is in hindi by thumbing up...

Pointing to Raman again..

Mihika- hindi me...khadus??? ,kaam ka bhoot?? Gussa?? krodh.??

Romi- bingo!!!!

Everyone along with Ishita were laughing their heads off... Raman who was at the verge of outburst ignored it because Ruhi was in his arms...


He glared at all of them with red eyes... He then simply went and made Ruhi and Shravu comfortable in the room and he came back... All were today in the full mood of teasing him, so they started again..

This was Ishita's turn to enact the movie... Mihika whispered in her ear "Raavan" and she came with a big smile...


Mihir- how many words Bhabhi???

Ishita pointed for one... she while controlling her laughter signaled Mihir as what she called Raman


Mihir- Ravan Kumar??? okay its Ravan right?

Ishita started dancing for her victory...


Everyone was laughing but him... He was so rage this time that without even speaking a word he went from there'.. Everybody looked at him astound' as it was so " no Raman"'

Ishita:- zyada ho gaya na...

Mihir and Romi nodded and then again both burst into laughter...

Vandu- he is annoyed...

Ishita:- obviously akka. Romi was right few minutes ago...

They laughed again..

Bala:- hmmm mazaak is okay but you know Raman na.. don't exceed...

Ishita:- don't worry jiju.. I know how to pacify the burning Bhalla. .. I'll be right back...

She winked...

She went to the direction he went... she was sure he would be at the beach standing alone and looking at the stars... She was right.. he was there only...

She went near and kept her hand on his shoulder... He realized and brushed it away... She smiled at his childish behavior...

Ishita:- hmmm one more..


Raman looked at her with red eyes...

Ishita:- aapka ek aur naam mila mujhe... Kiddo Kumar. .. Aise baccho ki tarah naraaz ho rahe hain...

Raman glared at her and turned his face...

Ishita - Lagta hai Ruhi k Papa ko baccha hi samajhna padega... Waise hi manati hoo jaise Ruhi ko manati hoon.

She started humming...

Ga ga re ga ga re ga re ga ma
ga re ni re sa ni re sa ni sa ni


Ga ga ga re ga ga re ga ma pa
ni dha ni dha ni dha ni dha pa
ma ga re ma ga'.


Ga ga re ga ga re ga re ga ma
ga re ni re sa ni re sa ni sa ni


Ga ma pa ni dha ni dha ni dha
ni dha pa pa sa sa sa ni dha pa
ma ga re ma ga'..

He looked at her'' she held his
palm'.

Guunji si hai saari fizaa jaise
bajti ho shehanaayiyaan

She sang imitating the words
with her hands..

Laharaati hai mahaki havaa
gungunaati hain tanhaayiyaan

She pointed towards everyone
enjoying...

Sab gaate hain sab hi madhosh
hai

She poked herself and him with her index finger and then kept the finger on her and his lips...

ham tum kyon khaamosh hain

She kept her palm on his heart..

saaz-e-dil chhedo na

She imitates him to sing...

chup ho kyon gaao na

aao na...

He ignored her and went forward...


She didn't give up yet... She followed him and started tickling... He was unable to control so he held her hands and looked at her with anger...


She kissed his cheek and then
sang dramatically...

Tan man mein kyon aisi bahati
huyi thandhi si ik aag hai

She continued her drama...

saanson mein hai kaisi yeh
raagini dhadkan mein kya raag
hai

She kept her chin on his shoulder and continued

yeh huwa kya hamein hamko
samjhaao na...

She again pointed towards everyone...

sab gaate hain sab hi madhosh
hai

ham tum kyon khaamosh hain

She poked him at his heart and then moved her finger towards his lips...
His eyes following the sight of her finger...

dil mein jo baat hai honthon
pe laao na

aao na...

He brushed her aside and went from there... This annoyed her and she left the place murmuring everything possible...

She went to everyone with a big swollen red face and said

Ishita:- leave him... Raavan Kumar kahinke...let us play...

After that everyone heard a voice...

ab koi duuri na uljhan koi bas
ek iqaraar hai

They all turned to see Raman standing there with a smile on his face... Smile crept everyone's lips..

ab na kahin ham na tum ho
kahin bas pyaar hi pyaar hai

He started walking towards her slowly.. indicating her to come to him...

sun sako dharkanein itne paas
aao na...

She came running to him and hugged him as if trying to count his heartbeats...

sab gaate hain sab hi madhosh
hai

ham tum kyon khaamosh hain

He looked into her eyes saying...

ab mere sapnon pe tum hi tum
chhaao na

aao na...

Then Mihika started singing with
them. .


Raman looked at her
smiling...

Guunji si hai saari fizaa jaise
bajti ho shehanaayiyaan

Mihir joined them...

laharaati hai meheki havaa
gungunaati hain tanhaayiyaan

Mrs. Bhalla who had just arrived with the elders and the kids was no behind

sab gaate hain sab hi madhosh hain

ham tum kyon khaamosh hain

saaz-e-dil chhero na

chup ho kyon gaao na

aao na...

All sang in a chorus and there
was a family hug... Ruhi and Shravan came from behind and joined them rubbing their eyes... Ishita was so happy having her family...

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I wrote this sequence once on my another favourite couple.. I am sorry if anything mismatches here coz i tried my level best to match with our Ishra.Although Ishita here seems to be a lil more bubbly and raman is a lil more khadus,, but still hope you people would like it... plz do share your views.. Criticism is more than welcome. plz do press like... Would be glad if could bring a little of smile on your faces..

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
nice u hv witten it beautifully... hoping to see sucha scene in the serial! do write more!! great job!
Edited by ishra123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
This is one of my favourite song😊..loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Beautiful OS..
This is one f my most fav songs..and it was nice to see an awesome OS on this one.!

Really enjoyed it. Thanks :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
very well written...
raman humming teh song...i was on cloud 9 to imagne him lik tht...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for beautiful OS.We all need light and enjoyable moment out of serious drama now.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Awww..this was so cute...esp loved the way Ishu tried to manaofy Raavan😃😃 Very cute OS..love the song also..its one of my favorites😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So beautiful.. My favorite song,Sakshi ji...
Loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so sweet OS... Sakshi...i'm hoping this happens in serial happy family outing...
thanks dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a cute n sweet os..\!! loved it

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