Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

Omg omg . 🥱

Oh mere mahadev bachou mujhe na

Great idea yaar 😳👏 come on update the first chap fast , u know too many things and question arising in my mind so do it fast 😉 the prologue was beautiful . I m really eager to know what is up next ?

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

Hema dear!!!! a beautiful..amazing start..a big big round of applause for u👏..ur writing style is good..ur language is pakka..ur theme is unique..and u characterized that girl in a few words..but that was more than enough to visualize her..what else to say dear...waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Thank u so much Dhivii 🤗

I m glad u liked the prologue. You will get to know more about the girl in the character sketch & in the coming chapters & well u already guessed who the man is, right Dhivii 😉

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

Res😳

Interesting prologue I have many things to say😛

Wait for me😳

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Sure Sansii... will be waiting for u 😳

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

Hema what a theme👏

u know I was too planning to write on time travelling😛

Where five teenage friends rob time machine thinking it to be some extraordinary vehicle by Dr Jha (he is my Physics teacher😆 u know how I take revenge🤣)that they can sell and earn money rest mystery😉
HeHe... 😆 Yeah I know how u take revenge even I have something similar stored in the upcoming chapters 😉

maybe after my boards I will do it or even not do anyways leave it😳
Yes do write your story... I know it will be another interesting piece to read 😛

About ur story😃

U too must have thought it wierd idea hey na but its Brilliant
Yeah at first I thought it to be a weird idea, moreover I have some wierd things stored in this story as well 😉

Interesting Prologu😊

Very good style of writing⭐️

I loved it dear

Plz continue😃

Though it will be mystery for all I guessed the character😛😳

Yes I sort of gave a hint in one of the lines. U & Dhivi already guessed it 😳

Thanks a lot for PM🤗 (Just formality ha😆 its ur duty to PM me😳)
😳 😳