Pyar Hain Ishq...Aur Dosti-KAA|PRT4-PG2

Hey guys, I have written an FF for the Karam Apnaa Apnaa forum, so since this is the Fanfic section I decided to post what I post there. So here it is.
Now I started this FF on Sunday July 15, 2007. So that's when I posted the 1st post.

THE FF IN KAA
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=675938&TPN=1

NEW FF
Hey guys, my name is Deena and i really wanted to have a FF too. I have written another one for another forum but i didnt really like it, thats why im gonna write one here. I luv the KAA forum and i luv KAA! and all the FF's they write here really inspired me to write my own. Its of course a SG, Shiv and Gauri FanFiction. I have started writting but im not gonna update today since it is a sunday and i update from Mondays to Thursdays. So hopefully i will start updating tomorrow or the day after. Since it is a new FF i might delay the posting. But i will try to post it on tomorrow. I hope u will like it. I will post the hyperlinks to the updates on the first page so that it will be easier for you. Also if u like i will post the hyperlinks on the updates as well. I hope u will all enjoy it. Its not really great, but its okay...so far.
Take care,

with regards,
|[>Deena|
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INDEX:

PART ONE | PAGE ONE

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PART TWO | PAGE ONE

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PART THREE | PAGE ONE

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PART FOUR | PAGE TWO

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http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=678487&TPN=2 &#11577353

Hey guys, i think i will post now. Its a bit boring i think, but hopefully the next update will be better. Okay then, here i go, with my 1st update. Hope its okay.

Note:Please put on the song "Yeh Mera Dil" from "Don-2006". Thank you. If this is not possible then you may just read. And the song lyrics will be in blue, with their actions in black.

Recap: NONE!!

For Index: Go to page ONE

PART ONE

A Guy gets flowers|A Girl walking through a hallway
Guy starts walkings smiling|Girl meets the end of the hallway and comes into big place (hardwood) and jumps in to the dance.

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (The main door opens and the guy steps inside the dance studio. Wind came gushing at him. His hair flying, he combs through his hair and looks infront of him in awe|The girls eyes open, her long eyelashes seperating from the bottom ones)
deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana, (u see the back of a girl, as she dances)
aata hain mujhko pyaar main chaljaane,(u see the feet of girl moving in hard steps-see her payal clinking)
mushkil hain pyaare tera bachke jaane(she shifts shoulders to the music and moves hands quickly)

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (Guy stands there with mouth open. | You see the girls lips smiling)
yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (You see the girls bare waist/stomach)

Girl continues to dance as guy follows her with his eyes

Dil woh jaahe jise, jaahe jise use paaya (comes towards the guy)
pyaar woh yaar ke joh naam pe hin mitjaye (circles with finger tracing shoulders and stuff)
Dil woh jaahe jise, jaahe jise use paaya(winks and moves a lil back frm guy)
pyaar woh yaar ke joh naam pe hin mitjaye (brings her hand to her heart and shakes her shoulders)
jaane kyun badle main, jaan loon nazrana(whispers in ear-making guy blushed)

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, [walks/jumps/runs/and yeah, (u get da picture) back to da platform]
deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana, (hits both of her hands together, making the make-believe bangles clink[she didnt actually have bangles on, thats y she was pretending she had some on])

As the music continues u see her hair swaying in the wind as she performs

pal pal ek har chal, dil main ek tufaan hain, (dances with her stomach swaying back and forward to the beat of the music)
aane ko hain woh manzil jis ka mujhe armaan hain, (u see her sparkling eyes, full of happiness and excitement-and bindiya on forehead)
pal pal ek har chal, dil main ek tufaan hain, (comes and gets guy by hand)
aane ko hain woh manzil jis ka mujhe armaan hain, ( puts his hand on her waist and slides her hand on his neck-they both share a lshort eye-lock,smiling)
bhool ka na tujhe dil ka yeh nagrana(dancing with him)

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (pushes him and walks back)
deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana, (makes a nodding thing with index finger and nods head)
aata hain mujhko pyaar main chaljaane, (blushes and stuff)
mushkil hain pyaare tera bachke jaane, (moves ears back and forward making the earings sway)

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (continues with her dancing as guy comes forward)
yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (guy reaches her and is about to pull her towards him when she spins around, her hair whipping the guy softly)

As the song comes to an end, both girl and guy look at each other.

Ipshita: Arey Anupam! Tum!?

Anumpam: Haan mein. Jabse tho mere saath naachri thi, tho jabb nahi pata tha kya?

Ipshita: Kya nahin pata?

