From my heart...!!WRITER'S SPECIAL part4 updated@27on 15/12 Pm's later - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Awww...so cute and lovely !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yaar cnt sun ... I really lykd the concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
interesting story
loved first part
hope the stranger and geet will meet again
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE


hey dearies

I guess there is some confusion here...i just wrote the 1st part dats all m gona do...here...hehehee we have other writers who are willing to write other parts..yep every part will be written by a new writer...so we shall have a amazing MG story isnit it??

M so glad with ur responses...especially the feedback i got from writers..they are ready to participate and help me with this...

Just give some time to the writer who is writing the next part..i wont tell u the name..it will be a surprise with every new part!!

HOPE U GUYS LIKE THIS CONCEPT

love
sweta
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
interesting concept...👏
geet ne punjabi song likha...with her stranger...😛
thank you so much for pm me...😃
update soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
hi thanks 4 da note, eagerly awaiting next part! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Will be waiting its nice idea
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very sweet update, waiting for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49


here is the next part


This part is written by RSUSMITA

THANK U DI FOR WRITING THIS PART ..!!


PART 2


Geet ..geet kis khaylo mai kho gayi ho...

Hmm..kuch nahi ..she smiled at dhvani ...

Kya geet fom the past half hour i am calling you but there is no response from you .are you dreaming about your stranger ..

Oh..she blushed ..she was thinking about her stranger...oh babji maine ky kardinya ..kaise me use kiss kardiya ..i was very happy so maine aisa kardiya tha...mera koyi galiti nahi ..she was speaking to her babaji but it was loud enough for dhvani to hear ..

Kyat um ne use kiss kardiya ...

Geet how could you do this

Dhvanii was shocked hearing those words...

Geet how could you do this ..

Seeing the intensity in the talks ..

Geet understood she made a big crime..

Nahi dhvanii ...bas galo ke uppar kiya tha ..jaise tumko , mama , dadji ..,bri bhai ko kar to ho jai se ..

Kya bada jurm hai kya ..

Dhvanii understood her innocence ...geet lekin vo e stranger hai ...kya socha ga tumhari bare me..i know this a city ..lekin humar roots hp hai,aur dadji tumko ladke dhood rahe hai..

Ye to me socha nahi tha..her voice became very dull hearing all these ..

Seeing geet in this condition ..dhvani sat beside her ..she cannot see geet like that, chinta mat karo ..aur age dhyan rakho..tum kisi mat khena ki ..you have behaved like this..okay

Geet simply nodded her head ,but she wants to once meet the stranger ,and clarify him that she is not like that girl ..

Kya babji kyoaise karte hu app.,me appk fav beti huu, ek bar use mila do please...

She was waiting on the same bench when she first time saw the stranger ..since 2 days she used to come here to catch the stranger but she could not able to meet him

Geet what happened to you why you are not eating any thing..seeing her playing with the food,

hmm kuch nahi ma..i will eat ..

ranno did you saw photo which i gave you , hearing dadi words geet raised her head and signaled dhvani what is the matter

Dhvani nodded as if she do not anything

I will show her now, maa

Vo kya hai geet mere friend hai savitri devi uska ek ppota hai , we have talked about the marriage alliance , they liked your photo, and want to come to our house to see you okay .

Geet made a long face hearing this..almost jumping out of her skin....what happened geet why are u behaving like this

Vo kuch nahi dadi..bas aise . She muttered

.is anything that is troubling you ..

Hmm..nahi..remembering dhvanii words she said ..nahi iasa kuch nahi

She again went to the park sitting on the same bench hoping he may come once ..babji us ek baar mila do na ...

But her babji was so busy with other works that he did not hear her talks ...


Here in khurna mansion ..


Saivtri devi is busy in trapping her maan for marriage ..

Maan please is photo ko ek baar dekho ..ahci ladiki hai mere friend ki poti hai ..

Dadima apka ye naya friend koun hai .me kabhi nahi mila..

Vo suddenly we met in get together function ,we used to be friends , in hp but after my marriage, i came to delhi , after that i lost contact with her , last month i met her in a get together function , and came to know that she having a grand daughter

Hearing hp name form his dadima he began to concentrate on her words.

He still remembered that day , how she kissed him, he lost in her beauty , so innocent ..he so much wanted to meet her but could not as he went on business trip

Kya baat hai maan where are you lost




TO BE CONTINUED


hope u guys liked this...

next part will be written by a new writer


for all those who dont knw..who this writer is..m giving u guys the link of her stories

plz visit this...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3293985/susmi-world-of-fantasy-note-pag-5



Plz plz comment...plz...!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Brilliantly written susmita...👏
Sweta you always come up with creative ideas...👏

So next we will have official maaneet meeting...

Geet is no cute here...

Savitri is trapping Maan for marriage


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