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PROLOGUE:

Two Heart's beats as one damaged the relations between two families.Did another pair of two hearts too beat as one will repair the destruction of relations between two families .

it is a story of sister who was waiting for her brother's love.
it is story of a girl who want's to join her bua and her dad.
it' is a story of man who wants to revenge for his father's death.
it is a story of a woman who missed her husband.
it' is a story of a two boys who wants their father.
it is a story of a boy who wants to meet his dream girl.
Totally it's a family story .

INDEX:
CHARACTER SKETCH: Scroll down

CHAPTER 1:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117028088

SNEAK PEAK OF CHAPTER 2:

CHAPTER 2:

SNEAK PEAK OF CHAPTER 3:
CHAPTER 3:

SNEAK PEAK OF CHAPTER 4:


note: please buddy me for pm's about updates.please share ur views on this story and it's my second story and my first is also new story 'love'.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH:
GUPTA FAMILY:
DEVAYANI GUPTA: wife of late vasudev gupta, mother of shashi and subhadra.Lives with her son.Loves her two children very much and want's shashi to forgive and unite with subhadra.Her is her second grand daughter khushi and knows her khushi only bridge the gap between her son and daughter.

BALARAM SHASHI GUPTA: A man who is respected by whole lucknow and he is the man who will give justice to whole lucknow .People will come him for justice than going to courts here.Many politicians were under him.He is nice ,humble and respected man.He has world wide chain of industries and hotels which makes him richest man of whole Indian but he is down to heat.He is an angry man and wants every thing perfect.He hates his sister so much and behaves stone hearted towards her.He loves his two daughters so much.they are world to him.

GARIMA BALARAM SHASHI GUPTA: wife of balaram shashi gupta .Nice,kind hearted woman.For her shashi is god and follow his every order .she loves her nanand subhadra too but can't do anything for her other than playing god to unite shashi and his sister subhadra.Love her two daughters very much .

PAYAL GUPTA:Elder daughter of Shashi .She is beautiful, traditional girl who loves her sister very much.She is Doctor .she respects her father very much.There is secret between her dad and her and no one knows it.She always protects her sister from her dad as her sister gets in to trouble by her ever ending naughty acts.

KHUSHI GUPTA:younger daughter of shashi ,currently studying MBA at IIM lucknow. she is a very beautiful and naughty girl.She loves her sister and her bua so much ,even though she didn't know and meet her bua but loves her and wants to meet her and unite both families.She looks like her bua.Respects and loves her dad too much.


RAIZADA FAMILY:
ARJUN SINGH RAIZADA:He is now missing we will know him more after getting more into story.

SUBHADRA ARJUN SINGH RAIZADA:She is wife of Arjun and sister of Shashi. She is a traditional ,humble, kind hearted girl .She loves her brother very much and want to unite with hi which is impossible.She loves Arjun very much and went and married him eloping her marriage which resulted in her father's death making her loving brother hate her so much.But after 1 year of her marriage Arjun goes missing .She only took over her husband's bussiness and make it into heights which no company will reach it.She lives in Los angels after her husband gone missing.She wants her husband to be back to her and also wants her brother's forgiveness and love.She has two twins .Elder one is Akash and younger one is arnav these two were her world.

AKASH SINGH RAIZADA: elder of son of subhadra and good hearted young man , he is the CEO OF RAIZADA's industry of clothes.He loves both his mum and brother. every women's dream man .He wants to meet her dad .Quiet opposite to his twin arnav.

ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA: younger son of subhadra .HE is Dashing,angry,ruthless business man .He hates Shashi .He loves his mother and brother very much.He is CEO of AR Fashions which is top fashion industry in world.Every model and actor want him for his handsomeness, money but he never looked at them .He loves his dream girl who comes in his dreams and want to marry only her.He even don't know his dream girl's face also but loves her.He also wants to meet his father.He will do any thing for his mother.He look's like shashi and have his anger also.

MONOHAR SINGH RAIZADA:brother of arjun .lives with in Raizada mansion with his bhabhi and respects her very much.He loves his nephews very much.

MONORAMA SINGH RAIZADA: wife of manohar.She is same like in Ipknd serial.She treats subhadra as her sister and arnav and akash as her son's.

ANJALI SINGH RAIZADA: Daughter of Manohar and manorama. Pampered girl .

NANDA KISHORE RAIZADA: brother of Anjali.loves his family very much.

LAVANYA SHARMA: Daughter of Arjun's and Manohar's sister.She loves Arnav and want to marry him.


Edited by arshi1977 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good. It seems to be an interesting story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept
liked it
plz continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting prologue! looking forward to read it.. best wishes and happy writing Parinayam 😃

thanks for scrap 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am really confused bcoz acc to ur character sketch and prologue.
Arnavv is khushi's bua son then he will be her brother r8.
Well avoiding that, nice concept and cont soon.
Thanks for d pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice and different. Would like to read further
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: apardh_ba

I am really confused bcoz acc to ur character sketch and prologue.
Arnavv is khushi's bua son then he will be her brother r8.
Well avoiding that, nice concept and cont soon.
Thanks for d pm.


hey, i am from south india.Here we can marry our bua's son and bua's son is not brother for us
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's nice & something different from d usual...
It's somehow remind me of a Bollywood movie in which Fardeen Khan eas d lead but I don't remember d movies name...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one...
do continue soon...

but dnt make us wait too long...

for next update...

hope u wont disappoint us...




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