Anupam: Ke mein Anupam hoon.

Ipshita: Haan, magar mujhe ganaa tho khatam karna tha, tho...i just improvised...and yes, i knew it was u, but i had to finish my song!

Anupam: Ipshita, tum acha naachleti ho.

Ipshita: Oh god Anupam... tum kabb sudhroge?

Anupam: Jabb mujhe tumhara pyar milega.

Ipshita: Anupam, tum ko tho patha hain, ke mein aur Shiv ki shaadi hooni wali hain, mager tum phir bhi...

Anupam: Hoone wali hain, hoi tho nahin, na?

Ipshita rolled her eyes.

Ipshita: Acha, tho tum yahaan kaise?

Anupam: Jahaan mera dil, wahaan mein. Aur tum ho meri dil, tho mein yahaan.

Ipshita: Uh...

Anupam: Jaan, tum jahaan jahaan, mein wahaan wahaan.

Ipshita glars at him

Ipshita: I can see that...

Anupam: Kya mein meri dost se bhi mil nahin saktha?

Ipshita: Haan, mil saakthe.

Anupam: Tho phir?

Ipshita smiled at Anupam.

Ipshita: Mein abhi badal kar aathi hoon. Phir main aur Shiv dinner ko jare hain.

Anupam: Khaan par?

Ipshita: Tumse matlab?

Anupam: Nahin, mein soonch ra tha, ke mein bhi wahin ajatha hoon.

Ipshita sighs.

Anupam smiles and pulls something long from his back pocket.

He bends down in a "proposal" type way and offers the red rose to Ipshita.

Anupam: For a lovely friend and my soon-to-be wife

Ipshita: Tumhe sharam nahin athi?

Anupam: Ishq mein sharam ki koi baath hi nahin.

Ipshita: Kya tumhe daar nahin?

Anupam: Pyar mein koi darne wali baath hi nahin.

Ipshita: Dosti khi liye

She takes the rose from Anupam and leaves,smiling, her hair once again swiping on Anupams face. He looks delighted with a big smile on his face

Ipshita walks down the hallway towards wherever she was going.

Anupam sighed and just couldnt stop smiling. He shakes his head.

Anupam: Shes mine! Ipshita is mine!

Ipshita yells from somewhere far away,

Ipshita:Yeah right Anupam!

Anupam: Kya matlab!?

Ipshita was about to open her mouth to yell again but she decided against, let him be happy in his imaginary world.

Ipshita: Never mind! Yeah sure, im yours! okay!? happy!?

Anupam: You bet i am!

Anupam smiles to him self and walks towards the couch to sit and wait for Ipshita.

Preview:
Ipshita sitting with a guy in a restaurant smiling.
Anupam all angry and mad, u see his fist.
You see a guy come out of a car and hed towards a big office building.

Edit**
Hyperlink to part two: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=675938&TPN=2 &#11454266 or just simply scroll down as its rite below.

INFO

Hey guys: Yes I'm back with my 2nd update! It still is pretty boring… well here it is! Hope u enjoy it! I will make sure that the next update is better. So here goes nothing….
Note: Watch out, you will get lots of intro's in this one. Such as Gauri's brothers which are not in the show. And her mother and her grandmother Her grandfather is…hmm..i dunnu, ill think about that, maybe he has passed away, maybe not, u'll see. Oh and what about her other grandparents, cousins, aunts, uncles….uhh, I don't think I need all that people, lets just keep it basic. Oh and Ipshita and Anupam live in Shiv's house. And remember, shiv is iqbal khan, this shiv is not yash tonk. And samer looks exactly like shiv. Two Iqqu's! woot!!

Recap: Intro to Anupam and Ipshita. Ipshita is going to get married to Shiv soon. Anupam hears about how they were going to go to dinner that night. Anupam luvs Ipshita, but Ipshita only considers him a friend, a good friend.(Ippi dances to "Yeh Mera Dil" in her Dance Studio)

For Index: Go to page ONE

For Part One: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=675938&TPN=2
i dont rilly actually NEED to post the link to part one. cuz if u scroll up, u will see it. If ur too lazy to scroll up then here's the link, but i think its easier if u simply scroll up. Its like practically the post above this, i could have just put them in one post too, but oh well, whats done, is done.

PART TWO

Anupam and Ipshita made there way to the Kapoor house.

Anupam: Ipshita, I love you.

Ipshita: That's great Anupam.

Anupam and Ipshita both sighed. Anupam was determined to get Ippi's luv but so far...he was NOT succeeding. And Ipshita knew that Anupam was totally in love with her, but what could she do? She couldn't leave Shiv just cuz Anupam was crazy about her, Anupam would one day get over it. He HAD to.

Anupam: Well here we are.

Ipshita leaned over and kissed Anupam's cheek, as Anupam blushed.

Ipshita: Thanx for the ride. I'll see ya later, k?

Anupam was to stunned to reply, but quickly broke out of it.

Ipshita: Jaana zaroori hain?

Ipshita rolls her eyes, she should NOT have kissed him, or told him to think whatever he pleased, it really got on him, now he thinks she LIKE him or something, and that is soo NOT true!

Ipshita: Anupam, remember? Shiv, me, dinner?

Anupam: Agar tum mujhse pyar karti ho tho Shiv ke saath jaana kyon?

Ipshita looked at the helpless Anupam whine like a real kid.

Ipshita: Look, I know it hurts, but Anupam, face the fact. I do NOT love you. I love Shiv, and Shiv loves me. So if u will excuse me…

Anupam didn't didn't get a chance to hear the rest of the sentence as she banged the car door, and stomped away into the house, her heels clicking away, her dupatta flying in the wind, her hair swaying in the wind…

Anupam: Oh god Anupam! Stop thinking about her, you'll never get her, who would want me rather then Shiv Kapoor, the richest man in India, every girls dreams….

Anupam sighed, he was hopeless. But he was determined, he would do ANYTHING to get her, even give up his life….ONLY if he had to though…only IF….

*****

Ipshita was sitting infront of her dresser, putting on the last bit of jewelry. She had on a white saari with blue kaam. Her sandels elegantly matched her saari and her earring swinged as she moved. She lifter the bindiya up to her forhead ant put it on. Then she took out her payal, then decided against it. It was meant to be a quite and peaceful dinner, her payal would just be disturbance…and noise pollution, she laughed softly as she remembered what Shiv had told her. Ipshita was about to reach into her drawer once more when a knock was placed at her door.

Oh god! Its Shiv! Well, someone has come on time, Shiv is ALWAYS late. Ipshita smiled and quickly got up. She walked towards the door and opened it.

Ipshita: Arey Maya Aunty, aap?

Ipshita was kinda disappointed, she was expecting it to be Shiv. Where was he anyway? It was getting late, they should have been leaving by now. But no, Maya Aunty was here to give her a lecteur or something. GOD!

Maya: Tum tayaar hoogi?

Ipshita thinks to herself, I would have been, if u wouldn't have come knocking at my door! Ipshita likes Maya aunty but this was NOT the time to get into a conversation or whatever Maya aunty was there for.

Ipshita: Aabi bas…

Maya cut her off.

Maya: Anyways, mein tho baate ne ki liye ayi thi ke Shiv tumhara baher, gaadi pe intezaar kara hein. Tho jaaldi kar, teekhe?

Ipshita was about to reply but Maya turned on her heel and left, clapping away against the marble floor. This is noise pollution AND damage. Those heels are prolly so sharp that they chuck marble out of the floor. Maya Aunty should seriously wear different shoes in the house, the whole house prolly heard that. Or at least she should put some rubber under her heels. She laughed once again as she remembered what shiv had said. There were so many memories of them, just them. Shiv was the man for her. She luved him, and he luved her.

Ipshita was taken out of her thoughts as her cell rang on her neatly made and decorated bed. She went towards it and looked at the screen, it was SHIV!!

Preview:
Ipshita sitting with a guy in a restaurant smiling.
Anupam all angry and mad, u see his fist.
You see a guy come out of a car and hed towards a big office building.
[its the same preview as part one. ]

Well thats it for now. I will hopefully post 2morro. I know that this part was rilly boring. I will try to put in more ShivGauri scenes but not just yet, first i still have to do there intro. And as for Ipshita and Shiv's marriage...lets hope it DOESNT happen. Well take care. I will update soon.

with regards,
|[>Deena|

Edit**
Hyperlink to part three: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=675938&TPN=3 &#11471202

Hey guys, i thought that i would let u know a lil bit of background of the characters before we continue with part 3. I didnt mention all of the characters from the show[4 example, Maasi Ma, Daksh,etc] becuz they rilly are the same as in the show and arent rilly the main charactors. And as i said in my 2nd update that gauri's gonna have bro's and mother and yeah. so i have added that. Gauri only has one brother. I added a couple of new charactors in the fanfic. and a lot of the charactors in the show, their info has changed so its very important that u read this. I will call it Part 3. Even though it rilly isnt a part, but its some info u gotta know b4 moving on, so ill call it part 3. and ill try to post on part 4 2day, if i cant 2nite then i will 4 suer post it on 2morro. well hope u understand it all, if u have any questions then feel free to PM me or post a message in the ff. thanx for ur time. and here is part 3!! forgive me if im missing anything. i have to add more things on to ipshita and anupam but i will do that l8er in the future. i no its boring, but its important if u wanna understand the ff, so take care.

with regards,
|[>Deena|
For part 2 and 1 please go to page 2. and for the index please go to page one, thanxx.

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PART THREE

CHARACTERS

Gauri Chatterjee: [Played by Pallavi Subhash- same as show] Lives in Shiv house, as her father and Shiv's father cannot be separated! Lol. Has a thing for Shiv, but Shiv only considers Gauri a friend. Shashank asked for Gauri's hand, and Gauri didn't want to be mean, so she accepted! Wonder what shes gonna do…

Shiv Kapoor: [Played by Iqbal Khan] Enjoys the fact that so many people live in his gigantic house, every girl in the country DIES for him, has loads of buddys.has a millionaire for a father, spends money like THIS, and loves Ipshita with all his heart… at least he thinks…

Anupam: [Played by Hiten Tejwani- same as show] Lives in his bestfriend, Shiv's house and has his family consider him their own. He is madly in love with Ipshita but only to be rejected…and not once…A LOT of times!

Ipshita: [Played by Shreya Bhinst-same as show] Good friend of with Gauri, in a relationship with Shiv, has Anupam dying over her, and lives in Shivs house with her mom and sister…Shes a postitive character so far… but anything can change…anything can happen…in just a wink…

Shashank: [Played by Eijaz Khan] Lives with his father and mother, Mahen and Nikhila… Shashank always felt that Nikhila preferred her other children more then him, but y? When he proposed to his good friend Gauri, and she accepted he was mad with happiness. Now he stands with pride…with his love at his side…Gauri…or is it?

Ram: [Played by Amit Khanna- same as show] His parents were good friends with Mahen Kapoor even though his parents were poor. So then when his parents died in a accident of some sort when he was a lil kid, Mahen adapted him and treated him like his own son. At the moment he is in love with…Gauri!

Mrs. Nikhila Kapoor: [Played by Achint Kaur- same as show] She dislikes Shashank, while she loves all her other children. She has some what a positive in the show…at least so far…

Vivan Kapoor: [Played by Karan Patel] Has a great older brother, Ram. Ram and Vivan are very greatful to the Kapoor family for taking them in and considering them their own. Madly in love with Gauri's sister Kaya, but to bad…Kaya doesn't love him back…

Kaya Chatterjee: [Played by the same person in the show] Gauri's younger sister. Shes a bit too pampered, but she loves her sister and family. She dreams of becoming a doctor and goes to college for that purpose. A happy girl that is in a relationship with non other then Samar Kapoor.

Samar Kapoor: [Played by Yash Tonk-same as show] Shiv's OLDER brother. He is the "Bandar" of the house. Samar is a funny, friendly, naughty guy. He has loads of girlfriends but only one of them matter to him, only one of them he has interest in…Kaya. And he is so happy that she loves him back.

Palak: [ Played by the same person in the show] Ever since her rape, she has changed and followes in Gauri's footsteps as she looks up to her. She adors her family and has Kaya as her best friend. Her life would have been perfect if only she didn't have a kid without a father…and had Ram's love.

Mahen: [ Played by the same person in the show]A multimillionaire successful business man with many children. He is greatful for his friend that stays with him in his house.

Alok: just what he is in the show. And by looking at the rest of the charactors, I think u have figured out the details and changes.

Shiv's Dada: [Played by the same person in the show] just what he is in the show. And by looking at the rest of the charactors, I think u have figured out the details and changes. The short form for shivs dada is Sdada- I will use that in the story.

Shiv's Dadi: [ Played by the same person in the show] just what she is in the show. And by looking at the rest of the charactors, I think u have figured out the details and changes. The short form for shivs dadi is Sdadi- I will use that in the story.

Ipshita's mother: [Played by the same person in the show] She loves both her daughters very much and will do anything for their happiness. She is happy for Ipshita, since she found her love. But she is sad for Kritika since…well, cuz of Shashank. She has hatred for Gauri in her. She dispises her very much. But Gauri in return treats her with respect and kindness even though Ipshita's mother is very rude.

NEW CHARACTERS

Priyanka: [Played by Roshni Chopra aka as Pia on Kasam Se] Anupams lil sister. Loves Vivan.

Kritika: [Played by Karishma Tanna aka Palak on Palki or Kritika on Koi Dil Mein Hein] Ipshita's lil sister. Loves Shashank.

Gauri's Dada: [Played by Ronit Roy aka Mihir Virani frm Kunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi] the short form for this is Gdada-I will use that in the story. Lives in the Kapoor household and have friendship with Shiv's Dada

Gauri's Dadi: [ Played by Smriti Irani aka Tulsi frm Kunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi] the short form for this is Gdadi- I will use that in the story. Lives in the Kapoor household and have friendship with Shiv's Dadi.

Mahi: [Played by Saakshi Tanwar aka Parvati Agarwal frm Kahaani Ghar Ghar Ki] Has Alok for a husband and Gauri and Kaya as kids. She is very excited but tearful that its time to get Gauri married to Shashank. Her life is full of happiness, except she doesn't find Gauri all that happy, what could be the reason?

Rahul: [Played by Naman Shaw aka Pushkar frm Kasam Se]Gauri's lil brother that is totally obsessed with his fiance, Ishika.

Ishika: [Played by Divyanka Tripathi aka Vidya frm Dulhann] Gauri's best friend, Shashanks lil sister and is engaged to Rahul. Her life is just great!

EDIT*****
Hey guys, i forgot to mention Shilpa, shes a big part in the show, isnt she? she is played by the same person in the show and she rilly likes Ram. Too bad Palak likes Ram too, but sad that Ram likes neither of them. He likes Gauri, and Palak and Shilpa both know that. Also Palak, Shilpa, and Kaya are bestbestbest friends. and shilpa is ishika's lil sis in this. she also lives in the kapoor house with her sis.

NEW CHARACTERS COMING SOON

Edit Again... **
Hyperlink to part 4: Not yet!

Originally posted by: pulkit-mounifan

awesome

thanx😳

Originally posted by: mz.jess

wonderful, a gr8 ff. 😳

thank youu😳

Hey guys, sorry for the delay. Just a lil busy but im back. I know i didnt up date yesterday or on friday but im getting together a long one, just for u guys. So thanx for being patient. Its not such an exciting one, but its something, ill get a better one in my next update. This one is pritty boring and for those who have red my characters please go back and check once more for edits. I am just going to go edit some details of the characters on part 3 page 3 rite now as i made some changes, so if u have red that plz read again and make sure that u know what everything it. thanx. so here it is...the boring part 4....take care,

with regards,
|[>DEENA|
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PART FOUR

Ipshita was taken out of her thoughts as her cell rang on her neatly made and decorated bed. She went towards it and looked at the screen, it was SHIV!!

Delighted Ipshita decided to wait a couple of rings before picking it up, if he luved her, he would just have to wait. Finally after a bit of torture to poor Shiv, Ipshita answers her phone.

Ipshita(bored tone): Hello.

Shiv: Ipshita! Hi darling! I miss you.

Ipshita: Shiv, hum subha koi to mile the.

Shiv: Mujhe patha hain, magar phir bhe.

Ipshita: Shiv… phir bhe kya?

Shiv: I love you.

Ipshita: I love you too Shiv.

Shiv: I love you more Ipshita.

Ipshita: Shivv!

Shiv: Kya?

Ipshita: Kya kya? Jaana nahin hein?

Shiv: Tum tayaar ho?

Ipshita: Takhriban.

Shiv: Kool, ill see you at the car, be there in 5 minutes.

Ipshita: Shiv! Mein Dekhoonghi.

Shiv: Ipshita!

Ipshita: Okay baba! Khooshish karungi. Teekhe?

Shiv: Okay.

Ipshita: Okay bye Shiv…

Shiv: Bye sweetheart.

Ipshita waits for Shiv to hang up. After some time of waiting she speaks in her call once more.

Ipshita: Shiv? Tum vahaan ho?

Shiv: Haan.

Ipshita: Rakh do no jaan.

Shiv: Pehle tum

Ipshita: Pehle mein kyon?

Shiv: IPSHITA

Ipshita: Okay, okay. Relax Shiv. Mein rakh deti hoon. Just chill. God.

Ipshita puts down the phone and goes into deep thought || You see a pair of black shoes walking on marble floor

Ipshita comes out of her thoughts and she walks towards her dresser once more || The black shoes turn a corner and continue walking

Ipshita puts down her phone on her dresser and smiles to her self. She is so lucky to have Shiv as her Jeevan Saathi || The black shoes come upon a door

Ipshita wonders off to her balcony || A hand has been placed on a doorknob.